Living/dinning room
adi coming down on the stair
A: good moring ... gud looking people
Angad and ridz look at each surprised as they haven't been caught
An: hey adi wats up??
R: gud moring bhaiya…do you want breakfast mumma is upstairs so all make it for u.wat do want???....eggs ..pancake..cereal..???
A: nothing my sweet sis…
R: really……..(shocked)…..okie
A: so wat do want to do todaii…ridzz,since no school
R: hmmmmmm(thinking)..
Phone rang
R:hellooooooo…diiiiiiiiii(very loudly because she is happy
Mukti= M ( studying fashion in dubai)
M: hi my jaan…..kaisi ho…..i'm missing u soo much
R: me too diii when are you coming back..plz come back quick!!!!
M: don't worry I'll be there in two weeks.
R: promise??
M: yes!! meri maa promise…
R: so dii how is your stuying going .found any cute guy yet????(teasing mukti)
M: ridzzzz stop annoying me mumma and papa and angad and adi and milind bhaiya??
R: so mean u r asking about other people while talking to me." I'm hurt diii"(faking crying)
M: (knows she is faking it)yes now tell me where are they???
R: FINE……..here talking to adi and angad bhaiya since u love them soo much…..bye dun't ever talk to me(now really angry)
M:ridzzzz…helloo any1 there…adiii???angad
An: I'm putting phone loud speaker wait ok…
M: ok….
A: hi mukti kaisi ho…..when r u cuming bak???how is ur studying going??y is ridz angry at u…..(stopp to take a breath)
M: adii bhaiya one question at a time okie……
M: cummmin bak very soon…..study is great..and ridz it nothing I'll talk to her…so how r u angad bhaiya??
An: I great…..missing u a lot…u r the only 1 who can control ridz
M: (laughing)…angad bhaiya stop being mean…and i miss u all too…okie I gotta go now I'll later to talk milind bhaiya and mumma and papa…oke bye……love. U all…ohhhh telll ridz …."I'm sorrie"..
Ridz/Mukti room
Ridz is crying because of mukti
Angad and adi come to talk to her…
A: bhai u kno she shud be mad at mukti I'am mad at her to…
An; I agree …she is very mean…and selfish(sounding really angry)
Ridz starting to get angry at for talking like this about mukti….
R: STOP bhaiya don't say that di is great
Adi and angad start laughing….ridz gets it she was tricked…….so she just smiles..
R:(screaming) NOT FUNNY
A&An: okayyyy(still laughing).want to go shoopin>>??
R:YESSSSSJ(excited)
At night 9:00pm the trio back from shopping
Dilip and Gaythari went to sleeping.milind still watching tv….
A,An&R: hiiii bhaiya….
M: oh u three are back finally
R: bhaiya r still mad at us
M: (thinking)……( last week the three of them sneaked a rat in his room and at night while sleeping the rat went inside milind's and started to tickle and he got and started to shout waking everyone up /when everyone came he realized it was just a mouse and he got a clue where that came from…..)…..
A,An&R: we are really sorry…….
M: it's ok but don't ever do it again….rats don't smell so gud…
R: okay…promise never again…
M: okay now go to sleep u three must be tired
All three together say no……..
They all decide to watch a movie….through half the movie they feel sleepy so they go to their rooms
Next update entry of the other family….hope you liked itJ……plz comment more comment the quicker i will update
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priya @kelly789
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Samina @Iqbal Neha1
15 years ago
second part was really good
i liked the relationship between mukti and ridz it was really cute
the prank that adi angad and ridz played on milind was amazing
unknown cute @yogzz
+ 3
15 years ago
wow yaar its very nice & i loved it....................
thanx for pm
love u
yogitha
Nidha @nidha1983
+ 5
15 years ago
really a nice and funny one too gud both parts r awwsome plz continue it soon and thanks for the pm"Hearts could only luv for a while,
Feet cud only walk for a mile,
Clothes won't forever be in style but having u as my friend is forever worthwhile."
Mini @cool_pisces
+ 3
15 years ago
Hi, loved the first two parts of ur fanfic, really like the naughty riddhima, continue soon.