Chapter 11

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                                              PART 11
 
 
Rahul had been sitting on the bed past 15 mins...talking on the phone..He was actually being lectured by Dr. Shashank..who was reminding him of
his responsibilities. Dr. Rahul, Dr.Muskaan , Dr. Atul & Dr. Anjali..were going 2 a medical camp in a small town with 2 new interns. Dr. Rahul had
been given the responsibilty of handling the whole trip. As it was his first time, He was being reminded of some rules & regulations of Sanjeevani.

        R:- "Yes. Sir. Mere saath 3 doctors hain..aur 2 interns."

Muskaan had completely lost all her patience. Every 5 mins , she used 2 come 2 call him..He wud jus shoo her away.

       "Ill def. inform dem.." he answered.  He got up frm the bed after looking at the time. He stood near 2 the mirror n set his wet hair. He
wore faded blue jeans with a bright red shirt. Handling the phone with his arms, he tried 2 button up his shirt. After buttoning it up, he turned towards the cup-board , he dashed Muskaan. Both stood there holding their fore-heads.

M:- "Haiyyo Rabba!"

R:- "Shhh!" 

M:- "Oyye..ye kya kiya?" She pointed towards his shirt. Both were talking in their lowest voices..lower than whispers.

He luked at his shirt..he had messed up wid the buttons.

R:- "Oh! God!" He replied irritated. He again tried handling the phone with his arms..nd putting his buttons correctly. But withing 2 seconds the phone was down. For a minute he jus stood there holding his head. He had again dashed Muskaan. He picked up the phone & stared at her with an expression of , "Wt the hell is ur problem?"

M:- "Maine kya kiya..tujhe kabse bol rahe hun phone rak..samajh nahin aate..aur ye.." She pointed towards his shirt. She pulled him and started buttoning it up properly & mumbling 2 herself.

                     "Mujhe to koi kaam hi nahin hai..faltu bethe hun."

                     "Isse to mere parvah hi nahin hai..Kabse phone pe bad-bad kiya ja raha hai.."

                     "Main na kuch dino ke liye mummyji ke paas chali jaate hun..tab isse pata chalega."

Rahul while was thinking. "Haha..kitni ajeeb ladki hai..koi baat karne ke liye nahin milta to khud se baatien karti hai. So very interesting!" Thinking this he  slowly tickled her arm. He grinned.

She fiercly pushed it away. "Idhar main kam kar-kar ke mar rahe hun..aur isse romance suj raha hai.Hmph!" She left him. Rahul without saying anything jus went off with a smile.. "Lo..inke liye to kuch karna hi nahin chaiye...Ek thanku bhi nahin bolta. Ye main kya kar rahe hun? Apne aap se baatine..Muskaan ye paagal pan ka pehla daura hai..iske saath rahunge to sach main paagal ho jaungi.." She gathered a few clothes n went 2 the
cupboard.

                   "Ye main kahan phas gaye? Bachpan main to mummyji ko kaise kehte thi ke main kabhi ghar ka koi kaam nahin karungi..aur ab dekho.
Haiyyo Rabba..mujhe kahan phasa diya. Kash main Punjab main hi hote..mummji mujhe help to karti..yahan to mere koi help nahin karta.." She said dramatically.  Rahul was seeing her frm a distance n smiled. "Kya acting karti hai!" He suddenly had a feeling 2 hug her..n also irriatate her a lil. He
went towards her..still talking 2 n listening 2 Dr. Shashank..nd agreeing 2 whatever he said. He had his phone on one hand so he hugged her only frm the right hand..nd kissed her on the cheek...which nearly scared her..dropping all the ironed clothes n her hand, she screamed.

R:- "No..no. sir..its Muskaan..wohh..apne aap ko dekh ke dar gaye." He laughed. "Mera matlab hai..ke cup-board main chipkali ko dekh ke dar gaye." He
laughed again. Muskaan's jaw dropped open.

M:- "Tune mujhe chipkali kaha ????"

R:- "Arre..sssh..chup kar." He was still laughing.

M:- "Bhad main gaya tera phone." She started 2 beat him..while he kept running around..trying 2 control his laughter..as he was talking 2 Shashank. Running around the room 2 times..both were breathless.

R:- "Sorry." He murmered before falling on the bed.

M:- "Tu...naa.." She also sat down nxt 2 him. She took the bottle of water which was on the side table & drank some. She really needed 2 keep control on her temper..she thought 2 herself. She luked at him, he was still busy with the phone. She got up & was going bak 2 the kitchen , when  Rahul caught her hands n told her 2 sit down fr 2 mins. She sighed n sat down flipping through a few magazines constantly luking at the watch.
She was trying 2 listen 2 their conversation..it had become serious for the past few mins. He finally kept the phone down. The moment he kept the
phone down, he lied down.

R: " Dr. Shashank ka leacture!! Arre waisee...." He pulled her by her waist.

M:- "Oyye..chod..mere dress kharab karega..!"

R:- "Uff..tum ladkiyon ke nakhre!"

M:- "Main to ek hi ladki hun..ye baaki ladkiyan kaun hai?"

R:- "Muskaan! Main u-n-i-v-e-r-s-a-l example de raha tha!"

M:- "Hmm...waise tu kuch bol raha tha na?"

R:- "Arre..haan..waise mera thanku kaisa laga?"

M:- "Thanku..??"

R:- "Arre.." He again kissed her on her cheek..very softly. "Ye waala?"

M:- "Haiyyo rabba! Bilkul bekaar."

R:- "Bekaar..?? Dats very bad yaar..ab to baatana hi padega.." He came close. She pushed him away.

M:- "tumhara thanku bahut acha tha..ab main jaun..sab aane waale hai..aur hume nikalna bhi hai..."

R:- "Muskaan..itni tension lena band karoge tum..mujhe dekho..Im so kool."

She gave him an irritated look.

M:- "Ab tum haatho.." She got up..nd pulled him up too. " Ab apne kool look se bahar niklo..aur Dr. Rahul Grewal banjao."  She adjusted his shirt. After saying dis , She took her clip n tied up her hair.

R:- "Khule jyada ache lag rahe hain. " He opened her hair.

M:- "Rahul mujhe koi fashion - show main nahin jaana hai." She replied very sweetly & tied it up again..nd started 2 walk. While walking she smiled and removed the clip. "Ab theek hai?" He jus smiled. She grabbed her dupatta frm the chair n both of them walked down.

M:- "Abt tum jaldi se nashta karlo."

R:- "Maine tumse kitni baar kaha hai..ke mujhe subah-subah bhook nahin lagti."

M:- "Subah kya..tumhe to kabhi bhook nahin lagte."

R:- "Haha...very funny. Kya hai tumhare 'nashte' main?"

M:- "Garma garam aloo ke parathe!!"

R:- "Oh! no! phirse?"

M:- "Phirse?"

R:- "Aur nahin to kya? Nashte main kya hai..Aloo ke parathe..lunch main kya hai..Aloo ke parathe..Dinner pe kya hai ..Aloo ke parathe..Tumhe aur kuch banana aata bhi hai ke nahin?"

M:- "Mujhe aloo ke parathe ke alawa aur kuch nahin aata..Punjabi sirf ye hi khate hain..isse na hum gol-matol hote hai..aur isme jo ghee hai naa..."

R:- "Bas. Main aloo ke parathon ke advantages nahin puch raha."

M:- "Hmph!"

After a few mins AR entered.

A:- "Hi guys! Aloo ke parathe..yummy!" He took a small piece frm rahul's plate.

M:- "Hi Armaan. Kuch logo ko na..inka koi fayda nahin pata.." She said pointing towards Rahul.

R:- "Ya right."

Ridz:- "Hey Rahul!"

R:- "hey."

Ridz:- "Muskaan main kuch help karu?"

M:- "Arre nahin..its ok. Waise Anjali nahin aaye tumhare saath?"

A:- "Apna village-proof make-up kit kharedne gaye ho gi. " He burst out laughing..nd he n Rahul hi-fied each other.

R:- "Yaa..Waise Anjali apne skin ka kafi dhyaan rakhti hai." Still laughing.

A:- "Village-proof make-up!!" He Laughed.

Muskaan n Ridz glared at them n got bak 2 their normal expressions.

Ridz:- "Woh kya hai naa..Dr. Keerti ne kaha hai ke wahan pe sab ladkiyon ko salwaar suits hi pehena padega. Aur di ke paas to koi suits hi nahin the. Woh aur nani mere kuch kapde di ke fitting ka kara rahen hai." She said with a sorry face.

M:- "Oh. so sad."

Ridz:- "Is liye maine subah se kuch nahin khaya hai.." She sat nxt 2 Armaan n ate frm the same plate. Meanwhile Rahul got up.

R:- "Im done guys."

M:- "Oyye..tune to kuch nahin khaya hai..chup-chap beth ja."

R:- "Muskaan jus shut up. Main tere jitna nahin kha sakta. " He went inside the kitchen fr sum water.

M:- "Tum na yahin ruko..main abhi usse ye khilake aate hun. " She took a plate with 2 paratha's n went behind him.

Armaan n Riddhima secretly laughed.

A:- "U knw Riddhima..agar hamare shaadi huye na..to case bilkul opposite hoga."

R:- "Acha. Woh Kaise?"

A:- "Mujhe tumahre peeche bhagna padega..tumhe khilane ke liye." He put a piece n her mouth.

R:- "Main itna bhi kam nahin khate."

A:- "Ya..yaa..aur phir Chunnu Munnu ka dhyaan bhi to rakhna padega..to mujhe tumhe aur khilana padega..extra shakti ke liye."

R:- "Haha! Ye Chunnu Munnu kaun hai?"

A:- "Basket! Mera ek beta aur ek beti. Perfect family." he said imaginaing dem.

R:- "Mujhe to ek ladka chaiye..bilkul tumhare  jaisa." She pulled his cheeks.

A:- "Nahin..pehle ek ladki..tumhare jaise." he touched her chin.

R:- "Acha. Leken sirf hum haan. Koi janwar nahin hoga."

A:- "Riddhima! Pls ek dog! U knw I luv dogs!!"

R:- "Agar Chunnu Munnu aur dog ke chakkar main tum mujhe bhul gaye to?" She went close 2 him n pulled his shirt.

A:- "Tum to mere zindagi ki pari ho na? Main tumhe kaise bhulunga?" He said softly..nd caressed her cheeks. Soon their playful smile turned in2 an intense one. Armaan took his hand away n Riddhima left his shirt.

R:- "Im..so.."

A:- "Sorry!" He completed fr her.

After a while 4 of dem left for Sanjeevani. Rahul-Muskaan still had their playful fights on, while Armaan-Riddhima were finding it difficult 2 maintain eye-contact within each other. Dr. Keerti also adviced the 4- Rahul , Muskaan , Atul & Anjali on various things. Soon they were leaving fr a 2 day trip
2 a far off village.

Pre-cap:- The AA scene...Rahul tensed...anger falls on Muskaan. Some cute romance btw the 4..nd lotts of mastii!!!

PS:- I actually wanted 2 include all the couples..but it uwd hav become really very long. I wanted 2 keep a short update...but luk hw long it turned out 2 bee!!OuchLOL *mansibhatia*2008-07-21 08:25:39

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