HELLO Everyone,
You all might be thinking, why the plot of my story is similar to what happening in the show, but, I request everyone to have patience, the story I am writing is very different and I need everyone to be comfortable with what they read. The developing of the story line will take some time, and by CHAPTER 3 or CHAPTER 4, the story I have been making up will enter the main plot. I might delete some parts, and not write them, because there is not much to mention in them.
Thank you,
Everyone is open to comment and criticize my story,
RSBS.
CHAPTER 2
Aryan’s car broke down suddenly, today. So, we were waiting for the car to be repaired, at a nearby café, when Imlie suddenly said, “Bohot jor ki tufan aur baarish hogi.”(It’s going to be stormy and heavily raining soon). Aryan looked at Imlie foronce then said, “Ho hi nahi saakta, Mr. Tripathi ne baataya ki aaj mausam saaf rahega, aur paani ki ek bund bhi nahi giregi.” (There is no way, Mr. Tripathi said that there will be clear sky today, not a single drop of rain will fall on ground). As he finished saying this, nature showed otherwise, suddenly wind started raging and slowly it also started raining, heavily, raining.
Imlie was shocked when she heard Aryan, “Mujhe Mr. Tripathi par biswas kar nahi nahi chaihiye tha. Unpar biswas karke mene didi ko bohot dur jane diya.” (I should not have believed Mr, Tripathi. I believed his words and sent Didi for a longjourney.) Imlie asked him, “Ka? Yeh tum ka kahat rahe ho? Didi kaha jawat rahihe?” (What? What areyou saying? Where did Didi go?)
The answer that came was more shocking, “Didi unki koi dost ki baby shower function me jah rahi he. Wo hamare Rathor Mansion se bohot dur he, waha ponchne me karib ek ghanta to laagte he.” (Didi have gone for one of her friend's baby shower function. From Rathor Mansion it takes at least 1 hour toreach there.) And Imlie answer to the answer was, “Ka? Yehe nahi howat sakat he.” (What? No, This can't be happening.)
Aryan borrow a car, and started the car, and by every second he increased the speed of thecar. Both Aryan and Imlie were so scared and worried for Arpita, that, when Aryan was driving the ordinary car at high speed, Imlie was shouting, “ABP hum janat he ki tumka Arpita di ke liye chinta howat rahe he, aur hume bhi uhh ke khatir chinta howat rahe he, par, yeh gardhi tumhari Mrs. Lambi Gardi nahi he.Tum tohra dhere se chalo, nahi to hum dono ko kuch ho jaye, toh Didi ko hum kese bachayenge.” (ABP, I know that you are worried for Arpita Didi, but, this is not your Mrs. Lambi Gardi. Please, slow down alittle bit, otherwise, if something happens to both of us, who will save Didi).But, instead he increased the speed of the car more. And, then what Imlie feared happened. There came flying a red cloth in the car windscreen (Front Windshield), the red cloth was removed by the windshield wipers, but, unable to see anything for some seconds, the car collided with a truck carrying poles, basically it collided with the poles.
Due to the storm, the doors of the truck somehow broke open and poles sticking out of it. Imlie’s head banged with the head board, but three poles broke through the windscreen and inside the car, injuring Aryan. Imlie lifted her head, and looked at the injured Aryan, tears flowing down her eyes, She called, “ABP”, and started to find something to cover his injury. Aryan gained consciousness, and moved Imlie’s hands, not letting to take care of his wounds. He fixed himself in a proper position and again started the car, pulling the car backward, removing the poles and then again speed up his car towards the location Arpita has headed to.
The rain and storm has already stopped. They reached where Arpita was, and started searching for her among the cars present there. When Imlie suddenly, “Didi ki gaari.”(Didi’s car). The car was smashed with trees from above, Arpita was stuck inside the car, unconscious. Imlie rushed towards the car and removed some branches to open the car door, but, it was stuck. Imlie called Aryan for help, but, he was stuck in one place with shock. She shouted, pulled and did every possible thing to get him out of the situation, at last only one way left to get him out of this, she cupped her hands over his face and shouted, “Aryan”, it worked like magic, he looked towards her, and she continued, “Humare paas waqat he, hum do no mil ke Didi ko bacha lenge.” (We still have time, both of us together can save Didi). Aryan puts his hands over Imlie’s hand and said, “Hum dono mil ke Didi ko bacha lenge.” (Both of us together can save Didi). The next second they rushed towards the car to open the stuck door, and was able to successfully do it, but, while doing so, Aryan lost his footing and stuck under a tree and his head hitting a stone. Imlie looked back and was shocked. She making Arpita sit up properly, rushed towards Aryan trying to remove the tree over him, she tried several times, but failed, when Sunder arrived. With Sunder’s help, they were able to remove the tree over Aryan. Soon the ambulance arrived and took Aryan and Arpita to hospital.
Everyone might be thinking, why the narrator, meaning I am not commenting on, what they are thinking, or what they are experiencing, or anything related to them. Because I am observing the situation very carefully. I have never seen such interesting and terrible situation. The main fact that I noticed was when Imlie bought out Arpita and Aryan lost footing and fell hitting his head with a stone and a tree above him, Imlie shouted, “Aryan.” While she was trying hard to remove the tree over Aryan, there were people approaching in Imlie’s direction, they were people who were in the Volkswagen that day, but retreated when Sunder suddenly arrived in front of them, his back towards them. Sunder was so worried for Imlie, Aryan and Arpita, that he didn’t see these approaching and retreating people. They were also the one’s calling the ambulance for helping Imlie.
Aryan was in a critical condition when they reached the hospital. Narmada Rathore and the Tripathis, except one person, Aditya Kumar Tripathi, arrived at the hospital. Everyone is informed Arpita is alright, but, Aryan is in a critical condition. After hearing the Doctor, Narmada totally broke down, Imlie stepping back slowly with tears flowing without control from her eyes supported herself on the wall, so that Narmada doesn’t get another person in bad condition, which will make her worry more.
Aryan was unconscious. Aryan was having a hard time breathing. He was on oxygen. Imlie was looking at him from outside of the treatment room, with tearful eyes, when suddenly Aryan started to have problems again with his respiration. Imlie ran inside and tried to comfort him, she slowly rubbed her hand on Aryan’s forehead, and started saying comforting words. But, as she was going to leave,he again had problems with his respiration. Imlie came running back and started comforting him, but, this time he was not relaxing. Imlie got worried and without thinking anything shouted for the doctor. The doctor came, and started his treatment to relax his respiration and everyone again started to worry more. Imlie was not able to control herself and ran out of hospital towards the temple.
Aryan, poor child, no one knew, except for Aryan, God and me that he was having a dream, rather a nightmare. Aryan was seeing and walking through his life’s misery in the dream. Arvind Sikhawat’s death; his sister and mother’s broken state of mind, his friends telling him to not look for revenge; how did Aryan Singh Rathore became THE Aryan Singh Rathore; how he was all alone in the darkness; how he was struggling for revenge. While he was walking in total darkness, he suddenly heard someone giggling and asked, who it was, and saw a light and Imlie approaching him. For the first time he thought he was not in a nightmare, for the first time he thought he saw his heaven, his life. But, she was also being taken away by Aditya Kumar Tripathi and he could not do anything, he was stuck like a statue in that place. He cried to give her back to him, but, she was not able to come back to him. He was crying a lot in his dream. Oh my graceful Lord, please take away his sufferings, please let him be happy, were only things I could ask for.
To Be Continued.....
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