"Just remember, If you tried anything to stay in Ram's life then I would destroy your family. Your sister's marriage cancelled, Your sister's job terminated and Your precious daughter would learn her mom was a murderer. Everyone you love would suffer Priya, if you got greedy. Remember you might prove Pihu is Ram's daughter, but he still would think you cheated on him. Why, because you had said it yourself to him. Ram might just take Pihu away from you in that case and you would end up all alone. So don't be greedy for more Priya. Leave this house soon before you would come to regret not heeding to my advise" Nandini's words echoed through her mind every minute. The threat that ...
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Alasmine @Alasmine
1 years ago
EKTA PLEASE ASK YOUR TEAM TO TAKE NOTES. This OS captures the characters so well, almost feels like an extension of the show.
Alasmine @Alasmine
1 years ago
I love how you spoke about trust, love and the character motivations, you write really well, I may not respond immediately, but please keep tagging me. I love to read your work.
Alasmine @Alasmine
1 years ago
WHY ARE THEY SO HOPELESSLY HOPELESS WHYYYYYY
Alasmine @Alasmine
1 years ago
I LOVE THISSSS. THEY ARE SUCH CUTE FOOLS AND WOH RAM WALA DIALOGUE- "love isn't enough, only a fool would believe in it... I'm a fool cause I still want my family of three"- AAAAAHHHH- God please make Naks say it, PLEASE!
Milalal27 @Milalal27
+ 4
1 years ago
They are both fools in love, ram is very calm and understanding. Not expected his behaviour.
SONIA441 @SONIA441
+ 4
1 years ago
I love this story of 2 Fools We got a family of sweet three & I like how Ram acted maturely instead of going beserk & that would let them handle the unknowns here
LoveMyself_sri @LoveMyself_sri
+ 5
1 years ago
Can you write something where both pihu and ram possesive for Priya and how Priya handles it
Bee222 @Bee222
+ 17
1 years ago
Oh my god!If part 1 made my heart happy, then part 2 just made it soar đThis is so beautiful and wholesome and full of feels Nita, I love it â¤ď¸â¤ď¸Kaala teekas to both of them and an extra one for Pihu They deserve their happily ever after đĽş
Tiara @DreamOfEndless
+ 15
1 years ago
This is so beautiful, I literally have tears in my eyes reading how you have described the depth of their emotions and the ending. I also loved how you played with the words 'fool' and 'liar'. Loved it â¤ď¸
Alasmine @Alasmine
1 years ago
Thanks for tagging me! The things I just loved:1. How Pihu reminds Ram of Priya and vice versa. 2. How Priya thoughts are described- She doesnât want to cry, doesnât want to let him know that it hurts, she doesnât dare to hope for a reunion. She believed things will go wrong. And now, the stakes are high cause Pihubis involved. 3. The writing of Ramâs response- he is the only solution to her fears. I know heâs gonna throw a fit first, like he always does, but once he gets to know about her securities, I hope this OS will be his response- he will restore her faith in their family. Alasmine2022-07-15 06:39:15