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Chapter 34 - Agar Tum Saath Ho

Published On Friday,Mar 18, 2022 10:18 AM GMT-06:00

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foreverlazy
Diya @foreverlazy 1 years ago Yeah, fine, I’ll talk about the break up because Shweta I kid you not, I was shaking as I read the ending. I had to physically force myself to get through the last scene, aka the bane of my existence, because it was making me that anxious. I mean, if that was your goal, then fantastic job cuz ya girl loves drama even though it stresses her out. Drama and I have a complicated relationship. Anyway, even though I had spoiled myself about the breakup before reading this chapter, I still had that fun surprise of Rey and Riri being “together” because your favourite idiot was still stuck on Saara (is Rey saying that her baby was his not gonna come back around?? was that little plot point a complete misdirect because well done if that’s the case). Honestly, I have no theories at this point.
foreverlazy
Diya @foreverlazy 1 years ago Okay, let’s talk about Sid and Ty because Shweta why has their break up had almost the same effect on me as TR’s. First, you have them get together offscreen, and they break up in the same chapter?? SHWETA!!! I don’t want to pick sides and I really want to be understanding of both perspectives, however, I would like the record to show that if I had to choose I would Ty’s side. I love Sid and I want good things for him and I absolutely empathize with his insecurities, but if I were Ty in that situation I would dump him. // Piggybacking off of that, I think something really interesting about this chapter was your focus on Sid and Taani because while reading this chapter I was like, ‘yo, y’all are like so much more similar than I realized’. I think it was a really good choice to showcase some of their similarities because they are going through similar situations and I feel like they’d deal with these situations in similar ways (literally take a shot every time I say similar). Also, Sid and Taani are both incredibly impulsive and self-destructive, at least to me. Like, if y’all don’t think that Taani is either of those things, let me just please take you back to when she broke up with Rey on his birthday (What was that like Ch. 17?). // “I don’t want to play a game of what-ifs. It gets scary.” - I loved this line in particular because that’s the kind of line that makes you go “Oh, Taani” like you don’t know whether to comfort her or knock some sense into her or both. God, that was such a heartbreaking line dude, it really got me. // Also, a quick shout-out to Armaan for this line that had me laughing for a solid ten minutes before I start ranting about the breakup - “Dono ko upar hi pahucha dunga main ek din.” (bro I’m right there with you)
foreverlazy
Diya @foreverlazy 1 years ago You know what, I do have more to say, and I want to talk about Taani and Tanya’s conversation now. I think that was one of my favourite scenes from that chapter because Tanya’s realization of how much her daughter’s grown since she met Rey, while simultaneously not allowing her to diminish the role she played in her own growth is something only a mother can do. “You always had it in you. He hasn’t taught you that. He has only aided you in understanding it.” - This line is absolutely gorgeous Shweta, how dare you. // “Selflessy selfish” is absolutely the best way to describe Rey, someone put this on the D3 wiki page.
foreverlazy
Diya @foreverlazy 1 years ago Like I said, I have a lot to say, so we’re gonna have to break up these comments. Anyway, I really love it when you focus on different family dynamics because obviously with such a big cast of characters, it’s hard to show everyone interacting in every single chapter, so I think switching it up between scenes and chapters is a really good way to make sure you don’t drive yourself insane. For example, that little moment between Ranvijay and Armaan was really cute and I thought it was absolutely HILARIOUS that Rann made Armaan carry all the gifts. Or like how NikkixAbhi made an appearance in this chapter. I really liked seeing their dynamic with Taani and Armaan and how different their presence is in the fic compared to MuskaanxRahul (who’ve made many more appearances before and have brought more lightheartedness to the story compared NikkixAbhi who have been able to really provide Taani with some much-needed perspective). I also just have a really soft spot for NikkixAbhi, they were my favourite DMG couple! // Speaking of dynamics, I missed scenes of the gang so much. The way you’re able to portray that same chaoticness that they had in the show through your writing is something that I don’t think anyone else can successfully do, and I will fight anyone who disagrees with me on this. No one can accurately write scenes of the D3 gang other than Shweta, that is a fact, stay mad. Tell me who else can write a line such as “Yeh iska Babu kab activate hua?” TELL ME. // I need to talk about Simmi and Rey’s friends separately because SimmixRey ftw!! I think I really needed Simmi to update Rey on everything that’s been going on because one, it’s very them to me, and two, I think I really needed it. Shweta, you pack in so much information and my brain is the size of a pea. Anyway, it really speaks volumes about their dynamic that Rey is Simmi’s go-to for all her Nil drama and also please please please let Nimmi have nice things that the show didn’t give them.
foreverlazy
Diya @foreverlazy 1 years ago Heyyyy, it’s me, your favourite, the one who always reads almost a year after your update is here! Sorry, but I was lowkey putting off reading this chapter because I accidentally spoiled myself about the breakup when you first updated and I was like, I can’t do this. But I’m here now and I have THOUGHTS. // I was so confuzzled when you started off with TR about to have sexy timez, matlab yeh ladka vapas kab aya?? Then when Taani woke up I was like ‘thank god my memory’s still somewhat intact’. What a way to start off this chapter! Also, Taani is an absolute icon - “Why am I so horny?” (idk babe, but same) // I’m really happy that Taani and Shivam were able to sort things out because all Taani really wants is for her big brother to be happy. Also, it’s kind of sweet (and funny, but mostly sweet) how Taani keeps collecting big brothers like Pokémon. I liked her conversation with Armaan because they’re not just connected through Rey and Sid, they have a dynamic that can definitely exist outside of that, and it was kind of refreshing to see a one-on-one scene between them. // Maybe it’s just because I haven’t read this fic in a while, but Taani was really funny in this chapter, I was lowkey shook. Like she’s funny, but Ch. 34 Taani is a comedian. And she can be such a little menace when she wants to be, like, main likh deti hoon that Swayam probably got no action after Taani hung up on Sharon.
ShifaD07
Shifa @ShifaD07 1 years ago Plzz Update Next Part Soon, Waiting...
Bhoomi_P
Bhoomi_P @Bhoomi_P 1 years ago The first thing in my mind, WTF. Dude this escalated quickly actually not quickly but yes quickly. This was the least expected thing. Yes rey and riri spending time did have me awkward vibes but this was totally unexpected. I hope there is next update soon. Now when I have read this it is making me feel uncomfortable in a weird way. A part of me wants to slap both of them and give taani a better life and a part of me wants to know if this is what it looks like or there’s something else.
DUDE YOU GOTTA UPDATE SOON PLEASEEEEE.
manveer123
Sanjana singh @manveer123 1 years ago When will we get next update
Eagerly waiting
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