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Sakkiyah
shamina @Sakkiyah 7 years ago Swara and sanskar loves each other.But circumstances always create problems in their life.The sepration from his love was unbearable...and swara's condition was same.When someone insult his swara he will never tolerate it. It was a Beautiful os.There was a new ray of hope
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Juanita @BlurredLines 7 years ago Guys i am sorry for not yet replying back to some Lovely comments.. Really sorry ..Will try to get back to them asap..LoveNita
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Juanita @BlurredLines 7 years ago Hi guys.. I know I have yet to reply back to some lovely comments and I am so sorry about that.. Will try to catch up with them ASAP.. Meanwhile I need you opinion about something.. Those who read this OS.. If you don't mind check the link I post below and let me know if you want an sequel to this OS..
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krishuuuuuuuuuu @krishuuuuuuuuuu 7 years ago Nita my doll...Im the only one reaching stops soo late...finally commenting...i feeling a little alienated...anyways...Coming to OS..it was quite hopefull..one thing which we are not after watching serial n witnessing stupid decisions n reasons of every character...this was indeed great...sanky how hard he tried could not stop himself from helping her...n swara ..im glad she understoodher mistake that it wont be easy to compensate for the lost time...but atleast she understood sanky thats important...n not simply went from his room to help ragini..i was soo worried that she left...but she was in room...thank God...last part was amazing...swaragini convo was just plain truth.even if lucky is found..still destination up to sanky will be far...she had to work hard..n sanky will forgive...im quite hopefull..Thank u for this...LoveTalia
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Juanita @BlurredLines 7 years ago
Thanks Showrav..Really happy to know you liked this one as well .. I so badly wanted it happen and we got Swara who forget him the next second.. I am running out of patience with Swara showrav, i am trying so hard to make an way to give them some sort of reunion or hope in my OS but believe me Swara is testing my pateince so very much..Even i was surprised by myself when i posted this Os as i ended it in a very positive note which i was not planning to do..Then tried to write another OS but it didnt work out because i didnt like the way it turned out to be..So while this track made me creative , it sure destroyed swara in the show.. I am glad to know you liked the OS showrav..Write more well i am struggling now to write anything .. Let see..If i did write you know i will send you the PM but me not thinking of writing anything as of nowWith LoveNita
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Juanita @BlurredLines 7 years ago
Thanks dearest ..Really happy to know you liked the OS.. That how i think Sanskar would react nothing matter to him when it comes to Swara, in show we didnt get it in that scene but atleast got it later.. Yeah in my story Swara will think about Sanskar for sure.. As you know in show i am not expecting anything so trying to write what i want to see in OS i write.. And i am glad to know you liked it and it my wish to dear..Let hope she realize it before it too lateLots of loveNita
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Juanita @BlurredLines 7 years ago
Thanks dearest ..Really happy to know you liked the OS.. I am losing hope on the show so had to infuse hope in my OS atleast.. Yeah had to make Swara choose Sanskar first as he deserves it more than her other so called family.. He will always keep her first though inspite of how their relationship ..I am just happy you liked it dear.. Lots of LoveNita
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Juanita @BlurredLines 7 years ago
Thanks Gayathri dearest..Really happy to know you liked the OS.. Yeah Sanskar even when angry can never let her get humiliated..He will react though in the show he didnt react for dance glad he reacted bit later at least.. But Swara didnt understand it in the show sadly ..We cant have all we want i suppose ..Let hope the day she stand for Sanskar comes soon than later.. Once again Thanks Gayathri dear, for your lovely commentLots of loveNita
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Juanita @BlurredLines 7 years ago
Thanks Mystic.. Really happy to know you liked the OS LoveNita
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Juanita @BlurredLines 7 years ago
Hi Lucky dear Thanks dearest, Really happy to know you liked the OS.. It fit the current scenario right but then again our cvs and we are not thinking alike..Swara did lecture that Sanskar failed as an brother in the episode.. So yeah let keep writing what we wish we saw .. Swara choose behna always lucky.I lost hope about the opposite in the show...I am happy to know liked it enough to want to see the same in the show We all keep hoping lucky that only what we can do..While Sanskar react like his character in the show..It just swara i am confused about.. Let hope the realziation hits her sooner than later..LoveNita
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