Feeling Special

Taani start her schooling and after class she told teacher to teach her something special.

Teacher teach her she thinks aj Rey ko surprise dungi me.

Tanya also sitting with her in same bed.

Taani: didi Rey ko mera surprise acha lagega na.

I hope acha lage apko pta h aj rat ko wo mujhe shopping p le jaenge aap bhi chalna humare sath or hum apke liye bhi khub sare kapde lenge.

Mujhe phli bar koi shopping p le ja raha h me bhut khush hu.

Ab chalo hum tv dekhte h aj bhut sari padhai kar li or sham ko homework bhi krna h

She and Tanya start watching tv they watch different different cartoons and smile.

Taani see Tanya little smile and say wow di aap smile kar rhe ho.

It's amazing y bat jankar Rey bhut khush honge sachi.

After watching cartoon they  both take a small nap and in evening Taani wake up

She see sleeping Tanya and thinks didi ko sone deti hu.

She goes out from the room.

Servant: mam uth gayi aap apke liye kya bnau or tanya mam ka soup bhi ready h.

Taani: didi abhi so rahi h or mere liye mere liye nahi aj sabke liye khana me banaungi.

Servant: mam sir bhut gussa krenge wo apna har kam khud krte h isliye aap sir ka chord sabka bna lijiye lekin sir ke liye nahi pls.

Taani remember his anger and become scared for a second 

 than thinks lekin agar unko khana pasand aa gya to wo khush ho jaenge.

Kitna thak jate honge woh mujhe y risk lena hi hoga.

Taani: koi bat nahi me seh lungi

She thinks wese bhi mujhe to adat h sabka gusa sehne ki.

Servant : thik h mam lekin fruit khane ke bad sir especially bolke gaye h aapko fruit dene ko evening me.

Taani eat fruits and thinks dekhti hu shyad didi uth gayi ho

She goes in Tanya room and see Tanya is awake .

Taani: are didi uth gaye aap apka soup bhi ready h 

She call servant servant come with soup

And started feeding Tanya 

Taani look at Tanya face and thinks y di irritating face kyu bana rahi h.

Taani to Servant : didi aap jao me tanya didi ko khilati hu.

Taani start feeding to Tanya and say kya hua didi breakfast me jo soup Rey ne banaya tha wo toh apne ache se piya tha y acha nahi h kya.

Taani herself taste soup and say eww y to bhut bura bana h Rey yaha nahi rehte na sham ko isliye servant esa krte h ap ane do aaj unhe me unko shikayat karungi ki apke samne acha or apke piche di ko kacha khane dete h.

Lekin I promise didi aj ke bad apke sath kabhi esa nahi hoga.

Me apke liye soup bnakar lati hu 

She goes in kitchen and prepare soup for Tanya and feed her 

Tanya happily eat soup

After that 

Taani prepare food for all in kitchen 

Than Taani goes back to Tanya and say 

Taani: didi bhar garden me chale 

Tanya eyes light up hearing her.

They both go in garden and start giving water to Plants.

Taani was giving water to plants and doing fun with water.

She happily throwing water from pipe here and there 

Same time Rey enter in garden and become wet in Taani play.

She see him wet pipe in her hand and become scared.

He look at her little angrily but same time something happen which make all Rey's anger flew 

Tanya start Laughing 

Rey look at Tanya tears of happiness start forming in his eyes.

Taani hide behind Tanya wheelchair scared and say sorry.

Rey: samne aao,

She come in front of him scared 

Rey smile and  in happiness Rey hug her 

She became shock 

First time someone hugging her

He break hug 

Rey: Thanku Taani,tum bhut achi ho.

Taani become happy with his talk and say aache to aap bhi bhut ache ho tabhi to apne mujhe acha kaha mumma to kehti thi me manhoos hu.

Rey: tum manhus nahi lucky ho tabhi to tumhare meri life me ate hi mere di thik hone lagi.

He again hug her this time her hand aromatically wrap around his waist she hug him back and smile.

She thinks kash me humesha aapke sath rahu na aap mumma jese marte ho na kamre me band rakhte ho na chillate ho or sabkuch meri pasand ka karte h.

Rey: chalo andar chalte h meri wajah se tum bhi bhig gyi ho.

Kapde change krte h

Taani: lekin mere pass kapde nahi h 

Rey: koi nahi di ke phen lo me servants se alter krne ko keh dunga.

Taani: mujhe nahi karwana unse kuch wo bhut gande h.

Rey: kya hua Taani unhone tumse kuch kha

Taani: nahi

Rey: toh 

Taani: aap andar chalo

Taani take tanya and they all enter inside house.

Taani come with servant made soup and say agar meri best friend ki bat nahi hoti to me kabhi complaint nahi karti lekin didi meri ek lauti friend h,y soup pijiye.

Rey drink one spoon of soup and throw out.

Taani: esa hi kacha soup daily dete h didi ko acha hua mene unke chera ke expression dekhkar taste kiya,kher aap chinta mat karo mene di ko acha soup pila diya.

Rey called cook servant and say meri bhen ko kacha khana dete h nikal jao you all are fired 

Servant beg him for forgiveness but monster he is which world call fired then 

Taani: please ek chance de dijiye na ek galti to bhagwan ji bhi maaf kar dete h mene apko sach isliye btaya taki aapki dant khakar y dubara galti na kare isliye nahi ki ap inko job se nikal do please inko ek chance de do nahi to mujhe bhut bura lagega 

Her eyes fill with tears she start feeling guilty bcoz of her someone lost his job

Rey see her innocent face and teary eyes and say ok ek last chance de raha hu dubara esi galti na ho.

She become happy 

Rey thinks mene ajtak kisi ki nahi suni lekin pata nahi kyu Taani ki baat ko mana nahi kar saka.

Taani: wese apse ek bat puchu.

Rey nodded his head in yes

Taani: aaj aap itni jaldi kese a gye us din to office me bhut rat ho gayi thi.

Rey: me apna promise kabhi nahi todta or mene tumhe shopping p le jane ka vada kiya tha na

Rey: ab change kar lete h jana bhi to h.

He leaves for his room 

Where as Taani smile on his talk and thinks woh sirf mujhe Shopping karane aye jaldi apna kam chordke.

Thanku krishna ji meri life me Rey lo lane ko mujhe ajtak itna special kisi ne feel nahi karwaya 

Than she see herself and thinks chal Taani kapde badal le nahi to Rey gusa krenge,she take tanya with her in room.

Servant alter dress she change it 

Tham she change Tanya dress also

After that she see one paper placed on table and smile

She remembers she placed this paper on table to surprise Rey.

She thinks Rey ko mera surprise acha lagega na.

After changing She come out from Room Rey already waiting for her.

She see him and smile and say mere pass apke liye ek surprise h.

Rey gave her confusing look

She open paper and say dekhiye

Rey see Rey is written in paper.

Taani: mene teacher se especially bola tha ki mujhe apka nam likhna sikhaye,kese laga mera surprise.

Rey first become shock after hearing her

(It's just a name and his name daily come in newspaper and magzine) 

He look at paper his hand automatically touch his name written on paper he thinks chae mera nam bhut bar newspaper,magzine me aya ho lekin mera nam sikhne ko itni mehnat ajtak kisi ne nahi ki.

Mera nam bhi kisi ke liye genuily itna especial ho sakta h mene socha nahi tha.

He look at her smiling and curious Taani who is looking at her 

Rey: Thanku with smile,mujhe tumhara surprise bhut pasand aya

He take pen from his pocket write Taani above Rey on same paper and say meri taraf se tumhara especial gift tumhara nam jo bhut especial h sachi,me gadi nikalta hu ab tum jaldi aao bhar.

He leaves for taking car

Taani look paper tears of happiness form in her eyes first time someone making her feel especial

 two drops of tears from her eyes fall on paper which remove ani from paper 

First she become sad but than she look paper again and thinks are y to unka mera nam milke Taarey ban gya,or unhone kaha bhi me unke liye especial hu.

She goes in her room take pen draw heart around Taarey smile keep paper safely in drawer.

Than she take Tanya and go outside where he was waiting for them in Car.

Than they leave for shopping 

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Agar Tum Sath Ho

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