The Roy Chaudhary's have gone to see a natak. It was specially organized for kids so Anirudh along with his family went there specially for Bondita . The Roy Chaudhary's were seated on the front row as special guest. Pros of being a Zimmandar family were that you were treated the best way.
" This story is about a young 8 year old girl staying with her widhwa maa, mama, mami and her cousin. One day her mama mami decides her to get married. The narrator began narrating the story. The actors were all dressed up according to there charaters which quite resembled Bondita's family.
"Patibabu, this girl looks so similar to me" Bondita whispered in Anirudh's ear. He smiled but inside, he was scared. He for some unknown reason wanted to leave the place.
"She had many questions in her mind, which always remained unanswered. She was curious but her curiosity was always crushed. While the narrator was narrating, the girl was acting on the stage. Anirudh was getting a very bad vibe seeing the drama unfold.
" Her cruel mama and mami once decided that they were done with the burden of her responsibilities. So they decided to get her married off to a 80 year old man who was ready to pay them as much as they wanted." Listening to this Anirudh was shocked as he never imagined that someone would make hisr worst nightmare true, but the Barrister mind was quite sure this story was Bondita's. He saw Sudamini doing some indications to the narrator. Joining the dots and seeing that cruel women out here, was damn sure that it was suadamini's ploy to get out the deep secrets of the relation he shares with the innocent eight year old . Bondita was engrossed in the, she even had tears in her eyes seeing the sad events happening on the stage.
"Bondita let's leave". Anirudh caught tight hold of Bondita's hand and stood up to leave, but he was stopped. They were forcefully turned towards the stage where the whole bitter truth of Bondita's life was playing.
It was the same scenario, the marriage, the sati, the survival. Everything exactly same! Bondita was crying bitterly. After the marriage scene, the lights went off and the evil Sudamini was on the stage.
"BONDITA, sudamini ki koi baat par dhayan mat dena." Anirudh was trying his best to save the damage, but alas what's destined to happen shall happen. An already confused bondita didn't know what to do.
"Bondita tumne jo dekha abhi ye sab ek sacchai hai, tumahre jewan ki woh sacchai jo tumhare patibabu ne tumse hamesha chipa kar rakhi hai."
"Suadamini! Bas ek aur shabd nahi" Anirudh shouted with rage. Suadamini was not someone who would take other people's rage, so she become more dangerous.
"Kyu, main kyu chup raho? Aaj mein bolungi. Bondita tum mar kyu nahi gai uss din? Sati hojati tu kya jata tumahra? TUMHARI WAJAH SE MAINE APNA ANIRUDH KHOYA HAI. Tum wo kalank ho jisne mera jeewan kaal kardiya. Aree widhwa hoke ek subhagyawati ka jeewan jee rahi hoo tum." Sudamini kept on blabbering and that poor child was just numb. The one she trusted the most always kept her caged in the darkness of a lie. All those memories flaunted in her mind. With all this, she couldn't take it and collapsed on the ground. There wasn't a unconscious bondita, but that little girl who was broken into pieces by a woman for the sake of vengeance.
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Jr.Scientist , Psychiatrist_ @Home786
+ 3
3 years ago
Alfu, my behena this is so beautiful and intriguing... It's really one of the best plot.. And you penned it down so beautifully...Tbh, I had the same plot in my mind a month ago and I had planned to write TS on it but couldn't make it due to lack of time.. But I am so happy that my behena did it for me.. Love you for thisBut it's too short re.. Now please do continue it.. Wanna know how Anirudh will handle the situation.. How will he regain her trust back? Will little Bon able to trust him again?? Please continue it behen.. I am always selective in reading ffs... I always select the stories having content, a good message, emotional, tragedic one rather than romantic ones.. And I always prefer yours as it's subtle and intriguing to read... Please continue behen.. Will wait. (Ps: I always wanted something like this to happen before leap.. I want this to happen before Mini's exit as her last plot.) Home7862020-12-10 07:08:48
Alefiyah @Patibabu
3 years ago
Thankyou everyone for such lovely views. Part 2 kal dalungi and than Part 3.
Shrabana.. @Shrabana99
3 years ago
1st of all Thanku alfu for this os.. I always thought kya hoga jab bonu ke samne ayega uski marriage ka sach, kaise ayega samne.. & the way you took natak theme I just loved that.. Part 2 jaroor likhna yaar where both reconcile.. Piliiizzzzz..
Prit_007 @Prit_007
3 years ago
Lovely Alif The idea you used to show all this to Bondita through the natak and Mini behind this is appreciableI want you to continue this please how the truth affects little Bon and how Ani manages to get her out of this shock and pain
RekaC @RekaC
3 years ago
An interesting and unique one Alif this OS is SoudaMini here is innovative You have stopped it at such a shocking part that I will be banging my heads of what could be the next??? Please try to extend it and give the remaining soon Alif
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listmist @listmist
+ 2
3 years ago
Rula diya alfuYou are brilliant reIt's so interesting i want to know what happen next.. Pleas next part jaldi de
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Ka_ta @Ka_ta
3 years ago
Phir kyaaaaa hua!???Gosh are you planning to end it here!??🥺🥺🥺🥺☹️This is the most interesting cliffhanger ever💖Ek bonus update toh banta hain!! Please update what happens next 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏