PART 2
Anirudh rushed with an unconscious Bondita in his arms. He didn't care about anyone, but that little soul. After reaching the haweli, where the doc was already present. Somnath had already informed Bihari about Bondita's health, and bihari kaka immediately had called the doctor. Anirudh placed her on the bed in the nearest room, and the doctor began checking. Kaka, Binoy, Somnath everyone around were broken seeing the life of Roy Chaudhary Khandan like that. Anirudh wasn't in the state of mind to think anything or do anything. What he wanted was to hear that "Patibabu " from Bondita's mouth.
'Sambhalye da, agar app himat kho denge to Anirudh ko kaun sambhalega."
"Binoy, akhir hamare bahu aur bete hi kuy? Sab theek ja raha tha Durga Maa ke ashirwaad se lekin uss aurat ne sab bigad diya. Agar hamari bahu ko kuch hua, to Sudamini zinda nahi bachegi. " Kaka was so angry and hurt. At one moment he wanted to finish that lady but the second moment he thought about Bondita's health and decided to deal with Suadamini later. Whereas Somnath and Batuk were with Bihari Kaka and Koyli.
"Bihari kaka, boudi theek hojaigi na?" Batuk asked with tears. Bihari and Koyli had no words which could assure Batuk that everything will be fine.
"Ye sab uss suadamini ki wajah se hua hai. Main unko nahi chodunga." Somnath roared in anger and was going to leave when he was stopped by Binoy and Kaka.
" Som pagal hogai ho kya? Abhi hamara dhayan sirf bondita ke taraf hona chaiye. Sudamini se baad mein lad lenge." Kaka agreed to Binoy and stopped Som from doing anything.
"Bihari, Anirudh kaha hai?" Kaka asked.
"Malik, wo bahurani ji ke kamre mein hain."
Anirudh, entered the room slowly. He wasn't alive, his mind, soul, heart everything was dead. He was a lifeless man. He entered the room slowly and switched on the lights, and the first thing he saw was the coconut phone on the bed. He walked a little nearer to the bed, and took the coconut phone in his hand. Tears were continously flowing from his eyes. His eyes searched around the room, but he wasn't able to find the peace that his room had before. Her softoys were placed on the study table. Her durga maa ki murti was also there. Her each and every thing was kept on its place but something was yet missing. It was her presence. There, the doctor had informed that due to excess mental harassment and shock she was unconscious and most probably would gain her consciousness by morning. Koyli and Bihari had decided to stay near bondita the whole night. There Anirudh, within no time, broke down into tears. He fell down on his knees and started crying. It was the pain of seeing what bondita was going through.
He wanted to feel her presence, so he just tightly hugged her saree and cried his heavy heart out.
BONDITA, PLEASE MUJHSE BAAT KARO. MERI BAAT SUNO. BONDITA!
Kaka and binoy noticed everybit of what happened now. They wanted to console him, but weren't able to.
Kaka couldn't see this, so he walked towards his mandir to pray for the family. Life is weired. At times its as sweet as honey but it takes a second for the destiny to change everything!
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Shrabana.. @Shrabana99
3 years ago
Alfuuuu... Finally I'm free.. I re read 1st part & 2nd part.. Iss os k liye tujhe thanks bolu to bhi Kam hain re... Epi mein to vagam vag & jay durge jay durge karke hi naikaal diya.. But the way you potrayed Ani's breakdown... ππππWaiting for next part dear.. Jaldi de de yaar..
Scarlett_15 @Scarlett_15
3 years ago
AlifSorry for the delayed response SisI was waiting for the 3rd part as I wanted to comment on all the three chapters together...But I couldn't resist myself any longer..Comment karne aa hi gayi after such a prolonged waitThis is the first time I'm reading your work and I must say you are an amazing writer Alif..This was a fresh concept and was left untouched by our forum writers as far I know..You did a wonderful job..The plot was intriguing and I could literally picturize it..I loved Ani's caring attitude towards his wife and was happy to see rest of the family members standing by his side during their tough time..My fav part was Ani grabbing Bon's saree and crying his heart out...I just loooved that part..It was simple yet soo beautiful and enthralling Waiting eagerly for the next chap and I swear I won't take ages to comment dear..
Soma84 @Soma84
3 years ago
Can this story be more awesome? I just now read both the parts and oh my god! It's so beautiful... I could picturize the scenes! The action replay of Bon's life, Saudamini's evil drama, Ani's helplessness, Kaka-Binoy's concern, Som-Batuk's anger! Everything.Though, I keep on saying this to every FF writer, after Reading their stories, but l will quote my words again, (here for you) "THIS RAISED MY EXPECTATIONS FROM BB MAKERS" π
Though I don't want Bon to be hurt by anyone knowing about her past, but all i want is if ever her past gets disclosed to her, I want Ani and all RC boys/men to be by her side, JUST THE WAY THEY WERE IN THIS STORY! Lovely story, dear! Looking forward to read more!(P.S I forgot your name )
Jaya @screen22
+ 5
3 years ago
Please continue this because we need to know what the whole RC Men are going to do to evil mini because that would be a showdown where you would be willing to be a fly on the wallHow broken π Anirudh is, surely he understands that Bondita is his lifeI understood the story but my Hindi is not very π
RekaC @RekaC
3 years ago
Too emotional Alif Could feel the pain of Aniruddh with your words.... Waiting for next updates too