PART 1 Man sat down with a sigh bit frustrated and started thinking of this girl, she was innocent, brave mature in dealing things might be she is framed in all this unknowingly or there is great conspiracy going on behind what actually meets the eyes. He started recalling his first meet with her: FB STARTS: It was a dark night there was a complete mess due to gang war there were fires and bullets from both the sides one of his friend got injured needed a medical help, but due to this mess they got struck in the car itself. His friend’s condition started getting worse seeing no ...
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Bodhianveshika @Bodhianveshika
+ 4
2 years ago
Loved the usage of Ad jingles!
kavita @kavitha_r
+ 3
2 years ago
Fantastic update. Thanks for the pm.
Karuna Kini @karuna_kini
+ 2
2 years ago
Interesting. Very interesting. Loved the update ❤️❤️Yog is amazing and he is going to complete this mission. Somewhere his and Anika's thought process is same. Bewajah conclusion pe nahi pahunchna chahiye. Nice. Yadvi kya hai na. I mean just a rebel. Itna gussa. Yog issi ka cousin hai na. Hahah!! Anika bhi Yadvi ki baatein sunke has padi 😂😂Aree Yog apni maa ki icha puri kar do na. Kisiko laa do 😘😘 aur kisse yeh tumhe dheere dheere pata chal jaayega. Kitna pyara bond hai Yog aur Yadvi ka 😍😍
Khyati55 @Khyati55
2 years ago
Intresting... The way this story unfolds it's first page is really interesting.. well Yog is going to meet his mysterious helper girl...The way you portrayed the hostage and relief scene was amazing..Yadvi and Anika ki beech ki conversation mujhe madam sir ke Karishma and Haseena jaise lagi 😅😅..and I must say that Yadvi is really very strong kya solid punch mara h ki banda seedha behosh 😂😂... And that Mahabharata vala example was too good and completely fit this scenario 😜😜...So actually Anika ko uske senior ne lift di and vo uspe hi shaq kr rhi thi... Iss situation pe line shock laga shock laga shock laga... Laga.... Yadvi and yog's conversation was cute and lovely 🤩🤩.. going to read the next....
nicronyariya @nicronyariya
+ 2
2 years ago
Anika was in shock ye soch ke ki ye car wala admi actually uska senior hai😂 loved yadvi and yog's convo..
ranibowsprimkls @Satrangi_Curls
+ 25
3 years ago
Yay!!! Interesting start!! Yog in new avatar!! Noice!! Yadvi is cute! Yog gave Anika lift na? Ani to 🔥🔥. Mast hai ekdum! Abhi dekhte hai Yog ki asamanjas kitni jaldi dur hoti hai and what Anika has to say about this mess.Thanks for PM!Stay safe 💖
midnight_library @Disnhining_star
+ 2
3 years ago
Interesting update.. 😍😍.. just loved it, Goldie.FB starting part was mysterious..Who was the person in the car who gave Anik a lift?I just loved Yadvi character ❤️❤️....Yog and Shambhavi, I mean mother and son conversation was so realistic.Lagta hai Yai FF but Zada interesting hone wali hai 😉😉Thank you for PM 🤗🤗
virmanfan013 @virmanfan013
+ 5
3 years ago
Nice start..Really liked it..Nice flashback. I think the lady was Anika and man was yog in flashback..Drive scene was awesome.. loved it..After that the drama begun which was really intresting..Last but not least loved the introduction part.. waiting the story to unfold..And yeah really sorry for late comment.. was little busy now a days..Anyways thanks for the pmTake care
Dream Girl @J6705
3 years ago
Good start dear... Liked it a lot. Thanks for the PM..
Anika @stormfly13
+ 3
3 years ago
Loved it. Gari me to Yog hi tha. Loved tha characters. Except Yogs mother pushing him to marry. 😏😏😏😏 Ye Patents bhi na. Samajh te hi nahi hai. 😐😐😐😐. Chalo accha hai they saved the kids. Awesome Update. Cont soon.