Mister Greek Gods Miss Angry Eyes Ch15 PG120 21/04 - Page 39

Originally posted by: anitamalik

Mic There you are again, with an amazing review.. you and a couple others own my review board babe.. seriously..

What an ENTERTAINING chapter...Full of masti! I LOVED reading both the parts...I read part two to this chapter like 2 times...It was that good..I couldn't get enough of it!!! awwww.. you did.. i'm so glad you enjoyed it.. i dunno what else to say.. ummm.. kinda run out of words in my head.. lol..

I hope you're bracing yourself...I have a lot to say! 😃 i'm sitting tight 😃

First off, I have to commend you on the way you described the whole process of how Riddhima got Armaan out from under the bed👏...Each specific detail was taken into consideration by you and it made it soo easy for me to visualize the scene happening... PHEW!! [wipes sweat off her brow] you have no idea what i went through.. seriously.. i was soooooooo worried that i had gone overboard with the descriptions.. seriously.. really worried.. but reading your response and a few others it seems like i did the right thing by leaving it all there..

I loved how Riddhima listened to his plea and decided against calling room service and helping him out instead...Aww...typical fan behavior again...She cares about his self-respect and reputation that much that she doesn't want to put a stain on it...So sweet... Yeah she's so typical yet, when it comes to accepting it in front of him, she'd rather swallow a frog.. lol..

Armaan - Okay this is really not the time to take advantage of my sexy body..🤣 🤣

I seriously couldn't stop laughing! I love how you add a comedy element to your updates..Their BRILLIANT! If this isn't the right time to take advantage of his sexy body, then what is the right time...LOL..🤣 I say it's perfect timing! hahahahahahah.. absolutely right.. there could be no better time to take advantage of it.. with him so handicapped.. lol.. this was another line that made me crack up while reading and writing it.. i can just picture Karan saying it.. he has these quick one liners.. i've seen them in some of his interviews.. and they just crack me silly.. this one was an ode to him!!

WOHOO!! if i had a little hot wheels car i'd have the most fun running it up and down his SEXY BACK!! Armaan Mallik is definitely bringing sexy back"

YEAH! HOT WHEELS..I can totally relate to Riddhima's thoughts at this part...I would so play with a hot wheels car on his back too if I was that lucky...lol..Armaan is definitely bringing SEXY back! How do you think of this stuff...it's amazing! Believe it or not, i was telling someone i can't remember, that i was singing sexy back in my head.. and i had already written sexy back once before and it just came to me.. i thought actually i had abused the term "Sexy back" in those two lines but heck if you liked it, then i got no worries..

I loved the way you described their close proximity scenes..You did FULL justice to it and I mean it! I knew Armaan was dreaming of kissing her...I was like if he really did kiss her and then when he released her from the nonviolent kiss, her thoughts would be taking over her mind..LOL! She would be fainting..and so would I...LOL! precisely why i refrained from using their brains in that one scene.. it was too cliche though.. i agree.. but i felt it was necessary for the guy who was stuck under the bed telling himself to keep it in his pants to vent it out somehow.. What do you think? Was it inappropritate at the time?

Besides how many fans get to rub Armaan Mallik's sexy back with soap huh?? That was payment enough for me.. [winks]

Aww..so sweet..I wouldn't take the money either..it would be enough for me that I got to touch his back...*Haiii* I sound so obsessed of KSG right now..LMAO! But seriously I would feel like the BIGGEST AND HUGEST fan in the world if I got to do that as payment..LOL..I love your FF Mic...It so relates to my thoughts and I bet yours too! It totally does.. i'm a huge KSG drooler and I can so understand where we're all coming from you know.. hence it's easy to put it all together and make Ridz do it for us.. Can you believe the honesty in that statement of hers? After writing it and reading it, i still can't believe she said that.. lol..

WHAT A SELFISH MAN! God! After all Riddhima did for him...He couldn't even help her...He knows he isn't doing the right thing and he should help her and yet he got on the bus on an impulse..GOD...Poor Riddhima! He has his reasons, and stars are really quite painful when it comes to staying out in the sun and all.. i thought of him really pushing the bike and i was like.. i doubt he would do it in real life you know..

LOL..this comment turned out to be extraaaaa long...Hope you don't fall asleep reading it...and NO--you never pester me into writing a comment..I do it with JOY and GLEE because I love your FF to bits! I HAVE to write a long comment to satisfy you for providing us readers that lovely, extra long part! You deserve it! You make me soooo happy when you say that.. i'm over the moon right now.. and you know my love for loooooooooooong comments.. and as a reader you never fail to amaze me.. THANK YOU!!

I read your reply on my last comment...and I agree with what you said...I now think in a way that both are better off with their respective partners..Smitha and Harsh are so understanding for them and know their drawbacks and their personalities better than they know themselves...With Harsh changing the timing to their date just for Riddhima's sake...and Smitha, advicing Armaan on his tattoos...Their ideal life partners...but hmmm... I wonder what you have in store for them...Right now if you ask me.. i'm not sure either.. these two are so perfectly imperfect that i don't know.. if i should get them together or not.. if i don't i bet all the readers will hunt me down and kill me.. lol.. after all their chemistry just keeps getting better with every passing meeting..

Aww...I figured that the Harsh changing date timing for Riddhima was a real-life example for you...I seriously would doo the same...I have to watch DMG everyday! lol.. i know the feeling babe.. because of me, my boyfriend started watching it too.. just to keep up with my daily analysis.. lol..

Ok, long comment now...lol...You already know which titles I liked! And OMG, I read your post on the scenario of the week in the FF section..and I was amazed by that short story you wrote..It was brilliant..You left such a cliffhanger for us..lol... shoot.. i totally forgot about that one.. you liked it?? REALLY?? YAAAAAAAY!! I feel like continuing it.. What should i do?

Love, Anita PS: Do i need to thank you? No na.. You already know your ehmiyat to my lil FF!! Mic

Originally posted by: Ladoo645

woower man, those ARE really long parts!

hehe, Armaan gettin stuck under the bed, dats a sight to see.

Mr Greek Gods Miss Angry Eyes would be good!

Awesome Awsome parts darling!

Sri for such a late reply~!

-Natasha

Originally posted by: Jodubai

Hi Mic,

Thanks for the pm.....Soni, seriously.. i forbid it, it will not be allowed henceforth.. this sentence.. and especially from YOU!! okay? 😉

Ok, where do I start on the part........loved the starting, where Ridz actually crawls under the bed to make certain that he is actually stuck...that was on instinct..I would the same! lol.. yeah i know.. i woulda done the same thing.. i mean how can a person who has evidently gotten himself under the bed not be able to get himself out right?? lol

loved the detailed procedure that you described for Arman to get out of the bed...it was crystal clear what Ridz was trying to do....We could actually visulise the whole sceanario...thats the best thing about your FF, so natural, so simple, and at the same time filled with wacky, witty & wicked ideas!!!😉 I was meaning to ask you.. you think the exit strategy made sense?? It did in my head.. want to know what you thought.. I mean.. the whole getting his shirt off and rubbing his back with soap to slide out.. made sense?? could it be applicable in the real world?? I was trying to make it as real as possible.. I even crawled under my bed to write the scene better.. lol..

Being the PS Queen, you have asked us our 1 fav dailogue, this question is wrong in itself, how can we only have 1 fav???? I love all your lines....but still have managed to note some as below thank you, thank you..

Arman pleading Ridz not to get outide help, as his reputation will be ruined, Ridz being the true fan, oliges him i was wondering, like i told someone else, if you noticed the similarity.. i tried to bring in the end in the beginning itself.. as in give you a clue.. he was worried about his reputation at first and then he worries about his image.. he hardly thinks about her hardships.. you noticed that?

The thought running in Arman's mind were hilarious, side effects of a big body...hehehehe...how can that be thought ever???

Armaan - Okay this is really not the time to take advantage of my sexy body.....

This was the ultimate (1) now, with a body as sexy as greek god, who wouldn't want to take avantage...ahem...ahem... look at the cheek of the man, he's stuck under there and he thinks she'll take advantage of him.. hahahahaha

Their close proximity that you described was simply mindblowing....it reflected so many emotions in a single moment....their breaths almost kissing...this is Romance personified!! OOOOH sooo relieved you thought there was romance.. i'm so much better at the dialogues than writing all the mushy stuff.. so it kinda worries me when i have to write close scenes..

Then to add to the immense atmosphere, Arman had to nuzzeled into her neck...can't blame him...he is being attracted to her, since the 1st time they met...& being in such close proximity, who wouldn't want to take a chance......but hey, no fair..changing topic is Ridz's ball game, lagta hai sangat ka asar ho raha hai!! totally, that was sangat ka asar only.. he's already become a pro at changing the topic.. lol.. and yeah.. his nose bleed completely vanished in that scene.. i doubt anyone noticed.. lol..

Talk about making light of a moment:

Armaan - I don't need an excuse Riddhima... [chuckles] besides i'd like to get close to you in a more comfortable manner.. not like this.. (any girl could go weak in the knees, this is THE Arman malik telling them) absolutely, i feel like i've seen him say this line somewhere u know..

Armaan - Riddhima, do you realize this almost counts as giving me a bath?

Ridz - Well you're incapacitated, it's hardly as much fun!! ["Liar Liar Riddhima, this is waaaaay more fun.. hehehahahah"]

who wouldn't want to give Arman a bath....love this manner, though! lol.. she flirting back instead of avoiding it or changing the topic is refreashing to say in the least.. lol..

if i had a little hot wheels car i'd have the most fun running it up and down his SEXY BACK!! Armaan Mallik is definitely bringing sexy back"] I would love to do that!! girl, where do you come up with such wacky ideas & lines I was imagining it.. and thinking of not writing the normal, hot chocolate on the back or whipped cream and strawberries kind of dream make out scene.. and then i thought.. why not.. if i had a little car and if the man has a nice back.. it could be the most fun thing right?? And as for Armaan Mallik bringing sexy back.. That came from the JT song i was listening to at the time.. lol.. i was telling Anita, that i thought i had abused the sexy back term in two sentences one after the other.. but now because you'll like it.. i'm so glad i didn't delete it.. 😃

The best part (sorry, one of the best part) was

Ridz - Now slide out slowly.. I'll stay right here incase you need more lubrication...

Armaan [uses his hands to push him backward slightly then stops"Lubrication?"] - You just said lubrication didn't you?

Ridz [totally embarrassed "Shites"] - OH NO! You heard.. I was hoping i had said that in my head..

with such a sexy guy, what else can a poor soul think about....we shouldn't be questioning Ridz's intentions here...she helped him so much, does deserve to get payback😉 hahahahaha.. lubrication was the first word that came to my head when i was writing it down Soni, beat that.. I think my intentions should be questioned too.. hahahahah... I was wondering if many would get the connotation.. So glad you did..

The kiss, I kept thinking if it was for real, if it was, Ridz wouldn't be just standing there, she would have gone hysteric & crazy & probably fainted too... You and Anita think so alike man.. She had the exact same thoughts..lol.. and i actually refrained from bringing their thoughts into the picture bc i didn't wanna confuse you guys more..

"I can't believe i didn't kiss her.. Damn it.. it was perfect.. you imagined it so well.. why couldn't you have just done it... you lost the moment Armaan... There'll never be another like it"

He imagined kissing her, & thought would regret had he actually kissed her, but NO, he regreted not kissing her...OMG...this guy is confused to the core....the thing is he wants to keep both his chicks & not get caught too! MEN, I tell you! wait till you read his justification in the next chapter.. you'll want to tear your hair out.. lol.. and yeah.. most men want to eat their cake and have it too.. what to do..

Ridz didn't accept the payment, who would? as a fan, she got the biggest payback, anyone could ask for, rubbing soap on sexy back of Arman, I so much want to be Ridz now!!!

lol yeah she didn't.. i wanted her to.. but then i thought.. she's behaved like how any fan would all thru the chapter.. taking his money would demean any fans behaviour towards their idols.. so glad you, and all the rest want to be Ridz.. it's the greatest gift, to have the readers connect with a character to this extent..

She is such a sweetheart, offering him a lift to Doana paula, probably wanted to spend some more precious moments in her 'Dreams', but Arman is so ungrateful....the way he lectured her, about her checking the fuel tank, as if she is his personal servant, but then, thats the lifestyle he has lived, he is used to people working for him, but felt very bad for Ridz, she didn't deserve this, he knew she was a die heard fan of his & was going out of her way to help him out & yet he behaved bad with her...took the bus off...she will never forgive him...I think whatever closeness you had got in between them, is all washed away with this last bit & the next time, they meet, Ridz will became the same mystery girl, (I hope) arman needs to be taught a lesson

yeah she didn't deserve it.. but she curses herself more than him.. what i wanted to point out here was how Armaan loses his cool in the most silly situations.. like the onscreen Armaan.. and then compare it to what he may do in real life.. i doubt he'd push her bike.. he'd be more worried about making sure he looked okay for his shoot the next day right?? i dunno iff it was realistic of me to portray that or not.. so again.. please lemme know...

Ok, I have said enought on this part...please tell me, you didn't sleep throught this torture... What nonsense ya, you know i love your reviews.. that's another thing i am going to ban from now on.. lol

Among the titles, I really like Mr Greek God Miss Angry Eyes will certainly add your vote..

ok, till the next part, alvida Mic!!!! and i'm ever so grateful that you're enjoying the journey with me.. i'll see you soon Soniiiiiiiiiii... Until dream about Armaan Mallik's sexy sexy back. hahahahaha..

Originally posted by: aravi

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!! mic me back in action😉🤗 i'm so so so sowieeeee yaar just ended wid m xamz 😡😡gosh!!!!! two monstrous n amazing updates to read hayyyyyyyyyy😆!!!!!! i've read dem over thrice in a row i'm in complete awe of u lady👏!!!!!!! way to go hunny-bunny😳 how'd your exams go Aravi?? You had me worried there.. i was like, yeh kahan gayab ho gayi.. lol.. i hope you did well in em.. good thing you didn't read this and go answer, you'd have probably written about Armaan's sexy sexy back.. hahahahah... and thanks sweets.. i'm thrilled to read such a long review of yours.. Yipppeee.. newaz dis is getting more n more adventurous yaar ohk prt -1: firstly luved d way u described both of deyr thots wonderfully penned👏 their confusion was not confusing i hope.. lol..

actually i feel u have d ablilty to judge a person in n out in just a vry little tym b'coz d way u've portrayed d charactrs.... i mean dey may b soo damn close to reality😃 i dunno about that babe.. i know i've made many mistakes judging people before.. it is somehow easier to write about a characters thoughts than have to figure out in real life what people are thinking.. lol.. but i try really hard.. to get into the character and imagine what he/she would be thinking.. and i guess that's how i write it all down..

n harsh d mills n boon hero😆 yaar dey r alwaz tall 😳dark😳 handsum 😳passionate😳😳 possessive😳😳 n wicked 😉 sum how armaan fits more in dat scenario 4 me 😆 Armaan definitely fits the bill there, but Riddhima and Harsh's love story is truly the M&B type.. or maybe Riddhima and Armaan's is even more M&B type, just that she hasn't figured it out yet.. 😉

but harsh actually seems to luv ridzy a lotttttt yarr guys can b nething but like harsh ....but armaan seems more confused 😕 wen compared vere ridzy is open to harsh bout her feelings 4 armaan ,but he is reluctant to tell smitha bout ridzy he's a bit weird yaar😕 there i guess i can explain.. for Ridz she's always been open to Harsh about Armaan as the hero she idolized.. but i doubt she'd tell him her inner turmoil now.. and yes amongst the two she is definitely the more homest one.. while for Armaan this is a new feeling.. and what he's reluctant to tell Smitha is a secrett.. you'll find out soon.. newaz he bumped into sumone oieeeee! n of all ppl ridzy 😆had to b at d site god reallt want dem to b together i feelll😳 they keep talking to him after all.. lol..

but den d bike ride oooohhhhh love sparks all around gurl 😳😳😳 gosh armaan is too notty n witty😳 yaar haila kitna chipkoo hai yaar fevicol ki tarah chipah gaya!! but both of den njoyed it thoroughly didn't dey!!!!!!hahahahah.. your fevicol comparison is too funny yaar.. he definitely enjoyed it.. and yeah she secretly did too.. lol..

armaan is too obssessed wid his looks yaar i mean even gurlz don't care dat much🤣🤣 but u described it so well gurl i felt jitters all along vile reading😳 gosh he couldn't even tie her hair n den he riding n she sitting ooohhhh!!!!!!me tohhh sooo dead yaarr!!!!!!! tussi gr8 ho yaar👏lol.. for a man to struggle to undo a knot, and then say he can't.. it takes a lot.. you know how guys are, always wanting to be able to do everything.. lol.. but now she made him so nervous that he couldn't.. quite a role reversal right?

👏👏👏 prt -2gosh i'm so full of ur FF yaar!!!!!!!! mic wat would i not give to b in ridzy's place 😳seriously yaar kuch nahi choda tune naa😉.... but d gurl actually has sum brains hats off to her (actually u..)👏 awwwwwww.. thank you hon.. mein seriously, bed ke neeche thi, sochthe samay.. isko abhi bahar kaise laya jaay..lol.. i think this is another instance where almost everyone has said they wished to be Ridzy right then..

armaan is such a baby😳 for goodnes sake fav pair of yellow slippers😆😆 hadh ho gayee😆😆!!!! he's bout to catch a flight n is finding his slippers 🤣 gosh d guy stuck der wid his legs hanging must 've bin a sight hunny!!!!!😆 imagine kar.. bottom half bed ke bahar.. i swear just imagining it is making me laugh so hard.. 😆

but den deyr close moments were so killing gurl!!!!! where did u get ur brains frn yaar?😃 wat imagination ... how i wish even my bizzare dreams turn into reality 4 once 😉😉 i mean scrubbing his back almost kissin each other dat too under d bed hayyyyy wat a killing sensation yarr!!!!!😳😳😳 pooch mat.. sometimes i get brain dead you know.. soch soch ke.. thak jaathi hoon.. seriously.. i feel it's too taxing to get into each of their minds and write down what they feel and think.. and then do and say the complete opposite.. it's like writing for four people instead of two.. but then after breaking my head soooooo much.. i read what you guys have written.. and it's all worth it.. every single word is worth it..

it's gng places sweetie!!!!!luved d scene wen armaan was cursing himself cho chweet 😃yaar n den she was helping him n c was nuzzling at her neck...😳 uffff yeh ladka kabhi nahi sudhar sakta😆!!!!!!! but i suppose 4 d first tym u used "hindi ka tarka" here it added to d fun mam😳!!!!!yaay.. it did.. i'm so glad.. as you know.. my hindi sucks.. so i try to shove one or two decent lines here and there.. very happy you liked the hindi bit..

but den at d end i hate armaan😡 god u making me hate my "mr.suprecool"😲 i found it damn rude of him gosh now ridsy should get even wid him! how ruthless of him i mean just thinking bout his needs.... he needs an earful now!!!!!! behaved like a complete jerk😡 but b4 i write a thesis on ur FF lemme stop n eagerly awaiting d next part !!!!!!!!!!!!!😉 i seriously can't believe ke tum aur baki ke sab.. itna saara likhte ho.. i love reading every word.. it's so damn encouraging.. really.. never think twice before posting what you feeel like onver here han please.. and yes what Ridz does to Armaan.. yeh to jaldi hi pata chalega..

loads of luvvvvv😳 huggggggggssssss.. and thanks so much Ar..

aravi Mic

Originally posted by: shifa1234

hey mic! heyyyyyyyy.. i was looking forward to seeing you here 😳

dat was sooo hilarious! 🤣🤣 i was laughing lyk a loony picturing arman stuck under d bed n ridz trying 2 get him out! very very very glad they made you laugh.. it's worth all the effort i put just reading those words of yours My fav lines wer:

"Dam lagake Haiyya, Zor lagake..😆 yaaaaaaaayyyyyyy.. i loved that line too.. and you're the first to tell me you did.. very happy...

500 push ups bed ke neeche todhi na kee hai maine, sale gadhe.. shifa what can i say.. you have my best pick.. i swear i go back to the part.. just to read his frustrated thoughts under the bed and everytime i get to this line, i can't help butt laugh aloud.. lol..

Ridz [back from the bath room, kneeling right next to him] - Can you take off your shirt from under there Armaan?
Armaan - Okay this is really not the time to take advantage of my sexy body.. another favorite of mine.. i was telling the others.. the retort was so Karan like right??

Ridz - Now slide out slowly.. I'll stay right here incase you need more lubrication... hahahaahahah. you got it too.. yaaayyy...

LMAOAAAO just reading dem agen make me 🤣 it sure as hell made me laugh too..

Dat was an awesome part mic, but im soo mad at arman 4 being so mean n not helping her push d bike after she has dun so much 4 him! Awwwwwww poor ridz. my sentiments exactly Shifa.. lets see what she does to him... soon han.. i'll look forward to our meeting..

Cnt w8 4 next part !Gr8 job👍🏼 I truly appreciate all the time you took out to write this for me.. Thank you seems redundant really..

btw my fav title is fatal attraction THANKS!! Adding it right away..

xxx

Mic [hugssssss]

Originally posted by: ttimpy

super cool episode mic............but with what a twist.....here i was about to make them kiss and you make them end their so called meeting in a huff................ YAYYYYYYYY.. it's you.. So glad you liked it.. and even though everyone said they were pissed with Armaan deserting Ridz, you truly spoke the words i was longing to hear'. ."here i was about to make them kiss and you make them end their so called meeting in a huff.............." i'm serious.. i was hoping someone would write it down and tell me what they imagined would happen and how things turned out.. and Bins my girl.. you did..

i just can't believe that armaan can be such a vain character............more worried abt his looks than abt a poor girl....the girl who has been instrumental in getting all his packing done.............😲 Star log hote hi aise hai.. lol.. all through that scene when Armaan was blowing his top off.. I was picturing Armaan on screen getting mad for the silliest reason, and then comparing him to Karan.. I wondered if he would wanna push a bike in the heat with his star status and i realized.. no star would do that.. so i guess i just had to stick with what seemed more real at the time.. but what will happen?? who knows..lol..

are u sure he's not gng to get down from the bus and help her push the bike till the nearest gas station........ he may, or may not.. lolll .he's definitely hot headed and so is ridz.....and they are definitely not the best pairing...........and i feel unconsciously even they know it so they are fighting down the attraction.................but u know.........love changes people drastically.....it mellows them down........it makes them more tolerant of the loved one idiosyncracies............hopefully the same shud happen in this case also......... love definitely mellows people down.. i totally second that.. and it makes you more tolerant too.. are we speaking from experience here Binns?? lol.. we'll see where these two head.. i wrote to someone else.. not too sure who.. these two are imperfectly perfect.. and i don't know if just because of their chemistry they should be together or not.. lol.. i'll be so killed if it's not a happy ending..lol..

btw ur description of the way armaan surfaced from under the bed was perfect...........i cud see them clearly in my head...the right and left movements and the almost kiss and the nuzzling was picture perfect..........he actually slithered out from under the bed...........groovy......and all that lathering must've made him real slippery.........gosh ridz must be having a super strong will power ...........😉😉 thank ou for saying that.. i was looking forward to reading that bit from you and a few others.. i mean your take on the descriptive bit.. because i felt i got a little carried away.. but as long as it was clear enough to visualize, that eases my worry.. by the way i told a few others.. i got under the bed to write that scene.. and really put myself in Armaan's place.. finding a way out and figuring what their Actions would be and what could be possible under a bed.. loll..

Ridz - Now slide out slowly.. I'll stay right here incase you need more lubrication

even i cud not believe my eyes that she actually said this.........just goes to show as to what her subconscious mind was actually thinking...............lolzzzzzzzzz

i loved this line.........😆 lol.. yeah she was sooooo thinking it.. infact she was thinking, he was thinking, they were both covering up, and then she accidentally blurts it out.. lol..

and as i was reading 1 post which said that u always make them part with their back towards each other......it reminds me of HUM TUM.........and also one particular episode in DMG when they show AR huffing and puffing after a fight and goin their separate ways thrice..........does this have anything to do with that too.......... Anita had made a mention a long time ago that my FF reminds her of Hum Tum, and i told her then and i dunno if you'll believe me now, but i've never watched Hum Tum.. I keep telling myself to rent the dvd.. but it always slips my mind.. and now you tell me the same thing.. damn.. there must be a lot in common.. my explanation to this is the same i gave genie.. until now each of their meetings have been episodes.. happening mostly after a lengthy or brief span of time.. since it's based purely on coincidence i don't want them to say bye to each other.. and like you noticed.. and like genie said.. they are not through with each other.. they'll keep parting like this.. until things get more stable.. lol..

and what an anti climax...............i never ever thot that they will fight before parting.....its so sad and esp. when Ridz said we r thru..........we dont even know when or how they'll meet again........ yay yaaay yaaaaaayyyyy.. i feel like clapping for myself.. lol.. i'm so glad that i turn around and surprise you once in a while.. it makes me sooooooooooper happy.. lol..

so pl. update soon and put us out of our misery........👏 will do darlin...

u have the wheels in my brain turning at a high speed ..........i have 2 more titles to contribute...... ooooh some more.. Way to go Binns.. i'm going to add them, my god.. i honestly can't thank you.. you're so nice to have actually thought of titles for me.. yet again..

In Love With The Devil

Charming Devil

tc hugggggggggggssssss.. you know your reviews make me very happy.. so Shukriya.. i seriously have to find another word for thank you.. lol..

Originally posted by: ~@$hm@~

Mic!! Okay I feel so bad at the moment!! I haven't read some of your parts till now , I'm actually wayy too busy , things are almost upside down for me right now lol so as it is I've put most of my FFreads at rest for a while but I'm so eager to read , and accidently reading he comments made me suffer more :O
I've booked a free night in the coming days where I'm surely gonna read all the pars without any distrurbance , so don't be upset if you don't receive comments from me for a while. : )

Till then cheers
Asma

Originally posted by: anitamalik

Aww...so sweet Mic!😳 You do such a brilliant job of writing your FF that we readers HAVE to comment and tell you how much we appreciated the part! And, Just to inform you---YOUR FF is one of the BESTS, so don't say it doesn't hit the popularity ranks cause the fact is that is DOES!

Love, Anita

Originally posted by: missy22

I hope all of you'll read this.. It's a matter of EXTREME IMPORTANCE!!

I have no words to express my feelings today.. I swear.. Right from the time I posted the chapter till now.. I never expected these reviews!! I'm such big fans of you guys.. I swear.. All Of YOU!! It puts me on cloud 9 to read what you'll write.. You analyze my FF so well, that there is no room for me to justify anything except to say THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart to everyone who has taken the trouble to be elaborate about what they feel on the current part/chapter.. I wont mention names because you know who you are.. 😃 and hugs going out to all the regular's out there, without whom this FF would be a body without a SOUL!! You guys are the SOUL of this FF!! 🤗

I haven't read many FF's here.. and i know mine does not hit the popularity ranks like the best among here, But even though it's read and reviewed by 30 odd people.. I'm thrilled that each and everyone of you are on this journey with me.. I could not ask for more..

God Bless You All!!

Mic

Originally posted by: cool_pisces

Hey, thanks for the PM, this part was awesome, u rock totally 👏. thank you.. umm i don't know your name yet, so i'm hoping you don't mind me calling you pisces.. lol.. so thank you pisces.. All the scenes were fantastic, the conversation which armaan has in his head is hilarious, riddhima's plan to get him out, riddhima's happy place the lala land, the dreamy kiss ( i seriously thought it was real ), gosh i cud just go on and on. OH you like Riddhima's la la la land too.. lol.. i thought i was the only one..

Ok i know u asked for just one line, but i liked ur whole script, very hard to choose my fav so i am writing my 3 best ones. thank you so much for indulging me.. i'm glad you chose not just one.. 😃

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I have liked armaan's convo with GOD frm the beginning but this was the best of the lot coz it shows his desperation and also his marvellous sense of humour. 😆 you are right you know.. it does show his marvellous sense of humour.. he can so easily be pictured saying this with his head towards the sky.. lol..

"The easiest way to do this is with closed eyes Ridzie, because if you see his back then he''ll be stuck in there because you wont be able to get him out, because you'll be doing pooja for it"

This line i loooove coz it shows how badly riddhima is attracted to him but cant do anything abt it. 😆 you're the first one to point out this one.. I'm so glad you did.. and your reasoning behind it was awesome.. and rightly said, she's badly attracted to him, but can't do anything about it.. lol..

An imaginary kiss and i'm all frozen, i can imagine what a real one would do to me.. probably put me in a coma..

This line coz it shows how besotted armaan is with riddhima just like in the show, i mean he can just sit staring at her for hours doing nothing. yeah you're right. it's so easy to imagine him behaving like this especially when we've seen it all already.. 😳 Thanks and continue soon. No Thank You actually.. you took the effort to type out your favorite lines and comment as well.. i'm so happy you enjoyed reading it..

Mic
PS: the next time, you have my permission to just go on and on.. lol.. 😉