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Posted: 17 years ago
hey dum girl !!! how r u?? neways madame wen u updatin yaar!!!!!!!! waitin for it... update sooooonnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dnt make me cum there n kick u!!! lol !!! update fast!!!
bye n tc!
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Posted: 17 years ago
n yea srush i cant send or receive msgs so dnt send nethin .. i wont even know whether i ve received smethin .. so dnt msg n den later crib abt spendin cash on std msgs!! lol !!! n yea though i just said it ill remind u again !! update soon! lol!!! bye!
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Posted: 17 years ago
pls cont soon.........................👏🏻.......ya,def da..i do rmbr de promo mann!!i cnt resist nymore pls..n pls more romance huh as u r de queen of romance,u cn make de mst rom. prts....n de promo is cliffhangin...n pls dnt separate AR PLS.................................PLS😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
plz plz update as soon as u can

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey sorry guy... been a wee bit busy.. but i promise to update tomorrow... scouts honour!!!!!
see ya then...
love vini
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: chaiti!

n yea srush i cant send or receive msgs so dnt send nethin .. i wont even know whether i ve received smethin .. so dnt msg n den later crib abt spendin cash on std msgs!! lol !!! n yea though i just said it ill remind u again !! update soon! lol!!! bye!

haha...dumbass!! cell konked up again?????? lol... i prefer calling.... ATLEAST u talk back then INSTANTLY... u end up replyin 6 days later.. and im like wats the reply for!!!??! anyway tc.. and ill update soon...
love vini
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Posted: 17 years ago
Part 38 (this part sorta lacks romance.... it sorta unviels the story...)
That night
"Ok... Rids wats wrong.. u havent eaten anythin and ur not smiling..... wats up?"
Riddhima sighed as she played wid her food....Every second armaan was there tht night wid her, she felt so good... Her love for him was growiing wid each passing minute.. she could feel his touch everywhere, what she could do to ge him back into her arms again.. or more like his arms again.. the second she leans back.. she feels the pain in her back which just reminds her of armaan's touch again... even though she still wonders how she let armaan touch her like that... the last thing she feels is regret. She thought as tough armaan had completely forgotten about revealing thier secret and telling everyone... least of all chirag. But then the second he reminded her... her entire system underwent havouc...
"cmon rids.. tell me...u dont like armaan???"
the second she registered the line.. she stood straight again.."nahi... muskaan aisa koi baat nahi hai.."
"phir??? cmon you can tell me anythin"
"Armaan wants everyone to know bout 'us' "
"thts it???? cmon rids.. it was bound to happen....but dont you think its a bit early??"
"wahi to!!! "
"par there has to be some reason na?"
"Chirag!" rids said looking down again.
"he got to know???!!!!!!?????????!!!!!!"
"yea .... chirag told him..."
"greta.. ab to .. you just have to tell him rids! "
"I no.... par kaise???"
"i no... call him up..." muskaan said getting up..." yea thts it... call him up!!! its easier better faster.. and u wont see his reactions.."
"omg! muskaan.... ur brilliant!!!! " rids said looking for his number on ehr cellphone..
"par muskaan stay here... dont go..."
"main kaha jaoongi???? ahvent finished eating.." msukaan said as she filed her plate again.
C-heloo?
R- hey this is riddhima...
C- oh hey rids... how are you?
R- im fine.... um actually u no wat i wanted to speak to you...
C- alright... but imguessig it has somethin to do wid me liking you??
R-uh.. umm yea.. sorta...
C- look.. chill rids... its not like i really expected anythin... it was just worth a sshot... i dont wanna ris our friendship..
R"no no ofcourse not.. i just wanted to say.. tht ur a really awsome guy.. very sweet.. n im shure tht there are loads of girls after you.. its just tht im not really ready..
c_ alright.. thankz anyways... so still frendz ryte?
R- yea totally. *gulp*
Rids motioned muskaan to call her
"RIDHIMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA"
R- oh hey wat do you no? muskaan is calling me.. ok i gotta go.. byee....
C- shure.. bye.. goodnight..
"omg.. muskaan ur a life saver.. thankz..."
"so u didnt tell him bout armaan??"
"wat???? oh comeon... this was hard enough.."
Rids and muskaan sighed together.."was he tht hurt?"
"unfortunately.. yeah...."
"but u have to tell him bout armaan.., u no tht right?"
"yea.. will do tht tomrrow or soemthin..
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Next day at college..
"muskaan... armaan came to skool right??"
"yeah i saw him...why u still ahvent seen him?"
"nope... and i even tried to call him..."
"lets ask soemone... umm excuse me " muskan asked a passerby "have you seen armaan malik?"
"umm yea.. saw him talkin to karishma and ritu..." she pointed out tothe girls
"ok thankz..." muskaan and rids walked by towards the tw girls, who stood whispering behind the lockers...
"but he likes riddhma gupta... he told me.." ritu said helplessly
"whole college knows bout it.. but cmon... wat if she deosnt like him.??? just talk to him..." kaishma reassured
" but wat if...?"
"ummmm hey ritu.. hey karishma... we were just wonderin.. have u seen armaan>????" muskaan blurted
"umm.. yeah he said he would go the cafeteria in like 5 minutes..." karishma said...
"ummm thankz..." rids aded... as he motioed to leav..
"umm wi ridscan i pk to you...?" cam a hsitant question rom ritu.
"um a sure.." uskan adkarishma moved asie o getthm some rivacy... ofcusee ee one of them kn tht they wouldcoe to kow withn a fe mnutes..
"ok... reallydonno if u heardme or ot... but i just wanna come righ out and ask... do u like chiag???"
"honestly.. i dont.. no tht hs a great guy n all.. but no dont like hm lik tht... i sorry."
"dont be.. actually.. im a bit relived... coz... well i hope wont tell anyone.. but ilove crag.."
"really???? oh my god thts awsome.... deos he know??"
"no..." ritu said "he has no idea.. and i anna tell him today but i dono how..."
"how bout if i talk to him??"
"like wat u dd for muskaan n rahul??? omg could you??"
"no problem.. cupid ss at ur servce.......!!!! hey look ther is chirag.... ill go now.." rids said just as excited as ritu
"no wait... ok... go... no...... " ritu said blushing like a skool girl.
'chill out...wish me luck!!!" ids said as she walked towards chirag and began takn to him.
Muskaan, Ritu and Karishma watched rids talk to chirag. it felt like days pass by... but suddenly by the end of it... riddhima called muskaan and karishma... and they headed out... widout even a glanc back at Ritu... ritu looked at chirag who stared back all the more... i guess a spark shot out somewhere along the lines...as thier friendship turned into more than wat it had been
on the other hand... when rids entered the cafeteria the scene had completely changed... she spotted armaan ordering somthing at the counter and went towards him...
"hey armaan ive been lookin for you everywhere.."
but armaan continued to study the menu board... rids tapped his shoulders..."heloooo? armaan>?"
"loook... u no wat.. im not in the mood right now.... so give me a break..."
"wat??? wat are you sayin... armaan i talked to him.....i talked to chirag.."
"oh really?"
"yea.. i ddi ask him..."
"no point....." came a blank reply.
" Armaan... listen to me..."

Armaan continues to walk ahead.. trying to find his friends in the cafeteria..Rids walks over to armaan and stands infront of him.. blocking his path

"look... i talked to him!!!"

"shure!!!" armaan said sarcastically....

"then why the hell is he telling all the guys tht u are gonna 'Think about it??'.. wats that supposed to mean???" Armaan hissed making shure nobody over heard..

"what???? i didnt say tht!!!!!"

"then wat did u say??????" but armaan noticed riddhima's gaze switching to some one behind her... getting even more pissed at the fact tht she was hardly even listenin to him... he turned around....

"WHAT THE.....???!!? oh my god.. wats he doing?????" armaan said as he saw rahul
Edited by muzic_chick247 - 17 years ago
***Krinz_dmg*** thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
HEYYYYYYYYY
yayyyyyy finally u updtaed
lol
gr8888 part
but no AR scenes
wow ritu n chirag dats gud now he'l be out of the picture
n wats wid rahul!!!
really wana no
cnt soon
n plz pm me nxt tym....if u can..thx
tc
krinz
xxxxx
Edited by ***Krinz_dmg*** - 17 years ago
123abc123 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
fianlly u updted lool
hopefuly al da confusion is ovr
wel kinda great updte
wot up wiv da ending
hummmm i wundr
greta updte coninue soon
luv niz x
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Posted: 17 years ago
Dat was a luvely part!
Bt y was Armaan mad at her??
Luved wat Ridzie did 4 Ritu and Chirag!
Do continue soon! And do PM me wen u do!
-Marisha

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