Vishvaas2-The End-Page 46 Part 16

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi everyone im back with vishvaas 2 as promised. heres the link to Vishvaas 1 if anyone wants to read from the beginning: Vishvaas 1 First of all thanks for all the support and appreciation for vishvaas and hopefully Vishvaas 2. I wont update Vishvaas 2 daily...it'll be 2-3 parts every week.


INDEX


Viswaas 2 Part 1 - Page 1

 
Viswaas 2 Part 2 - Page 4
 
 
Viswaas 2 Part 3 - Page 8
 
 
Viswaas 2 Part 4 - Page 11
 
 
Viswaas 2 Part 5- Page 13
 
 
Viswaas 2 Part 6- Page 15
 
 
Viswaas 2 Part 7- Page 17
 
 
Viswaas 2 Part 8- Page 19
 
 
Viswaas 2 Part 9- Page 21
 
 
Viswaas 2 Part 10- Page 23
 
 
Viswaas 2 Part 11- Page 30
 
 
Viswaas 2 Part 12- Page 35
 
 
Viswaas 2 Part 13- Page 38
 
 
Viswaas 2 Part 14- Page 41
 
 
Viswaas 2 Part 15- Page 44
 
 
Viswaas 2 Part 16- Page 46
I'll post new charecter sketches here soon but its almost the same as vishvaas one...
The basic story will be a continuation of vishvaas...Dharam and Veer are now both married and both are kings of their respective kingdoms...but still their relationship seems the same.
ok so without further ado i'll start the story:

The first rays of sunlight came into the very well decorated master chamber which belonged to the new handsome king of Rajgardh He turned his head away indicating he wasnt willing to wake up. Vishva smiles at this before gracefully wake to the bed where Veer lay
Vishva: arre wah...humare maharaj kaunsa sapna dekh rahe hai...jo unke chehre pe itni badi maskaan ah gayi hai
Veer opens his eyes seeing Vishva's face first
Vishva: maharaj chaliye oothiye...aaj humme Ashtik gaow(village) ke liye nikal na hai
Veer gets up and looks at vishva
Vishva: aise kya dekh rahe hai
Veer: agar ap na hoti toh humara kya hota
in response Vishva gives Veer a glass of milk

A while later after doing the surya namaskar and arti Veer accompanied by Vishva makes way towards the courtroom on the otherhand many miles away in grand chamber in Aryanagar the king opened his eyes to find his newly wed wife already standing before him well groomed Dharam smiles as he gets
Dharam: ap hamesha humse pehle kaise jag jati hai
Sia softly replies
Sia: ap praja ke sone ke badh sote hai aur apke badh aur ap praja se pehle jagte hai aur hum apse pehle

She had managed to change completely over the past month and a half and was very mature and a dutiful wife and she enjoyed it Dharam just stared at her in admire when a dasi comes and breaks the eyelock she informs him about a messanger who has arrived with a message from Rajgardh

Dharam: arre ye toh zaroor Veer ka he hoga...tum chalo hum abhi kuch der mein ate hai

with that the dasi left while sia waited for dharam who arrived at the courtroom soon back in Rajgardh Veer addressed his advisors and courtmen
Veer: hum kuch dino ke liye Ashtik gaow ja rahe hai aur humme puri umeed hai ke humare wapas ane tak rajmehal ka ap pura dyan rakenge

Later that day Veer and Vishva leave for Ashtik gaow Meanwhile in Aryanagar Dharam recieves the messanger

Messenger: maharaj ki jai ho
Dharam: apka Aryanagar mein swagat hai..bataye Veer ne kya sandesh diya hai
Messenger hands over the message
Sia: kya lika hai veer ne Dharam smiles
Dharam: Veer aur Vishva Rajgardh ke Ashtik gaow ja kar sidha Aryanagar ah rahe hai hum sab se milne ke liye

Precap: a lady is following Niviriti and nivi feels uncomfortable

Thats it for now guys

Enjoy

Shona
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow Shona whata great start... πŸ‘ πŸ‘ it is perfectly fine if u update us twice or trice a week with story 😳 But one request pls. make the story parts a little longer πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜ƒ Keep up the good work ....Will be waiting for the Next Part...Seems like Dharam has become more romantic than Veer πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwwwwww how cute
nd welcum back!!!!
pls cont soon !!!!
x x x
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I Loved it shona.. VV and SD as newly weds are cute.. I am waiting eagerly for Part II whn DV meet πŸ˜›
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hmmm...Kya likhu Shona?? ... Intezaar ka phal mitha hota hai ye ise kehte hai!!πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ€—

Great start dear!!πŸ‘πŸ€—

Ok here it goes... Vishva becomes dutiful wife😳...n veer is still like before i mean bindaasπŸ˜†...gud going...πŸ‘...Vishva  veer ko Maharaj kahkar bulati hai..so romantic..apne husband ka naam nahi leti!!😳.. n their love after marriage is still as fresh as before😊

oh my god!! what is this?? sia has changed sooo muchπŸ‘  ekdam normal ladki ki tarah...woh raajkumari ke tever kaha gaye??πŸ˜†....wow!! she has also became lovely dutiful wife...dharam se pahele uth jaati hai...but i hate that daasi😑 har baar unke bich me hi aa jaati hai disturb karne!!πŸ˜†

n rajgarh ka message milte hi Dharam samaj gaya ki ye veer ka message hi hoga!!πŸ˜ƒ...

but why r they going Astik gaon?? chalo jo bhi ho veer dharam r going to meet soon😊...will wait for next part..

too gud Dear. Lovely, awesome and fantastic startingπŸ‘...keep it up.... will wait for ur daily updateπŸ˜‰..

U r a very gud writer ShonaπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

Edited by jigs_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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cool man that fab and yes could u make it longer not like lashy ok it's gr8
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: meghaparti

Wow Shona whata great start... πŸ‘ πŸ‘ thanks megha-gd to see u here agen...that too being the first to reply πŸ€— it is perfectly fine if u update us twice or trice a week with story 😳 yh this way i can make parts more detailed and less rushed and longer even But one request pls. make the story parts a little longer πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜ƒ yh definately all other parts will be longer hopefully but this one was just a small introductory one Keep up the good work ....Will be waiting for the Next Part... yup it'll be posted in a couple of days Seems like Dharam has become more romantic than Veer πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† lol onli in this part he seems more romantic and now he is more relaxed around Sia knowing that they are married

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: anishaumer

awwwwwww how cute
nd welcum back!!!!
pls cont soon !!!!
x x x



thx
yh will continue in a couple of days hopefully
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhuvana3

I Loved it shona.. VV and SD as newly weds are cute.. I am waiting eagerly for Part II whn DV meet πŸ˜›



im glad u liked it bhuvi
yh VV n DS seem more cute post marriage i guess
yup DV will meet up in next part hopefully
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: hiri

cool man that fab and yes could u make it longer not like lashy ok it's gr8



thx esha
yh the parts will get longer from now on 😳