Written Update June 16

daisy_luvs_ ff thumbnail
Anniversary 16 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#1

 

jiya sees her father in the mall and gets scared and tumbles onto a lady........the lady starts yelling at her telling that she cant see where she is walking, jiya says she is really sorry and didnt do it knowingly, the lady taunts her by saying that today's generation only knows a word called sorry and had her parents only her this sorry............at this point mahesh comes and asks jiya what is she doing there, the lady now understands that he is her dad and tells me has nt he taught his daughter how to walk......saying this she leaves......mahesh gets very angry with jiya and scolds and insults her like anything...........he says that she always humiliates her and cant be anything but dabbu, who knows which unlucky moment it ws when she ws born........jiya gets more scared and sad.........he then charges her why is she at mall, before jiya cd make up an excuse himani comes and tells that they have come to get a birthday gift fot bittu........then mahesh gives them gyan abt wasting money behind buying gifts and all and orders jiya to go back home right then.

jiya is back to her room, she breaks into sobs and lies on her bed, hiding her face in the pillow, she keeps on blaming herself saying she can never do anything and everything goes wrong becoz of her......appu comes with a glass of water....jiya gets up and tells him that she is sorry, for her everything went wrong once again..........appu says that she ws doing everything perfectly but then mahesh uncle came and all ws spoilt. jiaya says he s just trying to appease her, but they both know whats the real truth. she is just unable to do anything, dancing is a far fetched thing, she s not being able to stand properly in front of ppl, she will spoil everything and saying this she runs away and appu is all tensed and worried abt her.

mahesh is very worried and paces up and down..ballu has nt called up and he s thinking what is going on......sadhna comes with a plate of pakoras and asks mahesh to taste them, mahesh takes a bite and says its ok....sadhna says ok fine let me keep it on the table and then all of a sudden it registers that mahesh didnt find a single fault, she turns back and says is he sure its ok, he better have one more bite......he says irritatedly he has told her already its fine....she then sees if he has fever......mahesh says neither he has fever nor he has lost his mind, he is really worried abt ballu........sadhna asks him to call up ballu but mahesh says ISD call rates r sooo high, she says but if they dont come then the paint, the ac all will go vain, at this mahesh gets more worried and he calls up ballu but no one picks up the phone.

rohan gets a call from the producer who gives him a ultimatum of 14 days, he says that if rohan doesnt starts shooting by that time he will back out. rohan gets frustrated and at this point kiran enters the office. he exasperatedly throws something on the table and kiran says he shd nt let his anger break something and hence by increase the budget. rohan says the producer understands only money and money, what abt creativity.......if they dont get the lead pair and without proper rehearsel how can they hit the floor........kiran calms him down and says that the key factor is patience, and they will day and night for this and everything will be done, so can they go for a coffee........rohan smiles.

barkha wants to back out form the audition.samar is furious.......he says he wont let her spoil this coz if she backs out he will also be eliminated and he wont allow that. barkha says she will not be threatened by her. samar said the one who will stop her will be appu. she says what? samar says she paired up with him coz she wanted revenge from appu and jiya but if she backs out then appu will win and will think her incapable and jiya will laugh at her. and he is sure barkha doesnt want to be a loser.. at this barkha changes her mind.

back at jiya's place himani, dadi and appu are bewildered coz jiya refuses to go to RAD as she s tired  lying to mahesh and also she doesnt want to make a fool of herself ut there and what abt appu? she doesnt want him to be humilated coz of her......no, she wont ever go to RAD, no matter what they say her. appu scolds her and says her she is afraid of ppl, right? jiya nods in agreement. he leaves her and goes out of the room and switches of the light, jiya is scared and she starts yelling, looking for dadi, himani and appu and keeps repeating that she is frightened and bumps onto a light shed and it falls, appu then switches on the light, she cries and says, that see, she cant even walk in dark, appu says that its fine, he wanted to prove another point, that she cant see ppl in the dark so when they will perform on the stage if she is not being able to see the audience then will she able to [erform, she nods a yes. then appu says matter is solved and they will go and perform and jiya better be ready tomorrow morning, they will go early so that they can have some rehearsel. jiya agrees.

next day morning appu knocks at jiya's door asking her is she ready. jiya oens the door and appu keeps gazing at her. jiya is confused by his stare....he proceeds and jiya keeps stepping back. then she suddenly slips and appu hold her and they keep staring at each other......dadi comes and sees them in that posture and smiles. she pretends to cough, and they get conscious and stands up properly, dadi says that before going for a good thing they shd have sweets and then they leave for RAD.

At RAD, the media ppl are all over, taking interviews and all, the participants are there, rohan anounces that the audtion is open for all deserving ppl, if a non RAD person can perform he/she will be selected and he will talk after the audition, saying this he leave. appu and jiya head for rehearsel when jiya stumbles and coffee falls on her dress. she goes to the changing room leaving appu behind. in the changing room, barkha comes and she starts demoralising jiya. she says what she is doing here? she is going to dance in front of so many ppl, she cant even walk and she dos nt have that much guts, she will probably end up crying, though appu must have worked hard on her but she can face the crowd or the media after the audition if they get selected. how will she be able to so the shoots? for her so many ppl's dream will go down the drains and appu's carreer will end before it even began. she better run away b4 spoiling eveyrthing. and jiya gets scared and her confidence sinks and she leaves.

 

the episode ends.

 

Edited by daisy_luvs_ ff - 15 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

2

Views

611

Users

3

Likes

5

Frequent Posters

-krazyriya- thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#2
Thanx a lot for the update !!!!
andriya thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#3
thanks,can't wait to the next episode!!! 😛