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Posted: 16 years ago

kk i ll cont...
afreen is gettin ready in her room shes wearin anarkali...da top bit is blue wiv sequins all ova it n n da bootom bit is red wiv printed flowers etc.. sheve got straight shiney hair wiv sum gud makeup (not da one day used to do in khwaish on afreen)...on da oda hand we see dis guy gettin ready. he wore sum black suit d new style 1 deyve got embroidary ini...he gelled his hair up (da hair style he had in khwaish was propa freaky 🤢) he was jus abt ot aply armani code wen his mum entered...
zareen-azaan r u ready. Yes dis guy is Azan
Azan-u go im jus cumin...
Zarren-theek hai
in Afreens house...
Nasreen-dey lot here
Afreen-who
nasreen-woh hi who uve been waitin
Afreen-kia Azan agya
Nasreen-hmmmmm
Afreen-hum bhi to dekhe jiske bare mian itna suna hai woh dikta kaisa hai.
NAsreen-yh lets go
Afreen n Nasreen were walkin down da stairs n giglin. but Afreen was jus abt to trip ova wen Azan hold her n she was in his arms 😳 😳 😳 dey were starin at each ova
dhaage tod laao chaanadani se noor ke
ghoonghat hi bana lo roshani se noor ke
sharm aa gayi toh aaghosh mein lo
ho saanson se ulajhi rahein meri saansein
(bol na halke halke, bol na halke halke
honth se halke halke, bol na halke
aa nind ka sauda karein, ik khwaab de, ik khwaab le
ik khwaab toh aankhon mein hai, ik chaand ke takiye talein
kitane dino se yeh aasamaan bhi soya nahi hai, isako sula de
(bol na halke halke, bol na halke halke
honth se halke halke, bol na halke

but as soon as she came bac to her sense she puches him bac n sed
Afreen-tummmmmmmmmmmmm!!!!!!!!!!!!! tum Azan ho
Azan-nahi woh main main
Afreens dad- haan yehi azan hai
afreen luks at him wiv teary eyes n Azan lower his eyes.
nasreen n tamreen notice dat she is upset n dey tuk her aside.
TAmreen-api ap itni udaas kyun ho gayi
Afreen-woh Azan jhuta hai main jahan kaam karti hoon wahan aya tha. phir ek duu bar ur bhi mile the usne batya ke woh to khud job karta hai per iska to pura business hai. Mujhe laga azan bohot acha insan hai per...
as she turns around she finds azan der...so tambreen n n Nasreen leaves...
Azan- im sowy..mujhe pata hai maine tumhe hurt kiya per tumne to kaha ta ke tumhe ameer ache nahi lagte...dey ve got tooo much attitude...maine stain lagye kaproon se le kar dhabe main kahan khaya to sirf tumhare liye
Afreen-tumhe meri itni parwa kyun haimain tumhari hoon kuan jo tum mere liye jhoot bolo ge...
Azan pulls afreen towards himself
Azan-coz I LUV YA 😊
plz sumone else continue n make it more interestin...
maira xXx 😊

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Sana

@sanashau

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Posted: 16 years ago

I like it but maybe we can have azaan with afreen. please!

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30914

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Posted: 15 years ago

LEME JUS ADD LIL TO WOT I ROTE

azan-cuz i luv u
dey both were lost in romantic moments but distrubed by clapin dey both turned around n found all der family der. dey were propa emberased
khan (azan fatha- jab yeh dono pyar karte hain to lets gt dem maried. Afreen shys n runs off to her room...now plz cont n gt dem married soon 😆

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Posted: 15 years ago

Afreen: Azar aapne sahi kaha..........muje ameer jat se nafrat hai lekin jante ho kyun kyunki tumhe apni amiri pe ghamad hai...........muje ameer ya garib se koi matlab nahi..........aap mujse pyaar karte to youn sabke samne muje jalil na karte.............

Hadi Hasan: Afreen yeh kya tarika hai ghar aaye mehmano se baat karne ka..........

Afreen: aur yeh kya tarika hai kabhi bhi kisi ke pass jake apni Mohabbat ka iqrar karna..........

Shahnawaz: mohabbat ka izhar karna khuda ke waste sabse bada kaam hai.........

Azan: i love u Afreen...........mujse nikah karogi..........

Afreen; lekin samnewale ki mohabbat hona bhi utna hi zaroori hai........

Azan: kya matlab hai...........kyun jooth bol rahi ho.........

Afreen: main kisi se koi jooth nahi bol rahi...........meri mohabbat koi aur hai...........

Azan: kaun hai........kaun hai woh saks jo tumse mohabbat karta hai.........

Afreen: woh abhi is mulk me nahi hai........

Hadi hasan: yeh kya tamasha kar rahi ho.........woh tumse nikah ki baat kar rahe hai aur tum..........

Afreen; main inse nikah nahi kar sakti kyunki main inke bade bhai Kabir se mohabbat karti hoon........

Azan: yeh galat hai.........KabirBhai ne aisa kabhi mujse jikar nahi kiya........

Afreen: kyunki unhone jane se pehle mujse kaha tha ki jab woh waha se aayenge to khud ami aur abu se hamare nikah ki baat karenge..........main allah ki kasam khati hoon ki main sirf aur sirf Kabir se mohabbat karti hoon.............

Zareen: aap me se ab koi kuch nahi bolega.........kyunki afreen ki aankhein sach keh rahi hai...............main aaj hi Kabir se baat karke use main wapas bula leti hoon.......Afreen agar tumhari mohabbat sachi hai to main tumse vaada karti hoon ki tumhari Shaadi Kabir se karaungi............lekin pehle tum yeh batao ki tum Kabir se mili kaha..........

Afreen: Khan industries ko join kiye muje do saal ho gaye.........tab se jante hai hum ek dusre ko........pehle pehle muje woh achche nahi lagte the........phir dheere dheere muje unki achchaiyaa pasand aane lagi........waqt ke saath saath aisa laga ki hum log ek dusre ko kitne saalo se jante ho.......kab mohabbat ho gayi yeh to hum bhi nahi jante......lekin itni mohbaat hai hume ek dusre se ki kisi ke liye bhi jaan de sake.......meri mohabbat ka alaah gawah hai..........jab che mahine pehle Kabir London gaye tab se sirf uski ka intzaar kar rahi hoon............usne kaha tha ki eid ke din aaunga lekin aaj aaye nahi............

Shahnawaz: woh kya nahi aayega.........Mazhar zara Kabir ko phone lagake bata ki uski Amijaan ki tabiyat thik nahi..........

Mazhar: jee Abu.............

Mazhar bahar jake phone karke wapas aata hai.......

Mazhar: kabir bhai ne bataya ki woh kal subaah tak pahunch jayenge.........

Shahnawaz: Hadisab agar kal Afreen ne jo bataya sach hai to kal hum Shagai karne aa rahe hai..........

Hadi Hasan: hum aapse apni beti ke bartav ke liye aapke pure parivar se mafi mangte hai........

Zareen: nahi.....aisa mat kahiye..........hume bahot khushi hai ki Afreen sab ke samne sach bolne ki himmat rakhti hai.......hume aisi hi bahu chahiye thi.......filhal hum chalte hai........muje pura yakeen hai ki Afreen sach kh rahi hai.........kal isi waqt hum aapke ghar sagai karne aa rahe hai........aap sagai ki taiyari rakhiye ga...........hum log chalte hai raat kafi ho gayi hai.........

Edited by goodkashish - 15 years ago

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30914

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Posted: 15 years ago

gud dat u continued but i finshed off wiv afreen agreein to gt married to Azan all da misunderstanin were clear but u ve changed da whole track neways i hop dis track goes well wiv azan n afreen gtin togeva..finga crossed 😆 😆 😆
maira 😊

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Nidha

@nidha1983

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+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

really a nice one please continue it soon

Bahar aanee pe khilte Gulab dekhe hai, haseen Dil churate, behisab dekhe hai.
Jahan Gulab ke sang lipte Karr dekhe hai, wahin Mohabbaton me bhi kaanton ko khilte dekhe hai. Edited by kvn1983 - 15 years ago

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talkativetaurus

@talkativetaurus

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+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

@goodkashish - grt part .. i loved it .. loved the twist! 👏

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