woops, sorry guys, theres two links, heres the one where i will actually update in:
Armaan: youngest in his family, handles his father's business gulmohar, is smart, handsome, straight man, and in search of his mrs. right.
Ila: Armaan's mother, is looking for a bahu for armaan, loves her son alot
Puru: Armaan's father, used to own gulmohar, retired
Malika: Armaan's best friend, married to CJ
Angel: Armaan's elder sister, lives in USA married to Karan, and is very happy, and has two kids named Lola and Rahul
Jassi: a very simple person, shes a nurse, and is pretty rich because her papaji owns a company named Kohinoor
Papaji: Jassi's father and philosopher/guru, owns Kohinoor
Amrit: Jassi mother, who used to be a doctor until she retired
Bebe: Jassi grannie, who supports Jassi everytime, and is a biggie in time/relations, religion and god
Nandu: Jassi's best friend who's father owns a hotel, and is a hotel manager and owner
Purab: Nandu and Jassi's best friend ever whos married to Mandira bedi, and is a business tycoon
I'll add more characters soon
As Jassi goes to the hospital like every morning, suddenly Amrit shouts:
Am: Jasssi...Beta, kuch to kahlo! Jaane se pehle kahna padtha hai netho itne sare mareez ka khoon kaise dekh paogi?
J: Mamaaaa....Main kahlungi, acha thik hai, ye lo, (jassi grabs a paratha and lassi), maine kha liya, ab mujhe jana hoga!!
Papaji shouts: Jassi Beta, ye lo, paiso thora le lo, shayad tumhe zarurat padegi.
J: Acha thik hai papaji, liken mujhe ab jaana padega, netho bohat der ho jayegi
Bebe shouts right when Jassi was about to step out the door: Jassi betaa, ye lo prashad to le lo and Babaji se manath mangna!!
Jassi aims for the prashad and prays to Babaji for a fine future and that she finds her Mr. Right
Jassi heads out, and starts her car, and is going to the hospital, that she see's Nandu running right behind her car
Nandu shouts: Jassiiiiii..........
Jassi thinks what crazy fool is he? Anyways, he's my best friend,
Nandu: Jassi, mujhe lift dedho naa! Meri gaadi ka tire puncture ho gaya hai, please Jassi
jassi: theek hai nandu bandu, liken tum phir wapas kaise awoge?
Nandu: Ha, ye to maine socha bhi nahin, Mein na......(thinks for 5 minutes) taxi mangva kar lelunga
Jassi: Theek hai and Jassi drops Nandu to his Hotel and leaves to the hospital and looks at her watch, and shes late by 10 minutes
Jassi speeds her car and hits a guy and panicks.
Jassi gets out of her car and says: Oh my god, babaji, ye kya ho gaya!!
jassi picks and tries to drag the person to her car and takes him to the hospital and puts him on the stretcher and treats him as Amrit had taught her
2 hours later:
the guy regains his hosh(By the way, the guy's name is Armaan :) )
Jassi: How are you? I'm soo sorry, I had hit you from my car because I was in hurry to get to the hospital
Armaan doesnt know what to say, he is surprised that this much has happened and he doesnt utter a word, Jassi becomes confused
Jassi: kuch to boliye Mr.?
Armaan replies: Mr. Armaan Suri, yes this is my name, and I would like to thank you for saving me, but you have also hit me and Armaan faints after seeing blood
Jassi gets troubled and leaves from there, regretting, and thinking what if she turns a case onto her?
How do you guys like it? Should I continue? If anyone has ideas, I'll add more! And sorry if its boring, this is my first time, so I'm still trying!
Edited by mikagurl23 - 2005-09-19T17:47:44Z
Mika...that was wonderful! Cont soon! It was really nice.. u write awesomely!!
Yay!!! I'm not good at ideas, but thank you soo much, yay atleast one person liked!
No I am sure everyone who reads this is gonna love it! Cont whenever u can
The next day was a sunday, so she decided to go to her papaji's company Kohinoor and start to take some charge in it, but she need Papaji's permission
Jassi goes to Papaji
Jassi: Papaji, kya main kohinoor sambhal sakthi hu?
Papaji: Ofcourse beta, mujhe to retire hona hai, Phir Kohinoor kaun sambhale ga? Tum hi na?
Jassi: Ji papaji, liken mein dono jobs kaise karungi?
Papaji: It's simple, tum dono jobs kar sakthi ho. Tumhe sirf company pe raaj hi to karna hai na?
Jassi:Acha thik hai Papaji, dekhthi hu,mein kya karsakthi hu
Jassi heads to Kohinoor building
Jassi comes in and see alot of people working and decides, maybe she should dedicate her time here. So she goes into her office, and asks someone to get files that Papaji is currently working on
Maria comes(a secretary) and says: Madam, aaj aapka meeting hai Gulmohar ke saath.
Jassi thinks that it sounds familiar and says okay
Jassi: Maria, liken woh meeting kis liye hai?
Maria: Madam, hume un logo ka designs dekhne ke baad, approval karna hai ke hum un logo ka fashion show sponsor kare, kyunki in mein hamara bhi fayda hoga
Jassi: woh kaise?
Maria: Kyunke, unlogo ne is contract pe likha hai, aur maine khooli ankhen se padha hai
Jassi: acha thik hai, main padh lethi hu
Maria leaves and Jassi reads the contact carefully and agrees to it because there are no clauses to be in negative use for the company
Jassi reaches Gulmohar boardroom and waits patiently
Jassi see's Armaan coming in, and is surprised to see him. Armaan notices this as he walks in
Ila then walks in and is also surprised, but theink maybe shes heres to support Armaan
Ila: beti tum?
Jassi is also surprised and says: hello, I am Jasmeet Walia, filling in for my father Balwant Walia because of personal problems
Armaan: Acha theek hai. Toh, Kohinoor mein se ho?
Jassi: Ji, aur kohinoor ko aapka proposal manzoor hai aur hum ye show sponsor karne keliye tayar hai.
Ila: Really? This is great news. Have you signed it?
Jassi signs the contract and Armaan is also very happy for another achievement
Ila is thinking, maybe in dono ka rishta mein baath karthi hu, mujhe jodi bohat pasand hai!
Jassi shakes Armaan's soft rubber hands and Armaan is mesmerized by Jassi's smartness, beauty and how many jobs she can do. All though, he is sad because he was about to put a case on her for hitting him.
Jassi leaves Gulmohar
Armaan calls his lawyer and decides to cancell his report against Jassi.
Armaan is getting flashbacks of Jassi, and he wants to see her again.
Armaan finally goes to sleep and dreams:
Him and Jassi, holding hands, standing on a bridge, where someone hits them over
Armaan shouts: NAHINnnn......... NAHINNnnnnnnnnn....
Puru comes rushing into his room and says:kya huwa beta? koi bura sapna dekha?
how do you guys like it so far, if you want to contribute any ideas, feel free to PM me!Edited by mikagurl23 - 2005-09-18T17:27:21Z
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