FF PYAR NEW UPDT PG 13 !!! - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
like...I love it... 😆

nice update after such a long time 😳 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72
thank you thank you thank youuuu!!!!!!! it was awesome
plzz do the next part long plzzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
ok i'll try my best!! 😃
glad yu liked it so much 😆 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
recap:malika talks to ranbir about getting married to kanya and ranbir goes crazy

r: ma i'm not marrying this girl noways
m:y? whats wrong with her?shes beutiful,shes educated,shes carring....
before malika could finish ranbir butted in
r:and shes UR BEST FRIENDS DAUTHER
m:yah that's true but y does that matter?
r:it dosen't
m;so then y don't u get married to her what's wrong in her,what dose she lack?...oh i get it u don't want to marry her because she was married before that's y right?
i understand now!
r:no ma that's not it that's not y...
malika butts in
m:then y don't u wanna gett married to her?
r:ma we've already met
m:oh no (malika is getting worried now)what did u say to her? ranbir tell me what u said to her?
ranbir puts on an innocent act
r:(talking in a low voice)i insualted her late husband and told her it was best her husband died
m:RANBIR!(malika is getting really mad)how many times have i told u not to but in to other peoples lifes!that's it ur gonna go to her and apoligize early morning!no matter what u say!
r:ma she insualted me too!(ranbir complaining like a 5 year old)
m:ranbir i'm ur mom and and since ur my child i know u started it,now don't try to make reasons up for not apoligizing and go to sleep u have to say sorry tomorrow
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        ranbir woke up at 9 the next morning,got dressed and went to the kithen to have his breakfast.shanaya ayan and malika had already started

m:good morning ranbir
r:good morning ma
   seeing malika so happy kanya thought she had forgotten everything from last night,but to his surprise she hadn't

m:ranbir i hope u didn't get ur hope up and think i forgot about what i told u yesterday
r:maaaa! plllleeeeaze
m:no beta what u did was wrong,and listen shanaya and ayan r gonna go with u not me
r:what?
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k dudes i'm done for now srry if u don't like the short update theme
o yah zara i'll update agian u don't have to do it 😃 Edited by Zohra.A - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
nice 1 hahaha
pls continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
oke this time was 2 short
but i forgive you because you
updated the next part 😉
plzz make the next part long
plz plz plz pzl pzl
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
recap:malika tells ranbir shanaya and ayan are going to go to kanya with him

R:mom why?
M:because shanaya is her best friend and she would feel odd if i came with you,now hurry up and get dressed shanaya and ayan are all ready finished their breakfast.
R:ok ma as you say
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ranbir finished his breakfast and met shanaya and ayan in the car when he got into the car both of them had big grins on their faces

s:chachu where are u going? (shanaya puts on an act as if she dose not know about anything)
R:shanaya please u know where i'm going so don't try to play smart
ayan who had been quiet the until now started to talk
A:no chachu where are you going ? we are going to kanya's house but where are you going?
R:(he was fedd up and gave in fast;he knew they wouldn't give up until he did)
my childern, my sweet sweet childern i'm going to see kanya with you(now ranbir was talking like a grandpa)
s:really grandpa? but kanya's our friend not ur!(shanaya was acting like a little kid and ayan was to(
R:who are u calling grandpa.one slap then you'll remember who i am(he had had enough)
a:ahhhhh(ayan started to fake cry)
R:what y are you crying
A:be....because..y...your going to hit shanaya right

before ranbir could answer they had already reached kanya's house

DING DONG....shanya and the rest of the gang were at the door
pammi:hi
a/s:hi mom(shanaya called her mom because she started to live with her when she was 6 because her parents had died in an airplane crash and ayan called her mommy ji
because that was like his mother-in-law)
P:kanya is in the backyard if you wanted her
s:thanks mom

the gang went over to the backyard with shanaya the leader

s:diii!
kanya looked over and saw them by the gate so she got up and walked
s:look what i got u
(this is the sarri)
http://indisarees.com/images/products/indisar_sarees_0235_se nlrg.jpg

shanaya showed her the sari and before kanya could say anything about not wearing it she started
S:di go inside and wear this and get out on those coulor less plain clothes u always wear
(this is the sari she was wearing)
http://images.exoticindiaart.com/saris/plain_black_sari_with _orange_border_and_pallu_vf67.jpg
K:ur so mean shanaya
A:yah yah just change your clothes into the sari ayan picked out
K:ayan picked this out?
A:yah i thought u needed to wear more coulorfull clothes so i picked this one out as a starter
k:ok ok
--------------------------------------------------------you guys i like doing short updates.srry i u don't like short updates but i'm gonna update again today so it's gonna be 2 updates in one day....zara you don't have to update today again or if you wanna u can, ur choice
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
great part waiting 4 ur next update
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
ok recap: Kanya is supposed to cum out wearing the colourful saree Ayan picked out

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Kanya comes out wearing the saree!

S: WOW DI yur looking hot!!

A: yea yu are!!

S: ok yu have to wear this at Ayan and My 1st anniversary

K: wht no no

S: diii!!!!!! plz plz

P: kanya beta pahen lo na

K: ok

A+S+P: YAY!!

Kanya shanaya and Pammi go into the kitchen and leave ayan n ranbir alone

A: kyun chachu kanya di achi lag rahi hai na

R: hhaa.. i mean no no way vo aur achi kabhi nahi

A: ok but remember yu have to say sorry

R: face to face no i cant

A: yu have to chachu!!

R: lekin

A: chachu...

R: NO oh and btw i have meeting dont tell mom warna ...

ranbir ran to work

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( in Ayan's head)

kya karo how can i get them to fall in love ahh!! SHANAYA!! she would know!!

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A: o shanaya darling

S: yes coming

A: shanaya

S: han

A: we have to get ranbir jeeju and kanya di together yu no mallika dadi told us to if we dont...

S: yeah yur right but where is ranbir jeeju

A: office

S: WHT he has to say sorry

A: i no but she left n threatened me n said if i tell mallika dadi then... *gulp*

S: IDEA

A: what??

shanaya went and grabbed a paper and pen and wrote.


Dear Kanya,
     I know i have been incredably rude to you but what can i do i hav never experienced anything like this before .. usually when i see a gurl i look right away i ingore them avoid them insullt them exactly wht i did to you .. but when i saw yu i paniced i thought to myself man she's gorgues but wht i didnt no was you were marriad and when i found out you were marriad i got mad .. but to make it look like i still didnt like yu n yu were an ordinary gurl to me i treated yu worse than i usually treat a gurl.. then i found out yu were a widow n i felt bad and ashamed but then whenever yu came i still felt my heart melt.. i dunno how but i think i.. forget that all i wanna say is IM SORRY PLZ FORGIVE ME .. and one more thing wanna be my friend.. if yu do meet me at the Imperial restaurent on 1234 street i will be waiting!!

           sincerley

               Ranbir Nanda


A: shanaya yeh kya kar rahi ho

S: this is ranbir jeeju's apoligie and tommorow we'll get him to come to the Imperial Restaurent and meet kanya di there!!

A: o i get it n slowly slwoly

S+A: LOVE!!!

Shanaya went into kanya's room and put it in her diary..

S: ok mom hum jaa raha hai

A: yea mummy ji we're leaving

P: acha beta

K: bue ayan and shanaya

A+S: BYE DI!!

A: o and dont forget to wear the saree at the anniversary party!!

K: i wont

S: o n di check yur diary!!


Kanya was confused but before she could say anything ayan and shanaya were out the door!!

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ok guy i g2g hope yu enjoy!!

Zohra i'll update next okiee!! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
you guy's don't have to say i hope you like it
but you have to say i know you like it
it was reallly great part continue soon