1st FF 'Pyar Ka Intehaan' Prt16 Pg39 Uptd - Page 11

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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome ff man plz plz plz pm me when the next part is updated......hw i wish the real DMG was like ur FF...

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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome ff..!!!!! plz pm me ven u continue.. plzzzzzzzzzz continue soon...!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Thank you for the lovely comments.. I am so glad u loved the last part.. I hope u like the last one even better..

As requested.. here is a short recap of last part

Recap: Armaan puts payal back on Ridz.. Ridz cries n runs away. Armaan promises to himself tht frm now they wont cry. Armaan teases Ridz by sliding his legs over Ridz. Rahool comes to know tht Armaan went with Muskaan to help her. Armaan by mistake catches Sister Lovely's hand and she thinks Armaan likes her. Ridz sees this and laughs. Armaan says to her tht she looks very beautiful when she is laughing.

PART 9 – Holi celebrations

All are gathered for Holi. Full preparations have been done – Thandyia & sweets in one corner. Other corner big pots filled with colours next to it 5 big drums filled with constant supply of coloured water. Load music…

Everyone gather; start wishing each other & putting colour on others..

Nana & Dr Subh are in competition to wohh gets more attention frm Dr Keerti. Dr Subh puts on one cheek.. then Nana puts on both cheeks.. Dr Subh puts 3 times.. Nana puts 4 times… Dr Keerti keeps looking at one then other.

Atul goes to put colour on Anji. He lifts his hands.. Anji looks at him. He gets nervous & puts colour on himself.. sayin Happy Holi Anjali..Anji starts to laugh & puts lots of colour on Atul. He gets courage & puts on Anji.

Ridz arrives smiling; Atul & Muskaan see her & run to her & pull her into the celebrations. Sister Lovely looking for Armaan, he is not there…. Rahool & Muskaan are putting colour on each other like junglees…. Rahool bangs into Sister Lovely; she thinks he did it purposely and her heart shifts back to Rahool. She starts chasing him. Rahool tries to hide behind Muskaan, but Sister Lovely catches him; he makes a desperate ' mujhe bachao' face.

Atul gets a bucket filled with coloured water tries to put on Ridz. Ridz runs….. She suddenly goes & hides behind someone. Atul throws the water at the same time.. the person is drenched. Rids looks at the person… its Armaan. He is drippin frm head to waist with green colour water. Atul & Ridz start to laugh. Armaan looks at Ridz & makes an artificial angry face. Suddenly Ridz puts colour on Armaan. He tries to grab her but she escapes & runs frm there…

A (shouts): BASKET

Ridz stops, turns around & sticks her tongue out at him. He shakes his index finger at her as if to say you just wait then runs to catch her.

Ridz runs out of the court; Armaan runs out behind her.. (no one is around).

Suddenly Armaan grabs her frm the waist, lifts her up & circles round.

R (laughing): Armaan.. busss.. Armaan.. plz plz stop. Plzz..

Armaan puts her down. Ridz turns round & looks at him. Both are laughing. They look at each other; stop laughing. Armaan lifts his had to her face…

Ridz turns away; Armaan keeps looking at her. Ridz eyes are closed & she is breathing quickly. Suddenly she feels something change. She opens her eyes & turns around to see that Armaan is walkin away. She reaches for Armaan & grabs his hand. Armaan doesn't look back. Ridz slowly walks to him & looks up into his eyes. She lifts her other hand and wipes off a speck of red colour from the corner of his lips. Then gently slides her hand to his cheek. Armaan kisses her palm.

R abt to say something: Armaan.. main.. when they hear someone shouting Armaan's name. Its Atul with Muskaan & Rahool.

Atul: ARMAAN.. sees them & stops Ridz steps away. Muskaan looking at them suspiciously. Suddenly Rahool notices Muskaan's face.. he follows the direction of her gaze & notices that Ridz is still holdin Armaan's hand.

Atul: arre tum dono yahan ho.. hum kabse doondth rahe hain. Sabne decide kiya hain ki hum Dr Subhankar ke Farm House pe ja rahe hain. Aage ka program wahi hain. Chalo jaldi. is abt to turn when he sees Ridz & Armaan holdin hands then looks up them.. Ridz realises tht she is still holdin Armaan's hand releases it.

R (stammering): Atul.. woh kya hain… woh main, who Armaan.. (looks really guilty)

Armaan hides a smile. Rahool distracts Muskaan.

Atul looks at Ridz questioningly: Ridz tum thik ton ho na?

R: haan. (changes subject); late nahi ho raha..

Atul: haan haan jaldi chalo.. Anjali wait kar rahi hain. Starts to leave with Muskaan & Rahool.

Ridz follows them… she stops after a few steps; looks back at Armaan. He smiles & blows her a kiss. Ridz smiles shyly, turns round & leaves. Armaan follows. Rahool sees the whole exchange.

NEXT PART

At the Dr Subhankar's Farm House…. A kiss, a hug.. and lot more.. but is it Armaan & Ridz or someone else.

Sorry abt the short update. Will try to update soon… hope u like this part.

Edited by kesha2412 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome part
do update soon i will be waiting
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesomeeee!!!!!!! amazing part yaar!! omg cant believe atul still doesnt realize the chakkar b/w armaan and ridhima!! haha how dumb LOL

and cant wait to read what happens at the farmhouse!!
if its not armaan and ridhima.. then it better not be one of them with someone eles!! that would be TERRIBLEE!!!

lovely is sooo hilarious!! her heart keeps shifting to whoever bumps into her or holds her hand hahahhaa

cont soon 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey wow yaar it ws wonderful yaar vryyyyyyy good prt wow rahoooooool poor luvly se bhaag raha tha nd ridz atul se wow red colour nd atul still didn't notice omg so dumbo yaar bt vry excitd 2 read nxt prt at shubh.frmhouse i hope its armaan nd ridz nd if thy nt thn no 1 else wth their its terrible bt vry superb prt yaar............
cont soooooooooooon 👏
luv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
very nice,
cont soon!! 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
lovddddd it plz cont soon but plz the hug shouldnt btw am or rr plzzzzzzz 😕 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
amzin prt!!!!!!!!!!! i cnt w8 2 noe who is hugin n kissin n etc...bt i fink its muskaan n rahul! cntd sn!
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Posted: 17 years ago
yaar kesha...wat do i say????ur ff has just made me speechless...it is 2 gud......i hope nw rahooal makes muski understand that armi dsnt luv her..thank god the love dovey feelings are bak agn...ur ff is awesum..luv it..cont soon...do pm me

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