FF:Hum Tum (Chap.23 pg.63) [29/03/08]

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mistletoe

@mistletoe

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

Great Beginning!👏

JW as usual sounds cute and hot😉 (None of the FF Writers ever mess around with his looks for sure!)

Pia darling is there too (She does add spice to the proceedings, never had a better vamp than her🤢)

Waiting to see Jai and Bani scenes....

Very well written update!😊

Cheers,

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Vanita

@*Guli*

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

awesome start!!!

loving it!!!!!!! this is awesome

plz cont soon!!!!!!! 😳

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kiranc

@kiranc

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Posted: 17 years ago

#13

Hey Maro,

That was a great start. Looking forward for JB meeting. Wonder what Pia is upto.

Pls continue soon.

Kiran

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amisha

@amiee

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#14

loving the story already cant wait to read more

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preet

@preet_2010

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Posted: 17 years ago

#15

Hey Maro,me so happy to see your new ff.yippe. 😃

fabalous start,already loving it.the character of both Jai and Bani described beautifully.looking forward to more of JB scenes,really excited abt this ff. 😊

preet 😳

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

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Posted: 17 years ago

#16

Hey Maro , awesome start Sweety 👏 👏 👏
I'm loving it 😳 😳 😳
Jai and bani recognized bani 😳 😳

I'm glad that u arent discontuning BAs Ek Pal 😃

Please continue ASAP , want to see bani's reaction, when she'll find out that jai had seen her great performance 😆 😆

Humera.

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sukhjinder kaur

@siumi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#17

Lovely beginning 👏
Loved it, really very sweet JB 😳 😳

Continue soon 😃

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Nikita

@InTheZone123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#18

Awesome!!!!
Looking forward to the next part!!!

Nikita

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Niroo

@Niroo

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Posted: 17 years ago

#19

hey maro.
that was awesome..
love the intro..
wow.. jai.. already is heads over heels.. for bani
that is great.
i just hope this pia.. doesnt come inbetween them..
continue soon
plwsss

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wajihah

@angelrockz

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#20

heey you started a new FF........first part is absolutly awesome .....nicely written......hmmm does jai love bani ........interesting story line .....will love to read the next part.....continue soon

angelrockz 😛

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