~**hote hote pyar hogaya~~** RaKa Fan Fic

this fan fiction is strictly about Raunak and kasturi and their relationship... it's how their friendship turned into a sweet never ending love for one another... kyunkay app pyar uss say kartey hain joo app say pyaar karta hoon khud say ziyada app ka khayaal lagta hoon..... so lets begin....

Setting: Raunak and Kasturi's wedding night... this is an arranged wedding... sab kuch kasturi kay maa bauji nay kiya.. and kasturi is just a bit concerned about how she would adjust since she believes in love and mutual understanding with her life partner....
Wardrobe: kasturi ka lhenga laal rang ka hian.. with lots of zari and glitter..  her jewelry is also bridal and it includes incredible necklace, bindya and dozen kaanch ki churiyaan... in both hands.... raunak is in his grrom shairwaani it's a cream color with light brown embroidry on it he looks ravishing too

PART 1
Kasturi raunak kay new bedroom main hain.. phoolon say sab kuch shaja hua hain..she is confused ... woh sooch rahi hain kya raunak mujhay kuch waqt deengay kya woh mujhay smajh paiye gay.. will he be able to understand me.. mujhay kuch waqt chaiyay aur iss waqt may main raunak ko jaana chatey hoon...unn ko smajhna chati hoon... Suddendly we hear footsteps approaching... and kasturi fixes herself and tries to smile as she knows it's raunak...
**** Raunak is astonished upon seeing kasturi.. woh uss ki kubsoorti ka jaisa deewana bangaya hoon... kasturi kay cheray pay parti hui chand ki roshni uss ki saadgi ko aik nayab (unique) sa rang deraha hain.. chaandni ajj tak kabhi itni koobsorat nahi thi lakin ajj raunak iss chandni ko mehsoos karna chata tha.. Raunak steps forward...
Raunak.. Kasturi ajj mujhay kya kehna chiyay aur kya karna chaiyay yeh main nahi jaanta kyunkay shayad yeh saab kuch itni jadi hogaya... kay mujhay kuch soochnat ya smajhnay ka waqt nahi milla....
Kasturi: jii.. main kuch smajhi nahi.. app yeh
Raunak: nahi.. aisi koi baat nahi hain bas main yeh kehraha tha kay mujhay karoon kya gift doon.. lakin maa is a lifesaver.. unhay sab kuch pata hain na is liyay mujhay tumhay yeh shagun kay kangan tumhay pehnaney ko kaha hain... (Raunak smiles and shakes his head... while holding up the kangan)... kasturi apna haat agay karoo...
Kasturi.. smiles: yeh ligiyay... (she puts forward her hand and raunak softly approaches it: all this while raunak is struggling with the kangan)
Raunak: Uff.. yeh kya yeh to tumharay haat mein fit nahi hora hain. . main maa say keh kar....
(Kasturi is laughing.. she noes that kangan has a knob that should be open in order for it to fit.. kasturi haans rahi hain she is trying to hide her smile.. she is trying soo hard she covers her mouth but could'nt resist so she bust out laughing) raunak continues.... Arey tumkyun haans rahi hoon.. main koi mazzaq kar raha hoon..kasturi....kya hua??
Kasturi: kuch nahi..bas main t6oh itna he khena charahe thi kay kangan  choota nahi hain yeh.. yeh dekhay.. iss ko aisay kholtey hain....ligiyay hogaya..
Kasturi and raunak both laugh out loud at raunaks mistake... woh aik doosray kii ankoon main ghum hain aur raunak... nay kasturi ka haath pakrawa hain.. he doesn't know.. after a while kasturi pulls her hand back on which raunak says
Raunak: Kasturi yeh rishta hamerey barron nay juda hain.. aur main chata hoon hum iss risthay ko bahut khoobsoorti say nibhai.. hum is ristay kay bunyaad dosti.... ko rakhay gay.. kyunkay dosti main woh saray rang hain joo aik kamyaad rishtay main hotey hain aik doosray ka bharoosa, aik doosray ki izzat.. aur shayad aik doosray kay liyay pyaar.. lakin main pehlay tumhara dost bana chata hoon aur phir pati.. he looks back at kasturi...who was closely looking at him and seemed somewhat relived upon hearing this...
Kasturi: main apni taraf say puri kosish karoongi.. aur app ba humsafar app ka saathi baanay main sab say pehla kadam dosti ka bharoongi.. app ka sath doongi... Raunak and kasturi have another eye locking session.. and as raunak is about to get up to change he realizes that kasturi's dupatta is stuck to this ring and as he gets up it snaches away from her head causing the tika to badly move across her forehead.. ahh och!!! kasturi exclaims...
Raunak: oh iam soo sorry kasturi woh main he comes closer removes her bindya(tika) very softly he does'nt realize how close they are.. he then helps her remove her jhumka which was attached to her dupatta and untangle her duppatta from his shairwani's button... and when he sees kasturi's face she has her eyes closed as if she was scared.. so he smiles and thinks itni koobsorat hain yeh ... bahut maasoom. bahut bholi.. and say ahem.. ab tum ankain khool sakti hoon.. kasturi shyly smiles and says who umm main..
Raunak: koi baat nahi main to bas tumahari help karaha tha.. jao relax hojao fresh hojap main yhaan per soota hoon. tum bistar par okay..
After a while kasturi comes out of teh restroom in her night suit dring her hair with a towel.. raunak is fixing her bed.. he sees her and for a while she is mezmerized by her beauty he watches her go towards her dressing table trying hard to remove the neclace.. she could never find the knob it's her habit eversince she was a little girl...
Kasturi: auff yeh kya phir wahi.. har dafa ki tarah aj bhi.. pehlay to maa hamesha knob khuldaytey thi abb kya karron (she whispers to herself and raunak overhears)
Raunak: Ahem.. kuch help karo... i mean if u want
Kasturi.: ji woh main kabhi nahi khool patey yeh knob .. app plz
Raunak: touches her neck softly... she gets quiet and then closes her eyes again trying not to look in the mirror but looks anyways.. raunak softly opens her necklace and looks up but is stunned by teh way kasturi is looking at him through the mirror so they have anotehr eye locking session..
Raunak: Ummm. kasturi app ab sojao raat bahut haigai hain na.kal subh maa bauji kay paas laygana hain tumhai woh kya rasam hoti a
hain...?
Kasturi: while removin her neclace.. ji woh pakhphere.. ki
Raunak.. han wohi okay good night (he goes off to his sofa and falls asleep watching kasturi cleansing her skin in the mirror)
Kasturi on upon seeing this also turns the light off and thinks to her self that may be her maa bauji made the rught choice for him... raunak is sooo understandable.. woh meray feeling ko smajh saktey hain.. woh meray liyay shayad achay sabit hiagayyy.....
Part one END.....👏👏👏

wANT ME TO CONTINUE PLZ DO REPLYYYY


  

wonderful, do contin. sooon. 👏 😳

Love, Jessssssssss<3

haila.. this fanfic is choo cute!! i like the way raunak puts the kangan on for kasturi. heehee.. really cho cute!😳😳 please do continue yaar, i'm loving your fanfic!👏👏

yea sounds great do cont sunn really likin it 😃

👍🏼 Wonderful start...go ahead and continue.....I like this Raunak.....similar to the one in the show.....soft-spoken and all.

very well written and enjoy reading it.. 😊

please do continue cant wait for next chapter.. 😉

SETTING: it's the morning after the wedding night... subah ka waqt hain.. kasturi akes up first.. she is awaken by the birds chripping outside the balcony...

Kasturi:AHH!!(Yawning) arey time kitna hogaya... aur main ab tak..ufff.. (kasturi gets up quickly but she suddendly notices raunak sleeping on the sofa and once agin remembers what he had aid to her last night every word of his) kitna sach chupa tha inki baatoon main.. bahut he safai say unhonay sab kuch kehdiya--- she thinks to herself then goes in to the bathroom to freshen up
~~~~ few mins later~~~
Kasturi walks out and still notices raunak asleep she thinks to herself that the whole family is waiting for breakfest and he is'nt up yet soo she walks towards him

Kasturi: Umm.. kaisay uthao.. sab nechay intezaar karahey hain aur yeh sorahey hain.. kya karoon...(kasturi tries to touch raunak's hair which were on his forehead tohrey bikhray ue but then she backs off thinking she should'nt do that)
Kasturi: idea! main alram clock in kay agay rakh kar baja deti hoon.. nahi lakin shayad yeh bura man jai.. main kya karoon...(kasturi ja hi rahi thi kay us ki yellow zar wali sari ka pallo somehoe raunak kay karwat layney say raunak ki ghari main pahass gaya hain and she thinks raunak is holding it) woh.. yeh kya kar rahey hain appp.. main... arey.. app kuch (she turns arounf and sees what really happend) oh.. to yeh sab kuch ghari kakasoor hain.. abb toh uthana hi parey gaa..
KASTURI: suniye.. (She topuches raunaks hand.. kind of shaes it....)
Raunak: ummm.. kya maa mujhay sunay deyy.. bahut thak gaya hoon... ahhh
Kasturi: (laughing to herself) Arey yeh toh mujhay maa ji shamaj rahey hain.. shayad lagta hain hameesha say deer say sunaay kay addi(used to) hain.. issi liyay..
kasturi softly touche srunaks hand and says:
Suniye main kasturi.. main app ko utha rahi hoon hamara sab intezaar kar rahey hain na uthiyay.. (she was pretty close to raunak's face when she said ll this..)
RAUNAK: slowly opens her eyes and finds kasturi right in front of her eyes.. close to him 😳
woh aik doosray ki ankhoon main dekh tay hain.. and raunak suddendly realizes.. WOH umm... main jaldi nhai uta iam so sorry hamesha maa uthati hain an aur yeh alarm nahi bajta.. toh
KASTURI: koi baat nahi.. main toh bas yeh app ki ghari main mera sari ka pallo yeh dekhiye na...( she sturggles for it)
RAUNAK: aik second main kerdeta hoon... (he softly and gently pulls it out and gives it to her)yeh loon hogaya...
KASTURI: thanks... main app ka intezaar kartey hoon jaldi say tayaar hogai sab humara wait kar rahey hain neechay breakfest pay...
RAUNAk: main abhi fresh hokay att hoon 2 mins okay...
(meanwhile kasturi fixes evrything in the room the bed.. folds the chaddar and then she finds a photagraph of a mother and a child playing in the garden, then right next to it a family picture.. mother son and father, then there is a piicture of a kid dressed in a school uniform she tries to recognize who this is she guess may be it's raunak's childhood)
RAUNAK; walks out of the bathroom adn notices kasturi smiling at the photagraphs cleaning it and softly smiling... Ahem.. kuch dekh rahi hoon
KASTURI: nahi main bas.. woh yeh kuan hain?
RAUNAK: yeh maa aur meri tasveer hain.. hameesha meray kamrey mein rehtey hain.. main apni maa ka aik he beta hoon na isss liyay laadla bhi hoon..mera bachpan bahut acha tha.. bahut kabhi fursat say batao gaa.. theek hain abb chalein maa bauji intezaar kar rahe hain.
KATURI: jee chalien (she puts the phota back while raunaks opends the door for her and waits for her)😳
**********~~~~~ RAUNAK AND KASTURI walk down the beautiful staircase and enter the dinning room where maa, bauji, daima, bua, and raunak's cousins are waiting...
MAA: arey tumk loog itni jaldi utth gaye araam say ithjaate.. kasturi beta raat ko neend toh achay say agai thii??
KASTURI: Jee maaji.. sab kuc
TANU(ONE OF THE COUSINS): arey mausi neend toh bhabhi ko aii he nahi hogii sari raat raunak sir kiii suc romantic baatien.. sunti rahi hoggii naa.. kyun raunak bhiya 😆
RAUNAK: Abhi bata tha hoon Tanu kii bachi kuan kya sunn raha tha... bahut zaada nahi bool rahi hoo ajjj
TANU: sORRY BHIYA MAIN TO BAS...
kasturi and raunak look at each other and smile while raunak pulls out a chair for kasturi
BAUJI: HAAN to kasturi beta app ko ghar main sab kaisey lgay...
KASTURI: jee sab bahut achay hain.. mujhay yeh ghar apne ghar say kuch alag nahi lagta
DADIMA: haan putr.. yeh tum hara he toh gar hain apna hee shamjoo
KASTURI: Jee dadi maa agar main isse apna ghar shamj toh kya ajj man app sab kay liye apni khusi say nastha bana sakti hoon?
MAA: arey lakin tum toh nayi nawli dulhaan hoon tum kyun..
KASTURI: maaji app ney toh mujhay beti kaha tha phir yeh dulhaan ki baat kyun?
MAA: haan yeh toh hain toh chalo main tumhrai maadad karo doon...
~~~*** KASTURI HAPPILY GETS UP AND MOVESTOWARDS THE KITCHEN WHILE RAUNAK CAN'T HELP BUT TO STARE AT HER.. HOW WELL SHR MANAGES TO WIN OVER EVRY BODY'S HEARTS WOW~~~***
VICKY( 2nd cuz): Bahiyya bhabi gaii abb toh hamey bhi dekh lay.. 😆
RAUNAK: haan .. main woh kya
VICKY: arey arey bhiya it's okyy... no bigge app ki patni hain app ka haq banta hain bahi
~~~***RAUNAK SHYLY SMILE AND LOOKS DOWN MEANWHILE KASTURI AND MAA COMES OUT WITH GARAM GARAM PHARATEY AND CHOOLAY TYPICAL DESI NASHTA~~~***
KASTURI: bauji app kay liyay meray pass aik surprise hain.. app ko pehlat kaara peen aparey gaa phir yeh aloo kay phartey kha saktey hain.. manzoor hain appko?
BAUJI: kya ? yeh kisne bataya bahu ko kay muhay sugar hain aur kaara peena zaroori hain yeh zaroor raunak ki maa ka kiya dhaara hain...kyunjii
MAA: aji abb main nahi jaanti bahu hain and woh bhi nayee nawali...toh sbb jo kaha hain woh maana parey gaa...
~~***EVERYBODY LAUGHS.. AND WATCHES BAUJI DRINK THE KAARA.. THEN EVRYBODY EATS AND PRAISES KASTURI ON HER COOKING SOO WONDEFRULLY FOR EVRYBODY SINCE FOOD WAS A TASTE OF HEAVEN~~***
MAA: arey raunak office jaaney sy pehlay DULHAAN ko pakhphere kay liyay uss kay ghar laygana.. theek hain
RAUNAK: oh haan ,ma.. main kasturi ko choor aoo ga
KASTURI: JEE ACHA main change kar kay aati hoon
***~~~ RAUNAK AND KASTURI ARE DRIVING TOWARDS KASTURI'S HOUSE WHILE RAUNAK IS THINKING HOW WILL HE SPED A WHOLE DAY WITH OUT HER IN FRONT OF HIS EYES HOW WILL HE... AJJ TOH OFFICE KI BHI JALDI CHUTI HAIN KYUNKAY KAAM ZADA NAHI HAIN..~~**
KASTURI: jee woh main kehrahi thi kay app kab tak aiigay wapas
RAUNAK: JAB JAAA SAKKO GA TUB AOO GA NA WAPISS (RAUNAK WHISPERS TO HIMSELF)
KASTURI: Jee app nay kuch kaha?
RAUNAK: NAHI KUCH NAHI ... YEH LLO GHAR BHI AGAYA..CHALEIN (HE SMILES)
KASTURI: JEE CHALEIN
~~** KASTURI AND RAUNAK BOTH WALK TOWARDS THE DOOR AND RAUNAKS LOOKS SO LOST BECUZ HE DOES'NT KNOW WHY BUT HE KEEPS ON THINKING WHY DOES KASTURI HAS TO GO ... WHY IAM GONNA MISS HER SOO MUSH~~***
KASTURI'S BABA: Arey kasturi raunak tum loog.. aoo aoo andar aoo.. beta
RAUNAK: NAMASTEY BABA
BABA: NAMASTEY... BETA AJAO
KASTURI'S MA:RAUNAK KASTURI TUMHARA HEE INTEZAAR THA AJAO
~~** THEY BOTH STEP INSIDE AND MEET AND GREET KASTURI'S FAMILY WHICH INCLUDES KASTURI'S SISTERS, BHABHI, BHIYA, BABAY, MA, BABA, AND LITTLE NEPHEW~~**
RAUNAK: acha mujhay office kay liyay deer horahi hain main nikalta hoon.. phir aooga ma, baba, aur meri pyaari salliyoon (he says wiyh a smile)
BABA: ACHA BETA theek hain kasturi beta tum raunk ko arwazey tak choor aoo?
KASTURI: JII baba
~~BOTH RAUNAK AND KASTURI AND WALKING TOWARDS THE DOOR RAUNAK FEELS HE SHOULD ASK KASTURI WHEN SHOULD HE PICK HER UP BUT THEN THINKS IT WOULD BE KIND OF RUDE SIINCE SHE JUST GOT HERE SOO HE STOPS HIMSELF BUT STILL FEELS AS IF HE WON'T BE ABLE TO MAKE IT THROUG ONE HWOLE DAY WITHOUT HER~~~***
RAUNAK: loo merei ghari aaigaii.. toh main chalta hoonn
KASTURI: JEE.. (SHE STARTS TO TURN AROUND TO LEAVE AND RAUNAK WATHES THIS AS HIS HARTBEAT STOPS ON EVRY STEP SHE TAKES AWAY FROM HIM HE WANTS HER TO TURN AROUND BUT AFTER A WHILE HE TOO BEGINS TO OPEN THE CAR'S DOOR while kasturi looking a bit coinfused turns around and calls out raunaks name and happy raunaks just could'nt resist and looks back at her with a lovliest smile on his face)
RAUNAK: Han kya hua? kuch kaam? kya baat hain
KASTUI: nahi woh main bas yeh kahrahi thi kay app jaldi ajana.. main app ka intezaar karrongii.
Raunak: theke hain main jaldi ajao ga.. tum apna khayaal rakhna..
~~*** RAUNAKS SEEMED SOOO HAPPY AND SOO DELIGHTED BECUZ NOW THAT HE KNEW THAT EVEN LASTURI WANTED HIM TO COME BACK SOON~~***
raunak in his car
RAUNAK: MAIN JALDI OOGA BAHUT JALDI KYUNKAY MAIN TUMHAREY BAGIR NAHI JEE SAKTA AIK PAL BHI NAHI KASTURI... 😳 😳 he says this to himself as he waves byes to kasturi who was now distant from where he was....

What a cute fanfic😳 Please continue soon coz I'm in love wid it already😳 The Raka chemistry is sizzling already😳

haila.. the 2nd chapter is even cuter than the 1st one.😳😳 please continue soon yaar! the RaKa chemistry is seeping through all these words, i can so imagine them acting out all these scenes. including the pallu scene. haila.. cho cute!😛

Very sweet, story, cant wait for next part do continue 👏 👏

Luv,

Shagun/JD