~*Mahi*Shabd~fan-fic *The Test*

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Everyone,
  I started a fan-fic in the fan-fic section about our Shabd and Mahi,
~If guys have time chk it out!πŸ˜›

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=618930

Heres a taster,

It was late in the morning, the sun shone over a beautiful house. In the house a women ran around fanatically from the kitchen to the dining room back to kitchen and back to the dining room carrying several dishes at a time. She walked back into the kitchen and started emptying the saucepans; she knew he would be here any second now; shouting for his breakfast. She smiled at her self *click* and then dried her hands she lent over the sink to open the window wider. She looked out into the beautiful view and smiled again. *click* .

She walked out into the dining room where the smell of freshly cooked breakfast hit her; she gave a little smile and tidied her self up. She tucked the annoying curl by her cheek behind her ear *click* then she looked up to the clock, she smiled and started counting..

M: 1….2 (she glanced as the open door)..3…4…….

S: MAHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!! MAHIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!

A man came running in, he had a towel round his neck and in one hand a drinking bottle, and he was wearing a vest top with matching shorts. His hair was wet and he shouted even louder;

S: MAHIIIIIIII! KAHA HO! I'M HUNGRY!

 

Mahi rolled her eyes and walked up to him,

M: Arre chilao math isse room main hoon! Decko khaana be ready hai, har rooz ki tarah!
S: Whatever Mahi, you know that it's become a habit to run in and shout your name in the morning.. and wake all the neighbours up! 


😳😳~ Hope you all like,

Luv ya..

Ouma

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Posted: 16 years ago
seems awesome... will def read it in da ff section!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ wow seems great.. will def. read it... πŸ˜ƒ

cheers

Naina
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Posted: 16 years ago
πŸ˜› ~ Thnkx both of you..

Luv ya..

Ouma
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Posted: 16 years ago
πŸ˜› thnkx

Luv ya..

Ouma
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Posted: 16 years ago
aww... ouma it sounds cool πŸ˜› Please continue with it 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow..awsome fanfic..plz..do continue.. πŸ‘
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome FF.. cant waitt for moreπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 16 years ago
I put prt 2 up yesterday.. If u liked pls go read and comment there... 😊

Luv ya..

Ouma