Peele Pathon ka mausam

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Posted: 15 years ago

Peele pathon ka mausam aa gaya hai
Pedon pe chote chote hare pathe
Naye mausam, nayi fasal, nayi umar
Ki aaghaz le aayi hai..

 
Peele pathon ko girna hi hai ek din
Girkar mitti mein milna hi hai ek din..
Barson ka basera chodna bhi na chahe
Daliyon par baithna bhi no hoye...

 
Ek raah par hum bhi chale the..
Manzil bhi aa gayi hai shayad
Roke toh bhi na ruke yeh kadam..
Hume bhi aage jaana hai shayad…

 
Ek nasheman humne bhi banayi
Tinkon ka hi sahara thaa tabhi.
Chodna na chaha, par dastoor tha yahi..
Hume bhi mitti mein milna thaa shayad

 
Peele pathon ka mausam aa gaya hai shayad
Hume bhi jaana hai shayad ….
Hume na bhool jana abhi…
Daali se door, mitti mein baithe hain hum shayad.

 

Posted: 15 years ago

Wah Wah........... Kitni Pyaari Shaayri hai di

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Aapki Shaayri padkhar ayee humare chahere par ek halki se muskaan
Alfaaz kam hai tareef ke liye isliye hoon main pareshaan
Aapki Shayri ne kiya hume bhi protsahit
Ki main bhi kalam uthakar likh doon ek Geet

Luv,

ShagunEmbarrassed

Edited by sweet_shagun - 15 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago
Wah wah...maza aa gay!! Very nice poem Priyaji! Clap This is the first hindi poetry of your's that I read, and I have to say I'm really very impressed!!! Clap Clap Clap

Cheers,

Anjali
Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks Anjali, actually there are a few hindi ones which I have posted here. One is based on tv shows, thats a sticky and others are there as well scattered amongst the other poetry.

Will wait to read your feedback on them as well. And thanks once again for the appreciation.
Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by s.priya


Thanks Anjali, actually there are a few hindi ones which I have posted here. One is based on tv shows, thats a sticky and others are there as well scattered amongst the other poetry.

Will wait to read your feedback on them as well. And thanks once again for the appreciation.

Sure Priyaji....will go and hunt down the other ones right away!Wink

Cheers,

Anjali

Posted: 15 years ago
wah wah...I love reading ur shers Priya di...keep up the good work...keep posting Clap
Posted: 15 years ago
awesome yaarrrrrrrrr Clap
Posted: 15 years ago
how sweet poetry .........i like it ........ Smile
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