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Posted: 17 years ago
meri archana tum hi,tum hi to ho pooja
sach kehte hoon main meri priya,tere siva na sapna koi dooja
karishma chhaya tera meri tripti ki pyaas mein
teri ada hi akansha meri sooni zindagi ke ehsaas mein
kho gaya main,bas yaad rahi teri disha
din mein ki araadhna,akriti vidya mein gayi nisha

theres sumthing more 2 this,if u read it just lik tht,its uselessπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 17 years ago
its really well written poem πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
πŸ˜† I get it Raghav!! According to me, you have 12 women in your life, am I right? πŸ˜‰

Really nice and thoughtful sher! Well done!! πŸ‘

Cheers,

Anjali
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: amisra

πŸ˜† I get it Raghav!! According to me, you have 12 women in your life, am I right? πŸ˜‰

Really nice and thoughtful sher! Well done!! πŸ‘

Cheers,

Anjali



ya remembering all his 12 loves in 1 sher, good, i liked it. t4s.

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Posted: 15 years ago

the poem is full with the names of ur girlfriends i think