Marriage Or Life Imprisonment?! • NeiVika FF - Page 4

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Posted: 2 months ago
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Part 11


"Good evening, Ms.Multani",replies Neil. Yukti aka Yuvika looks at him with adoring gaze which gets noticed by Isha. Yuvika looks at the waiter whom listening Gargi's words. The same waiter starts coming towards them & she knew it's time. "Well, mere diye hue suit pe bohot handsome lag rahe ho",says Yuvika in a flirting way. Isha widens her eyes at Neil & waiter listens it with interest. Neil raises his eyebrows at her & Yuvika says "Just joking......tum toh humesha handsome laghte ho.....I mean as far as I saw you here". Waiter swiftly gets away from there & informs Gargi about the conversation. "Ms.Multani, aap bhi khubsurat lag rahi hai......I mean you wore saari for the first time I guess", says Neil. "Koi aur agar mujhe yeh compliment karta toh main believe nahi karti......lekin jab tum compliment dete ho I take it seriously",says Yuvika & Neil looks at her shocked as it's clear that this woman is flirting with him. Isha excuses herself from there while muttering " Kitna cringe drama hai yeh".




Soft music starts playing. Neil was about excuse himself but Yuvika stops him saying " Iss party pe na tumhara koi partner hai na mera so can I have a dance with you, gentleman?". Neil is in dilemma. He's so tempted to say no but again he have to be professional. Neil agrees to dance with her & they get on dance floor. Yuvika signals Rose to stand beside party's lights control area. Gargi gives Dj a look & says "Dj, tumne Yukti ko notice kiya?!.....she's so much in love". "Mom, I still can't believe Neil yeh plan execute kar raha hai",says Dj while Gargi chuckles & says " Maine suna hai yeh Multanis bohot dominant hote hai aur Yukti bhi aisi hi hogi. Yukti dominant hai aur usse aisa koi chahiye jo submissive ho......isiliye usse Neil pasand aa gaya". "Mom, Do you think yeh baat shaadi taak khichega?",asks Dj. "Mujhe wahi hote hue nazar aa raha hai"says Gargi smirking.




" Tu Har Lamha Plays "


" Wakif toh hue tere dil ke baaton se...

Chupaya jise tune pure kainaat se"


Yuvika puts her hand on Neil's shoulder & Neil puts his hand on her waist. Yuvika looking at her lovingly while Neil gets attracted towards her.


"Wakif toh hue tere uss khayal se....

Chupaya jise tune apne aap se"

"Kahi na kahi tere ankhein...tere baatein padh rahe hai hum

Kahi na kahi tere dil main dhadhkano main dhal rahe hain hum"


Yuvika & Neil sways their moves with music. Neil twirls her & pulls her towards him making Yuvika put both of her hand on his shoulder. They're so close that they can hear each other's heartbeat. Neil feels goosebumps inside him.


" Tu har lamha....tha mujhse juda

chahe dur tha main ya paas raha"


Yuvika slowly puts both of her hand on Neil's neck in a seducing way. Rose understands that it's the time hence she dims the lights of dance floor giving couples privacy. Gargi, Dj & Srishti groans seeing lights getting dimmed as they're enjoying the drama infront of them. Yuvika slowly pulls Neil towards her & kisses his cheek which breaks Neil's trance. Neil feels he betrayed his love....he let another woman near him which disgusted him. Suddenly he gets away with Yukti aka Yuvika. Neil lefts the dance floor while Yuvika looks him with a knowing gaze.






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Posted: 2 months ago
#32

I am loving this story. Khaas kar how you handled the Isha track so well.

Abse yahi story hai mere liye Vanshaj ki, not going to even think of watching that doomed show

Asmitaaa, Sami ne phir dance kara diya dono ko dekh smiley36

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Posted: 2 months ago
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Aye Hayee....

Kitna Sundar... there is a reason why I love you ...smiley31...

Makers na sune...main khush Hun...tere ish NeiVika dance ke gift se firse...

Thank you...

Bas...may words keep flowing from your beautiful imagination...& You make NeiVika dance in your story again & again..

On the roof,in the rain..,under moonlight..in the garden... Gazebo... everywheresmiley42smiley37

Spandan dekh...dekh..

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Posted: 2 months ago
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Areh wah Sami di apne toh asmita di ki icha puri kar di wah , baas aap har ek part main ek dance de diya kijiye dekhna asmita di alag alag account banake like , review karengi smiley37

Khair jokes aside you are taking neivika in another level jise makers ne patal level par ghusa Diya Hain ,so thank youuuuuu for that lots of love smiley27smiley31

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Posted: 2 months ago
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Please update next part of your story 

Posted: 2 months ago
#36

Suhaagraat de doon kya har part pesmiley15smiley37

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Originally posted by: samIHA04

Suhaagraat de doon kya har part pesmiley15smiley37

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Christmas ho jayega mere liye har part padh kesmiley42

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Posted: 2 months ago
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Originally posted by: samIHA04

Suhaagraat de doon kya har part pesmiley15smiley37

After all I am only 17 🫣smiley37images (23).jpeg

Posted: 2 months ago
#39

Part 12

Neil goes to his home hurriedly & quickly reaches to his own room while locking up the door. His mind replays the dance & the kiss. He feels disgusted towards himself that he let a stranger to kiss him. He goes to washroom & washes his face repeatedly like he wants to erase the mark which he got tonight. He feels paranoid & suddenly screams feeling hurt. He sits down under shower & starts crying loudly. "Main sirf tumse pyaar karta hun Yuvika aur humesha karunga. Pata nahi aaj kya ho gaya tha mujhe......pata nahi main konsa dhun main tha ke maine kisi aur ko mere paas aane ka mauka diya", saying this Neil starts sobbing. "Har koi baas apna fayda ke liye mujhe baali ka bakra banate hain......mere opinion koi puchta hi nahi.....kya main itna unimportant hoon?!", mutters Neil still crying.



Next Morning


"Ma'am, kal raat Neil bohot hi jyada upset ho gaye the shayad. Party main laut kar bhi nahi aaye",says Rose. "Main janti hun Neil ko.....woh guilty feel kar raha hoga yeh sochke ke woh Yuvika ko dhoka de raha hai. Honestly main usse iss halat main nahi dekh sakti",says Yukti aka Yuvika. "Ma'am, phir aap unhe sach kyu nahi bata deti?!. Aap dono ka dard khatam ho jayega",says Rose. "Nahi...Yeh possible nahi hoga,Rose. Main jo karne ja rahi hun usse Neil ko dard toh hoga lekin kam se kam dawa lagane ke liye main rahungi uske saath....uske paas. Plan jaldi execute karna hoga,Rose. Kal raat hi plan ka 1st phase pura ho jaata but anyways yeh aaj bhi ho sakta hai. Neil ko call karke bolo ke woh mujhse dopaher ko mile",says Yuvika & Rose nods at her.




At Neil's Room


Neil getting ready for the day still thinking about last night. He feels frustrated & mutters "Yeh koi zindagi ka sabse bada milestone nahi tha ke barbar yaad kar raha hai". Vidhur comes there saying "Betu, aaj tum office late jaa rahe ho?". "Ha papa.....woh maine alarm thik se suna nahi"lies Neil although he feels bad. "Accha...sun, aaj mujhe thoda late hoga kyunki main orphanage pe donations dene wala hun",says Vidhur & Neil smiles at him. "Sambhal ke jaiyega",says Neil. Vidhur goes from there. Neil gets a call from Yuvika. "Yeh Ms.Multani mujhe kyu phone kar rahi hai?!....pakka kal raat ko lekar baat karegi par mujhe nahi sunna hai"mutters Neil still reluctantly takes the call.




At Noon


Neil drives his car to the location which Ms.Multani sent. Soon he reaches there. He sees Rose standing outside of cottage waiting for him making Neil frown at her. Neil gets out of the car. "Mr. Bhardwaj, ma'am andar intezaar kar rahi hai apke liye",says Rose. Neil gives her curt nod. When he enters inside the cottage, he gets shocked seeing the decoration......it looks like.....proposal set up?!. What the hell is happening?!.....Neil's trance gets break hearing a soft music. He looks at that direction & sees Ms.Multani wearing half shoulder red gown looking at him with intense gaze.



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Posted: 2 months ago
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Please update next part