Tere dil pe mera Kahin na kahin naam likha hai PraNbir Khushi TS

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Tere dil pe mera Kahin na kahin naam likha hai...My name is written somewhere in your heart...Part1

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Ranbir walked towards his daughter Khushi.

Ranbir:Hey Khushi...

Khushi:Papa!

Ranbir lifted her up in his arms.

Khushi:Papa..you have no time for me.

Ranbir felt sad.

Ranbir:Sorry beta.Papa has a lot of work in the office.By the way did you have food?

Khushi:I ate everything papa.

The servant Rani said:No Sir.She had only a glass of milk.Though I forced her,she did not eat anything solid.I was busy with the kitchen work.So I did not have time.to go behind her.

Ranbir:What excuse!Don't you know that Khushi is more important?If she does'nt eat,how can she take medicines on time?

Rani:But what to do Sir?I have other works also.Right?How can I do everything together?

Ranbir thought:Khushi needs a good home nurse to look after her.




Ranbir informed his friends to get a home nurse and they arranged a nurse for Khushi.She came to their house.

She:Good morning Sir!You needed a home burse.Right?I am the home nurse.

Ranbir:O!Good!Your good name?

She:Prachi Arora.

Ranbir:My daughter Khushi is a heart patient.So you have to look after her very well.

Prachi:Yes Sir.Please give me all her medical files.

Ranbir:Sure.

Prachi:Sir...where is your wife?

Ranbir became dull.

Ranbir:I am not married.Khushi is actually my sister's daughter.When Khushi was a baby,my whole family passed away in an accident.After that I became her father.

Khushi became emotional.





Ranbir introduced Prachi to Khushi.

Ranbir:Khushi...this is Prachi aunty.She will look after you.

Prachi:Very cute child.

Ranbir and Khushi smiled.

Ranbir:Khushi,don't trouble her.Be obedient and friendly.Ok?

Khushi:Ok papa.

Ranbir:Good.Papa is going to office now.Bye.

Ranbir kissed her cheek and left.

Prachi:Hi baby...

Khushi:My name is not baby.And I am not a baby.So don't call me baby.

Prachi:Ok ok.Then what is your name?

Khushi:My name is Khushi.

Prachi:Nice name.

Khushi smiled.

Prachi:Will you be my friend?

Khushi:Ok sister.

Prachi:Don't call me sister.Call me Prachi aunty.

Khushi:Ok Prachi aunty.

Prachi smiled.

Prachi:Ok.I will bring food for you.

Khushi:No.

Prachi:I am strict about eating food on time.You should have food and medicines on time.

Khushi showed her a puppy face.Prachi felt like laughing.



Prachi made Khushi eat food and medicine while narrating stories.

Rani was surprised:Khushi ate the full food which was served on the plate?It's a surprise.She never listens to me.Prachi sister...you could do what I couldn't do sister.

Prachi smiled.

Khushi:I hate medicines.How long will I have to take medicines?

Prachi:Only for some more days beta.

Khushi smiled:Really?

Prachi:Yes.

Khushi was very happy.




When Ranbir came back from office he asked Khushi:Did you eat food?

Khushi:Yes papa.

Ranbir:Don't lie.

Prachi:Don't worry Sir.Khushi has eaten food and medicine on time.

Ranbir became happy.

Prachi asked Ranbir in a low voice so that Khushi won't hear:Why Khushi's heart surgery is not done yet?

Ranbir:Do you think that I have not let the operation happen?Her heart surgery will happen as soon as the doctor finds a donor.

Prachi was silent.




After some days...

When Ranbir came back home he saw Khushi hugging Prachi and sleeping.Ranbir was surprised.

Rani came near him and said:Poor Khushi did not get a mother's love till now.Now she maybe experiencing it from Prachi.

Ranbir was stunned.

Ranbir:What are you saying?Prachi is not Khushi's mother.

Rani:Sir,even though you did'nt give birth to Khushi,you became her father.Like that Prachi can become Khushi's mother.

Ranbir:Stop this nonsense and go and do your work.

The scared Rani walked away.




Prachi and Khushi really became close.

Khushi asked Prachi:Prachi aunty...I really love you.

Prachi:I also love you Khushi.

Khushi smiled.

Ranbir who came there saw them together.

Khushi:Can I call you 'Maa'?

Prachi was shocked.Prachi did not know what to say.She looked at Khushi emotionally.Ranbir became emotional.

Khushi:I always longed for a mother.But papa told me that I don't have a mother.But seeing you I feel that my mother is back to me.

Prachi became so emotional that she hugged Khushi.Ranbir became so emotional that his eyes got filled up with tears.





Ranbir went near Prachi.

Ranbir:Prachi....Khushi asked you whether she can call you 'Maa'.Why did'nt you reply?

Prachi was shocked to know that Ranbir had heard about it.

Ranbir:You don't love my Khushi?

Prachi looked at Ranbir emotionally:Don't question my love for Khushi Sir.I really love Khushi.

But if I tell her to call me 'Maa',everyone will think that I am using Khushi to be your wife.I don't want to be known as a gold digger.

Ranbir:Why should we care about the society?My Khushi looks the happiest when she is with you.For  Khushi,why don't we get married?

Suna hai tere dil pe mera
Kahin na kahin naam likha hai
Dekho na meri aankhon mein tum
Chhipa hai mera khwaab chhipa hai

Prachi was shocked:What?

Ranbir:Will you marry me Prachi?

Kaise bataun kitna chahun main tumhe
Le ja zarurat ho toh meri dhadkanein
Inmein sunayi degi meri khwahishein

Prachi:Sir..I am an ordinary nurse.I can't marry a rich man like you.

Ranbir became upset.

Rehte hain na yeh humesha rang roop dono
Zindagi ka yeh safar hai chhanv dhoop dono
Inn hawaon mein rahegi teri meri khushboo
Tere peechhe main chalunga jahaan jayega tu

Ranbir:All I can say is...please think about it again.In case if you change your decision please let me know.Till then I will wait.

Prachi looked at him emotionally in disbelief.

Suna hai teri taqdeeron mein
Tumhara mera mel likha hai
Jo aisa ho toh kya darna phir
Dekhein toh zara kya hota hai


Suddenly Rani came running.

Rani:Sir...Khushi...Khushi...she has fallen unconscious.While playing she collapsed on the ground.

Ranbir and Prachi were shattered.


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One more FF


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The bonding between Ranbir and Khushi is cute. Nice to see Ranbir taking care of Khushi as a single parent. His temper on Rani for neglecting Khushi is right. Nice to see Prachi building a rapport with Khushi. Their bonding is cute. Khushi proposing Prachi to be her mother was shocking.  Ranbir marriage proposal to Prachi is unexpected as it is too early. Sad that Khushi fell down unconscious. Hope she recovers soon.

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Part 1 


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Nice start. I liked the scenes of Ranbir and Khushi. Rani is also nice. Prachi as Khushi's nurse is nice. I liked how Prachi convinced Khushi to have food and medicines. Rani is indirectly a cupid for Prachi and Ranbir. Khushi asking Prachi's permission to address her as mom was emotional. Sad that Khushi's parents were dead in an accident so Khushi's uncle had become his father. I liked how Ranbir asked Prachi for marriage. 

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Tere dil pe mera Kahin na kahin naam likha hai...My name is written somewhere in your heart...Part2

 Rani:Sir...Khushi...Khushi...she has fallen unconscious.While playing she collapsed on the ground.

Ranbir and Prachi were shattered.

They ran towards Khushi crying.Khushi was lying down unconscious.

Ranbir:Khushi...open your eyes.

Prachi:Khushi...please open your eyes.

Khushi did not open her eyes.

Ranbir started crying.

Prachi:Sir,we have to take Khushi to the hospital now.

They carried Khushi to the hospital.



Ranbir cried in front of the doctor:Doctor...please save my Khushi.

Dr:Mr.Kohli,we need to get Khushi's surgery done immediately.

Ranbir:But how?

Dr:Don't worry.One family is ready to donate their daughter's heart to Khushi as they believe that their daughter can be alive in Khushi forever.

Ranbir and Prachi smiled tearfully.




Khushi's surgery started.

Ranbir and Prachi went to meet the donor's family.

Ranbir:Thank you so much for everything.

The couple was in tears.

The father:We lost our child.We can understand that pain.If someone else gets their child alive because of our daughter it's a blessing for our daughter.

Ranbir and Prachi became emotional.




After some hours...

The doctor informed Ranbir and Prachi:As you know, the surgery is over.We thought that the surgery is over.But...

Prachi:But what doctor?

The doctor:The child has not regained her consciousness till now.It's not giving a good signal.

Ranbir and Prachi were shattered.

Ranbir was numb.

Prachi went near Khushi and shed tears.

Prachi:Khushi,please wake up.Your Prachi aunty..no...your Maa is here near you.

You wanted me to be your mother.Right?I promise that I will be your mother and you can call me 'Maa'.But please open your eyes.

There was no movement in Khushi.Prachi wept:Khushi!

Prachi kissed Khushi's head tearfully.

Her tears fell on Khushi's hand.Slowly Khushi opened her eyes.

Prachi was very happy.

Prachi called her with a tearful smile:Khushi!

Khushi smiled at her.

Khushi:Maa!

Prachi became so emotional that she hugged Khushi.

Ranbir and the doctor came there.The doctor smiled.

Ranbir smiled tearfully seeing it.

Ranbir walked towards Khushi with tears in his eyes and smile on his lips.

Ranbir:Khushi beta...

Khushi:Papa...

Ranbir held her hand and kissed her palm.

Ranbir and Prachi hugged Khushi emotionally.

After some days....

Ranbir went near Prachi.

Ranbir:Prachi,did you think about what I told you?

Prachi stared at him.

Ranbir:You have already become Khushi's mother.But will you become her mother officially?

Prachi smiled:Yes.

Ranbir smiled.

Suna hai teri taqdeeron mein
Tumhara mera mel likha hai
Jo aisa ho toh kya darna phir
Dekhein toh zara kya hota hai

Ranbir:Just Khushi's mother or...?

Prachi:Or?

Ranbir:Prachi,I can hear your heart saying that my name is written in your heart.Is it true?

Prachi blushed.Ranbir smiled.

Mar jaane se pehle main jee loon tumhein
Le ja zarurat ho toh meri dhadkanein
Inmein sunayi degi meri khwahishein

Ranbir:Prachi,your name is written in my heart.

Ranbir extended his hand towards Prachi and asked:Will you be Mrs.Ranbir Kohli?

Prachi smiled holding his hand:Yes.

Ranbir and Prachi smiled at each other.

Mar jaane se pehle main jee loon tumhein
Le ja zarurat ho toh meri dhadkanein
Inmein sunayi degi meri khwahishein(Sanak)


Ranbir and Prachi got married in Khushi's presence.

The end

 


Edited by jasminerahul - 3 months ago
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Loved it dear 😍

Awesome end to a wonderful journey ✨

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Sad that Khushi fell unconscious and got admitted to the hospital. Luckily, Khushi got a heart donor. When the doctor said that Khushi hadn't gained consciousness and was not giving a good sign, it was a tense situation. Prachi going to Khushi and kissing her tearfully was emotional. Khushi calling Prachi maa and Ranbir papa was emotional. Ranbir proposed to Prachi to be Khushi's official mother, and his wife is passionate. Pranbir's dialogues are romantic. The song sequences are romantic. Good that Ranbir and Prachi got married in Khushi's presence.