Baatein Kuch Ankahee Si

damn you alcohol! #Kuvan drabble

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Posted: 6 months ago

Setting: DURING THE PARTY.

 

 

 

 

RED.

She was wearing red today. 

Red Saree adjourned with minimal jewellery and beautiful hair bun. How did she manage to look this simple and this graceful in just a saree, while everyone else around her tried to look different and chic, she only wore what she wished and was comfortable in. He didn’t know where she gets her confidence from and he loved it about her. 

Among many other things.

How many shots did he drink because he was pretty sure he couldn’t never admit all this to himself while being sober. 

These drinks were clouding his mind and all he could think of was one certain person moving around him, smiling and occasionally laughing with her family.

Suddenly the party was in dancing mode and everybody was grooving. Obviously not her. It was not her thing and Kunal knew it. 

It was suffocating for him too, as he tried to move away he came face to face with Her.


Beautiful.


That was what he could think of.


Only beautiful.


 She was beautiful.


They were so close, too close for Kunal’s comfort. His heart wasn’t beating normal and his mind was intoxicated. Everything was too blur and hazy for him to register except for the fact that she was so close to him, looking at him with those concerned eyes. 

He knew she was concerned for him, damn it; always for others. Never for herself. She kept everyone over herself and he hated that.


He scanned her face, the softness of her natural face was radiating from the almost non-existent makeup she had put on.

 He was intoxicated.

Yes

That’s why he couldn’t stop looking at her and moving his eyes all over her face.

So soft.

So delicate.


Kunal wondered what would happen if he gently touched her eyes, her always straight nose in anger, her .. lips. Just as his eyes went on her lips they were pulled apart by her and he came back to his senses.


Damn you alcohol!

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Posted: 6 months ago

you SLAYED girl! Just today I kind of caught up on the show because of Kunal, and was able to find THIS writeup on IF. 

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Posted: 6 months ago

dudeeeeee!! First of all thank you so much and secondly, I have read your work on different forums SO MAAM YOU NEED TO WRITE ON KUNAL AND VANDU TOO PLEASEE

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Posted: 6 months ago

Wow really! Shared love for serials at play here! And once I've made my presence felt on any forum, I mean business (of some stories minimum). Will write soon on the two.

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Posted: 6 months ago

Molki? I think I remember you from there. and yes please now that we know you are here — I will be impatiently waiting for your magic. 

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Posted: 6 months ago

UFF!! This is so so so good!! If ONLY we got this instead of their fight

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Posted: 6 months ago

Woww.....soo good!! Please continue writing!!

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Posted: 6 months ago
Originally posted by: MJHTMonayaSajan

Woww.....soo good!! Please continue writing!!

I am glad you liked it <3

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Posted: 6 months ago

Fabulous writing 🤩👌


Do write more soon smiley20

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Posted: 6 months ago

Sorry wrong tag in the previous post smiley44smiley36