Protima - Sangarsh jaari hein ( An Imaginary story by me )

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Posted: 9 months ago

A 30 year old Protima is shown who was standing before the idol of Durga Maa with Neerja ... She recalls the most worst day of her life. 

Protima: Mein Durga maa ki Kasam khaake kehti hun mein badnaam nahi huyi hun. Aap toh mere guru banke aaye the Naa mujhe Sangeeth sikhane .....Aur jab aapki kala mein maine khud ke liye ek rahat paati tab se mein sirf aapki hun ...Raaton mein sirf aapke saath guzarti hun....

He : Sonagachi mein rehti ho naa tum, tumhari jism ko Maine chuwa hein.....Aur abb toh tumhari kokh mein joh pal rahe hein uske liye kitna Paisa chahiye woh bolo 

Protima; Aap aise gandi baat kaise keh sakte hai?? Yeh baccha jitna Mera hein utna aap kaa bhi hein....Aap mujhse shaadi keejiye aur hum hamare bacche ke Maa - baap banenge. Aap mujhse pyaar karte hein naa ? 

He laughed and throw some currency notes .

He : Joh bhi raat guzari hein naa uski keemat hein yeh....Tum jaisi Sonagachi ki aurat soch bhi kaise sakti hein mujh jaise reputed aadmi ke saath shaadi Karna ?? Aur baccha arrey baccha paalna nahin aati naa toh khatam kar lo isse ....Paise dee hein maine...Uda lo zameen se asptal jawo aur abortion karwa lo....

Protima slaps him in anger .

He : Mujhe maaregi ? Ek veshya ki yeh himmat? Abhi police ko bulata hun, Raid mein naa sab kuch khatam honge.

Didhun : Saab !!! Isko hum samjhayenge...Jitna iske saath raat bitani hein woh bita chuke naa toh jaayiye Yahan se....

He leaves...

Protima: Didhun !! Mere bacche ke baare mein socho !! Usse ek acchi zindagi milna hein.... Mujhe waapis Sonagachi mein leke mat chalo.....

Didhun orders some of her chamchas to take the Money.

Didhun ; Kitna hein ?

One of them says ; 30  hazar hein..

Didhun ; Waah !! Protima tumhare bacche kee keemat 30 hazar hein !!!! 

Protima; Mujhe jaane do Didhun...Mein mazdoori karungi yaa phir kahin pe bhi bartan maanjh lungi par mujhe Sonagachi nahin jaana hein....Didhun

Didhun didn't listens her and forcefully takes Protima to Sonagachi.

Protima's eyes went teary remembering this harsh incident of her life. 

Neerja ; Protima !!! Aap ro kyun rahi hein ?? 

Protima: Kuch nahi Neerja. Ek vaada karogi mujhse ? 

Neerja : Vaada !! 

Protima wipes her tears and bend down.

Protima: Vaada karo kee chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye tum school jaana nahin chodogi. Acche se padhai kar logi...

Neerja helds Protima's hand and nods her head : Protima mein acche se padhai karungi.. School jaana nahin chodungi.

Protima hugs her and says : Hamare paas Durga maa jaisi Shakti nahin unki trishul jaisi koyi shastra nahin jiss se burayi kaa anth kar sakun. Par shiksha ek wahi hein jiss se tum ek pehchan bana sakogi.... Tumhein aasman mein udna hein Neerja....Ek badlaw laana hein hum sabki zindagi mein....Mushkilein aayenge lekin shiksha se joh seekh tumhein milegi wahi tumhein raasta dikhayenge , wahin manzil dikhayenge. 


Hope you liked this imaginary OS. Please read and tell your views 

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Revutty thumbnail
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Posted: 9 months ago

Please read and tell your views 

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Posted: 9 months ago

Originally posted by: Revutty

Please read and tell your views 

It was nice  and maybe makers have planned such a backstory. Neerja 's father is gonna be somehow related to male lead.🙄

Edited by NostalgiaLove - 9 months ago
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Posted: 9 months ago

It was a very sad backstory. That guy is a moron in the name of a teacher. In front of people who sell his wife and daughter in brothel, cheaters seems better. At least they leave the girl and doesn't lock her.

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Posted: 9 months ago

I liked it...please continue the story

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Posted: 9 months ago

This was an OS. Thinking about writing an adaptation of a novel which I read earlier featuring Neerja . The theme was struggles of women in brothel only. If time allows will write that..

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Posted: 9 months ago

Originally posted by: Revutty

This was an OS. Thinking about writing an adaptation of a novel which I read earlier featuring Neerja . The theme was struggles of women in brothel only. If time allows will write that..

Which novel?

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Posted: 9 months ago

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