Muskurahat hi sab kuch hein - Dedicated to Ganga Maa

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Vidhi lightened the Diya infront of Ganga's wall pic. 

Vidhi : Kaise pukarun  aapko? Mummy ji !! Par woh toh Satyawati mam hein aur mein...Maa !! Mmmhh Ganga Maa....Kya mein aise pukarun aapko ? Aap sirf Dev ji kee hi nahi balki iss Baalghar ke bacchon ke bhi Maa jaisi hein . Bacchon kee Hasi, khelna koodna yeh sab dekhke aap muskurati hein. Mujhe zyada pata nahi aapke baare mein par jitna Kam maine Aapke baare mein Dev ji se jaana uss se itna toh samajh mein aayi kee aapki joh jagah hein Dev ji ke dil mein woh lafzon mein bayan karna mushkil hein. Kuch khaas yaa phir uss se bhi upar. Jab hamari shaadi hone waale the tab unhone mujhe introduce karwaye the aapko yaad hein naa Ganga Maa? Yeh kya aap har baat pe bas muskurati hi rahogi ? Par iss muskan dekhke mann ko bahut sukoon milte hain.... Isliye Aaj Maine socha kee aapse thodi baatein karun....Aap bhale hi hamare beech mein nahi rahe par pata nahi kyun mujhe aise feel ho rahi hein jaise kee shayad aap humein dekh rahi hein..Aapki bete Dev ko aap bahut Miss karte honge Naa ,,woh aapko bahut zyada miss karte hein. Satyawati Maa zarur Dev ji ko kandhe diye par phir bhi kuch aise dil kee chupe huye dard hein jinko zimmedariyon ke peeche chupake mere Dev ji bas sab theek ho jayega kehake sabke man behlane kee koshish kar rahe hein. Uss dard ko shayad aap mehasus kar paayegi , aapki tarah naa sahi par thodi bahut mein bhi samajh paati hoon Ganga Maa..Ek raat kaise apne aansuvon ko rokne kee koshish kar rahe the Dev ji. Unhone mere godh mein sar rakhke bahut roye , par zuban se kuch bataye nahi. Par mein woh takleef samajh paa rahi thi..  Ganga Maa uss pal mujhe laga kee mere pati toh masoom saa chota baccha hein , koyi deewar nahi kee har baar mazboot khade ho jaaye. Har baar kurbaniyan de sakun. Kaash mujh mein uss waqt aapki Mamta dhoondhi hongi unhone , kya mein unhein woh de pawungi... Ganga Maa , mujhe aise aashirwad deejiye kee mein unka saath hamesha de sakun. Ek Thank you bhi kehni thi aapse . Itne acche insaan ko aapne Janam dee joh mere humsafar bane , mujhe raah dikhaye , mere andar himmat aur hausla bhar diye. Thank you so much Ganga Maa. Maine aksar dekha hein kee Dev ji aapke tasweer ke aage Rajnigandha phulon ko rakhte hein..Shayad aapke pasand ke phool hogi . Mein bhi wahi laayi hoon. 

She keeps the flowers near the pic and looked the pic for a while.

Suddenly Ruhi came there and touched her hand ..Vidhi turned and looked her smiling face.

Ruhi : Dev uncle sabke saath khel rahe hein. Aap bhi aayiye naa Didi . Dev uncle aur bacchon  ke sath kheliye 

Vidhi : Aati hoon Ruhi . Bas 2 minute mein. Mein pray karne ke baad aapke saath aati hun..

Ruhi nodded her head and Vidhi folded her hands before the pic by closing her eyes. After a while when she opened her eyes and  to her surprise Ruhi was not there. 

Vidhi : Ruhi !! Itni jaldi chali gayi. 

Vidhi came out from the room and saw Dev with kids.

Vidhi : Devji Ruhi kahan hein ? 

Dev : Woh toh Matron ke saath Rocky ko khaana de rahi hein.

Vidhi ; Kya matlab aapne nahi bhijwaye Ruhi ko 

Dev : Kya ? Maine kab bhijwaye ? Mein toh bacchon ke liye toys arrange kar rahe the..Tum dikhi nahi kab se dhoondh raha tha mein. Sabko toys mile hein. Lo Ruhi bhi aa gayi Rocky ko khaana deke.

Vidhi : Ruhi beta aap andar aayi thi Naa Woh room mein

Ruhi : Nahin.. Mein toh Rocky ko uske favourite food khilane gayi thi Mam ke saath.

Vidhi : Toh phir jisne mere hath pakda , jisne mujhse kaha kee mujhe Dev ji aur bacchon ke saath .....woh...

Dev : Vidhi !!! Are you okay? 

Vidhi ran inside the room. Dev followed her calling Vidhi Vidhi only. As they reached the room they saw tears floating from eyes of Ganga's wall pic.  The melting tears were fellling down on Rajnigandha flowers..

Dev screamed in pain : Maa !! 

Vidhi touched his shoulder and with trembling hands Dev pointed out his finger towards the pic 

Dev : Vidhi !! Meri Maa ... Aansu, maa kee ...

Vidhi : Sambhaliye apne aap ko ..

Dev cried bitterly by  hugging her. Vidhi looked the pic with teary eyes...A gentle breeze waved and when they both released themselves from hug they find the warm smile again at Ganga's pic..

Vidhi: Shayad aapki Maa hum donon ko rote huye nahi dekh sakti . Dekhiye naa phir se muskura rahi hein.. 

Dev : Uss muskan ke peeche bahut dard  hein . Bahut dard...

They both looked again Ganga's photo.

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It’s nice revu!!! Nice to see the bond of dev . Vidhi and their Ganga maa. Aapki jaadu tasveer pe hi pad gayi isiliye tasveer se bhi aasun nikal rahe hai.

Nice portrayal of emotions they share.❀️

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I was missing the deep conversation of ViDev with Ganga Maa very much..That episode when Dev prepared tea for Vidhi at Baalghar, then bought her inside the room and said about his life's untold chapter the way they both looked Ganga's photo ...It was so good to watch. These days staying in Baalghar ViDev is not looking at Ganga's photo and they are not showing that room too.. Dev first placed his wedding invitation card too before her pic. The way he was helding his mom's saree's pallu at his hands ....I miss those deep monologues of Dev very much.. I really wished after marriage they both arriving at Baalghar and looking the pic of Ganga, it would have been a good scene..Iqbal and Rachana would have nailed it..The meaningful quotes hanged in wall , smiling face of Ganga I am missing very badly.. Messes hi dikha rahe hein show mein..

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That was a cute one 😍

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Most of your stories have supernatural powers πŸ˜‚

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πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ Baalghar mein rehke bhi Dev apni sagi Maa ko bhool chuke hein. Aur Satya Dhoom tana tana naachti hein... Kya se kya bana dee Baalghar ko ?.. Mujhe yaad aayi Gangaji bahut toh likhi.... Super natural powers 😁😁😁😁 Itni Sochi nahi kabhi πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£

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Beautiful OS Revutty.. Hope someone from creative side sees this and includes it.. We are not getting any heartfelt moments with leads anymore. Really enjoyed reading😍

 

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Thank you 😊😊😊😊 dear

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I am in awe of your creativity. All your works have something out of the box. This was too good!!