Here is what I think as a viewer of this show since many years.
Last year or more, the show has been all over the place with respect to story and character arcs.
Leads degenerated instead of growing. Basically, the writer in writing and executing tracks poorly, or over glorifying Prithvi and other vamps - dumbed down the leads. I suspect that was the reason Dheeraj quit in the first place. Low screen space and nothing substantial to do for a while. Instead of retaining him anyhow, they let him go and the writer just introduced a new guy. Arrogance of the writer. Starting tracks well but poor in execution, mid way the villains would take limelight and just ruin every track.
Marriage of Rishabh and Preeta just killed the show. If you ask me it never recovered post that. The manner it was done. Did not give audience any time to let things sink in. It was basically like a plot device to Arjun Survanshi. Then that whole track fizzled out with the terrible way they made Preeta divorce him and get back to Arjun/Karan. bad bad writing.
Why so much backstory? Because, the premise of the leap, the building up was already faltering. It just shows that things were not planned at all. If it was, we would have had twins instead of Kavya at the start of the five year leap. If it was planned, we would be seeing Kavya's story instead of the twins!! Its as simple as that.
Then the leap comes and before that past one year, and last one month they put in so much negativity into the story line that all the characters got destroyed. The Luthra family has become unlikeable and no matter what they do or attempt to whitewash them, audience will never like them. The story development was so bad and haphazard that they also butchered all the characters of the Luthra Family and made things so negative that so now, no audience likes any of them. They appear so phony. How for the love of god did they expect to build a new story on such a foundation and more negativity? Way to go!!
Karan Preeta separation would have worked. But he is married or not married to Nidhi? Supposedly he is - 20 years is a long time. But writers still trying to play both sides, play it safe, either show him married and just kill your past story of five years or not married and make Nidhi the rich industralist successfful woman look like a dimwit wasting her life for a guy who deosnt even look like her original Arjun anymore!!
On top that, you got Karan thats not only changed physically but this whole angle to Preeta hating and sensing her after 20 years doesnt make sense. The guy playing Karan now just doesnt look the part and i dont think he has got into the character of Karan. He just adds to the viewers woes. Its telling when audience is saying, they should have just killed Karan instead. YES!! that would have given some respectability to your own story!! Then justice for Preeta would have made sense. Shaurya being spoilt by Kareena would have made more sense than Nidhi!!
Once you take a leap, why not just go for a new story? Let the newbies take charge and let them succeed or fail, didn't this new lot do it on their own five years ago? Didnt most shows do it before? In trying to ease them in they totally destroyed Karan Preeta story. Its not relatable anymore, it doenst make sense anymore. The bad replacement just makes it worse. As a viewer, I am shocked to see how badly they destroyed a much loved pair.
Tell me why any audience would invest in their new pair after seeing what has been done to Karan and Preeta?
Which brings me to the last part, why for the love of god are they repeating their own story? Is the creativity so bad and writing gone off rails or have they zero confidence in weaving a new story!!??
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