Tere Bin TS : surprise night part 3 updated

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Meerub is getting ready as she have to back to old routine of panchayat and decisions etc... 


Dekha hazaron dafa aapko

Phir beqarari kaisi hai

Sambhale sambhalta nahi ye dil

Kuch aap mein baat aisi hai


Suddenly she felt some unknown gaze fixed on her ... she turned she saw murtasim was standing their his eyes stuck on her .. 

She comes closed to him and ask him through eyes by folding her hands .. 

Murtasim didn't divert his eyes took out gajra  and forward his hand ... Meerub saw that and felt happy but again she stuck on her not so impressed mode .. 

Meerub : kis khushi mn ... ?

Murtasim : ek thank you gift hai jo mn apani biwi k liye alaya hun ... Kal rat mere sath us n dinner kia ... Dance bhi kia r joshanda bhi bana k lai akeli rat mn .. wo bhi jin bhooton k darmiyan mn ... To thank you gift to banta hai... Nahi... 

Meerub : hmmm bat to wesay sahi hai tmhare kal mn n mehnat to buht ki hai ... Tmhn dena bhi chahiye mujhe gift ... Lao do.. 


Lekar ijazat ab aap se

Saansein ye aati jaati hain

Dhoondhe se milte nahi hain hum

Bas aap hi aap baaki hain


She forwarded her hand so that he put on to it ... But Murtasim held her hand in his and pulled her one step close to him meerub got conscious... she wanted to push him but didn't ... He makes her wear the gajra ... 


Pal bhar na doori sahein aap se

Betaabiyan yeh kuch aur hain

Hum door hoke bhi paas hain

Nazdeekiyan yeh kuch aur hain


His eyes fixed on her... His gaze always captured her sight in his eyes... Her eyes unable to move when her eyes tangled with his...

Only some how she managed to lower her eyes  with shyness... As murtasim is about to step one step moee closure there is knock on door ... And their attention diverted... 

Meerub goes to open the door... 

Maid: b.b g ap ko maa begum bula rahi hn bahar .. 

Meerub : ok chalo mn a rahi hn ... 

Then meerub also comes behind her ... Then haya step in the spot .. 

Haya forward her hands ... 

Haya : kesay hn ?

Meerub see her own hand... 

Haya : are tmahre pass bhi hn ... Murtasim n la k diye na... Dekho mere pass 2 hn... Mujhe us n 2 le k diye .. tmhn pata hai... Wo gajray wala mujhe murtasim ki biwi smjh raha tha... 

Flashback : 

Haya goes out from haveli to again visit bangali baji... Murtasim notice her .. he start following her where she is going ... 

Here some boys catches haya and tries to misbehave her ... Here come murtasim who hold haya hand and furiously through on back seat of his car... His men fight with boys... 

Boys run away ... Here haya comes on front seat ... Murtasim sit in car and drives the car rushly suddenly meerub voice start ringing in his ear 

Meerub : murtasim ahista chalo gari plz... 

Murtasim loses his pressure on speed and comes back to normal... 

He stops the car on signal when a small boy comes there 

Boy : sahab g apni begum k liye gajra le lijye na wo khush ho jain ge... 

Murtasim smiles a little as his mind across meerub thought which always his mood changer....

Murtasim : tmhn kesay pata meri begum gajray s khush ho ge... 

Boy : sb larkiqn hi khush ho jati hn shab g... 

Murtasim:  yahi to problem hai jo sb larkian kartin hn wo  wo nahi karti... Khair yeh lo paisay ... Hope so wo khush ho jaye lets see ..

Murtasim self talk : 

R agr pasand na aya to r kuch nahi zyada s zyada sofay p sulaye ge... 

Haya forward her hand to take gajra 

Murtasim kept it side with attitude... 

After reaching home 

Haya gives some money to beena and ask her to buy 2 gajras... As she got ... Haya smrik .. 

Haya : ab aye ga maza... Buht khush the na meerub meri date kharab kar k ab dekho kesay tm s murtasim ki mohabat ka mazak banwati hn mn ..  

Flashback end ..  

Meerub : O really ... Haya tmhn pata hai mujhe na ab tm p ghusa bhi nahi ata... You know mn murtasim s hamesha khafa hoti the k wo tmhn thora buht bhao deta hai... Bt you know what i realise is k tm na dimaghi tor p ab sahi nahi ho islye ase harkatain karti rehti ho hamesha... Ab wo bechara bhi kia kare mentally ill patients p ghusa bhi nahi kar skta islye tmhn politely mana karta rehta .. r tm us daya ko piyar smjhti rehti ... So sad ... 

Haya : meerub tm... 

Meerub smriks ... 

Meerub : mn hi to hun... Us k dil mn dimagh mn hamesha... Tmhn pata hai mn wo hun jis ko panay k liye wo khud apnay kaqdam barhata hai mn nahi jati kisi k pass ... Wo khud bahany dhundta mere qareeb anay k mere pass rehnay k... Mere liye wo har sharat har haq maff kar deta hai... Us k dil r dimagh sirf r sirf mere khayal mn griftar hn... Wahn mujhe kahin door door tk tm nazar nahi ati haya ... Islye ek bar phr keh rahi hn tm plz apnay ap ka ase mazak mat banawao r door raho murtasim s .. 

Meerub left from there and haya furiously walk out..

Back to meerasim room:   

Meerub comes back to room 

Meerub : murtasim... Murtsaim... kahan ho tm... 

Murtasim : waha bhai gajron ka itna asar ho gaya tm p 2 min bhi mujhe s door nahi raha gaya tum s ... 

Murtasim smriks flirtly.. and cages her around his arm 

Meerub closes her eyes furiously and pused him .. 

Meerub : yahi ... Bs yahi harkatain tmhare mujh nahi pasnd ... 

Murtasim : kia mn puch skta hun... ab mn n kia kia ... 

Meerub : yeh jo tm haya k sath kartay phir rahe ho na... Mn bata rahi hn murtasim mn tmhn nahi choron ge... 

Mirtasim : to mn n kb kaha tm mujhe choro... 

Meerub : r yeh jo haya r tmhare beech chal raha us ka kia... 

Murtasim: meerub tm pagal ho gai ho kia jo kich bhi boli ja rahi ... Kitni bar bataya tmhn k haya meri sirf ek cousin hai... Zimadari hai meri... 

Meerub: han to phr tm jao bs use ki zimadari nibhao mn to kuch lagti hi nahi tmhare... use k sth jao long drive p... 

Murtasim angerly...

Murtasim : han chala jaon ga ... Happy now... 

Meerub left from there ... 

After getting free from jirga meerub is walking in lawn furiously... 

Murtasim comes there he tries to talk her claimly 

Murtasim : meerub meri bat suno... 

meerub shooks his hand and about to go ... Murtasim angerly holds her hand and drags her.. 

Meeeub : murtasim... Murtasim kahan le ja rahe ho... Mn kahain nahi ja rahi tmahre sath... 

Murtasim: chup chap chalo... 

Her forcefully took her toward his car ... And make her sit on front seat... 

Murtasim sits on his seat ... Meerub tried to open the door but murtasim locked it... Amd holds her hand ...

Murtasim: yeh tmhare jaga hai meerub mere sath .. mere pass ..  sirf tmhare ....  

Meerub didn't protest and sit claimly...  

Murtasim drive off to some food street... 

Meerub : murtasim tm yehn... Kesay .. tmhn kesay pata k mujhe pani puri khani hai... 

Murtasim smiles ... 

Murtasim : is raz ko raz rehnay do..  r chalo .. 


Dekha hazaro dafaa aapko

Phir beqarari kaisi hai

Sambhale sambhalta nahi ye dil

Kuch pyar mein baat aisi hai


They both go near golgapa stall... Meerub start eating without break and murtasim adoring her... totally lost in her happiness... 

Meerub: murtasim... Murtasim.. tumhn pata hai mujhe pachpan s golgapay itnay pasnd hn .. jb bhi mera mood off hota tha baba mujhe le jatay thay golgape khilanay ... 

Then she stoped.    

Meerub : yeh lo ek golgapa mere hath s kha lo... 

Murtasim: nahi meerub mera pait kharab ho jata hai.. 

Before he completed his sentence meerub put one golgapa in his mouth 

Meerub : tum bhi kia yad karo gaye k meerub k hath k golgapay khaye thay... 

Murtasim eat it... 

Meerub : acha hn na... 

Murtasim smiles and node...  

Meerub : r chahiye... 

Murtasim : nahi bs tm khao ... 

After golgapa party both left from there ... 


Aagosh mein hai jo aapki

Aisa sukoon aur paaye kahan

Aankhen humein ye raas aa gayi

Ab hum yahan se jaaye kahan


Here meerub saw a shop of bangles... She stoped infront of stall her eyes start glittered which is noticed by murtasim... 

Murtasim wispers in her ear... 

Murtasim : pehno ge ?

Meerub smiles .. and forward her hand to the shopkeeper... He is about to wear her murtasim holds her hand ... Took bangels from his hand and make her wear the bangels... 

Muratsim : tmhare hathon ko sirf mn saja skta hun meerub.... 

Meerub lost in his sweet gesture and smiles... 

Then they smilingly start walking toward the car... 

Meerub : tumhn pata hai murtasim mn n yeh churiqn kun pehni... 

Murtasim: kun pehni... 

Meerub : jb mn n us bachay ko dekha na to mn n us ki ankhon mn kuch ajeeb s dekha... Jesay us k ansoo sukh gaye hn us k khawab toot gaye hn us ki izat e nafs ko kisi n buht buri trah kuchal dia ho... Islye mujhe laga k shayd mn yeh churiyan use khareed k shyad us ka kuch bhala kar paon...


Dekha hazaron dafa aapko

Phir beqarari kaisi hai

Sambhale sambhalta nahi ye dil

Kuch pyar mein baat aisi hai

Mmm.. hmm..

Phir beqarari kaisi hai

Mmm.. hmm..

Kuch pyar mein baat aisi hai


Murtasim touched and mesmerised by her words... He heart swell with proud on his official wedded wife... Yes she is the one who he always wanted as his wife ... Himat wale... hoslay wale.... kisi s na darnay wale sahi ka sath denay wale... R mazloomon ka asra banay wale .... Meerub murtasim khan... 

While walking Murtasim holds her hand tightly... 

Murtasim : tm janti ho meerub tmahre ise bat p mn marta hun... Jis trah tm logon k liye stand leti ho... Un ka dukh smjhti ho... R un ki help karnay k liye kisi bhi jad tk ja skti ho... Tm mn har wo quality hai jo ek gadi nasheen ki biwi mn honi chahiye... Mn hamesha s tmhare jesi biwi hi chahta tha... Mere khawabon ki tabeer ho tm... 

Meerub heard his words without blinking with a slight smile ... She just pushed him lightly and left the place... 

Meerub runs through the colorful dupattas... And murtasim runs behind her 

Murtasim: meerub .. meerub kahan bhag rahi ho... 

Meerub is lost in her own fantasy of her newly found feeling ... She wanted to dance, run and breathe in the fresh air so that her soul felt the pleasure of being pampered and loved... She is in seven sky...  She didn't expect her life to take such a turn where she started bending towards the person whom she hated the most in the world... His gaze always captured her sight in his eyes... Her eyes unable to move when her eyes tangled with his...what else she wanted in her life a supporting partner... Who cross every limt just for the sake of her smile... He is the one whom she can depend on emotionally... And calls him her own... Only her...

Suddenly meerub stops as she saw some known face Infront of her eyes ..

Murtasim also reaches there he noticed some disturbing expressions on her face and turn to find the reason ... And shocked to see rohail there ... 

Murtasim angerly.. 

Murtasim: tu... Yehn ... 

Murtasim holds his collar... 

Rohail : mn yehn meerub s milnay aya hun... 

Murtasim: meerub meri biwi hai... R yeh mn decide karon ga k wo kise milay ge r kise nahi... 

Meerub holds his shoulder.... 

Meerub : murtasim nahi... Tm use kuch nahi kaho gaye... Mujhe bat karni hai ise 5 min do mujhe bs ... 

Murtasim control his anger and turn toward her  ... 

Murtasim : bs 5 min ek sec bhi zyada nahi... 

Meerub : trust me.. ek sec bhi uper nahi hoga... 

Murtasim : gari mn wi8 kar raha hon mn ... 

Murtasim left from there... 

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 Waooo . It was cool ..... But haya 🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬


Do continue , loved it 🎯🎯😘

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Loved the story dear ❀❀❀

Behaya aur uski natak 

Pls update the next part, wanting to know what rohail is upto πŸ˜³

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Originally posted by: midniteangel

Loved the story dear ❀❀❀

Behaya aur uski natak 

Pls update the next part, wanting to know what rohail is upto πŸ˜³

Thanks alot dear 😍😍😍😍 koshish karon ge 2nd part kal update kar doon ..

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 Waooo . It was cool ..... But haya 🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬


Do continue , loved it 🎯🎯😘

Thanks alot dear... Try karon ge kal update karnay ki next part ki 😍😍😍😍

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Thanks alot dear 😍😍😍😍 koshish karon ge 2nd part kal update kar doon ..

That's great πŸ˜³

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great start, hope Murtism does not feel betrayed by her now

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great start, hope Murtism does not feel betrayed by her now

Thanks alot .. its my story dear yehn sa kuch nahi hoga πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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Hey nice take on the story❀️❀️

Behaya 😑😑😑

Murtasim and Meerab❀️

Mere khwabon ki tabeer ho tum😍😍😍

Next part pleaseπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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Very nice πŸ‘πŸ‘.......pls update soon and keep haya away from meerasim🀣