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Posted: 1 years ago
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7th tak Abhi padha hain and the story is literally cutest as I said. The way Malhar confessed his feelings, the way they got along so well, their feelings for each other- it all is expressed beautifully. 

The way they are madly waiting for meeting each other, the date plans, the beautiful after pack up meets and now him taking care of her- it all is sooo cute!!! Bohot hi zyada pyaari hain ye story Sacchi!!!! 
main toh tumhari fan hi ho gayi Shruti!!!!! 
itna afsos ho raha hain ki itne din kyun nahi padha maine!!!😩😩😩

Thank you Dil se ❤️

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CHAPTER- 10

Later that evening after returning home from his shoot Malhar was planning how to convince Kalyani to meet him tomorrow and how to manage there meeting, then an idea came to his mind. Just then he called his assistant director and said-

Malhar- Sir who actually kuch personal commitment aa gaya hai issiliye kal main shoot pe nahi aa paunga, please meri kal ki leave approve karwa dijiye

Assistant Director- Ok Malhar no problem main Director sir se baat kar lunga waise bhi humare pass kafi bank episodes hain toh ek din tum leave le loge toh koi problem nahi hai… No need to worry

Malhar- Thank You Sir for understanding

Assistant Director- Are no need to thank, bye will meet day after tomorrow

Malhar- Yes Sir bye….

After disconnecting the call Malhar called Kalyani, on the other side Kalyani after returning from office had her dinner and was also waiting for Malhar’s call and in the meantime was also marking some important questions for her upcoming exams just then her phone rang and after seeing the caller ID a big smile appeared on her face and she immediately picked up his call-

Kalyani- Hello Malhar Ji main kabse aapke call ka hi wait kar rahi thi

Malhar- Hello my princess sorry thoda late ho gaya call karne mein

Kalyani- No problem… Bataiye kaesa tha aapka din aur dinner kiya ya nahi

Malhar- Haan din mera bahut acha gaya thoda light scenes hi the toh maza aaya shoot karne mein aur maine abhi tak dinner nahi kiya bas tumse baat karke kha lunga

Kalyani- Itna thak ke aate hain aur abhi tak dinner nahi kiya baad mein baat kar lete mujhse main kahin bhagi thode hi jaa rahi hun

Malhar- Are baba already tum itne der se mere call ka wait kar rahi thi aur wait nahi karwana chahta tha aur main bhi toh tumhari awaaz sunne ko taras raha tha…. Aur tumne jo yeh 2 hafton se mujhe punishment de rakhi hai uss wajah se kitna mushkil ho raha hai mujhe khudko control karna tumhe pata bhi nahi hai main kitna miss kar raha hun tumhe aur tumhare touch ko

Kalyani- Sorry Malhar Ji main bhi aapko bahut miss kar rahi hun lekin kya karun kaam aur padhayi dono ka itna pressure hai ki kuch nahi kar pa rahi… I am really very sorry

Malhar- Don’t be sorry I understand…Acha yeh sab chodo aur tumne khana khaya yaa nahi aur kya kar rahi thi abhi aur tumhara din kaesa gaya

Kalyani- Haan maine dinner kar liya hain aur abhi bas kuch important questions hi mark kar rahi thi college ke final exams ke liye… Aur aaj ke din ke baare mein toh puchiye mat itna pareshan ho gayi na main client ke office mein ki kya hi bataun

Malhar- Kyun kya hua??

Kalyani- Ek toh itne saare papers,bills, statements, tally itna kuch check karna hota hai audit mein uppar se ek bhi papers client ke properly maintained nahi hai aur bolta hai madam please aaplog hi sab theek kar dijiye na… Are humlog auditor hain koi unke personal accountant nahi ki unke accounting ka kaam bhi hum bhi karen… Mere jo senior hain Shravan Bhaiya unka toh aaj behes ho gaya client ke accountant se… Yahi sab cheezon ke wajah se aaj bahut stressful tha mera day

Malhar- Oh god kitna kuch hua hoga aaj office mein

Kalyani- Haan wahi toh mann toh kiya sab chodh ke ghar chali jaaun

Malhar- Toh aa jaati mere ghar mujhe ek call kar deti main foran aa jaata

Kalyani- Malhar Ji please I am serious mazak mat kariye

Malhar- Acha sorry koi nahi mere baare mein socho saara stress chala jayega

Kalyani- Sach kahun wahi kiya tha maine office mein tabhi thoda sa relax hui bahut miss kar rahi thi aapko

Malhar- Awww… Meri jaan, waese yeh tumhare client ka office hain kahan mujhe zara address send karna

Kalyani- Kyun aap kya karenge address kaa

Malhar thought- Agar tumhe bata diya toh tum mujhe karne hi nahi dogi jo maine socha hai

Malhar replied- Are yeh kya baat hui meri girlfriend kahan jaati hai kisse milti hai is par nazar toh rakhna hi hoga naa

Kalyani- Are mazak mat kariye

Malhar- Acha woh aese hi taaki kabhi emergency hui toh main tumhare pass aa paun

Kalyani- Acha rukiye message karti hun mere ghar se approx. ek ghanta door hai

Malhar- Acha ok… Ab jaao apne padhayi par concentrate karo hum kal milte hain

Kalyani- Milte hain??? Matlab

Malhar- Wohhh…. Mera matlab hain baat karte hain

Kalyani- Acha….. Bye Good Night

After saying this she kissed her phone and said-

Kalyani- Dekha aaj nahi bhooli main good night kiss

Malhar- Good girl… Bye good night after saying this he also kissed his phone

Both disconnected the call and Kalyani went back to her studies on the other Malhar had his dinner and while having dinner was simultaneously planning for tomorrow and said-

Malhar- Dekhna Kalyani kal main tumhara saara stress bhaga dunga aur humare itne dinon ki judai bhi khatam ho jayegi

After having dinner and planning everything he went to sleep and was very excited for tomorrow.

Next day Kalyani went to her office and after one hour received Malhar’s call and thought-

Kalyani- Malhar Ji yeh iss wakt kyun call kar rahe hain sab kuch theek toh hai naa

She immediately picked up his call-

Kalyani- Hello… Malhar Ji kya hua sab theek haina aap iss wakt call kar rahe hain

Malhar- Haan sab theek hai tum jaldi se apne office ke neeche aao hum bahar jaa rahe hain

Kalyani- Kyaaaa???

She screamed loudly and everyone present there started to look at her, then she embarrassingly went to the corner

Malhar- Kya hua Kalyani itne zor se chillaogi toh sab dar jayenge

Kalyani- Aap kya kar rahe hain yahan Malhar Ji please jaiye na main nahi aa paungi

Malhar- Mujhe kuch nahi pata tum yaa toh neeche aao yaa phir main uppar aata hun

Kalyani- Malhar Ji yeh kya bachpana hai main kya bol ke niklungi abhi bataiye mujhe toh aaye hue abhi sirf do hi ghante hue hain half day bhi nahi bol sakti abhi

Malhar- Mujhe kuch nahi pata kuch bhi karo but aaj ka din toh tum mere saath hi spend karogi

Kalyani- Ok fine aati hun but thoda wait kariye

Malhar- Ok but fast kyunki bahut kuch plan kiya hai main kuch bhi miss nahi karna chahta

Kalyani- Ok aati hun

After 15-20 minutes finally Kalyani came down and saw Malhar standing near his bike wearing his helmet, soon seeing her he went towards her and gave her a tight hug and said-

Malhar- Tumhe pata bhi nahi hai maine tumhe kitna miss kiya aur kya tumhe pata hai tum formals mein kitni pyaari lagti ho

Kalyani blushed and said- Maine bhi aapko bahut miss kiya aur aap toh screen se bhi zyada hot hain real life mein

Malhar- Awww thank you…. Ab chalo jaldi chalte hain warna show miss ho jayega

Kalyani- Show???

Malhar- Haan hum pehle movie dekhne jayenge 3 baje ka show hai phir sham ko beech ke pass phir raat ko candle light dinner aur phir ghar

Kalyani- Ghar??

Malhar- Don’t worry apne apne ghar.. Kuch zyada aage tak ka nahi soch leti tum

Kalyani- Aesa kuch nahi hai

Malhar- Acha theek hai ab chalein

Kalyani- Haan chaliye

After that both went from there to the theatre.

Malhar- Aaj na maine bahut achi romantic movie select ki hai hopefully tumhe achi lage

Kalyani- Aap agar saath ho toh sab acha lagta hai aur mujhe aapki choice pe pura bharosa hai

Malhar- Ok chalo

Both were enjoying the movie holding each other hands and Kalyani was resting her head on Malhar’s shoulder and was feeling very lucky to have Malhar in her life.

After the movie got over Malhar asked her how was the movie??

Kalyani- Bahut hi amazing ekdum aapke jaisa… Maine kaha tha mujhe aapke choice pe pura bharosa hai

Malhar- Thanks a lot…. Abhi toh aur bhi bahut kuch plan kiya hai just wait and enjoy

After that both went to the beach side where they were enjoying near the water and Malhar took some water and splashed them at Kalyani at this Kalyani shouted Malhar Ji and ran behind him both were running on the beach just then Kalyani caught Malhar but just then Malhar took her both hands and kept behind his waist and then took her cheeks in his hands and kissed her lips a very slow and loving kiss, at that time sun was setting and a photographer was present just at that moment and he took there picture which was looking very beautiful like two souls which are made for each other were totally lost within themselves and with the setting of the sun they were declaring to the whole world that just like there lips no one can ever make them apart from each other and this sun being the witness of there love to each other.

Soon they parted their lips and were lost in each other eyes, that photographer also took there that picture and then approached to them.

Photographer- Hello Sir… Hello Maam

After listening some voice both broke their eye lock looked at that person, Malhar got tensed that may be this person has recognised him but soon after seeing his expression he realised may be due to a little darkness he might have not recognised him or maybe he actually didn’t know him.

Malhar- Yes

Photographer- Actually Sir maine aap dono ko dekha aur aap dono ekdum ek ideal couple ke examples ho… Look I have taken few pictures of yours sorry I have taken these without your permission but I couldn’t resist it

Just then he showed them there kissing and eye lock pictures, both got very happy and blushed a little and then the photographer asked-

Photographer- If you guys don’t mind kya main yeh pictures apne studio mein laga sakta hun bahut hi pyaari photos hai please

Malhar was feeling a little doubtful but just then Kalyani said- Ek shart par

Photographer- Kaesi shart maam

Kalyani- Aapko yeh photos pehle hume send karni hogi

Photographer smiled and said- Why not maam give me your email id I will immediately send it to you

Just then Malhar pulled Kalyani aside and said- Yeh kya kar rahi ho Kalyani aese kaise hum kisi ko humari photos use karne de sakte hain

Kalyani- Relax Malhar Ji kitni pyaari pictures aayi hain aur waese bhi humare faces clearly visible bhi nahi hai agar koi dhyaan se dekhega tabhi samajh aayega kisiko aur dekhiye na kitna acha aadmi hai saamne se aake humse permission mang raha hai aur kitni achi pictures click ki hai isne yeh chahta toh bina hume inform kiye bhi yeh pictures use kar sakta tha acha aadmi hai use karlene dijiye

Malhar- Acha agar tum kehti ho toh

Photographer- So maam please give me your email- id and thank you very much

Kalyani- Yaa sure and no need to thank…… Actually thanks to you aapne itni pyaari pictures li hain

Photographer- Yeh toh aap dono ka ek dusre ke liye pyaar hai jo iss picture ko itna khoobsoorat bana raha hai warna maine toh sirf right angle se pictures click ki hain.. I will pray ki aap dono ka pyaar aur saath hamesha aesa hi bana rahe

Kalyani and Malhar both hold each other hands and said- Thank You very much, you are really a very nice person

Photographer- Thank You guys now I will take a leave and enjoy your evening and Maam I have mailed you the photos

Kalyani- Ok thanks bye and take care

After that both holding each other hands went near the sea shore and sat there just then Malhar saw a hawker selling bhajiya so he asked Kalyani whether she wants and after getting her assent he went there and brought some for themselves and then both were enjoying the same and Kalyani was holding Malhar’s arms and was resting her head on his shoulder and was looking at the sea waves and then said-

Kalyani- Apko pata hai Malhar Ji aaj ka din mere life ka sabse best din tha itne dinon ka saara stress aur tension in kuch ghanton ne choomantar kar diya…. Thank You very much yeh surprise dene ke liye… Waise aapne yeh sab itne achanak se plan kaese kiya aur kab

Malhar- Maine toh 2 din pehle hi decide kar liya tha ki aaj main tumhare sath hi time spent karunga I was missing you a lot…. Isiliye kal set par call karke keh diya aaj nahi aa paunga aur phir yeh sab plan kar liya

Kalyani- Tabhi aapne mere client office ka address liya aur tabhi aap kal call pe bol rahe the ki kal milte hain

Malhar smiled and said- Haan agar tumhe bata deta toh tum mana kar deti aur mujhe surprise dena tha tumhe aur itni stressed thi tum apne studies and kaam ko leke ki mujhse dekha nahi jaa raha tha issiliye socha zabardasti hi sahi tumhe ek din main rest dilwa ke hi rahunga

Kalyani- I Love You So So Much Malhar Ji main aapko bata bhi nahi sakti ki mujhe kitna acha feel ho raha hai

Malhar- I Love You Too Kalyani

Both were sitting like that only just then Kalyani thought-

Kalyani- Malhar Ji ne mere liye kitna kuch kiya sirf mera mood acha karne ke liye mujhe bhi kuch karna chahiye unke liye

Just then Malhar said- Chalo Kalyani ab hum chalte hain dinner kar lete hain phir tumhe ghar bhi chodhna hai nahi toh late ho jaaogi aur ab toh tumhare parents bhi aa gaye hain toh late hone ka koi bahana bhi nahi de paaogi chalo

Kalyani- Malhar Ji

Malhar- Haan bolo kya hua

Kalyani- Hum dinner aapke ghar par kar sakte hain kya

Malhar got a little shock and said- Haan kyun nahi lekin tumhe shayad late hojayega ghar ke liye phir tumhare parents gussa karenge

Kalyani- Kisne kahan main aaj apne ghar jaana chahti hun, aap hi ne kaha na ki aapko aaj ka pura din mere saath spend karna hai toh usmein raat bhi toh aata hai

Malhar- But tumhare parents

Kalyani- Unki aap chinta mat kariye aapke liye itna toh main kar hi sakti hun unko main mana lungi

Malhar- You are always welcome at my home chalo phir but pehle tum apne parents se baat karlo

Kalyani- Haan rukiye

After 10 minutes Kalyani came to Malhar after talking to her mother.

Kalyani- Chalein

Malhar- Haan lekin tumne kya kaha apni aai se

Kalyani- Kuch nahi, kaha ki office mein aaj bahut kaam hai toh shayad raat ko yahi rukna hoga, pehle toh gussa kiya phir jab kahan ki almost sab koi ruk rahe hain tab man gayi

Malhar- Waah mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum jhooth bolne mein itni pro ho

Kalyani got a little angry and said- Kya matlab

Malhar- Are baba sorry kuch nahi waise yeh batao tumne office mein kya kaha ki unlog ne tumhe itni jaldi nikalne diya

Kalyani- Kuch nahi who aaj Shravan Bhaiya nahi aaye the toh unko bas call karke kaha ki mere sar mein achanak se dard start ho gaya toh mujhe rest chahiye ghar jana hoga toh maangaye waese bhi unko pata hai ki main jaldi se chutti nahi leti toh issiliye zyada kuch nahi kaha

Malhar- Waah… Dekha maine kaha na meri Kalyani jhooth bolne mein pro hai

Kalyani- Ab aesa bhi kuch nahi hai main jaldi se jhooth nahi bolti lekin jab bolti hun toh ekdum aese bolti hun ki koi pakad na paaye

Malhar- Chalo ab chalte hain phir ghar jaake ke humare liye kuch khaane ko bhi banana hai

Kalyani- Nahi aap ghar jaake kuchnahi banayenge main aapke saath time spend karne jaa rahi hun naaki aapse kaam karwane, hum pass mein hi kisi restaurant se kuch lete hue chalte hain

Malhar- Ok Maam your wish is my command

Kalyani smiled and said- Ab chaliye

Both after picking up their order went to Malhar’s home, they had there romantic candle light dinner with some soothing music then Kalyani helped Malhar in cleaning up everything which he was continuously denying and asking her to rest but she refused-

Malhar- Chodh do na Kalyani main kar lunga tum rest karo

Kalyani- Nahi Malhar Ji please mujhe aapki help karne dijiye agar aap nahi karne denge toh main phir kabhi aapke ghar nahi aaungi

Malhar- Acha baba theek hai karo

When Kalyani was washing dishes Malhar came behind her and grabbed her waist and started to kiss her on her neck and said- Thank You mere aaj ke din ko aur khoobsoorat banane ke liye mere ghar aake mere saath rukne ke liye

Kalyani- Ismein thank you kaesa aapne humare liye itna kuch plan kiya itna toh main kar hi sakti hun thanks to you mujhe itna special feel karane ke liye

Malhar smiled and grabbed her tightly and started to kiss her behind her back but soon stopped as he thought he was getting a bit carried away and didn’t want to make anything awkward between them so he left but this doesn’t go well will Kalyani and thought- Yeh MalharJi ko kya ho gaya achanak. Soon after finishing every work both went to sleep when Kalyani was adjusting the bed for both of them just then Malhar picked up his pillow and said-

Malhar- Main aaj sofe pe hi so jata hun tum aaram se yahan so

Kalyani- Kyun Malhar Ji humari is baare mein baat ho chuki hai na

Malhar- Haan lekin aaj acha hoga agar main yahan na soun

Kalyani- Yeh kya ho gaya aapko achanak se Malhar Ji mujhse koi galti ho gayi kya kitchen se bhi aap achanak se chale gaye

Malhar- Tumse kuch nahi hua hai Kalyani Wohh…

Kalyani- Woh kya jaldi boliye nahi toh main abhi yahan se chali jaaogi

Malhar- Woh mujhe lagta hain main shayad aaj khud ko control na kar paaun aur main nahi chahta humare beech kuch bhi awkward ho. Main nahi chahta ki tumhe lage ki main tumse sirf physically attracted hun main tumse pyaar karta hun aur main kuch bhi kharab nahi karna chahta

Kalyani went near Malhar and took his hand and sat on the bed with him and said- Aapko mujhe koi bhi explanation dene ki zaroorat nahi hai Malhar Ji mujhe ache se pata hai ki aap mujhse kitna pyaar karte hain aur agar aaj humare beech kuch hota bhi hai toh mere liye who humara ek dusre ko pyaar karna hoga naaki kisi bhi tarah ki awkwardness main bhi aapse pyaar karti hun toh aapke baare mein agar aesa sochti hun toh iska matlab yahi hoga ki maine kabhi aapse pyaar hi nahi kiya toh khud ko itna guilty mat feel karwaiye aur chaliye so jayiye

Malhar got emotional and hugged her and both got into the bed to sleep, but while sleeping Kalyani faced Malhar and hold him closely with this Malhar also got close to her and in no time kissed her and soon they were indulged in a passionate kiss and Malhar was roaming his hands behind Kalyani’s back and Kalyani was also doing the same but soon Malhar released her and saw in her eyes and asked-

Malhar- Are you sure?? If you want we can wait…

Kalyani- I am 100% sure…. I love you and nothing can change this

After listening this Malhar hugged her tightly and said- I love you very much Kalyani. Soon both of there clothes were lying down and they made love to each other and after few hours slept in each others embrace with the thought that no one can ever separate them and with each passing seconds their love for each other will only increase.

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Yaar Shruti I was soooooooooo eagerly waiting for your update Sacchi!!!!!!! Bohot hi zyada intezaar tha!!! Thank you so so so much for updating… padhke batati hoon Kaisa laga😘😘😘

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This update is love Shruti it’s pure love!!! Itnaaaa pyaaraaaaa!!!! Mera toh dil aagaya yaar!!! The chemistry between them feels so genuine. Tum aise hi likhti raho yaar, tum chemistry ko perfectly portray kar paa rahi ho. Loved every bit.

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Originally posted by: Jara567

This update is love Shruti it’s pure love!!! Itnaaaa pyaaraaaaa!!!! Mera toh dil aagaya yaar!!! The chemistry between them feels so genuine. Tum aise hi likhti raho yaar, tum chemistry ko perfectly portray kar paa rahi ho. Loved every bit.

Thank You Very Much for liking my story and for the appreciation. I am glad I am able convey my feelings and thoughts about love.

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This is so beautiful Shruti..

Magical..❤️❤️❤️❤️

Such a pure love both have for each other.

Photographer captured such a beautiful moment❤️❤️❤️❤️

Aur last part was so damn pure...

I just loved it....waiting for more.❣️❣️❣️❣️

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Originally posted by: rekha_crm

This is so beautiful Shruti..

Magical..❤️❤️❤️❤️

Such a pure love both have for each other.

Photographer captured such a beautiful moment❤️❤️❤️❤️

Aur last part was so damn pure...

I just loved it....waiting for more.❣️❣️❣️❣️

Thanks a lot😊 But have you read Chapter- 9

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Originally posted by: shrutiberlia

Thanks a lot😊 But have you read Chapter- 9


Oops my bad...

Maine seedha 10th pad liya...

Thanks for telling me.

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Pad liya chapter 9..

Awesome❣️❣️

What cute conversations they're having...

Their possessiveness and love for each other is so beautiful. 

Kalyani teasing Malharji. 😆

Aur phir woh use bhi mila..

Aww...Malhar is ready to announce but when will Kallu be ready..dekhte hain..

And I loved how he respects her dedication towards her work and also her decision to wait for some time to announce their relationship. 

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Originally posted by: rekha_crm


Oops my bad...

Maine seedha 10th pad liya...

Thanks for telling me.

No problem mereko laga hi issiliye kaha👍🏼