Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho RanVeer,Agastya Pakhi FS

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Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho... I have your hands in mine...Part 1

 




I dedicate this FS to Pari who wants a VeeRani/RanVeer story from me.I thank my friend Shesha who gave me an idea from a Pocket FM story named Something Something in tamil to write this story.I don’t know the story of that series.So the whole story is my imagination.

Credit for the AgaKhi collages goes to the unknown editor.

A cremation was going on.A young girl was crying.She was Rani.

Rani:Maa!

Her best friend Pakhi told her mother Anupriya:Maa,we say that only good things happen to good people.Then why did this happen to Rani?

Anupriya:I don’t know why this poor girl is suffering.I can’t bear her pain.

Anupriya’s husband Arjun said:We have to support Rani in her difficult times.

Pakhi went near Rani and held her hand painfully.

Pakhi:Rani…

Rani hugged Pakhi and cried.

Rani said weeping:The only person I had in this world was my mother.I lost her also.I am alone now.

Anupriya:You are not alone.You have us.We have always considered you as my daughter.So now onwards you will stay with us.

Rani could not believe her ears.

Rani:How can I?

Pakhi:Why not Rani?We are best friends and not less than friends.

Arjun:Daughters stay with their parents.Right?When you are our daughter,you should stay in our home.Right?

Rani shed tears emotionally and Pakhi hugged her.

 

 

Rani shifted to Pakhi’s house.

Rani was gloomy.

 

Arjun:You took the right decision to bring Rani here.Otherwise loneliness would have killed her.

Anupriya:I hope our home atmosphere will help her forget her pain.

Arjun:Definitely we will make her happy again.

After a week…

Pakhi:Rani,I told you about my brother Veer.He is returning from US.

Rani gave her a pale smile.

Rani:I am glad that your brother is also joining you.

Pakhi smiled.

After few days…

Rani was walking lost in sad thoughts.Suddenly she bumped into someone.She just slipped and that person held her tight.They stared at each other.

Maine Baazi Prem Ki
Kheli Tere Sang
Jeet Gayi Woh Rang Tera
Jo Mein Haari Toh Berang
Jo Mein Haari Toh Berang

Ishq Ne Ishq Se
Koyi Baat Na Puchhi
Jo Do Dilo Ne Ki
Suruat Na Puchhi

Kon Hai Sasta Yanha
Aur Kon Hai Mehanga
Rishto Ki Iss Ne
Aukat Na Puchhi

Kismat Toh Siyahi Se
Likhi Jaati Nahi
Agar Likh Jaye Toh
Woh Rehe Pati Nahi

He released her from his hands.

He:Are you alright?

Rani:Yes,I am alright.

He:You are Rani.Right?

Rani was surprised.

Rani:How did you recognize me?

He:Pakhi always talks to me about you.She also told me that you are here now.By the way,do you know who I am?

Rani:Veer!At first sight itself I had recognized you.Pakhi had shown her brother’s photograph to me.

He smiled.

Pakhi came there.

Pakhi:So finally both of you met each other.

Veer:Yes.Finally we did meet each other.

They smiled.

 

 

Rani was sitting and thinking of her lost family.

Veer sat near her.

Veer:What are you thinking Rani?

Rani was silent.

Veer:You are thinking of your lost parents.Right?

Rani became upset.

Veer:Rani,we can’t replace the family you lost.But we can give you the love and happiness you got from your late parents.Won’t you accept us?

Rani nodded emotionally.

Rani:I have always considered Arjun uncle and Anupriya aunty as my parents.Pakhi is my everything.

Veer smiled.

Veer:And me?

Rani was silent.

Veer:Will you become my friend?

Rani smiled:Yes.

Veer and Rani smiled at each other.

Hay! Kyun Kho Diya
Humne Jiya
kya Kar Diya

Tera Tu Hi Jaane Bhaid Piya
Mein Teri Huyi Rangrez Piya
Tera Tu Hi Jaane Bhaid Piya
Mein Teri Huyi Rangrez Piya

Teri Huyi Rangrez Piya Ji
Teri Huyi Rangrez
Teri Huyi Rangrez Piya Ji
Mein Toh Huyi Rangrez(Apna time bhi ayega).

 

 

Pakhi got a voice message:Pakhi....your Agastya is coming.

Pakhi became so excited that she ran out of her house.

Pakhi reached a ground.She could see a helicopter in the air.Agastya looked out of the helicopter passing a smile to her.She smiled at him happily.

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Dil Yeh Tere Bina
Maanta Hi Nahi
Kuch Bhi Tere Siwa
Maangta Hi Nahi

Agastya threw flower petals at her.She was amazed by the flower fall on her.

She twirled around as the flower petals fell over her.

Tu Zaroori Sa Hai
Ab Toh Har Haal Mein
Iske Aage Koi
Raasta Hi Nahi

Aaa Tujhme Fanaah
Kar Doon Meri Zindagi

The helicopter reached the ground and Agastya came out.Pakhi looked at him happily.

Iss Ishq Mein Marjawan
Kuch Bhi Kasam Se Karjawan
Hadh Se Bhi Guzarjawan
Kuch Bhi Kasam Se Karjawan

 Agastya came towards Pakhi pulling her closer.

Ishq Mein Marjawan
Ishq Mein Marjawan

Agastya:How was my surprise?

Pakhi:It was beautiful Agastya.You made my day.

He smiled.

Yeh Pyar Hai Ya Phir Mujhko
Junoon Hai Tera
Tere Ishq Pe Sabse Zyada
Haq Hai Mera

They embraced each other.

Yeh Zid Hai Toh
Zid Se Hi Kya Pata
Bas Tu Rahe
Har Gham Mera

Iss Ishq Mein Marjawan
Kuch Bhi Kasam Se Karjawan
Hadh Se Bhi Guzarjawan
Kuch Bhi Kasam Se Karjawan

Ishq Mein Marjawan
Ishq Mein Marjawan
Ishq Mein Marjawan…(
Fanaa Ishq Mein Marjawan Title Song).



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Posted: 2 years ago

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Thanks for pm..... very nice chapter

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Congrats on the FS

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Congratulations on your new FS


Love the Title 


Part 1


Mind Blowing Start 

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Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho… I have your hands in mine…Part2

Diwali came.

Anupriya gave a dress to Rani.

Anupriya:Rani,I hope you will like it.You wear this for the Diwali celebration.

Rani was silent.Anupriya left.

Pakhi:You wear this Rani.You will look pretty in this dress.

Rani did not show any interest in the festival.

Rani:I don’t want to celebrate it Pakhi.I am not coming for the Diwali party.

Pakhi:Rani…please come yaar…

Rani:I don’t feel like celebrating Pakhi.You know why.Right?

Pakhi became upset.She caressed her head and left.

Veer who overheard this went near her.

Veer:I know that you are not in a mood to do any celebration.But Rani…your life is not empty.We are there with you.There is pain in your life.But you should not allow pain to rule you.You should throw out your pain and move on.The first stepping stone should be becoming a part of celebrations.Be a part of Diwali with us.Because I..I mean we genuinely want to see you happy.Because sad face does not suit you.

Rani smiled:You are right.I should throw out my pain and move on atleast for all of you who genuinely want me to be happy.

Veer smiled.

Veer:So tell me..will you celebrate Diwali with us?

Rani smiled:Yes.

Veer smiled happily.

 

 

Pakhi was dressing up in her room.Agastya came inside and embraced her from behind.

She was surprised.

Dil Yeh Tere Bina
Maanta Hi Nahi
Kuch Bhi Tere Siwa
Maangta Hi Nahi

Pakhi:Agastya!How come you are here?

Agastya:You are forgetting that my future In laws invited me also for the party.

She smiled.

Agastya:By the way you are looking very beautiful.

Pakhi blushed.

Tu Zaroori Sa Hai
Ab Toh Har Haal Mein
Iske Aage Koi
Raasta Hi Nahi

Aaa Tujhme Fanaah
Kar Doon Meri Zindagi(Fanaa Ishq Mein Marjawan Title Song).

Her duppatta started flowing down.She tried to pin it.

Agastya:I will pin it.

Pakhi:I will do it.

Agastya:No,I will do it.

He tried to pin it and he could not do it properly.

Pakhi started laughing.

Pakhi:You talked as if you are an expert in dressing up women.But you can’t even pin something properly.

Agastya got irritated.

Agastya:Stop teasing me Pakhi.I swear..after marriage,everyday I will dress you up and I will become an expert in it.

Pakhi pulled his cheeks and said:You are so cute Agastya..

He smiled.They both giggled.

 

 

Rani wore the dress Anupriya gifted her and went to the Diwali party.Veer was mesmerized by Rani’s beauty.

Pakhi was surprised to see Rani.She walked towards Rani and hugged her.

Pakhi:I am so happy that you came for the Diwali party Rani.

Arjun:We were waiting for you Rani.Pakhi had no hope.But we were sure that our Rani will be a part of our happiness.

Rani smiled.

Anupriya:Rani,you look very pretty in this dress.Like I imagined,this is really suiting you.

Rani smiled.

Rani:Agastya,good that you returned after your meeting in Dubai.Pakhi really missed you.

Agastya:I also missed her a lot.

Agastya and Pakhi smiled at each other.

Agastya held her hand and said:Pakhi,I promise you that I will not go away from you again.

Even if it’s for a meeting I will take you along with me.

She held her face sweetly with a smile.

He held held her hand

and pressed his lips on her palm.

Rani:They love each other so much.I realized the beauty of love after seeing their love.

Veer:You are right.Their love is very beautiful.

 

 

Rani and Veer were lighting the oil lamps together.

Veer:You know Rani…?

Rani:What?

Veer:You look gorgeous in this dress.

Rani blushed:Thank you.

Jo Rang Tera Mujhpe Chada Woh
Rang Kabhi Na Chhutega
Jiss Dhage Ne Humein Bhandha Woh
Dhaga Kabhi Na Tutega
Mein Mausam Nahi Jo Badlunga
Lamho Ki Tarah Na Guzrunga

Tu Pal Bhar Jahan Theher Jaye
Mein Puri Umar Wahi Thehrunga
Haye! Kyun Kho Diya Humne Jiya
Kya Kar Diya

 

 

Rani was looking at the mirror.She realized that her chain was missing from her neck.

Rani:My chain…

Suddenly she saw Veer near her.

Veer:Here is your chain.

Rani saw the chain in his hand.She was relieved.

Veer:I got it from the floor.

Rani:Thank you very much Veer.

Veer:Why were you so worried about this chain?

Rani:Because it’s gifted by my mother on my last birthday.Today I really missed my mother,that’s why I wore it.

Veer:If you don’t tie the chain properly,it will fall down.

Rani was embarrassed.

Veer:But I will put the chain for you properly.

Rani was surprised.Before she could say anything,he placed the chain around her neck.

She smiled.


Tera Tu Hi Jaane Bhaid Piya
Hum Tere Huye Rangrez Piya
Tera Tu Hi Jaane Bhaid Piya
Hum Tere Huye Rangrez Piya

Tere Huye Rangrez Piya Hum
Tere Huye Rangrez
Tere Huye Rangrez Piya Hum
Tere Huye Rangrez(Apna time ayega).


After a month…

Arjun:I have decided that Rani will also join Veer in the office.

Anupriya and Veer were happy.

Anupriya:You took the right decision Arjun.

Pakhi:Wow!Pakhi will join our office.So exciting!

Rani was tensed.

Rani:How can I?

Pakhi:Why not Rani?You were the most studious student.Then why are you hesitant?

Veer:Pakhi is right.You had a reason to be away from your career.But now it’s time for you to think about your career.

Arjun:If you have any other interest then…

Rani:No…nothing like that.I think I should come out of grief and engage in something.

They smiled.

 

 

Rani and Veer were in the car.

Veer:Are you tensed?

Rani:A little bit as I have no experience.

Veer:I will help you.Don’t worry.

Rani smiled.

In the office Veer helped Rani in the beginning and she picked up quickly.

 

 

Veer massaged her legs when her legs got sprained.

Ho tohra saajan ayo tore desh

Badli badra badla saavan

Badla jag ne bhes re

Tohra saajan ayo tore desh

 

Soyi soyi palkho pe chalke

Mere sapno ke khidki pe aa gaya

Aate jaate phir mere dil ke

Inn haathon mein woh khat pakda gaya

Pyar ka… lafzo mein rang hai pyar ka


Veer and Rani enjoyed eating snacks together at the street shop.

 


Bahara bahara

Hua dil pehli baar ve

Bahara bahara

Ke chain toh huwa farar ve

Bahara bahara

Hua dil pehli pehli baar ve

Rani applied Tiger Balm on Veer's neck.He felt it soothing.

Ho tohra saajan ayo tore desh

Badli badra badla saavan

Badla jag ne bhes re

Tohra saajan ayo tore desh

 

Woh kabhi dike zameen pe

Kabhi woh chand pe

Yeh… nazar kahe usse yahan

Mein rakhloo bandh ke

Ek saans mein

Dhadkano ke paas mein

Haan paas mein ghar banaye

Hai bhoole yeh jahaan

 

Bahara bahara

Hua dil pehli baar ve

Bahara bahara

Rani slipped down from the stool and she screamed 

She realized that she fell in Veer's arms.

They looked at each other deeply.

Ke chain toh huwa farar ve

Bahara bahara

Hua dil pehli pehli baar ve


Rani imagined having dinner date with Veer and blushed.

 

Preet mein tori ore saawariya

Payal jaise chanke bijuriya

Cham cham naache tan pe badariya

Hooo..hoo hoo…

 

Baadaliya tu bharse ghano

(bharse ghano..bharse ghanoo)

 

Aaa..aa..aaa..

 

Rani imagined Veer holding her hand and confessing his love to her.

Jo… yeh badliyan woh chhed de

Toh chalke baarishein

Woh.. de aahate kareeb se

Toh bole khwaishen he aaj kal

Zindagi har ek pal

Har ek pal usse chaahe

Hai jiska dil hua

 

Bahara bahara

Hua dil pehli baar ve

Bahara bahara

Ke chain toh huwa farar ve

Bahara bahara

Hua dil pehli pehli baar ve

 

Soyi soyi palkho pe chalke

Mere sapno ke khidki pe aa gaya

Aate jaate phir mere dil ke

Inn haathon mein woh khat pakda gaya

Pyar ka… lafzo mein rang hai pyar ka


Rani imagined cute hugs and eye lock with Veer.






 Bahara bahara

Hua dil pehli baar ve

Bahara bahara

Ke chain toh huwa farar ve

Bahara bahara

Hua dil pehli pehli baar ve

 

Ho tohra saajan ayo tore desh

Badli badra badla saavan

Badla jag ne bhes re

Tohra saajan ayo tore desh (I Hate Luv Storys).






Rani ran out of her room to see Veer.But there she saw Veer with a girl.

Rani asked Pakhi:Who is that?

Pakhi:She is Kiara.She was Veer bhaiyya’s childhood friend.We tease Veer bhaiyya saying that Kiara is his childhood love because both Kiara and Veer bhaiyya used to say in childhood that they will get married when they become adults.

Rani’s heart was broken into pieces.


Thanks a lot friends


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Part 2


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Awesome and beautiful part

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