A short poem on Dr Deepika Sinha

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Bihar me rehti thi ek ladki,

Thi wo pyaari si, bholi-bhali si

Surgeon banne ka tha junoon sawar,

Karti thi wo ek ladke se pyaar

Mummy Papa ki dulaari thi,

College ki wo topper thi


Tha uska ek hi sapna,

Dr Deepika Sinha banna


Bas hone hi wale the uske sapne pure,

Ki shaadi ke 1 hafte pehle hua kuch aisa jisse uske saamne aa gaya apne pyaar ka asli chehra

Jisse usne chaha apne Dil -O-Jaan se,

Uss Vikrant ne cheen liya usse uska sapna


Jab pyaar ki patti aakhon se utri,

Tab usne liya ek bada faisla

Todkar Vikrant se rishta,

Chal padi wo pura karne apna sapna


Pyaar to choota hi tha,

Mummy Papa ne bhi usse kar diya paraaya

Sirf dukh hi jhelein usne,

Kisi ne usse na apnaya


Aaj 10 saal baad,

Aaa gayi hai wo FMS hospital ki taqdeer badalne


Par kya wo apne ateet ke paas laut jaaegi ya ek naye rishte ko apnaegi??



"Ateet" is Vikrant and "Naya Rishta" is Abhay

Tried something new. I know it's not much good....you all give your opinion on this😁

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Posted: 2 years ago
#2

Woah!

That's beautiful 💕

Like how're you folks so talented to be able to craft poems

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Thanks for the tag. Beautifully written. 😍

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Posted: 2 years ago
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What a beautiful poem 😊

Well done ❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumaishu

Thanks for the tag. Beautifully written. 😍

Welcome and Thanks😁❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Wow yaar..❤️ Now I feel I'm really talentless..🤣 I hope naya rishta ko hi apnaaye Dr.Deepika Sinha..😳😆

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: DEBOLINA96

Wow yaar..❤️ Now I feel I'm really talentless..🤣 I hope naya rishta ko hi apnaaye Dr.Deepika Sinha..😳😆

Thanks🤗

And no one is talentless dear😉

Waise whole world wants ki wo naye rishte ko apnaaye😳😂

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Posted: 2 years ago
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This is deep and intense. Sums up Deepika's story and her struggles.

Without a doubt you have talent in writing. The way you play with words totally in rythm with each other....just beautiful.


Don't stop here, plz write more 🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: DreamyButterfly

This is deep and intense. Sums up Deepika's story and her struggles.

Without a doubt you have talent in writing. The way you play with words totally in rythm with each other....just beautiful.


Don't stop here, plz write more 🤗

Awww thanks dear🤗

Yeah I am interested in writing🖋️🖋️ Will write more😳

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Absolutely beautiful Mariyam. This describes Deepika so well ❤️❤️

Well written 👏👏👏

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