Kalma os ::-" hum kaha khooooo gayein..." chapter 2 :-19-08-2022

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                   Kalma os ::-" hum kaha khooo gayein .."


Kalyani is preparing lunch for moksh in kitchen ...moksh her son her lifeline because of whom she is still alive .. otherwise the bitterness which her life gave ..she will be dead today ... Having a sigh of relief, she takes out the garlic bread from pan and serves it in plate ..wiping a lone tear she smilingly remember how Malhar also used to like this breakfast made by her ..he always praised her for her cooking skills ..his one word for her praising is like a Honeydew to her ... suddenly she listens that her child got ready and is waiting for her on breakfast table ..putting a small smile she gives him his breakfast there ...

Moksh gets happy seeing his breakfast and gives a big cheek kiss to his mother ..

Moksh ::" aai you are best ..ye kitna tasty hai ..aapko kaise pata ki aaj mera ye khaane ka maan tha ...maine to aapko bataya hi nhi .." 

Kalyani ::" bataya nhi to ye thori hai ki mujhein apne bete ki baat pata hi nhi chalegi ..ek aai ko humesha uskein baby ki baat pata chal jati hai samjha mera pillu .." she said while ruffling his soft hairs 

Moksh::" aai ye mere baal aise mat karo ..mera hairstyle kharab ho jayega ..aur phir shikha mujhsein baat bhi nhi karegi ..maine uskein liye chocolate bhi rakhi hai ..aaj main usko doonga lunch main .." 

Kalyani controlled her laugh listen his cute talks and pulls his cheeks softly ...after doing their breakfast she tells mahesh to take care of the house ..and making him wear his bag...she takes her purse also ..

Sitting in a car she told driver to drive to moksh school first ..in meantime moksh revised his chapter for test ...and she contact her manager for today's schedule of her .. when she puts her phone down ..moksh question shocks her ..

Moksh ::" aai apne kaha tha ki aai ko apne baccho ki baat pata chal jati hai ekdum to kya baba ko nahi pta chal jati hai ..main to humesha bappa sein pray karta hoon ki vo mujhein mere baba sein mila dein lekin vo to kabhi humsein milne aatein hi nhi .." 

Listening moksh it feels like kalyani heart is having so many holes and her started to bleed .. controlling her emotions ..she by putting a straight face 

Kalyani ::" pillu aisa nhi hai baccha ..baba bhi apne bacchon sein bohot pyaar karte hai maine bataya tha naa aapko ki baba ek bohot important mission pein hai isliye vo aapsein milne nhi aasaktein ..jaise hi unka vo mission khatam hoga naa ..vo jaldi sein aayenge tujhsein milne ..pinki promise .." 

Moksh sadly nodded his head and left for his school ..kalyani hurriedly reached his office ..as she knew that she will get her peace in her work only ..after attending her lined up meetings ..she take a small break ..and sipping her coffer she remembers that beautiful memories of him and her which she still could not forget and will never even forget in any circumstances..

Flashback ..

Kalyani used to loved plants so much ..her house is always fills with the plants .. that day also she is going to take her favourite marigold plant ..when she crosses the road suddenly by the slipper she is going to slip there but then she suddenly feels liks pair of strong arms grabbed her tightly in his grip and she got saved from falling ..her eyes are closed and her small body is shivering badly in fear ...but after feeling a sense of security she opens her eyes to see the dark orbs staring with a intense gaze in which she is melting ..the man got mesmerized by the beauty in his arms ..the serenity of her in that white suite and her silky soft flying hairs in air. .feels like she is a princess which gets down from heaven ...but suddenly listening the car horns sound they both comes out from their dreamland .. she straight herself from his arms and after standing they both stared each other .. her lips feels like they forget lipsing and her voice betrayed .the same is happening with him ..he also could not able to say anything to him ...

Kalyani after a great difficulty opens her mouth and in soft voice thanked him 

Kalyani ::' thank you..agr aaj aap nhi aatein mujhein bachane to main aur meri ye cute sa plangir jata aur hum dono ko chot aajati ..thank a lot mr." 

Malhar::" Malhar .. myself Malhar rane .. acp of aurangabad...it's ok but haan aapko sambhal kein chalna chahiye vo to main tha varna aap sachmain gir jaati ..main to yahan petrolling kein liye aaya tha par jaise aapko dekha girte huein to agaya ..lekin mujhein nhi pata tha ki insaano kein saath saath podhon ko bhi chot lagti hai ..ms.." he said teasingly

Kalyani :" ohh ..myself kalyani ..kalyani deshmukh ..ji ..mr .rane inhein bhi chot lagti hai ..aree bhalein hi ye kuch bol nhi saktien lekin saans paani hawa khaana to ye bhi lete haina ..vaise aapko dekhkar lagta nhi hai ki aapko ped podhon main kuch khaas dilchaspi hai .." 

Malhar :" haan kuch aisa hi samajh lijiye ..par aapko dekhkar lagta hai ki aapki jaan basti hai inmein ..kheir aajsein pehle humein naa phol bhatein naa ye mitti ki saugandh..lekin waqt nein kiya kuch ye haseen sitam ki shayad kuch badal sa gaya humarein andar. ." 

Both stares each other lovingly listening that love shayari .. though that's their first meet ..but when the pairs are decided they keep meeting ..same happened with them .. though both leave a strong impact on each other ..but could not register their feeling for each other ..but as that they Malhar gives his no . To her for emergency so she keep if safe ..and from the day they meet ..they both started to feel like a empty place in their heart which needs to be fulfilled by eachother..calling each other to doing a long chat in night becomes their routine soon this gets changed to drinking tea in their near tapri ...to enjoying lunch in his or her favourite restaurant...their comfort ness turns gradually increase.. 

                                                                                            

On other side 

With bitterness a man is getting ready there ..like everyday he today also didn't even smiled a bit.. Wearing his watch ..giving a look in mirror he left for the hall ..

Anupriya::" malhar nashta to karte jao ..khaali pet ghar sein nhi nikaltein hai ..kuch khaakein jao ..aise acha nhi lagta .." 

Malhar ::" mujhein bhook nhi maan karega..to main khaa loonga ..behtar rahega aap log dinner pein mera intezar naa karein .." 

He left from there leaving his family there eating on table ..

Aausaheb::" jane do anupriya..apni nafrat ki aag main ye itna jal chuka hai ki issein sahi aur galat kuch nhi dikhata ...jisne apni jindagi apni biwi sabkuch paraya kar diya ek jhooth ki buniyad pein uska haal ye nhi hoga to kya hoga .." 

All family got sad remembering that same incident again which happened that 5 years ago 

Anurpiya::" jaanti hoon .. aausaheb lekin kya karoon beta hai mera vo ..maa hoon uski kya karoon uskein aansoon dekhkein nhi raha jaata ...jaanti hoon apni haalat ka vo khud jimmedar hai par ..

Sarthak ::" aap log ye sab choriyein ...maine bataya tha na anupriya maine kalyani ka pata lagane kein liye lagaya tha ussein kuch pata chalaa hai vo aaj batana bhi chatha hai humein ... janata hoon ussein wada kiya hai ki kalyani ka naam bhi koi nhi lega lekin uskein saamne nahi lenge lekin apni beti ko aise thori chor denge hum sab ... " 

Nodding their head they done their breakfast...

In police station 

After discussing some important case all leave his cabin ..after sometime  the peon give his tea and left the room ..

Going near the window he started to sipp his tea .. looking outside of it he remembered something seeing that drizzling , a lone tear suddenly escapes from his eyes ..

Flashback 

Kalyani ::" malharji...mujhein baarish pasand hai , aap mujhein aise nhi rok saktein ...main jaungi .." 

Malhar ::" acha jaakein dikhai ..pulling her towards him by her waist.." apni inn bahon main kaid karkein rakhoonga .. kalyani pls baccha samjah naa tujhein pata haina jab tum aise baarish main bheegti hoo bimar pad jaati hoon.., main tumhein aise tumhari tabiyat bigadne nhi doonga .." 

Kalyani ::" malharji .." by puffing his mouth 

Malhar ::" hmm...vaise kalyani aise mausam main pata hai aur kuch bhi hota hai ...aaj main tumhein kuch aur bhi sikhata hoon .." 

Kalyani confusedly asked him about that but suddenly he dims the light  and putting curtains and whispered in her ears .

Malhar::" let me have dance with my beautiful wife tonight...let's make it our memorable night.." 

Blushing due to his comments she hugged him tightly..smiling on his wife ..they with soft music adjust their to it.  Kissing her collarbone ..he reached to her waist and pinch it slightly..making her moan in his mouth..as he started to play with her tongue softly fighting for dominance with her ..

Kalyani grips gets tighter on his collar as he puts her on bed and soon their clothes gets discarded making soft and gentle love to each other ..they sleep in each other arms peacefully...

After dating a lot to each other .., Malhar and kalyani got married to each other in mandir ...being an acp of City he run away with his wife to get marry ..as kalyani mom is a well reputed businessman of pune but due to her work she is leaving with her daughter in Aurangabad...after kalyani's father demise her mother madhuri handled his business and reached to a top level lists of businesses .. kalyani is always proud of her mother ...but being a single heir of her mother business she still don't have much interest in that ..she wants to purse her career in dancing and singing but knowing her mother strict nature well .. she mostly help her mother in business... Madhuri loved her daughter a lot but she wants her daughter to be successful in business like her as she knew that her dancing and singing passion will not take her to anything.. and when she gets to know about her and Malhar marriage decision..she strictly denied it  thinking that a police man will never keep her happy as like atul lost his life in that plane crash and she have to live alone and take care of kalyani herself..she dont want that life for her daughter in which she very well knew that a police officer life if full of danger and threats...but kalyani for the first time in her life goes against her mother and decided to elope with Malhar to marry ..Malhar is a nice man who loves his duty very much .. for his country he can leave anybody ..his passion to join police force is only his dream from childhood as listening that news and seeing the old police officer work who even gave their life for nation borns a patriotism in him. ..his family is an educated family who loved each one with pure heart ...they even accept kalyani wholeheartedly after her mother break all ties with her after marriage..they are living happy life but suddenly Malhar have to leave for an important mission ..kalyani with half heart send him for that but being a proud wife she even is happy that how her husband all life Is revolved around his country...

But in that time many enemies arise for Malhar ...as in city a well has to be cleaned as due to it in slum areas the impure water is supplying ...buf the person who are stopping this work are hell angry ..so to take revenge from Malhar as he baned their comission which they are receiving for it ..joined hands with his old enemy mahir Goenka ..in some age he is to be his best friend but as Malhar started to recive success in his career ..he started to hate him as he got lower post from Malhar as Malhar got acp post in Gadchiroli first ..but he got just an officer post in nasik ..always from childhood he is good academies..all justs like Malhar very much ..his name always hide mahir identity ..but they even continue their friendship then also but after seeing how he always loose his opportunity because of Malhar he started to hate him as he breaks all ties with him ..Malhar got shocked seeing such negative thoughts for their friendship in him ..he even comes from Gadchiroli to nasik to just make him understand..but he didn't listen anything and even he tries to kill Malhar there ..seeing such things he broke down completely only his best friend today betrayed him ..their rivalry started when mahir also becomes acp of pune at that time and he in Aurangabad..the issued always heated up and board members always have to call them separately to discuss something but after Malhar marriage thing got changed neither they interact with each other nor they meet but after those people contact mahir to join hands with them to take revenge from Malhar ..mahir didn't leave that opportunity and knowing how he loved his wife truly he thinks to make his life hell as Malhar gone out of station for his mahir ..mahir used this opportunity to create misunderstanding between them and as kalyani knew nothing about him as Malhar didn't want to tense her by anything...

Mahir meets her first time in market by saving her from accident.. which is planned by him only as kalyani is crossing road suddenly a truck fasten it's speed to hit her ...kalyani thanked him but as she is feeling low suddenly he even offers her for a coffee with him ..like this with some way or other he started to meet him and one day as all family members had to go ij their relative wedding but as Kalyani is not feeling well so she denied to go anurpiya insisted to look after her ..but she send them all by requesting to enjoy as soon she will get well by resting and even mahesh is there if something will be needed she will take from him ..but after they leave mahesh also has to leave as his daughter gets faint in home due to high fever she sends with some money and tells him to take care of her daughter first ...but using this opportunity mahir enters in her room but kalyani didn't like his sudden entry at this time when no one is at home .. but as a polite gesture she goes to make tea for him he also takes out many photos knowingly or unknowingly of their previous meetings ...and today as she brings drink she with carefulness drops a medicine of faintness in her tea ..and by drinking that tea she suddenly gets fainted there using this opportunity he clicks some intimate poses of them ..and after that he make her lay on sofa properly there ....

But after that day Malhar is eager to meet his wife and as he is coming ..kalyani when got up that morning thinking her weakness due to her illness as when family comes from the wedding they only makes her wake up ..but as malhar comes home all things got broken ..he gets a package of something referring to his name ..and when he opens the inside letter which stated that mahir and kalyani loved each other and oif he didn't believe then see these pictures and seeing that he turns into a red bloody murderer ..he forgot all things after that only one thing remember in his mind that he had to ask kalyani about this ...

Suddenly the drizzling makes him come out of his thoughts..when a drop hit his face ..the drops of rain which are showering on him from outside and his tears got mixed ....taking out his purse he takes out a photo from the inside corner of his purse and stares it moistly ..

Caressing it slowly he said .." kyun ..kalyani kyun tumne mujhein dhoka diya kya kami chodi thi maine ..batao sabkuch diya tumhein..ek parivar ..pyaar paisa sabkuch ..phir kya reh gaya tha aisa jo tumhein mujhsein nhi uss mahir ..uss mahir sein mila kyun ...duniya ko main kehta hoon I hate you main bohot nafrat karta hoon ..lekin ..haan karta hoon main tumsein bohot nafrat nhi dekhna chahta tumhari shakal kabhi ..

Suddenly due to strong wind the photo started to fly from his hand but gripping it tightly be hugged it to his chest ..and cries 

Lekin main tumhein khooo bhi nhi sakta ..kyunki tumsein itna pyaar jo karta hoon ...kyun kalyani kyun aisa kar rahi hoon ...ahhha .." 

But suddenly a peon knocked the cabin wiping his tears and keeping that photo in his purse again ..he commands him to come inside 

" Sir vo ...mahir sahab aapsein milne aayein humne mana bhi kiya ..lekin keh rahien hai aaj aapsein milna bohot jarrori hai ..aur jaa bhi nhi rahein yahan sein .." 

He clutch his finger tightly and turning into a grip his face got hardened ...but closing his eyes for once 

Malhar ::" ussein andar bhejo ..aur kahon...kissi commissioner sein milne aise kutto ki tarah nhi aatein tameez main insaan bankein appointment lekein aatein hai .." 

Nodding his head peon hurriedly called him inside ..Malhar turns his face to other side to not get into anu fight with him today ..

Mahir ::" aree commissioner sahab ye kya ..humsein aisi bhi kya narazgi jo aise aapne mooh pher liya ..bad habbit koi apne dost ko aise peeth dikhata hai ...mana aapki biwi .

Malhar ::" mahir ek baar aur tu bola naa yahan issi jameen main tujhein dafna doonga samjha ..so yahan sein chalta ban ...ya jo kehne aaya hai vo bhook aur nikal .." 

Mahir ::' aree ...ye kya baat hui hum to apne dost ka gam batne aayein the ...aab mana tum gussa hoo ki tumhari pyaari biwi kalyani nein tumhein dhoka diya ...lekin vo bechari kya hi karti uskein pati ko to bass desh sewa karni thi biwi kein liye fursat hi kaha thi ..aur uss cheez ko to bhagwan nein aisein banaya tha ..jo chahein uska dewana ho jata ..agr thora aur waqt milta to vo humarein bass bahon kein baad hamarein bistar par humarein saath..he couldn't complete his sentence as he feels his hand grip on his neck got tighten and his face in that wooden table. .

Malhar ::" kaha tha ..jaban matt khol ...maine kaha tha uska naam mat lena .... kalyani kein naam uski har cheez pein sirf mera haq hai ..agr aajkein baad tere mooh sein uska naam bhi suna naa to yahin jinda dafna doonga ...isliye bhalai teri issi mein hai ki tu chup chaap yahan sein nikal jaayein ...aur sun ..by pulling him with hairs he made him look into his eyes 

" Tune kaha vo tere pass aayi chal maan liya ...par abb kya abb kaha gayi ..chala liya apna jadoo tune , uska aur mera rishta jaisa bhi tha humein haamarein haal pein chod dein aur sun agr aajkein baad kalyani ka naam bhi apni jubaan pein laaya to meri bandook ki goli hogi aur tu hoga ..nikal " 

Mahir by giving a look to Malhar leaves from there ...

On  other side 

Kalyani after picking up moksh from school , takes him to home and making him do his homework she sleep with him , in morning she gets up and drop him to school..

In office 

Mr .shah::" yes mam ..aapko aurngabad mein jaakar dekhna hi hoga ..vahan kein project humari company nein kuch paanch saal pehle shuru kiyein the lekin kaam vahan ka ...mam vo madhuri mam ka dream project hai ..unhone kaafi mehnat ki hai ..

Lady ::" yes mam..iss time Madhuri mam london main hai varna hum aapsein kabhi nhi kehte .." 

Kalyani ::" thank you all for attending this meeting ,.." 

All nodded their head and left the room ..kalyani tries to hides her tears which are flowing continuously from her eyes ...

Kalyani ::" main vahan kaise ..ussi jagah tha par kabhi nahi ..jiss jagah nein mujhein sabkuch diya bhi aur cheen bhi liya ..sab cheen gaya mera vahan sab ...mera parivaar mera pyaar Mera pati ...nahi ...main vahan nahi jaungi. ..main nhi jaungi vaha bass nhi jaungi ..." 

She tries to calm herself ..as moksh time school pick up time is getting near ..with difficulty she dials her driver no . To pick him up from school ..her breathing started to get heavy ... she opens the window of the room and takes deep breathe ...

in home 

AT NIGHT 

Moksh ::" aai aaj aapko itna late kyun hogaya ..aur aap kyun nhi aayein lene mujhein school ..aapne akhil dada ko kyun bheja .." 

Kalyani ::" vo pillu ...meri important meeting thi .. isliye tu bata kaisa gaya school .." 

Moksh ::" school to acha tha aai ..lekin pata hai aap maine na shreya sein baat ki thi unhone mujhe bataya ki hum aurngabad jayenge ..yee hum nayi jagah jayenge ...yee humein bohot mazza aayega .." 

Kalyani ::" moksh hum kahin naahi ja rahen hai ...tum khaana khao and go to your bed ..jao abhi .." 

Moksh with a crying face runs from there ..kalyani close her eyes in frustration...

" Ahhhh...sorry baccha ..pata nhi aurangabad jaane kein naam sein main itna pareshan hoon ki .." 

She stand up to go behind him then she suddenly got a call 

Kalyani ::" haan mom ..main aapko hi call karne wali thi kaisi hai aap sab theek haina .." 

Madhuri ::" kalyani ..i am ok ...tum or moksh kaise hoo theek haina mera naati ...maine socha iss time phone karoongi to moksh sein baat ho jayegi ..shayad late kiya vo so gaya kya ...

Kalyani ::" haan maa sone hi gaya hai..maa mujhein aapsein kehne hai ..mera aurangabad jana jarrori hai kya ..koi aur ...main aap samjah rahi haina .." 

Madhuri::-" kalyani beta i know ..par tum ye mat bhoolon ki tum apne ateet sein bohot aagien aachuki hoon ., Mera ye project to koi bhi poora kar lega tum pareshan mat hoon ..bass itna yaad rakhana ki jitna peechein ki cheezon ko lekar baithogi vo utna tumhein pareshan karegi. ..take care ..main vahan kissi aur ko bhej doongi ..

                                                                                       

Sorry but this forum is creating problem now to write after this will try to update soon next update or will edit ...for now pls tell how you find this update ...should I continue this or left it here πŸ˜Š

Mere mitrajano forum pareshan kar raha hai means itni update likhne kein baad ye slow ho gya tha achein sein work nhi kar raha tha so pls pareshan mat hooo main khin kissiko chorkar nhi jaa rahi hoon I am here only πŸ˜†πŸ€—

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Superb vanshu something very different you wrote today❀️

 kalyani is living with her child moksh how much she loves her mother and child cute conversation moksh asked her about his dad 

Malhar and kalyani ki pahali mulakat kitni pyari si huvi hai and then they started liking each other kalyani is missing her mj πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί

At the other side Malhar is also missing their moments but unka beech misunderstanding hogayi because if mehir why this guy do like this how happy this beautiful couple were living πŸ₯ΊπŸ˜‘

Mahir ne apni aur kalyani ki pic click ki and Malhar got that 

But now also he loves his kalyani that much only 😍❀️

Kalyani ko aurangabad jana hoga but she didn't want go agar kalyani jaye gi nhi to humera kalma mile ge kaise but she will go use moksh ko bhi daad diya😞

In short the story was beautiful plzz continue and one more request to you vanshu plzz don't stop this story in between plzz ise complete kar dena ❀️

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Vanshu...tu itna accha update dekar use sirf OS par kaise chhor sakti hai???? Kalyani Malhar's meet cute was πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ


Malhar...bechara kare to kya kare...itne dhokhe milte hain use and fir saara theekra Kallu par footta hai...I think here Malhar doesn't know ki he has a son. Kalyani and Malhar eloped and married...hmm...that makes Kalyani's situation even worse. And add to it the pressures of being a single mother...ek request hai Vanshu- Is wali FF me ye mat dikhana ki Malhar ji apna atom bomb avatar dikhaate jaate hain and Kalyani chupchaap sab sehen karti jaati hai. And MalMoksh ki bonding dekhne ke liye bhi I'm so excited.


Feb tak main koi update nahi de paungi to ab bas tere, Rekha, Priyu aur Arwa ke update ka hi sahaara h. And you know how much I love your FFs with hatke concepts.

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Why do u always leave me speechless why the hell can I never say something Because u leave me speechless ❀❀🀩🀩

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Originally posted by: sehreemstory

Superb vanshu something very different you wrote today❀️

 kalyani is living with her child moksh how much she loves her mother and child cute conversation moksh asked her about his dad 

Malhar and kalyani ki pahali mulakat kitni pyari si huvi hai and then they started liking each other kalyani is missing her mj πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί

At the other side Malhar is also missing their moments but unka beech misunderstanding hogayi because if mehir why this guy do like this how happy this beautiful couple were living πŸ₯ΊπŸ˜‘

Mahir ne apni aur kalyani ki pic click ki and Malhar got that 

But now also he loves his kalyani that much only 😍❀️

Kalyani ko aurangabad jana hoga but she didn't want go agar kalyani jaye gi nhi to humera kalma mile ge kaise but she will go use moksh ko bhi daad diya😞

In short the story was beautiful plzz continue and one more request to you vanshu plzz don't stop this story in between plzz ise complete kar dena ❀️

thank you so much Arwa πŸ€—πŸ€— really glad to know that you likes this update..also ...really thank you very much ..😳

Yaa main abb tum sab chathe hooo to main jarror continue karoongi 

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Originally posted by: Autumn09

Vanshu...tu itna accha update dekar use sirf OS par kaise chhor sakti hai???? Kalyani Malhar's meet cute was πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ


Malhar...bechara kare to kya kare...itne dhokhe milte hain use and fir saara theekra Kallu par footta hai...I think here Malhar doesn't know ki he has a son. Kalyani and Malhar eloped and married...hmm...that makes Kalyani's situation even worse. And add to it the pressures of being a single mother...ek request hai Vanshu- Is wali FF me ye mat dikhana ki Malhar ji apna atom bomb avatar dikhaate jaate hain and Kalyani chupchaap sab sehen karti jaati hai. And MalMoksh ki bonding dekhne ke liye bhi I'm so excited.


Feb tak main koi update nahi de paungi to ab bas tere, Rekha, Priyu aur Arwa ke update ka hi sahaara h. And you know how much I love your FFs with hatke concepts.

thank you so much pragyu meri dost for this beautiful commentπŸ€—

Aree chinta matt kar ..bada maza aayega tujhein iss mein .. yahan kalyani kein itne achein dialogues likhoongi ki mazza aa jayega tujhein padhne main πŸ˜³

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Originally posted by: Sehreem1

Why do u always leave me speechless why the hell can I never say something Because u leave me speechless ❀❀🀩🀩

awww thank you meri jaan .. tumhari doosri update ki khuwaish bhi kal poori ho jayegi ...main kal life is bitter sometime update karoongi ..πŸ€—

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I just want to say this... 

 

It was awesome !!!! 

I liked this whole concept. 

Kalyani, a single mother handling a career and her child. 

She remembers her beautiful moments with her husband. 

Their first meeting was so beautifully written.. ❀️❀️❀️❀️

I'm glad that Kalyani is not an abla naari and she has joined her mom's business. πŸ‘πŸΌ

On the other side, Malhar is a bitter man... 

Atleast his family is sensible who know and accept that their son was wrong and he destroyed his life himself.. 

Even in his bitterness, his love for her doesn't leave him.. He's filled with the memories of her and their happy times.. 

Until the unspeakable turn of events which led him to misunderstand his love, his wife... And led to their separation.. 

Mahir is a villain who destroyed a beautiful family, deprived a wife of ger husband's care when she was pregnant. Deprived a husband of the joy of knowing his wife is carrying his chikd. Most of all deprived an innocent  child of a father's love.. 

He came and rubbed salt on Malhar's wounds... πŸ˜‘ I want to see this man punished for his deeds... 

Malhar couldn't stand to hear that man taking his Kalyani's name... His love for Kalyani is so much.. Still he also has to undergo the punishment for not trusting her.. 


Vanshi.. Mujhe pata nahi iss forum me kiske wajah se tum hurt ho rahi ho.. 

I love all your work, your concepts which are always different and show us different shades of the characters... 

So I request you to continue this story and not leave it in between.. 

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

I just want to say this... 

 

It was awesome !!!! 

I liked this whole concept. 

Kalyani, a single mother handling a career and her child. 

She remembers her beautiful moments with her husband. 

Their first meeting was so beautifully written.. ❀️❀️❀️❀️

I'm glad that Kalyani is not an abla naari and she has joined her mom's business. πŸ‘πŸΌ

On the other side, Malhar is a bitter man... 

Atleast his family is sensible who know and accept that their son was wrong and he destroyed his life himself.. 

Even in his bitterness, his love for her doesn't leave him.. He's filled with the memories of her and their happy times.. 

Until the unspeakable turn of events which led him to misunderstand his love, his wife... And led to their separation.. 

Mahir is a villain who destroyed a beautiful family, deprived a wife of ger husband's care when she was pregnant. Deprived a husband of the joy of knowing his wife is carrying his chikd. Most of all deprived an innocent  child of a father's love.. 

He came and rubbed salt on Malhar's wounds... πŸ˜‘ I want to see this man punished for his deeds... 

Malhar couldn't stand to hear that man taking his Kalyani's name... His love for Kalyani is so much.. Still he also has to undergo the punishment for not trusting her.. 


Vanshi.. Mujhe pata nahi iss forum me kiske wajah se tum hurt ho rahi ho.. 

I love all your work, your concepts which are always different and show us different shades of the characters... 

So I request you to continue this story and not leave it in between.. 

thank you sooooo soooo much diiiiii for this beautiful and wonderful comment πŸ˜πŸ’ž

Aap aayi aur rang bikahrti hui laayi ❣️❣️

Aree di mera matlab hai ki ye forum platform slow ho gaya tha meri utni update kein baad ye achein sein work nhi kar rha tha I am not mental to leave you all main kahin nhi jaa rahi hoon πŸ˜†