This was lovely. I liked that both of them opened up about their past and Ram's words about the relationship were great. Friendship, trust and respect but not love.β€οΈ
This was lovely. I liked that both of them opened up about their past and Ram's words about the relationship were great. Friendship, trust and respect but not love.β€οΈ
Loved it⦠your writing is simple yet amazing
Hi there!
You're doing such a great job with this story. I'm really enjoying it. I think the way you expressed their feelings has been very fluent and very consistent. I especially loved Ram saying he'd be happy to have a bakery in his family π Super cute and I can totally imaging Priya smiling at that too haha
Keep writing! I can't wait to read more of your story π€
Originally posted by: ashsamik
Aweee this is so sad ... people leaving ram all the time .....priya is right to leave but felt bad for ram....π
thank you sooooo much!
This was lovely. I liked that both of them opened up about their past and Ram's words about the relationship were great. Friendship, trust and respect but not love.β€οΈ
Thank you!!!! Big hug
Originally posted by: basket_101
Hi there!
You're doing such a great job with this story. I'm really enjoying it. I think the way you expressed their feelings has been very fluent and very consistent. I especially loved Ram saying he'd be happy to have a bakery in his family π Super cute and I can totally imaging Priya smiling at that too haha
Keep writing! I can't wait to read more of your story π€
Hey there. I am so glad that you liked what was written. Thank you so much! Means the world to me. Bigggest hug!
Loved it....β€οΈ
She has already said yes....hope she conveys it to him...I really want th to be best of friends who can rely on each other....they deserve it ..ππ€
Aww feel so bad for Ram. Prius has already said yea. Hopefully they will find friend in each other.
You know what I really appreciate in your story? That Meera didn't just get excited and say that's great. That she pointed out that getting married, even for the sake of convenience, is not as easy and simple as it sounds.
Their inner turmoil is described very well too. Such a pleasure to read.
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
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