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Posted: 2 years ago
#41

It's okay yaar to reply late 🙈

We all are busy in life... 

But thanks to you who tries to take time and give update 🙏🙏

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Posted: 2 years ago
#42

Chappy  5 is stunning finally she is riddhima but why she became again a mystery all the best for your upcoming update dear take care of yourself and stay safe and happy

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Posted: 2 years ago
#43

Loving the way the story is processing ❤️ so she haven't forgiven him, wonder what her mission is 

Can't wait for the next update 😍 

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Posted: 2 years ago
#44

Apppada Ab time milegaya mujhe 🤪

Read all 5 chapters in one go ⭐️

Amazing concept Max🤗

Eagerly waiting what Ridhimma hides from Vansh and Vansh's back story 

No problem take your time and upload. 👍🏼

And no problem when you reply late 🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Chapter -6 - Unbreakable Sword 

Vansh was standing near the railing and was engrossed Looking at the water and The beautiful Sun Rise . 

 He remembered his past as the sun was rising .

Flashback : 

Vansh was Came out of the Car buttoning up his suit and Holding a Briefcase .

Vansh :( Narrating ) I was Young , Weak ,Penniless and Powerless .

To Complete the dream of meeting my family and Search for them after that tragedy was quiet difficult .

The Only way to reach them was to gain power and Money .

I Found a way to become Rich , Powerful and started having lot of Powerful Contacts But the way I chose was a very dangerous and Harmful way .

I started with Smuggling The items and started doing business with that .

I have Become good in my business and it was flourishing in just few years without any interruptions , Difficulties or Blood shed .

I started finding my family and I never knew that I would fall into a web .

I started having clashes with other mafia groups and my dealers .

Today was a important deal day for me , As I was getting a Big amount of the Deal .

Vansh walked into the place and started speaking to the other party , Amar his employee was with Vansh , Standing beside him .

The other party was discussing something and Vansh received a Message in his mobile .

The Message was sent by Angre , He messaged vansh "Bhai , All the arrangements are done for Riddhima's London Education . Tomorrow is her flight".

Vansh smiled with a Satisfaction as Riddhima will be Getting an Opportunity to study in a Good school and College .

Vansh replied back angre with "Okay , Good job".

While Angre Messaged Vansh "Bhai , Can I come to the place of deal ?".

Vansh replied him back immediately " No , need the deal is done".

As Vansh replied He heard a Gun shots , He then noticed that other party was not there for the deal but to kill him .

He took out his gun and threatened the other party of killing them in an instant , but only Vansh knows that he cannot kill anyone , He keeps the Gun with him only to threaten the people and safeguard himself and his People .

As Vansh threatened the other party people " who were trying to attack him with Gun", They both pointed guns and each other .

While Vansh was Going back with Amar his employee " who was aiming the Gun at the other party".

Suddenly a person Aimed at Vansh and pulled the trigger , The bullet Came out to kill Vansh. But Amar Jumped In and He was Shot on his Chest near to heart .

Vansh Trembled in Fear as he looked at Amar wounded and Shot , He was struggling to breath and he died In front of him .

Vansh Stared at the dead body in Shock without any movement .

Slowly Rage Occupied his Emotion of fear , He looked at the people aiming the gun at him with Blood shot eyes .

He just pulled the trigger at them in an Instant and Killed them to death .

He didn't know what he did in the spur of the moment, Slowly realization came to his mind " He killed people".

 He killed the people who were contracted to kill him for some amount .

As he looked at the people on the floor lifeless , Suddenly a Person was Conscious and was taking the breath heavily .

Vansh ran to him to save his life .

The person wanted to say something .

He struggled while uttering his words .

Person : ( Breathing heavily ) Save me , I have a Family .

As the person uttered the words .

Vansh : Yeah , I will .

Vansh was about to pick him up but he left his last breath making vansh panic and Vansh tried to waking him up but In vain the dead person cannot wake up .

As Vansh looked at his hands , It was covered with the blood .

The blood of a human " Whom he killed ".

He looked at his hands and the deal bodies around him , He felt guilty as the reason of everyone's death was him , The people who tried to save him are dead , The people who were contracted to kill him were dead by his bullets .

This was the first time he faced a bloodshed and The first time to lose a Person who he cherished .

Amar was really a Good and loyal person around Vansh , He deserved to live but he died Saving Vansh .

Vansh felt Guilty that all had to sacrifice for his dream and Goals in Life .

After the cremation of Amar ,Vansh was in his home .

Angre Came home and was feeling shattered and gulity after the result of attack , A feared started to occupy him of losing Vansh Bhai His only bhai .

Angre Promised himself that " He would never let him go alone for any deal ever".

He came to Vansh and started Apologizing Vansh .

Angre : I am sorry Bhai .

I should have been with you there to protect you and I should have got know about the attack before sending you there .

I didn't work well , I am sorry .

Angre was in tears with Vansh's silence and His fear to lose Vansh bhai was making him Cry.

Vansh : No , Angre .

It was not your mistake .

These Things keep happening in mafia world , It was just our first time to face a situation like this .

That's the reason we all are feeling this way .

If you want to be a mafia , Then you have to be strong .

I will be strong and determined .

Angre : Yes , bhai .

I will be strong too for you .

Vansh : Yeah , In life you always have to be strong to face hurdles .

Angre : Yes ,bhai .

Vansh answers angre a " hmm" and Brings a briefcase with him and a plane ticket .

Vansh : Your are Going to Riddhima Tomorrow , Right ?

Angre :( Confused ) Yes bhai , But I have done all arrangements .

Why are you handing me the plane tickets ?

Vansh : You are Going with Riddhima to London .

Angre looks at Vansh in Daze .

Vansh Opens the Briefcase , It has Money .

Vansh : Go to London and Settle Yourself there and take care of Riddhima too .

I will look after everything here all by myself , You don't have to worry about me .

Vansh hugs Angre and Angre starts Walking off the door with the Briefcase .

Vansh feels pained to lose everyone around him but he cannot harm the important people in his life for his goals .

Vansh Walked to the door to look at Angre leaving to make his heart and mind adjust with the fact .

As Vansh was looking at Angre .

Angre Put the briefcase aside and pulled out a Gun out of his pocket .

He pointed it to himself on his forehead , As Vansh looked at him shocked .

Vansh ran to angre and Pushed away the gun from his Hand .

Vansh stood infront of him and slapped hard on his face .

Vansh :( Furiously ) What were you doing ?

Angre : You told me to go away and I was doing that ?

Vansh in disbelief and shock looked at Angre .

Angre : I cannot go anywhere without you Vansh bhai .

Even If Your going to hell , I will gladly accompany you .

If you tell me to Go away , Then I will Vanish away from this earth .

I cannot lose you vansh bhai .

Vansh's Heart Warms up as he hears the heart warming words from angre .

Vansh hugs him as angre Tears up but Vansh smiles .

Vansh : Just keep it in your mind , The life with me is going to be diffcult and there will lot of Blood shed in like today .

Angre : I will protect you and Be your unbreakable sword .

Vansh furiously hits angre's head .

Angre : Bhai , I will always be your unbreakable sword .

Vansh : Okay , You should never break in front of anyone .

Angre : Yes , Never .

Vansh : Now , Go and sleep you need to go to send of Riddhima .

Angre : Vansh Bhai , Are you not coming to send her off .

Vansh : ( In mind ) I can't even let my shadow fall on her .

I am just a danger for her life , My life of danger will eat her away .

Vansh after staying silent for few moments Answered .

Vansh : No .

Angre immediately understood Vansh's inner turmoil and Nods his head without questioning Vansh.

The Next day , Riddhima was in the airport with Angre .

Riddhima : Why I am so unlucky ? I had to see your face for Two hours .

Riddhima looked at Angre annoyed as he looked at her with the same annoyed Expression .

Angre : Same feeling .

Why I have to see your face out of all in this world , Like what was the mistake I have done in my past life that I had to deal with a Psycho Monster .

Riddhima looks at him annoyed and flips her pigtail and Walks in front of him .

Riddhima turns around while walking and Jumps in front of Angre Enthusiastically holding her two pigtails .

Riddhima : Where is Vansh ? When will he arrive ?

Angre looks her Jumping around holding her two pigtails in shock .

Angre : Look behind while walking and Stop jumping around like a monkey .

Riddhima : ( Stops jumping and looks at him annoyed ) You just called me a monkey ? Useless , idiot .

Angre : Yes , Beacause your monkeying around like a monkey .

Can I bring You banana's ?

Riddhima frowing her lips .

Riddhima : If I am monkey , Your Chimpanzee .

You look like One .

Angre shrugging in shoulders .

Angre : No , I don't look like .

Riddhima gets annoyed .

Riddhima : Yes , Chimpanzee's don't look like you .

They look cute .

You just weird , I should just say sorry to chimpanzee's for comparing you with them .

Riddhima buries her head on her hand .

Riddhima : I did a grave mistake , I am sorry chimpanzee's.

Angre rolls his eyes , While Riddhima Remembers the important thing .

Riddhima  : Where is Vansh ?

When will he come to airport ?

Riddhima keeps repeating the same two questions to angre for One hour in the airport and Angre keeps Ignoring her .

Angre after the repeated questioning , He answers her .

Angre : Vansh bhai is busy he is not coming .

Riddhima's heart breaks listening to it , As she thought She would meet vansh finally after many years .

Riddhima :( Frowning ) Your lying .

You are just trying separate us .

Angre sighs in Stress .

Angre : I don't have Such Noble Idea's Mata , Leave me .

Riddhima Cries out loudly , While Angre tries to shush her off as people are looking at him strangely .

Angre : What will you take to stop Crying ?

Riddhhima :( Sobbing ) Chocolate .

Angre : You will stop , If I bring you the chocolate ?

Riddhima nods her head frowning her lips .

While Angre was leaving Riddhima snatches his mobile Phone , Angre looks at her in confusion .

Riddhima : If I Go missing ?

Angre : What ?

Riddhima : If You didn't come in few minutes and I come searching for you , Then If I go missing in this big airport ?

I will keep this mobile with me and play games till you come back .

Angre gets more confused because , The Care Taker was sitting right next to her and has a mobile but he didn't want to torture himself by arguing with Riddhima .

He leaves from there for buying her a Lot of Chocolates .

While Riddhima on the other hand Hideously starts searching for Vansh's Contact in Angre's Phone .

She dials his number immediately .

Vansh picks up his phone instantly .

Vansh : Yes , Angre ?

Riddhima smiles widely as she listens to Vansh's Voice but tears start rolling down .

Riddhima : Vansh When are you going to reach here ?

Vansh stops his car with a Jerk ,As he hears to Riddhima's Sobbing Voice .

Riddhima : Tell me ?

Vansh stays silent without Answering anything as he was in Dilemma .

Riddhima :( Sobbing ) Are You really Not coming to meet me ?

Riddhima Cries out Loud holding the phone tightly .

Vansh feels guilty and  pained to here riddhima Crying .

Vansh composes himself .

Vansh : I am busy Riddhima , I cannot Come .

But please you go to London and study for yourself .

I want to see you set your career and become Independent .

Will you do that for me ?

Riddhima :( Teary eyes ) Yes , I will go London for you .

But Will you come to meet me ?

Vansh takes heavy breathing and Composes himself  .

Vansh : I am little Busy , I cannot come to meet you .

Riddhima's last hope gets crushed by Vansh and she cries of out loudly .

Riddhima :( Crying ) Why Do you always Push me away ?

You Never Take me With you .

You know that , Your my only Family in the orphange still you left me alone and again your leaving me alone .

Why do you do this to me always ?

Don't you feel that I am your family ?

Vansh's tears starts rolling down .

Vansh : ( In mind ) How can you think that ?

You and Angre are two special persons in my life , You both are my Family .

I just want to protect you both .

Vansh : Riddhima , It's not like that .

Riddhima : If it's not Like that , Then come to me .

Vansh stays silent and doesn't answer .

Riddhima understands his answer in his silence  .

Riddhima :( Crying ) I Hate You .

Vansh :( Hurt ) Riddhima ?

Riddhima : If You don't Come to meet me Now , Then Don't ever show your face to me .

Riddhima cuts the call announcing the last warning .

Vansh  : (Shouts ) Riddhima ? 

He realizes his call was cut , He dials again and again .

Riddhima keeps cutting his call and Puts the phone on silent .

Vansh turns his Car back and Starts driving to Airport , While he keeps dialing At Angre's Phone .

Angre comes back to Riddhima and she gives his Phone back to him .

He puts it in his pocket , Though vansh was dialing he didn't realize as his phone was in Silent .

Vansh Reaches the Airport and Looks for Riddhima .

He Collides with Angre .

Vansh : Riddhima ?

Angre : She just Boarded her flight .

She was throwing too many tantrums vansh bhai but I dragged her to the boarding area and Made sure she took the flight .

Vansh looks at Angre in Shock as he missed his chance , He thinks about Riddhima's warning " If you don't meet me today , Never show your face to me ."

Vansh feels a little bit Void .

Vansh : Will she ever meet me again ?

Flashback ends ...

Vansh standing near the railing of the cruise and looking at the waters as the Sun rises .

Vansh : ( Narrating ) Time passed , Years Passed Riddhima's angre for me grew and I was engrossed in my business , I was in difficult situation with enemies every where .

I couldn't find my family too but I was still adamant to find them .

I deserve to know my past .

Vansh hears foot steps approaching him and turns to look .

He looks at Riddhima walking towards him with a bright smile like she used to come to him early in the morning in orphanage while they were doing exercise .

Vansh takes a long sigh .

Vansh : I have to again say you to leave to London .

Though it is a tough decision , It will always be correct decision .

Because it will ensure your safety .

Riddhima : Good morning .

Vansh :( Smiles ) Good Morning .

Vansh : ( In mind) I need to say it .

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Posted: 2 years ago
#46

Waooo what a beautiful and magnetic update ♥️♥️♥️

The flashback where vansh was forced to kill people 😍😍 Beautifully explain and those vaangre moments 😍😍 Mujhe rona he aa gaya... 

Literally their friendship ♥️♥️♥️

And that airport scene between aangre and ridhu their cute little fight 😂😂

And riansh conversation ♥️♥️ The show stealing moment 😍

Loved it ♥️♥️

Wonderfully and Beautifully penned it ♥️♥️♥️

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Posted: 2 years ago
#47

Brilliant update 😊 

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akkusharma77

Waooo what a beautiful and magnetic update ♥️♥️♥️

The flashback where vansh was forced to kill people 😍😍 Beautifully explain and those vaangre moments 😍😍 Mujhe rona he aa gaya... 

Literally their friendship ♥️♥️♥️

And that airport scene between aangre and ridhu their cute little fight 😂😂

And riansh conversation ♥️♥️ The show stealing moment 😍

Loved it ♥️♥️

Wonderfully and Beautifully penned it ♥️♥️♥️

Thank You 😳

😭😭😭 You felt the emotions , abb  mere akhon mein se asuu nikal rahe hai. 

Yes there friendship  is ❤❤, He is his unbreakable  sword. 

Riddhima will keep fighting with him anywhere and everywhere 😂

Yeah,  There Conversation has my heart too they are each other's family  🥺 and thank You so much for telling me this ❤.


Thank You yaar for your comment and love of the story ❤


Waise ,A name I can call You ?

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: eishe10

Brilliant update 😊 

Thank You ❤

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Chappy 6 is such beautiful update dear I liked the bond between angre and Vansh then come to riddhi and angre it's was hilarious dear they fight liked kids hope vansh get success in send off riddhi to London