KalMa OS - Kaise Hua

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Kaha na ab se is bare me koi baat nahi hogi.. Malhar told moksh in strict voice..


Par baba 


Bola na nahi hogi bas..

Apne kamre me jao aur padhai karo..


Moksh goes to his room


Kalyani-Aapne kyu daant diya moksh ko dekha na kaise sad ho gaya..


Apne kaam ka gussa mere pillu par nikal diya


Moksh was little sad after being scolded by his dad.. he didn’t understood what made his dad angry  


Malhar goes to moksh room where he is was sleeping..

He says sorry to moksh that he scolded him… kissed him on his forehead and left from there…



Later he came back to room.. Kalyani was no where so he slept without waiting for her



Kalyani came to room and saw him sleeping… She thought of having some words with him…

She also slept and was thinking about his earlier behaviour 



In morning 


Kalyani came with the tea for Malhar but he left without telling her…


This made her suspicious about his behaviour..

Yesterday he was in bad mood, she wanted to talk with him and he slept before her…


Later she called him 

He picked up phone ….


Malhar -Ha Kalyani bolo kya kaam hai kyu call kiya 


Kalyani- kya Malharji mujhe jab kaam hoga tab hi call karti hu kya aise nahi main apne pati ko phone laga sakti… hmmm


Malhar- Kalyani agar jaruri kaam nahi hai to phone rakho, main abhi busy hu..


Kalyani- How rude, Malharji aapki biwi ne aapko call kiya aur aap call cut  karne  ko kah….


Phone gets disconnected…



Kalyani- ye Malharji ko ho kya gya hai aise kaise phone cut kar diya …..

Shayad kuch jyada hi busy hai…


Malhar came back from police station 


In kalma room.


Malhar lay on bed and closed his eyes..


Kalyani- Malharji 

Malhar- hmmm 


Kalyani- So gaye kya???

Malhar- Hmmm 


Kalyani- Suniye na.. aankhen to kholiye 

Malhar- Kya hai Kalyani , kyu pareshan kar rahi ho.. dekho raat bahut ho rahi hai mujhe kal jaldi PS jana hai to so jao chup chap..


Kalyani - Mujhe aapse kuch puchna hai hi aur apna jawab sune bina main nahi soungi…



Malhar irritatingly open his eyes and look at her.. 


Malhar- Kya hai jaldi puchho kalyani.. mujhe bahut neend aa rahi hai… 



Kalyani- Achha bahut neend aa rahi hai na aapko ek kaam kijiye aap so hi jayiye..

Main aap se kal baat karti hu..

She said annoyingly 


Malhar- Are ab bolo bhi kya hua hai neend kharab karke kah rahi ho kal baat karungi jaldi kaho jo kehna hai… 



Kalyani- theek hai to suniye mujhe batayiye kal aapne pillu ko kyu daanta tha jab wo mere paas apne bhai behen k liye puchne aaya tha…

Malhar- Daant nahi lagata to kya karta wo ek hi baat k pichhe padh gya hai…


Ab hum uski har zid to puri nahi kar sakte hai na…Ab use samjhana bhi jaruri hai.. agar baat nahi samjhega to daant lagana hi padegi…


Kalyani-Aap kehna kya chahte hai

Saaf saaf kahiye..


Malhar- tumne mujh se pucha aur maine bata diya.. ab plz so jao aur mujhe bhi sone do…


Malhar slept but Kallu was in no mood of sleeping…

She couldn’t figure out what he actually wanted to say…


Next day 


When Malhar came back from PS he found house was very quite…


Kalyani had some plans in her mind ,she thought today she will tell him that she also want what he wanted from long time and this will of course make him happy…



Malhar came to their room…


Kalyani hugged him from back and snuggled more closer to him…


Malhar- Kya baat hai Kalyani aaj ghar bahut shaant hai…


Kalyani- Ghar me koi nahi hai Malharji 

Sab log bahar gaye hai… kal tak lautenge…Ghar me Sirf main aur aap hai 

Samjhe….


Malhar- Achhha..Ghar ke sare darwaze theek se laga diye hai…


Kalyani - Haa laga diye hai ab koi nahi aayega Hume disturb karne 


She giggled 


Malhar- Achhha chalo to phir so jate hai mujhe bahut neend aa rahi hai…

Itni Shanti me kitne dino baad sounga…


Kalyani was annoyed after what he said…


Kalyani- Malharji aapko sone ki padi hai main yahaan aapke sath kuch baat karna chahti hu…


Malhar- Achha to kaho kya kehna hai 

Kalyani- Aise nahi pehle apni aankhein band kijiye…


Malhar- Arre Kalyani tum phir shuru ho gayi…

Kalyani- Abhi kaha shuru huyi hu…Aap shuru hone hi nahi de rahe hai.. aapko to bas Sona sona dikh raha hai…

Jo aapko aur moksh ko chahiye uske liye to jaagna padega naa…

Malhar- kya matlab hai tumhara..

Kalyani- matlab ye ki maine soch liya hai mujhe aapse moksh k liye bhai ye behen chahiye….


And she smiled…


Malhar was quite , he didn’t say anything about it..


Kalyani thought after listening to this he will be happy but here he is not excited like before whenever he mentioned about having a baby…What happened to him…


Kalyani- kya hua hai aapko, aap khush nahi hai kya??? 


Malhar- Kalyani, jo main kah raha hu wo dhyaan se suno… Hume koi jaldi nahi hai bachhe ki thik hai….

Moksh ko main samjha chuka hu.. ab wo tumhe aise koi sawaal puchh kar pareshan nahi karega…to tumhe bhi is bare me jyada sochne ki jarurat nahi hai 

Ab tum bhi aaram karo… raat bahut ho gayi 

Kalyani- Ek minute Malharji , Aap aisa kyu bol rahe. Abhi kuch din pehle aap mujhse har thode din me baby k liye bolte the aur aaj jab main taiyar hu to aap mana kar rahe hai…

Sach sach batayiye Malharji baat kya hai 

Main dekh rahi hu kuch din se aap mere sath rukha rukha behave kar rahe hai…

Achhha ab main samjhi kal bhi jab maine aapse puchna ki moksh ki kyu danta to aapne isi zid ke bare me kaha tha…


Aap nahi chahte ki humara baby ho kyu….


Malhar- Haa Kalyani, main nahi chahta..

Main ye bhi jaanta hu tum abhi mentally prepared bhi nahi ho bachhe k liye…

Ye sab tum moksh k liye kar rahi ho na…

Koi jarurat nahi hai iski…



Kalyani- Baat ye nahi hai,baat kuch aur hi hai.. batayiye 

Abhi tak to aap kitne excited the aur ab aisa kya ho gaya hai..mujh se mat chhupayiye..

Main sunna chahti hu ki baat kya hai..


Malhar- Baat kuch nahi hai bas ab so jao kal baat karenge 

Kalyani- Nahi baat to aaj hi hogi Malharji 

Bahut dino se dekh rahi hu main aap kuch alag sa behave kar rahe hai…



Malhar-  Aisa kuch nahi kalyani..tum kuch jyada hi soch rahi ho..


Kalyani- Main jyada soch rahi hu aur jo aap aise behave kar rahe hai uska kya.. han..

Aisa kya hua hai Malharji jo aap itne dino se bol rahe the aur jab main ready to aap pichhe hat rahe hai.. kuch baat to jarur hai 

Batayiye mujhe..


She asked angrily..


Malhar- Baat sirf itni si hai kalyani ki tum abhi ready nahi ho.. tum ye mere liye ya moksh k liye chahti ho apne liye nahi..

Aur waise bhi tum par to kitni jimmedariyan hai.. main nahi chahta ki ek aur jimmedari badh jaye….



Kalyani- Jimmedari… 



Malhar- Haa Kalyani jimmedari.. Maai , moksh Aao saheb kaka gungun kitne logo ki jimmedari hai tumhari upar uske baad ek aur bachha … 

Mujhe nahi lagta ye abhi theek rahega..



Kalyani- Abhi theek nahi hoga… aapko lagta hai main apne bachhe ki dekhbhal theek se nahi kar paaungi… Main uska dhyaan nahi rakh paungi… yahi kehna chahte hai 

She started crying after saying this…


Malhar- Tum mujhe galat samajh rahi ho…

Maine aisa kab kaha… ye to tumne apne hisaab se meri baaton ka matlab nikaal liya..


He said annoyingly..


Kalyani- Main galat matlab nikaal rahi to aap hi sahi matlab batayiye kya hai…

Aisa kya ho gaya jo kal tak aap thak nahi rahe the moksh ke liye bhai behen..moksh ke liye bhai behen chahiye.. aur achaanak se aapko lagta hai ki bachhe ke aane k baad meri jimmedari aur badh jayegi…


Main kuch puchh rahi hu boliye…

Jawaab dijiye…

Kalyani asked him in loud voice..



Malhar- Tum Sunna chahti ho…

Kalyani- Haa main Sunna chahti hu..Kahiye..


Malhar - To suno… mujhe lagta hai ki humara rishta itna majbut nahi hai ki ek aur rishte ka bhoj main is par daal du..



Kalyani was hurt after listening this she was unable to understand that how could he say something like that for their relationship.. which came a long way..


Kalyani- Kya aapko lagta hai humara rishta kamjor hai aur aisa kyu lagta hai aapko… zara bataye mujhe..


Malhar- Jo rishte ko aksar  daav par lagaya jaye wo kamjor nahi to aur kya hai kalyani… Batao mujhe…


Kalyani was shocked and tears started rolling from her eyes…She was at loss of words


Malhar- Theek kaha na maine..Aur aisa ek baar nahi kayi baar kaha hai tumne ki tumhe is rishte ko daav par lagana pade to tum pichhe nahi hatogi..

Tumhe pata hai kitni takleef hoti hai ye sunkar..

 

Kalyani- Aap jante hai na main majboor thi.. main aapse bahut pyaar karti hu Malharji 


Malhar-Main tumse bahut pyaar karta hu kalyani aur main ye bhi samajhta hu ki tumne jo kuch bhi kaha wo jhanbhuj kar nahi kaha…

Par main kya karu main bhi insaan hu mujhe bhi takleef hoti hai 

Jab bhi tumne hamare rishte ko daav par lagane ko kaha  Mere dil ko kaise  samjhau wo to tumhari in baaton se waise hi toot jata hai… 


Kalyani- Aap jante hai na ye maine aai k liye kiya tha… Main apni aai ko khona nahi chahti thi… she said by wiping her  tears 



Malhar-Tum maai se pyaar karti ho unke liye kuch bhi kar sakti ho, main jaanta hu par humare rishte ki kya itni si hi keemat hai jo tum ise daav par lagakar apna pyaar sabit karna chahti ho… 


Kalyani- Maine wo sab kabhi aapko hurt karne k liye nahi kaha.. main mar  jaungi par aapko koi takleef nahi hone dungi..,


Malhar-Main ye bhi jaanta hu tum mujhe kabhi koi takleef nahi dena chahti ho…

Tum bhi mujh se utna hi pyaar karti ho jitna main tumse karta hu aur ho sakta hai mujh se jyada hi karti ho…..


Kalyani- Jab aapko pata hai to fir aap kyu aisi baatein kar rahe hai…


Malhar- Tum to mujhe sabse jyada samajhti ho kalyani..

Fir tum ye kaise nahi samajh payi ki main kabhi bhi tumhare aur maai k beech nahi aaunga..

Na main kabhi aisa hone dunga..


Kalyani- Main jaanti hu Malharji par main kya karti…aap hi batayiye 


Malhar-Tum mujhe samajhne ki koshish to karti kalyani..lekin tum mujhe samajhne k bajaye humara rishta daav par lagane ki baat karti rahi…

Jo kalyani meri nafrat aur gusse ko samajh jati thi wo aaj meri fikr, mere parwah mere pyaar ko nahi samajh paa rahi hai… 


Aisa kya badal gya kalyani bolo…..



Kalyani was quite she didn’t realised how her words effected him..She was in tears 

He is seems to be broken once again..

Broken by her words…


Malhar- Mujhe dar lagne laga hai kalyani…

Darr is baat ka ki Kahi mujh se kuch aisa na ho jaye aur tumhe mujh se dur karde aur humare is rishte ko chhod kar chali jao.. 


He was in tears while saying all this  and left the room..



Kalyani was guilty for her behaviour she has done with him..


Soon she saw his figure fading away from her eyes….


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Posted: 2 years ago

This was such a good and right conversation for them priyu 

Excellent priyu baby kya likhti hai tu 🤗❤️kahan thi tu abtak humein ek aur writer mil gaya waahh ...

Bilkul appropriate conversation thi Malharji ke emotions unkein jawab unka behaviour sab bilkul sahi tha 

Vo bechare sachmain kitna toot chukein uski har baar ki baaton ki wajah se 😭😭

Unhone sahi kahan unka rishta itna majboot hai hi nahi abhi jo vo baacha plan kar sakein jiss rishte main understanding aur trust na hoo usmein baby planning bilkul nahi honi chahiye


This was a emotional os priyu 😭😘😍😍 tu chaa gayi baby 😻😻

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Superb yaar .aur thoda likho na 

Ispe kaun mazak udhayenga 

.the best words were


Jo mere gussa aur nafrath ko samjh or seh paayi .vo Meri Pyaar aur chintha ko nahi samjh paayi 


Wah wah wah wah .

I also feel kallu understand malhar emotions better when he hates her than loves her 

Ye convo acha tha and I loved it 


Aur likho na 😍😍😍😍😍

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Posted: 2 years ago

It was so lovely... 

Thanks for writing this Priyu.. 

Malharji ko ye puchna zaroori hai ki kyun har baar unke rishte ko daav pe lagati hai Kalyani.. 

Kalyani needs to understand Malhar's emotions too.. Har wakt she can't expect only him to understand. 

Agar rishta mazboot nahi hai toh ek bache ko aana hi nahi chahiye.. 

Mujhe bohot pasand aaya 🤗💕😘


Aur bhi likho. 

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Posted: 2 years ago

Wow beautiful please do continue this 😍 so emotional but this should of been shown on the show 

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Originally posted by: Phlo004

This was such a good and right conversation for them priyu 

Excellent priyu baby kya likhti hai tu 🤗❤️kahan thi tu abtak humein ek aur writer mil gaya waahh ...

Bilkul appropriate conversation thi Malharji ke emotions unkein jawab unka behaviour sab bilkul sahi tha 

Vo bechare sachmain kitna toot chukein uski har baar ki baaton ki wajah se 😭😭

Unhone sahi kahan unka rishta itna majboot hai hi nahi abhi jo vo baacha plan kar sakein jiss rishte main understanding aur trust na hoo usmein baby planning bilkul nahi honi chahiye


This was a emotional os priyu 😭😘😍😍 tu chaa gayi baby 😻😻

 

Thanks you dear…

 Tujhe pasand aaya.. 

Ye man ki bhadaas nikalne k liye likh diya wo bhi pata nahi kitne din lage likhne me 

🤣🤣🤣

Jiska kaam usi ko saje…👍🏼

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Originally posted by: GAYATHRINAYAR

Superb yaar .aur thoda likho na 

Ispe kaun mazak udhayenga 

.the best words were


Jo mere gussa aur nafrath ko samjh or seh paayi .vo Meri Pyaar aur chintha ko nahi samjh paayi 


Wah wah wah wah .

I also feel kallu understand malhar emotions better when he hates her than loves her 

Ye convo acha tha and I loved it 


Aur likho na 😍😍😍😍😍

Thank you Gayu 🥰

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Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

 

Thanks you dear…

 Tujhe pasand aaya.. 

Ye man ki bhadaas nikalne k liye likh diya wo bhi pata nahi kitne din lage likhne me 

🤣🤣🤣

Jiska kaam usi ko saje…👍🏼

aree I loved it 💗💗

Tere andar ka writer is serial ne bahar nikal hi diya jaisa ki mera 🤣

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Originally posted by: rekha_crm

It was so lovely... 

Thanks for writing this Priyu.. 

Malharji ko ye puchna zaroori hai ki kyun har baar unke rishte ko daav pe lagati hai Kalyani.. 

Kalyani needs to understand Malhar's emotions too.. Har wakt she can't expect only him to understand. 

Agar rishta mazboot nahi hai toh ek bache ko aana hi nahi chahiye.. 

Mujhe bohot pasand aaya 🤗💕😘


Aur bhi likho. 

Thank you diii 

Aapko pasand aaya🤗🤗🤗

 

Pata nahi dii aur likh paungi ya nahi…

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Wow beautiful please do continue this 😍 so emotional but this should of been shown on the show 

Thanks Alifya…