Riansh FF : Bepahanna Ishq |Completed|

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 INTRODUCTION TO THE STORY :


A story about two cousins Vansh and Riddhima , Vansh loves Riddhima but Riddhima is not willing to accept his love or give any chance to there relationship , Will vansh make Riddhima realise ? Will he be able to convince her or die in her love waiting for her ? 

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INDEX : 

Chapter - 1 -page- 1 The Burning Flame 

Chapter - 2 - page -4 You're Mine

Chapter - 3 -page-6 Remember 

Chapter - 4 - page-9 The love between us 

Chapter - 5 - page -11 Distanced  

Chapter-6 -page -12 It was her choice

Chapter -7- page-14 I Don't love You

Chapter -8-page-16I Am Your Husband

Chapter-9-page-17 Was My love lacking Something? 

Chapter -10-page-19She Is My Wife 

Chapter -11-page-20  Eyes On You

Chapter -12-page-22Let The Past Be Past 

Chapter -13-page-23 The Wedding

Chapter - 14 - page-25 I love My, Vansh 

Chapter -15 -page-26 Insecurity 

Chapter -16-page-27 Ask Me

Chapter -17 - page-The days without you

Chapter -18 -page-31 The Intruder

Chapter - 19 - page-33Promise

Chapter - 20 - page -34 Sacrifice

Chapter -21- page -36Fight

Chapter -22-page-37 Cousins 

Chapter -23 -page -37Motivation

Chapter -24 -page -38Red Bangles

Chapter -25 -page - 39https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/158874948

Chapter -26 -page -39Location

Chapter -27 -page-39The Last Gamble -Final Chapter

Epilogue -page-40Epilogue




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Chapter -1- The buring Flame  

A Man was On the bed taking IV Drip , He was weak and his eyes were red and Swollen .

He was in an unconscious state , he was mumbling in his unconscious state .

He was bobbling his head against the pillow .

He remembers in his unconscious state , A little girl running around the house and he could here the sound of the anklets .

He notices the little girl was happily running around the house happily looking at her new anklets .

She suddenly trips and falls on the ground .

Girl :( Groaning in pain ) Ahhhhh ...

The Man remembers noticing blood on her leg .

He wakes up with a jerk and Shouts Her name .

Man :( scared and shouts ) RIDDHIMA .

The Man looks at the dark room and the night panicking .

He looks at the IV drip attached to his hand .

He remembers the reality and falls against the bed .

Tears roll down as he thinks about the reality and He calmly takes out his cigar box .

He takes the cigar and starts smoking .

His heart is bleeding in pain and It is filled with Immense sadness .

A women enters the Room .

Women : Vansh bhai ?

Are you fine ?

Vansh doesn't respond and blankly looks at the wall .

She gets irritated as her bhai is ignoring her and thinking about someone unimportant .

Women : Bhai , Just stop thinking about her .

And stop paining yourself for that bitch .

She rejected you , left you and she is now Married to her loser lover .

She never loved , she only loved that loser and now she willing got married to him today .

Just forget about her Vansh bhai .

Vansh looks at her with a anger filled eyes .

Vansh : ( Gulping down his sorrow ) Not a word against her Ishani , I will kill you .

Ishani in disbelief laughs at herself .

Ishani :Oh wow , My bhai would kill me for that women " who rejected him "and Right now having her First Night with the husband .

Just wow , haan .

Vansh listens to her and only one word is repeated in his mind .

Vansh :( in mind ) First Night .

The word scares Vansh , He immediately gets up from the bed and runs out of the room with his disheveled appearance .

Ishani looks at him flabbergasted .

Vansh starts driving to a address .

He looks at the Independent house . It didn't look like a "Shaadi wala Ghar" .

Vansh called angre to Reconfirm about the house .

He sneaked inside the house , There was no security , The house was a 2 bhk duplex .

Vansh looked at a balcony and started climbing the balcony .

He reached the balcony and he peeked inside .

His heart started paining as he looked at the beautiful bride sitting on the center of the bed " which has a flower arrangement around ".

She was still wearing her bridal kanjivaram saree , It looked like there were rituals done of welcoming her .

Vansh :( meekly ) Riddhima .

He looked at her and saw A man walking to her .

He sat beside her and he started kissing her neck .

He removed her flowers from her braid and pushed her against the bed and he was on her .

He was about to kiss her .

Vansh :( in mind ) No , kabir .

Vansh looks at Riddhima sitting on the bed silently , He realizes it was just his imagination .

Vansh : I cannot let this happen .

She is mine , He cannot touch her .

I will kill him , I will destroy everything , I will .

No , I will destroy everything .

Vansh looks at Riddhima  with fire in his eyes .

Vansh : You're mine and Only Mine .

Vansh takes out his lighter and fires the curtains , As the weather was windy curtains started moving around back and forth in the room .

All flammable things caught the fire instantly and the fire was spread all over the room .

Riddhima looked at the fire panicking .

Riddhima was shouting on top of her lungs .

Riddhima : Ahhhhh .

Fire , Fire .

Help .

Riddhima started crying out loudly and froze in a moment as the fire is everywhere in the room .

Riddhima inhaled Something and started coughing .

Vansh immediately broke the balcony door and came in .

Riddhima looked at him and extended her hand for help as she fell unconscious on her floor.

Riddhima : ( meekly ) Vansh .

Vansh immediately took Riddhima into his embrace , Planting a loving kiss on her lips .

He lift her his arms and left from the room , He saw kabir over the phone in the ground floor .

He looked at him furiously as he was in his own world in a phone and his ears were plugged with ear pods as he was speaking in the phone  .

He took out the lighter and fired the flammable curtains in the ground floor as Kabir was talking in the phone .

He silently took away Riddhima in the Car with him .

He looked at the whole house which was on fire and was burning down .

He heard Kabir's loudly shouting , He smirked as he heard his voice .

Vansh left him to death , While driving away Riddhima with him .

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Max first chapter you made Vanshu murder πŸ˜²

OMG Amazing cliffhanger waiting for your next chapter πŸ€—

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Posted: 2 years ago
Originally posted by: Sgayuiyer

Max first chapter you made Vanshu murder πŸ˜²

OMG Amazing cliffhanger waiting for your next chapter πŸ€—

Waiting πŸ€£

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Posted: 2 years ago
Originally posted by: Sgayuiyer

Max first chapter you made Vanshu murder πŸ˜²

OMG Amazing cliffhanger waiting for your next chapter πŸ€—


Updated Kabir paralog sithare va πŸ˜•

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Waiting πŸ€£


Commented πŸ€ͺ

Yenna Max Kalayanam aandhum Kabir khatham bechara vala vendiya Man πŸ€£πŸ€£


Just like Vadivel says kalam poora kanniyave (virgin) agave irukanum ah πŸ€£

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Posted: 2 years ago
Originally posted by: Sgayuiyer

Max first chapter you made Vanshu murder πŸ˜²

OMG Amazing cliffhanger waiting for your next chapter πŸ€—

He is crazy  πŸ€ͺ🀣

Do you think Kabir will die , Soon  ? 

Thank you gayu ❀️ , Will update pretty soon πŸ˜†

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Updated Kabir paralog sithare va πŸ˜•

He will go paralog only , if he offended vansh πŸ˜‚

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He is crazy  πŸ€ͺ🀣

Do you think Kabir will die , Soon  ? 

Thank you gayu ❀️ , Will update pretty soon πŸ˜†


🀣

Cha cha never πŸ€ͺ chiranjeevi aanjaneya devotee Kabir πŸ€£πŸ€£

πŸ€—πŸ‘πŸΌ

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🀣

Cha cha never πŸ€ͺ chiranjeevi aanjaneya devotee Kabir πŸ€£πŸ€£

πŸ€—πŸ‘πŸΌ

  Yes , he is the asura the  Chiranjeevi devotee  πŸ˜‚


He will be behind Riansh πŸ˜‚in every story .

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