ff kalma :- love is bitter sometime ( chapter 9 updated 9-12-2021)

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This is my imagination after kalyani put gun on malhar I am really pissed off on her after that scene so bear with my frustration

After they came home with anupriya

Malhar bunglow

Poolside

Malhar is feeling really bad after what happened with mai but it is not anyone's fault its a accident and she will surely recover  with the help of medical staff but the most hurt  feeling is when his kalyani his life  whom he love unconditionally put gun on him he think no matter everyone can blame him or leave his side but not his kalyani but she really proved him wrong today he is wrong about her love 

Hmm what love he is talking about she never obliges him she never think about his reputation

Malhar pov breaks by listening Kalyani voice 

Kalyani :- malharji kya aap mujhse gussa hai ki mai aai ko ghar le ayi but malharji aap hi samjhiye na ki unhe abhi Meri jarrorat hai agar ve mere saath rahegi to jaldi thik hojayengi aap samajh rahe haina ki mai kya kehna chah rahi hoon apse

Malhar:- samajh (sarcastic laugh ) kalyani aaj Tak Mai hi to samjhta aaya Hoon aur mujhe to ye nahi samajh aa raha hai tum mujhse pooch hi kyun Rahi Hoon kis baat ke liye mujhe gussa ana chaiye vese 

Kalyani:- Kya matlab aapka main aapse kyun pooch rahi Hoon are pati hai aap mere aapse nahi poochongi to kisse poochongi aap aisi behki  behki baatein kyun kar rahe hain malharji

Malhar:- kalyani  chalo hum ye baatein baad main karte hain pehle tum mujhe ye baat bataon agar tum Mai ko yahan rakhogi to moksh aur mera dhyaan Kon rakhega Chalo ek baar ko mere baarein main bhool jate hai moksh to chota baccha hain use to apni maa chahiye hi hogi na uske baarein main kuch socha hai

Kalyani:- malharji aap un baaton ki fikar mat kijiye vo sab main dekh loongi main kisiko  koi pareshani nahi hone doongi  aap bas man jayein aai ko yahan rakhne ke liye pls

Malhar :- kese sambhlaongi tum sab hmm jab tum moksh aur gungun ko nahi sambhal payi to tum ab sab cheezein kese sambhlaongi ya Tum koi jaadon ki chadi chalogi aur sab kaam ho jayehga bolo

Kalyani:- aap itna hyper kyun ho rahe hain malharji aur rahi baat pillu ki to ab vo itna chota bhi nahi hai ki mujhe har samay uske saath rehna pade aur gungun aur aai ka dhyaan main khud rakh loongi are vo meri behen aur aai hai main unhe aise akele nahi chod sakti 

Malhar:-  kalyani tumhen pata bhi hai tum Kya bol rahi hoon hmm baccha hai vo tunhara gungun ka dhyaan to sarthak kaka bhi rakh sakte hai ek din pehle hi moksh ko asthmatic attack pada tha bhul gyi yaa yad dilaun tumhe tumhari behen ke karname moksh tumhare bina bilkul nahi reh pata dekha nahi tha vo kese hostel se bhag aya tha tumhare se Milne Kya itni si bhi parwah nahi hai tumhein apne bacchein ki 

Kalyani:- janti Hoon sab lekin gungun abhi bacchi hai ho gaya khel khel main aur aap Kya chahte hai use jail bhej doon in Sab ke liye  aur rahi baat moksh ki to uska dhyaan main aaj Tak rakhti aai Hoon aur aage bhi rakh loongi Kahan ki baat kahan lekar jaa rahe aap malharji main apse sirf aai ko yahan rakhne ke liye puchne  ayi thi lekin ab lagata hai galat aa gayi mujhe aana hi nahi chahiye tha apke pass vese bhi Meri aai aur Meri behen dono mere saath yahin rahengi aapko Jo sochna soch lijiye

With that she turns to go but stop by listening malhar voice

Malhar :- ek aakhiri baar tum se kuch pooch raha Hoon mere aur moksh ki jagah Kya tumhare liye maai aur gungun ke jitni hai aur agar main mai ko yahan rakhne ke liye Mana kar doon to kya hamare rishte ki koi value hai tumhari nazzoran main ya nahi 

Kalyani :-  ye kaisi baat kar rahe hain app muje aap moksh aap aur aai ya gungun main Se kisi doon ko chunne ke liye keh rahe hain  aur aap aai ko mujhse door karne ki baat kar rahe hain to thik hamare rishte ki to mujhe bohot parwah hai par main aai ko thik karne ke liye apna rishta daun par lagane ke liye tayar hoon mujhe Meri  aai ki iss samay jyada parwah hai 

Malhar :- ye nobat tumne khud layi hai kalyani main tumhein iss duvidha main nahi dalna chahtha tha lekin lagta hai mujhe mere sawal ka jawab mil gaya tumne maai aur gungun ko Chun liya 

Kalyani:- maine aisa kuch nahi kahan na Maine aai aur gungun ko chuna aur na aapko aur moksh ko aap sab mere liye jaarori hai aur aaj aapko ho Kya Gaya hai

Malhar:- kalyani aab chahe tum Kuch bhi kahoon mere liye tumne apna chunav kar liya hai so mene apne aur moksh ke liye jo socha hain ab vo karne ka samay aa Gaya hai 

Kalyani :- Kya socha hai apne aur kya karna chahte hai aap moksh aur apne liye hmm

Malhar :- kuch der main tumhein pata lag jayega aur ab tum apni behen aur aai ka dhyaan rakh sakti Hoon without any more disturbance

Malhar wahan se chala jatan hai ye sab kehke aur kalyani vahan shock hokar khadi reh  jati hain

Kalyani pov 

Kya socha hoga inhone aur mene bhi aai ki tension main kuch bhi bol diya par unhe bhi samajhna chahiye tha na mere liye iss time aai hi meri priority hai unhein Meri jaroorat hain unhone mera kitna dhyaan rakha hain aajtak ab main unka dhyaan nahi rakhongi to Kon rakhega aur rahi baat gungun ki to vo Meri choti behen hain moksh to phir bhi ek saal bada hain  usse aur aap bhi hain malharji uska dhyaan rakhne ke liye lekin bichari gungun ke liye koi nahi hain yahan Tak ki sarthak kaka kitne toot chuke hai vo kese akele uska dhyaan rakh payenge Kya hogya aapko

With this her thinking got broke due to sarthak shouting

In hall

In mean Time malhar get his and moksh suitcase ready and manofy moksh that he have to live with him from now on because his aai is busy with many responsibility and they cannot be burden on her 

First moshk  denied but then he rethink all the situation when his doesn't believe him or ignored him and in these days his father is only their for him his father only teach him after seeing his report card first he thought he will shout at him or punish him but he doesn't done anything according to his thinking he even make him understand that studies are also important and if he doesn't do study he will not be able to become like his baba and nowadays his aai doesn't sit with him or play with him she even punish him for the things which he has not done he think that his doesn't love him anymore as he is not her bio son 

Malhar doesn't think much about how he easily gets ready to go with him and he don't know about his insecurities also he thinks that he also feel lonely nowadays so he gets ready 

Present time in hall

Sarthak :- malhar ye tum moksh aur apna bag pack karke kahan jaa rahe Hoon r

Malhar :- kaka mene ye decide Kiya hai ki main or moksh mere naye quarters main rahenge  vese bhi ye bungalow mene issliye liya tha kyunki mera quarter abhi ready nahi tha aur vese bhi Meri yahan shifting kuch hi time ke liye hui thi aur mujhe Aurangabad main naye case ko lead karna hai to mujhe yahan see chalna chahiye vese bhi Meri biwi ko Meri aur apne bete ki koi khas jarrorat nahi hai to mujhe aur use yahan see chalna chahiye

In meantime kalyani came and listening she gets angry and loudly says

Kalyani:- malharji aap aisa soch bhi kese sakte Hain aap mujhe chodkar jana chahte hai mujhe laga aap bahar gussa the aur ab Tak aapka gussa shaant ho gaya hoga leki aap to yahan moksh ko mujhse door le Jana chahte hai main aisa kuch nahi karne doongi aapko

Sarthak:- haan malhar apna gussa thook do aur shaanti se socho 

Kalyani:- chaliye aap mere saath mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai 

Malhar:- lekin mujhe na tumse aur na kaka apse koi baat karni hai main apna maan bana Chuka Hoon 

Kalyani:- aapko Meri kasam malharji aap Abhi mere saath room main chal rahe hain bas

With this malhar give up and go with kalyani in their room to give a piece of mind to her 

Moksh gone to gungun room to say last goodbye to her before leaving the house and when he comes out he doesn't see anybody he thinks that his aai will come and stop him and his baba bit she is not even there to say goodbye to him he becomes more emotional nad runs to garden to cry so nobody can see him like this

In kalma room

Kalyani:-  Kya keh rahe the aap bahar aap aur moksh yahan see Jana chahte Hain hmm ab main aapko it I buri lagne lagi Hoon ki aap mujhe chodkar jana chahte hai hmm boliye na 

Malhar :- bura to main lagne lagan Hoon tumhe kalyani na tumhein Meri parwah Hain aur na moksh ki tum apna faisla bahar sabko suna chuki aur ab mera faisla yahi Hain aur tum kis haq se  muje rok rahi hoon bolo 

Kalyani:- kis haq se ka Kya Matlab patni ke haq see rok rahi Hoon apko majn pati hai aap mere aur ye mat bhulyein ki main maa Hoon moksh ki uspar Mera bhi haq Hain aur vo aapke saath jane ke liye kabhi manega hi nahi 

Malhar:- galtfami hai tumhari kalyani moksh to kabka maan Chuka hai mere saath jane me lite aur rahi baat haq ki to tumhein yaad dilao ki tumhare hisaab na pati ka patni pee aur na patni ka pati pe yaad Hain uss din tumne kaka ko Kya kaha tha ki unka koi haq nahi banta mai pe tumhari baat keh raha Hoon kalyani isme itne shock hone wali Kya baat Hain aur vese bhi tum apni aai aur behen ko Chun chuki Hoon aur hamare rishte ki to koi value thi hi nahi tumahri nazaron main 

Kalyani:- Kya kahe jaa rahe Hain aap ye sab vo baat alag thi kaka ke behavior dekhke mujhe gussa aa Gaya aur mene keh di ye baat lekin iss baat ko aap aise use karenge ye mene kabbi socha bhi nahi tha aur moksh to abhi baachan hai use main samjha doongi pls kahi mat jaiye malharji main nahi reh paaongi aapke aur moksh ke bagir pls mat jaiye

With this line she satrted crying and malhar cannot see her crying like this but he stay strong for not him but for his son he has take this decision today and he cannot backout 

Malhar:- kalyani aise rone ka koi fayda nahi hai moksh aur mene ye decide kar Liya hai ki humein yahan see chalna chahiye kafi time ho Gaya hai Meri jeep ati hi hogi 

Aur rahi baat tum sabki to ek week ka time hai iss bungalow ko Khali karne main tumhe vese bhi swara niwas Jana tha tum ab easily jaa sakti Hoon sabke saath 

Aur behtar yahi rhega ki tum moksh see kam se kam Milo tumhare bina vo vese bhi aasani see nahi reh payega aur tumhein an apni naai jimmaindariyon main time bhi nahi milega humse milne ka 

Chalta Hoon aur ek baat yaad rakhna kalyani aaj jo galti tumne ki thi na mujhpe meri gun uthane ki vo aage se maat karna main tumhara pati Hoon to aaj maaf kar Diya lekin aage aisi galti mere ya kiske ke bhi saath karogi to Meri jagah police aayegi tumhein lene 

With his bitter words kalyani get shocked and remind all the scannerios and start crying bitterly how she lost her  husband and her son with her stupidity 

Malhar goes out to find moksh and to start their upcoming life without his wife and his son's mother 

 Should I make a second chapter to this ts or leave it here only

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Wow u are a great writer man 

Please continue and aise hi realistic rakhna 

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Malharji ka decision was awesome and he stood by it👏

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Originally posted by: GAYATHRINAYAR

Wow u are a great writer man 

Please continue and aise hi realistic rakhna 

With low dose of raabta 

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Keep writing

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Ohhh Vanshu 

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Tune humare sabki man ki baatein likhi hai….

Do continue it….



Malharji ki bejjati ka badla legi humari vanshika…



Looking forward for more updates….

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thank you priyu 😘😘😘🤩🤩

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Lovely... Bohot maza aaya.. 

Malharji ka decision was awesome and he stood by it👏

Sabki bhadass nikal di tumne.. 

Vanshu please continue.. 👍🏼

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thank you priyu 😘😘😘🤩🤩

Bejjati ka badla to jarror longi aur main aise hi kalyani ko bachne nahi doongi 

Cvs ko Malhar ki fikar nahi hai hum sabko to hai 

I will surely write the next chapter 😁😁

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Malhar :- thank you riddhima for being there for me mujhe kabhi nahi laga tha ki moksh tumse itna attach ho jayega 

Riddhima:- isme thank you ki Kya baat he is like my son and you are my best friend so I have to be there na 

Aur vese ye sab tum isliye keh rahe hona kyunki tumhe mujhe aur moksh ko aaj beach par le Jana tha inn meethein baaton ka humpar koi asar nahi hoga  samjhe 

Kyun moksh 

Moksh :- Yee riddhu baba aaj hum teeno jayenge ok

With these bickering they all laugh but malhar eyes get moist in between by remembering something

 


On other hand 

Some time back 

Doctor:- you are pregnant Mrs. Rane congratulations

Kalyani:- thanks doctor I will take your leave now

With this she comes out from cabin

And cried bitterly by remembering something