Dev x Rishita One Shots

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Posted: 3 years ago
Guys I have just started watching Pandya store and I started feeling that Dev and Rishita could have given better chatacter arcs so these are my takes on this couple. ------------------------------------------------------------------- I'm Sorry Raavi Summary- This one shot is based on the kidnapping track that was going on in the show. After Shiva and Raavi have returned home everyone is happy except two people who are Dev and Rishita and are guilty for what the couple had to endure because of them, and both try to ask for forgiveness from Raavi and Shiva. The story starts after both Shiva and Raavi are sent to their room. Dhara- Shiva Raavi tum dono jao room mein jaake so jaao. Rishita- Nhi Dhara bhabhi ek minute. Everyone felt that Rishita was again trying to fight with Raavi but what she said later shocked everyone especially Shiva and Raavi. Rishita- Raavi aur Shiva store room mein nhi soyenge. Shiva- Ae Ameer baap ki beti... He was about to continue before that Rishita interrupted. Rishita- Aree Shiva mujhe complete karne toh do tum dono hamare kamre mein rest kar lo abhi tum theek nhi ho. Raavi- Nhi Raavi iski koi zarrurat nhi hai. Dev- Zarurat hai Raavi humari wajah see tum dono itna sab sehna pada tumhe apne childhood love see dhokha milne ke baad uss insaan see shaadi karni jisse tum nafrat karti thi aur Shiva ko apni zindagi ki sabse badi khushi ki bali mere aur Rishita ke liye chadha di. Rishita (contd)- Hum jo past mein hua hai usko toh reverse toh nhi kar sakte lekin I promise humari wajah se tum dono ko bilkul bhi koi pareshaani hogi kyunki... Everyone- Kyunki???? Dev- Kyunki maine decide kiya hai ki hum dono yeh ghar chhod kar chale jaayenge. Gautam- Dev aise achanak itna bada decision lena sahi nhi hai. Rishita- Gaumbi aap sahi keh rhe ho lekin mere papa ki wajah se aap logon ko already itna sab kuch sehna pada hai agar hum yahan rhe toh pata nhi kia ho jaayega. Dhara could not say anything but didn't stop crying and why couldn't she cry the child she raised with so much love would be leaving her. Suddenly Shiva came towards Dev and slapped him tightly. Everyone- Shiva!!! Shiva- Kya samjhta hai tu khud ko haan mujhese bada hai lekin yeh nhi ki meri kurbani ki yeh saza dega mujhe. Jaanta hun hum dono bachpan see kisi baat ek saath agree  nhi  karte hain lekin iska yeh matlab nhi ki main tujhese nafrat karta hun tujhe pareshaan karne ka haq sirf mera hai aur kisi ka nhi aur rhi baat Janardhanseth ki toh sab hum bhai saath koi hamara kuch nhi bigaad sakta. Rishita- Lekin Shiva..... Shiva- Nhi Rishita bhabhi!!!! Everyone was shocked as how could Shiva accept his and Rishta's devar- bhabhi relation so quickly and Rishita though she was a spoilt brat and could not understand importance of relations was so happy when shiva called her bhabhi she felt as shewas finally getting accepted in the pandya parivaar. Shiva- Nhi Rishita bhabhi main jaanta hun meri dev aapki aur iss mami ki behen ki beti ki shaadi kin halaton mein hui lekin ab hum chaaron ko issi chhat ke niche rehna hai aur rhi baat maafi ki aap  dono mujhese nhi uss mami ki behen ki beti se maangni hai kyunki inn sab mein sabse zyaada agar kisi ne kuchh khoya hai toh isne. Rishita went towards Raavi. Rishita- Raavi mujhe maaf kar do abhi tak jo maine tumhe bola uss ke liye main kya karun papa meri shaadi kisi aur se karane wale they and main dev ko kisi aur ke saath imagine bhi nhi kar sakti thi aur rhi baat humari shaadi ki  toh Dev ke pyaar ke liye mujhe apna parivaar chhodna pada mare papa jinka main gurror thi unhone mujhe apnane se mana kar diya kahin na kahin main tut gyi thi lekin mera tarika apna dukh jatana ka tumse alag tha mujhe maaf kar do. Dev (folding his hands)- Mujhe maaf kardo Raavi main tumhara gunhegaar hun maine tumhe jhoot tumhara dil dukhaya tumhara bharosa toda pls agar ho sake toh mujhe maaf kar do aur agar tumhari maafi pane ke liye mujhe kuch karna padega toh main karunga. Raavi- Dev Rishita yeh sach hai ki mujhe dukh pahuncha but main dev se pyaar karti ti toh main uski khushi hi chahungi aur  Rishita rhi baat tumhari toh haan mujhe bohot bura laga lekin tumhare confession se mqin tumse nafrat nhi karungi. Both resolve their conflicts but Raavi turned to Dev and said. Raavi- Aur dev tumhari punishment yeh hogi ki tumhe mujhe bhabhi bulana padega taaki tumhe yaad rhe ki jo ladki tumhari patni banne wali thi tumhari bhabhi bann gyi hai. Dev- Meri punishment mujhe manzoor hai Raavi bhabhi. Everyone started laughing whereas GauRa admired the bond between them Rishita came towards GauRa and started apologizing to them. Rishita- Gaumbi Dhara bhabhi mujhe maaf kardo main kabhi siblings aur parivaar walon ke beech nhi badi hui hun single child thi apne mummyp papa ki toh unhone bina mange sab kuch de diya aur school mein main apni friends ko dekti thi jinke bhai behen hote they toh main jealous feel karti thi aur jab mujhe yeh sab mila toh main nibha nhi paayi. Krish- Kisne kaha aapke bhai nhi hai Rishita bhabhi. Shiva- Haan Rishita bhabhi Krish sahi keh rha hai, main, Gaumbi aur Krish hain aapke bhai. Dhara- Aur main aur Raavi hain tumhari behen. Everyone hugged each  other and after the reunion Shiva and Raavi were sent to Dev and Rishita's room where they were personally taken care by Rishita and Dev and Raavi and Rishita had become really good friends. The End Suggestions are always welcomed Riddhi Saini

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Posted: 3 years ago

I really liked it, her characterization would get so much better if she could start reading the room. I feel many of the things we have a problem with is that she doesn't take into account the people around her. 

So this is good, hopefully she'll get better in the show too.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice one! Glad to see a sensible dev and rishita here.. it was good that they apologized to both and shiva accepted her as his bhabhi.. keep writing!❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
Thanks a lot dear was afraid u guys might not like dev ans rishita
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Riddhi2Saini006

Thanks a lot dear was afraid u guys might not like dev ans rishita


Haha I'm sure all of us will enjoy sensible characters! Although I'm partial to shivi 😳 but I don't mind dev-rishita too if they are written well 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

❤ I really enjoyed reading this! I already love Dev and can't wait for Rishita's character growth. She doesn't have to be exactly like Dhara and Raavi at all, just understanding towards the family and situations which was nice to read here. Do share some more if you can 😊.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Very nice, liked Devita in this.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice update😊

Loved the characterization of Dev and Rishita here

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Posted: 3 years ago

I was feeling bad that they were left out from discussions and fan fictions as a couple, glad you wrote about them ♥️

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Posted: 3 years ago
Yeah that's what made me write the os coming with a ff soon