Wow! This was a great read! I love how you took another spin on the story, and quite personally, would've much rather seen the story taken this way (just to avoid Raavi's sadness). Hope there's more!
Wow! I love this take to the story 😂♥️ It sort of suits Shivi too! Do continueee!
Hi, this was Great.
Only Raavi could create such a Situation. Dev doesn’t know he was saved.
I had to reread the specific part were Shiva agreed to her lies, I was laughing... it was Amazing
Please continue soon
Glad we ate getting more work on Shivi :)
That was awesome!! The first half was sad, felt sorry for Raavi but the second half had me laughing 😆. Your one line " she didn't know if she was making the situation better or worse?" Perfectly described the situation.
And honestly, I would have totally loved if the show had gone in that direction.
I really had fun reading this! And I hope you'll continue to write ❤
Loved the last line
It rocked the OS
Some of the dialogues I didn’t get
But this was so entertaining
❤️💗💕
Thank you all for liking it. Glad that you all liked it. Yes there's more to it. I actually planned an os with considerable length. then IF didn't let me post it all together and it turned into ss I guess.
Thanks to @Namita-M actually for clearing my confusion on IF spam.
ah, That's because you're still a newbie, you're going to have a limited amount of control over your account until you get to Groupbie.
I believe your 51st post will make you a Groupbie.
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