Unfinished ( Shaaki OS) : Part 1: page 4 - Page 3

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Tashaf_arshi

Waiting...Please update soon..

I will ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Ariyatogether

Awesome❤️

Anokhi still hv strong feelings for Shaurya

Cont soon

Thanks dear❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Loved the Prologue❤️. Continue  soon.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Yaay!!! Glad you continued from "A Moment". 🤗


It was much awaited. 

Aur yeh cliffhanger. 

Eagerly waiting for the next part....

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Posted: 3 years ago

So intriguing! Plzz continue. ❤

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Posted: 3 years ago

Salam and hi.

I know i am late ,sorry🙈

As today,our shaurya gain loads of adjectives so thought to melt some hearts here😂🤣. 

Enjoy!


PART 1:


It felt something clenched her heart. Tears flow down from her eyes and she was continuously calling him.

" Shaurya! Shaurya! Kiya hogya apko!" Suddenly, she wiped her tears and grabbed the glass of water from the table. She pour water in her hands and splashed on his face.

" Shaurya!" Finally he opened his eyes. She quickly put the glass down and grabbed his face. 

" Shaurya! Utho !" She removed his glasses.

" Hmmm! Mee.....meet....mm" he murmured in his subconscious.

" Kiya chayay! Mujhay samjh...." Suddenly she remembered astha maam and shaan sir conversation. They were tensed with his reports. He had diabetes and thats was mainly due to stress and overthinking.

" Meetha!.. woh kahan s laon..." She quickly looked here and there in the room. She searched her bag, his bag, coat,drawers but couldnot find anything sweet. Canteen was also closed. Suddenly ,her eyes went to his pant pocket.

" Anokhi wahan hath....kese" she hesitated but she had searched everything. Reluctantly, she grabbed him around his waist to tilt him so that she could check his pocket. In this process, he was all over her nestling his head in her neck. 

" Is mn to kuch nahi!" 

" Please mata rani, dosri mn to ho!" She moved him to the other side carefully and found a chocolate in the other pocket. 

" Shukar!" She settled him on the seat and quickly put chocolate in his mouth. 

" Mmmm" shaurya murmured.

" Shaurya! Khao." 

After few moments, he gained his consciousness. 

" Anokhi tum..." His head was spinning.

" Late hogya hai..tum jao yahan s" after the last incident, he never allow any female student in his room after 6 pm. He had some what lost trust on himself. Maybe, he could do that again to any other girl!

" Chup! Aik dam chup! Yeh kia tareqa hua yahan itni raat tak rehne ka. Na ghar janay ka hosh hai, na khanay ka, na medicine ka! Agar mn na ati aur agar kuch hojat...." Her voice choked. 

Shaurya didnt have strength to say anything. He just wanted her to go away before he lost himself again. He had been disturbed since last month; he didn't sleep properly nor eat, not have proper conversation, be aloof to every female student and couldnot let her out of his mind. And here she was again, with tears and care in her eyes; for him. He closed his eyes!

Anokhi quickly standup and grabbed the plate of food. It was cold. She turned on the microwave and after 5 minutes, she was again in front of him with food. She quickly mix the bite with her hand and forward towards him.

" Shaurya! Mun kholo" he quickly opened his eyes and found her sitting on floor in his feet and this time, his heart clenched.

" Tumm...uupar betho" he murmured.

Anokhi looked to find any other chair but there were books,files and his stuff on them.

" Koi hai nahi khali, ap khalo" anokhi replied. Shaurya collected his courage and stood up.

" Ap kun uth rahay..." The words remain in her mouth as he picked her up from the waist and placed her on the table and again settled himself on the chair.

" Aaaa .." shaurya called her with his mouth open. She quickly started feeding him. Not a single word was uttered from any side. 

" Basss...bauhat khaliya" shaurya moved his face.

" Apne sirf 4 niwale hi liye hain." 

" Bass kafi hai."

" Koi kaafi nahi hai. Yeh puri plate khani hogi. Us s pehle mn kahin janay nahi wali." Anokhi again made a morsel and started feeding him. He couldnot remember the last time anyone fed him like this or anyone put a claim on him like she is doing.

" Basss yeh last" anokhi was treating him like a child. He finished it and then she handed him his medicine. She tried to step down from the table but, she lost the balance and fell on his lap which he quickly balance otherwise the chair would have flipped.

" Ahhhhh" she winced in pain as her hand twisted.

" Aram se. Kia jaldi thi utarne ki" shaurya grabbed his hand with care and checked it. His one hand was on her waist and other in her hand and she was almost sitting on him. Anokhi felt the awkwardness and tried to move away but the chair moved and her head hit his chest. They both didnt know what to do. There eyes met and it felt like they saw each other after ages; the last month consist of avoiding each other. They both looked intently to each other as if memorizing each feature.

" Tumne baal bandhana kabse shru kardye!" He questioned putting the strand behind her ear.

" Jabse apne shave karni chordi" she countered.

" Bindi kun nahi lagayi." Putting his fingers on her forehead.

" Ap n yeh shirt lagatar tesre din pehni hai" she touched his buttons.

" Aur woh jhumkay!" His eyes filled with tears.

" Apk....apki ghari" she pointed towards his bare hand. 

The storm was about to settle; she couldnot handle more and hides herself in his chest and cried her heart out. On the other hand ,he welcomed her with open arms, heart and this time, even mind and tears fell from his eyes.



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To be continued!

Feedback welcomed♥️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Aww🥺❤️ Yeh kya kia?? Aisa kyun kia??😂🙈

Btw this was so good.. you indeed were right about the heart melt thing😆 Beautifully written..🤗😳

Do continue soon❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: deepshiii

Aww🥺❤️ Yeh kya kia?? Aisa kyun kia??😂🙈

Btw this was so good.. you indeed were right about the heart melt thing😆 Beautifully written..🤗😳

Do continue soon❤️❤️

Kiya??


Hua na melt😂🤣

Thanks for reply♥️

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Posted: 3 years ago

My heart 🥺🥺🥺🥺

Feelings are still there and will always be there. So good!! 💕

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Juwii29

My heart 🥺🥺🥺🥺

Feelings are still there and will always be there. So good!! 💕

Thanks dear♥️💓