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Posted: 3 years ago

Randheer was busy reading his letters to Ranjhan. Amrit had handed over the letter box to him and had also promised him to write a reply to each of those. As he kissed the last one, a loud tap on the table disturbed his mood. He looked up to find Amrit arranging the water jug on the sidetable.


Their eyes met. His soft ones met her flustered orbs.

"Gentleman!" She said, fuming. His eyebrows arched up, questioning her statement.

"Gentleman samjha tha aapko!" 


He got up and kept the letters aside.

"Huh?"

"Aapko meri kahaniyon ka nayak ka bol diya, apne aap ko cinema ka hero samjhne lage?"


She turned around, and hid her smile, which was getting harder to suppress.


"Amrit, main sach bol raha hoon. Farooq ne hi mujhpar haath uthaya tha pehle aur phir woh Vashma..."


"Vashma? Vashma ke saath aap kar kya rahe the? Haan? Mere saath toh kabhi sher-o-shayri nahi ki aajtak?" She made a pout-face.


As much as Randheer was loving this possessive side of hers, he didn't like those tones of doubt.


"Amrit, mera yakeen...."


"Yeh dekho, kinna sonna damaad paaya hai hum sab ne. Pehle bahar gharwaali ki saheli ke saath chedchad, ab yahan... haaye tauba."

Mogar cursed her luck and her lord yet again.


Randheer opened his mouth to speak but Amrit jumped into his defence.

"Bua ji, yeh baat toh main bhi jaanti hoon aur aap bhi, ke Randheer ji aisa sapne mein bhi nahi kar sakte. Toh phir apna waqt kyun barbaad karna?"

"Aur mainu ek gall dasso, Farooq aur Abrar Baig Manzil ki pichli gali mein kaise pohoche? Bata doon main Bauji ko? Ki mujhse zyaada toh aapki nazar hai Randheer ji par."


Mogar's mouth went wide open in shock and she left the place immediately.


Amrit turned around to find Randheer smiling back at him. "Accha toh meri taang kheechi jaa rahi thi."

He tried to act miffed but her coy smile washed the resolve away.


He lifted up her chin and looked at those innocent little eyes staring back to him with all the love in the world.

"Bharose ki toh koi baat hi nahi hai... 

Khudse zyaada aap par hai naaz, 

Aur yahi hai iss Ranjhan aur Amrit ka pehla aur aakhri raaz."

She said.


He laughed at the adorableness she had in her words.


"Maine faisla kar liya hai, aajke baad na toh Maine aage kya hoga, iske baare mein sochna hai, naa hi apni kismat par shak karna hai. Main aapki kitni ho sake itni madad karna chahti hoon, taaki..."

He kept his finger on her lips.


"Bass. Ab aur mujhe kuch nahi sunna." He said.


"Par ek baar toh batao. Yeh Uday ko itna gussa sirf is liye aaya tha ki Farooq ne mujhe itni zor se maara?" He spoke dramatically, wanting to know the truth.


She laughed and pulled his nose, startling him completely.

"Nahi ji, Uday veerji toh, toh... Vashma se pyaar karte hain..." she smiled and ran away, as soon as she heard her Bauji's footsteps nearby.


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Mahi.

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Posted: 3 years ago

How I wish to see this on screen  Obviously Amrit and Uday will never ever doubt Randheer and Vashma but makers are sooo obsessed with Mogar and Pagdi Uncle that they often ignores the pain of Randheer and Uday from THEIR Own point of views 💔 

Beautiful write up Mahi 👏

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thanks for this beautiful write-up, Mahi 👏

Thought that Amrit is gonna MU Randheer, but she turned around and told off Mogar for her interference 😆

Hope at some point, this happens in the show too 👍🏼

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Posted: 3 years ago

Wow Mahi amazing! I would love if this happens in the show❤️

Do continue soon😃

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Posted: 3 years ago

Mahi this was awesome❤️

Loved the way Amrit shut Mogar up and defended Randheer. Would love to see something like this in the show 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Marvelous 👏

 Ranjhan and Randheer's special connection, amrit teasing Randheer .... As usual mogar has to interrupt their moments... How amazing is it to read about amrit defending her Randheer... Wishing too see the same in the show.... Amrit's assurance to Randheer is beautiful.... We have seen Randheer's loverboy side waiting to see amrit's lover girl side as well. 

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Posted: 3 years ago

wow Mahi! I didnt know you can write so well.

Do write more

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Posted: 3 years ago

This is such a beautiful OS😍😍♥️♥️♥️ do write more on AmDheer 🥺🥺🤧🤧♥️♥️♥️♥️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Wah short and sweet OS ❤️

Wish to get something like this in the show

Keep writing more🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Mahi Lovely OS. You Should Continue.