Hi Friends,
Modern love story of Akdha will be updated here
Hi Friends,
Modern love story of Akdha will be updated here
Please PM me when ever you update.
Chapter 1
It was dark and the moon was present in the sky with twinkling stars around and she was sleeping peacefully in her room hugging her teddy bear, she looked calm and beautiful even in her sleep because she had no tensions in her life. She is a teenage girl who turned 18 recently, she belong to a middle class Christian family with just 5 of them at home; her father (David Bharmal), Mother (Mary Mainavati) Elder brother (Chris Das) She ( Jodha Roslyn) and a younger sister (Sukanya Sherlyn)
The sun came up and she was still sleeping, it was 8am her mother screamed "JODHA" are you still sleeping? It's 8am, don't be late to college on the very first day... Jodha opened her beautiful grey eyes, she sat down joining her hands and saying thanks to God for the day, then she slowly took her phone and the minute she saw the time she jumped from the bed throwing the bedsheet aside screaming mummy why didn't you wake me up? She rushed into the bathroom, got freshen up and came out with a towel wrapped around her silky skin, she opened her wardrobe and took a blue jeans with white tops, she put a simple pony, applied Kajal to her beautiful eyes and lipgloss on her lips made her look hot.
She walked out of her room saying mummy I am getting late where is my breakfast? Mainavati got a plate with dosa and said here it is, can't you wake up early atleast today? She asked looking at her daughter, Jodha said it was your fault mummy you should have woke me up and from behind she heard a voice "Jodha", biting her tongue with a smile she said "Good Morning daddy" he replied good morning beta, all set for the 1st day of your college? He asked, yeah dad replied Jodha munching her dosa, from behind someone slowly hit on her head, without turning behind, bhaiya screamed Jodha, you lazy gosse, remember I passed out from the same college don't spoil my name being lazy, Jodha threw a careless attitude and continued eating her dosa... Her phone rang, she answered the call; where are you? Me and Moti are waiting for you in the bus stop said Hema, Jodha said 2 minutes and ran out saying bye to everyone.
She reached bus stop in 2 minutes, Jodha, Moti and Hema are friends for almost 15 years and they did their schooling together... All 3 took a bus and reached college in 40 minutes, as they entered the college Moti said, until 12th we studied only in girls school, 1st time in our life we have joined co-ed, what difference that's gonna make asked Jodha and someone blocked their way, we are your seniors wish us good morning and then enter the college he said, another guy who was with him, stared straight into Jodha's eyes and said "Wow" so beautiful I wish "JALAL" was here, why the hell is he late today call him right away he said, Jodha and her friends walked away silently from there.
Hope you all like it.
Inshallah! How beautifully written ❤️ the starting is awesomev⭐️ but the names are bit funny ra 😆 any chance of changing the names 🥱 aww, by listening Maina's and Jodha's talk..it reminded me of my mom! Haa na, why the hell Jalal is not there 🤔 Just waiting for our hero's entry my Jalal will not trouble Jodha na ? eagerly waiting! U really have some power to hook people on your story😆🤗continue soon ra !
First of all this is Sayani here
Can I know your age
My age is 18 years if you are elder than me can I call you didi
Now enough of my intro
Coming to the chapter
Awesome chapter
Totally loved it ❤️
I have a special intrest in modern akdha story ❤️❤️ and loved the whole thing of the first chapter
Now waiting for jalal's entry let see if he becomes a troublemaker for jodha or not
But if he becomes the one then the story will be more interesting 🙂
Continue it soon
Thx for pm
And haan from next chapter ka length thora bada kar digiye ga 😅😅
congrats for new story 🥳
Interesting beginning.
Let's see how Jalal spice up Jodha's life. Troublemaker or dear friend ...
Well written
I'm excited for next part
plz pm me
Originally posted by: SayaniSharmaFirst of all this is Sayani here
Can I know your age
My age is 18 years if you are elder than me can I call you didi
Now enough of my intro
Coming to the chapter
Awesome chapter
Totally loved it ❤️
I have a special intrest in modern akdha story ❤️❤️ and loved the whole thing of the first chapter
Now waiting for jalal's entry let see if he becomes a troublemaker for jodha or not
But if he becomes the one then the story will be more interesting 🙂
Continue it soon
Thx for pm
And haan from next chapter ka length thora bada kar digiye ga 😅😅
She's elder to u 🤪
Originally posted by: SayaniSharmaFirst of all this is Sayani here
Can I know your age
My age is 18 years if you are elder than me can I call you didi
Now enough of my intro
Coming to the chapter
Awesome chapter
Totally loved it ❤️
I have a special intrest in modern akdha story ❤️❤️ and loved the whole thing of the first chapter
Now waiting for jalal's entry let see if he becomes a troublemaker for jodha or not
But if he becomes the one then the story will be more interesting 🙂
Continue it soon
Thx for pm
And haan from next chapter ka length thora bada kar digiye ga 😅😅
And unhe hindi bhi kam aati h 🤣
Originally posted by: MahiraSingh3030She's elder to u 🤪
Ok then she will also be my didi 😆
Originally posted by: MahiraSingh3030And unhe hindi bhi kam aati h 🤣
Acha
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