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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
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Thank u very much friends
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re...Since your craze has come over me... Part 3

Dedicated to Piyali for the jodi name given to Samar Piya:PiyAr
⭕ Awwww, Thanks a lot, waise didn't realize while saying but rethinking PiyAr sounds like Pyar na
Meenakshi was very upset.Mehul noticed her.
Mehul:What happened Meenakshi?Why do you look upset?
Meenakshi:Mehul…we were wrong.Samar has not changed a bit.He has not accepted Piya yet as she is an orphan.
⭕ Kahan na Aunty, App galat samajh rahe ho 😞
Mehul was shocked:What?
Meenakshi:Yes.I saw them sleeping separately.
Mehul:May be they had a small fight.
⭕Meine toh pehle bhi bola tha, Mann lo yahi hua hai 😖
Meenakshi:No Mehul.I saw them walking together and chatting cheerfully.They are continuing to be friends.
⭕🤦‍♀️
Mehul was stunned.
Mehul:Samar has not accepted Piya as he feels that he is superior to her because of his family heritage.We need to break his arrogance.
⭕Thats not the right reason to tell him truth honestly
Meenakshi:But how?
Mehul:We need to tell him the biggest truth that he was adopted from the same orphanage.
Suddenly they saw Samar standing near the door with a shock.He was shattered.
⭕Oops, I expected it, Things are I guess going to get complicated now ☹
Meenakshi:Samar!
Samar:So this is why I was made to mingle with the orphans in that orphanage.Because I am also one of them.
⭕No, No, Thats not the reason dearie, They just wanted you to be humble
Mehul said painfully:Yes.We did not get you married to any high class girl by hiding your truth.When we were looking for girls we told them confidentially that you are an adopted son.Knowing that all the marriage proposals got cancelled.That’s when we noticed your friendship with Piya and decided to get her married to you.Since she is also an orphan we were sure that this marriage alliance won’t get cancelled because of your secret.
⭕Oh, So they did think about high class girl but guess it was just normally and not because they were high class otherwise they wouldn't have selected Piya eventually...does Piya know it?
Samar was crying.
⭕Awww😢
Meenakshi was in tears.
Meenakshi:Samar….but we love you like our own son.
⭕Yes
Mehul:Yes..we love you a lot Samar.We wanted the best for you.
Samar:I know that.You both love me more than anything else.
He hugged them crying.
⭕Awww, I love their scenes here
Samar:I need to tell the truth to Piya.
⭕Nice thought but pehle confess toh karlo dude
Meenakshi:No need Samar.Because before marriage we had told her the truth.
⭕Oh, I did think this, Piya is another level sweetheart haan
Samar was shocked.
⭕Abb zyada repend karna haan
Samar:Piya knew that I did’nt give her a wife’s position as she is an orphan.Still she did not taunt me by disclosing that I am also an orphan like her.
⭕Wahi toh, Awww the girl is such a sweetie
Mehul:Because she loves you truly.
⭕Hmmm, so right, also because she is amazing
He wept.
Samar:I also love her.But I could’nt confess my love to her.
⭕Yippe Bol diya 🥳
Mehul-Meenakshi were surprised:What?
Mehul:You love Piya?
Samar:Yes.I don’t know how.I fell in love with her.
Meenakshi-Mehul were very happy.
⭕Finally, confusion cleared
Meenakshi:It’s so nice that you also love her.You should tell her that you also love her.
⭕Haan, Jaldi jaldi but she toh already knows na 😉
Samar looked at them emotionally.
Samar went to the room and embraced Piya crying.Piya was stunned.
⭕Awwwww
Piya:What happened Samar?
Samar:I am sorry Piya.
⭕Perfect Pic
Piya:But why?You did’nt do any mistake.
Samar:I did a big mistake to you.I ignored you as I considered you only as an orphan.But now I understood that I am also an orphan.
⭕Awww, But that doesn't matter na, Don't make her feel you are confessing love because of this truth dear
Piya was shocked.
Piya:Who told you this lie?
⭕This Girl 😘😘😘😘😘😘😀😘
Samar:Don’t hide the truth anymore.I got to know everything.Please forgive me Piya.
Piya felt upset seeing his tears.
Piya:Samar!
Samar:You are great Piya.Not even once you told me that I am also an orphan even though you could have pricked my heart with this truth.But you did’nt do so.. because you did’nt want to see me upset.
⭕Aisa bhi nahi hai, Expect for late truth you also never intentionally hurt her 😍😍
Piya became very emotional:Samar…just leave it.Think about the future.Let us stop talking about this topic and live in our present.
⭕Yes but still, let him introspect a bit na
Samar was silent.
She wiped his tears.
⭕Awww
Piya:I will bring you water.
Piya went to take water.
Samar said in his mind:I know Piya that you love me a lot.I also love you.But sorry for not revealing my love to you.If I confess you my love now you will think that I love you only because I know that I am an orphan like you. How will I make you understand that even before knowing that I am an orphan I started loving you?
⭕Yes Hayee, Are you are mind reader jasmine? Anyways, I so so so love the fact that Piya already knows this, You have plotted this story marvellously
Samar’s tears rolled down his cheeks.As Piya entered the room with water,he wiped his tears and took the glass of water from her.
Piya:I hope... you are feeling better.
⭕Perfect Pic
Samar:Yes…as long as you are with me.
⭕Oho , stop for now
She smiled.
Samar walked out of the room painfully.
⭕Oh, Guess thats leading to self hurt, Piya you only tell him na
After a few days….
Piya was becoming restless.
Piya:Why Samar is not confessing his love to me?Is it because he is still upset about being an adopted son?
⭕🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️
She went to the living room.She saw Samar laughing and chatting with his parents.
⭕Awwwwwww
Piya smiled.
Piya:Samar is not gloomy now.Then why is he hiding his feelings from me?
⭕You only let him know the truth na
Piya was coming out of the court with her senior lawyer Arundati.
Samar reached there with his car to pick up Piya.
Samar:Today Piya will be surprised to me.
A man was standing and staring at them.
He:Advocate Arundati…because of you,my brother got jailed and our family drug business got ruined.I will not leave you.
He took a gun and aimed at Arundati.Samar who saw it got shocked.
😮😮😮 Will piya try to save Arundati and samar save her? Nice twists

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Piyali

@.Piyali..

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Posted: 3 years ago

An amazing update jasmine, I totally enjoyed and am in awe with the plot, its amazingly written with all the complex ywt understandablr characters, Even though couldn't help but feel it was wrong of Mehul to think to break Samar's 'arrogance' by telling him his truth could still somewhere understand him given he did become completely like a father to Piya and hence couldn't see her being wronged in anyway,also didn't want her to think so yet loved Meenu's logical brain decoding PiYar's relationship...Samar getting to know everything(Thankfully MeMe{🤣} didn't tell though) and coping with it nicely...happy he thought about Piya foremost but sad at the reality of orphans or even adopted children being looked down by people even though they are successful, I did thought Piya knew it and of course she didn't say because of the amazing person she is though I do think MeMe should have set a timeline to eventually let him know his own truth growing up since getting to know from outside could have been very hurtful but yes, can understand them too...Piya consoling samar , Samar telling about his love to MeMe, Samar apologizing to Piyya and Samar and MeMe scenes were beautiful and so logical, Samars thoughts are completely valid but still, What can be done now unless Piya speaks up? Finally Piya wondering, wish she herself tells him that she already knows he loves her from before since his doubts are really valid... the last scene makes me feel Samar is going to dive in to save Piya , I hope both stay safe 🤞

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thank u so much friends 4 supporting me.This story is ending.Plz do give a detailed comment.Plz write your favourite scene,your favourite character and why you liked this character the most.

Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re...Since your craze has come over me... Part 4

Thank you Reena for the sweet edit

Piya was coming out of the court with her senior lawyer Arundati.

Samar reached there with his car to pick up Piya.

Samar:Today Piya will be surprised to me.

A man was standing and staring at them.

He:Advocate Arundati…because of you,my brother got jailed and our family drug business got ruined.I will not leave you.

He took a gun and aimed at Arundati.

Samar who saw it got shocked.

Arundati moved a bit and the bullet was about to strike Piya.Samar ran towards Piya and pushed her.He got shot.They were shocked.

Piya screamed:Samar!

She ran towards Samar and held him.

Arundati saw the shooter with a shock and ordered her men to catch him.

"Don't let him escape.Catch him".

Piya caught a car and got inside it with Samar.Samar was lying on her lap.

Piya told the driver:Please drive fast to the hospital.

Piya looked at Samar tearfully:Why did you do this?Why did you risk your life to save my life?

Samar:Because you are my life Piya.

His words touched her heart.

Samar:Piya..I think I reached the last stage of my life.

Piya cried:No..nothing will happen to you.

Samar:Pi..ya…I love you.

Piya was still weeping.

Samar:I know that you think that I love you only because I realized that I am also an orphan.But….tru..trust me ….even before knowing that I fell for you.A dying person won’t say such a lie.

Piya:You fool..stop it.Why do you feel that I will misunderstand you?I knew that you love me long back.But I was waiting for you to confess your love.

Samar was surprised.He felt happy that his love was not misunderstood by his beloved Piya.

Piya:So you delayed to confess your love because you thought that I will misunderstand that you accepted me only because you know that you are an orphan.Stupid guy.You wasted so much of time.You should have confessed your love earlier and we could have had lots of beautiful moments.

Samar regretted not confessing his love before and looked at her painfully.

(Please don’t see logic in this scene as Samar was talking a lot even after a gun shot).

They reached the hospital.

Nurse:Is it an accident case?

Piya was irritated because of the present situation.

Piya:Whatever it is..does it make any difference to you?Just give him treatment..call the doctor.

The doctor came.

Piya:Doctor please save his life.

Seeing Samar immediately he said:Take him to the theatre.

Samar was taken to the operation theatre.

Piya informed Mehul and Meenakshi.They also came there.The trio were crying.

On the other side the shooter got arrested.

After some time….

The doctor informed them that Samar was out of danger.

Meenakshi and Mehul hugged Samar with happy tears.

Samar and Piya looked at each other emotionally with a smile.

Meenakshi and Mehul decided to give them privacy and moved out.

Piya sat near Samar.

Samar:I thought that my life got over.

Piya:How can God take your life leaving our love story incomplete?

Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re
Ishq jo zara sa tha woh badh gaya re
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re

Samar smiled:I think God extended my life to complete our love story.

Piya:God extended your life to be with me,not to complete our love story.Our love story will never be complete.It will go on like that…never ending like our love.