MayRa/ShivJen DT #55 "Tum tak Sirf Maya Aayegi" - Page 7

Originally posted by: tournesol

Can't blame them, TRP pressure mein baar baar tracks change karne se story khichdi ban jati hai 🤪

I guess trp pressure was more during Vikram track...

Before that it was there flaw in writing I mean only revenge part

Originally posted by: dewdrops.16

Humara prananath ko hi dikha deta

Aasha hai apke hriday ki yeh prabal iccha avashya hi sampoorn ho

Originally posted by: tournesol

What would be her cue for SR 😆

For us it's tum tak sirf maya aayegi🤣

For Rudra we have to wait and see😉

Originally posted by: tournesol

Your shayaris are always too good, Darshi. 🤗

You rhymed the last line too 😆 (tata byebye one)

🤗 thank you dear..

Yes I am getting late to get ready and it was perfect rhyming so wrote it.😆 
n edited too as got one more rhyming line..

The queen is creating the complex hive,

In this revenge game she has to thrive.. 

Now my final tata bye bye..😆

Originally posted by: Sh18

Aapke tarif mein shabd kam pad jaate hai

Both of the poems👏❤️

Thank you Dear 🤗

See ya all in 1-2 hours..

Originally posted by: Sh18

I guess trp pressure was more during Vikram track...

Before that it was there flaw in writing I mean only revenge part

Rudy boy ka screen space kam karoge to TRP pressure to hoga 😆 BTW, the TRP was really high during the kiss week if am not wrong.

As far as I understood their pattern of story, they were trying to tell past and present in parallel. Same things that happened in the past were happening in the present, that's why they didn't give out the entire fb together. But sadly it didn't work. The revenge needed more careful planning to make sense.

Originally posted by: Sh18

For us it's tum tak sirf maya aayegi🤣

For Rudra we have to wait and see😉

I think she would ask him if he hates kids or not, then he'll have to prove he doesn't. 😉

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Waah waah waah waah..👏

Superb shaayri Ayushi..👏

Kya baat kya baat kya baat..👍🏼

Bahut bahut dhanyavaad apka , arey aapse hi prerna li hai aap hi prerna strot hain😃

Arz kiya hai...

Aapki taareef ke liye lafz pad gaye kumm..

Aapki shaayri ke saamne humaari shaayri tik paaye nahi usme utna dum..

Ab isse zyaada kya kahein hum..

Ki khushi ke aansuo se ho gayi humaari aankhein num..

Arey waah, lajawab shayari 👏Itni tareef se humara mukh tamatar sa lal ho chuka hai😳

Humein kshama kijiye ga hum yahaan urdu bhasha ka prayog kar rahe hai..

Urdu se shayari mein alag nazakat aa jati hai 

Originally posted by: dewdrops.16

Sach me😡

Aise cheeze dekhke mera mann mei adhik krodh ki uday ho rahi hai😡

Krodh ka pata nahi, but seriously if Jenny was not acting, I would have left watching this show already. Imagine in 4 months, what a drastic u turn the story has taken. Suddenly Rudra and Maya don't excite me and I can't sympathise with Maya anymore. And yeh Vikram hero hai kya? 

Originally posted by: tournesol

Wow! Amazing. Loved both of them 👏👏

Thankyouu😳