hi dear update was good. but it was so short one.plz give long update na. ok stay safe.
hi dear update was good. but it was so short one.plz give long update na. ok stay safe.
Nice
But it too short
Update soon
Nice update next part soon
Part 9
Guddan was crying continuously she felt like she has no one in this world to love her
Aj came home
Dadi:lalla tu agaya
Aj:ma guddan kahan hai
Dadi:apni kamre par hai rorahi hogi ithna datta hai tu us bechari ko ab ja he mafi puch
Aj goes to upstairs
He opened the saw guddan lying on bed
Aj goes towards her
Aj:guddan I am sorry patha nahi kya hua tha muje I am really sorry galthi hogaya
But guddan didn’t respond
Aj :kuch tho bolo muj par chillauo galthi hogaya mujse
But he didn’t respond he make her turn towards him
He gets shocked blood in her hand he hold her hand one knife is lying there
Aj:guddannnn yeh kya kiya tumne he hold her hand and warp a towel around her waist
Aj scream maaa....
Dadi and others came running
Dadi:kya hua lalla but she gets shocked to saw vision infrond of her
Durga:yeh kya kiya isne ...,
Dadi:kishore Doctor ko phone karo
Doctor came there after sometime
Aj:Doctor guddan kaise hai???
Doctor:zyada bada chot nahi tho gehri nahi thi isliye gabrane ki zaroorath nahi vo teek hai mei ne da ayi diya hai ab sorahi hai
Everyone sign in relief
Dadi:khana ji ka lack lack Shula hai
Saru:yeh sab kya hai aj me ek bar datta tho suicide karne gaya
Lakshmi:vahi thi agar aisa karna hothi tho hum sab kithni bar suicide karthi
Durga:chup raho
Aj look at them
Dadi:lalla hum tumara gussa janthi hai par guddan aisa nahi nadan hai bachi hai use is duniya mei koyi nahi hai tumare Siwa shyd tum use dur jaugi yeh soch kar yeh kadam udaya hoga
Aj:maa mere aisa koyi irada nahi thi patha nahi kya hogaya tha muje is vakth or mei kabhi nahi socha guddan aisa kuch karugi
Dadi:chalo ab jo hogaya uske bare mei bolkar kya fayda par abse use hurt math karo or yeh hameesha yaad rakna usne apna sab kuch tumari vajah se koya hai ab use kush rakna tumara responsibility hai
Aj:mei sab samjathi hu ma
Dadi:chalo use samjauo jauo Ab tu bhi sojauo kal bath karthe hai
Aj goes to his room saw guddan sleeping he sit beside her he hold her hand which is injured
Aj softy kiss her wound
Aj:kudh ko kabhi hurt math karna tumara choti si chot bhi muje dard dethi hai apne apko chot dene ki bare mei socha bhi kaise tu mije datt thi mujse gussa krathi par ye tumne kya kiya aisa saza math do muje
He also sleep beside her holding her hand
Bahus where chating
Saru:bahuth sha Thur hai vo guddan kithna hum socha use bada shathir hai vo
Lakshmi:vo tho sach hai ab tho aj use kuch nahi bolugi
Durga:sahi kaha tumlog yeh sab udo natak h hoga varna kon aisa kartha hai
Saru:ab aj use kuch nahi bolugi na use dattugi ulta hame use kuch kiya tho hum par badakugi
Lakshmi:yes aj bahuth dar gaya hai ajj kya patha vo fir se aisa kuch kare agar aj datta tho
Durga:mei jaise socha vaise bewakoof nahi hai vo emotional black mail kar kar vo aj ko pasaugi
Lakshmi:pasaugi nahi aj this pas China hai uski chal mei
Saru:mei tho kehthi us din door nahi jis aj antra maji ka jagah ise dugi
Durga:hmm tu teek kehrahi hai aisa hi chala tho antra maji aj ki zindagi sr nikal kar fekugi
Lakshmi:sab kehthi hai is guddan sr kuch nahi hops the hai par mei tho kehthi jo 15 saal mei koyi nahi karvaya vo yeh karugi
Durga:kya???
Lakshmi:AJ KI ZINDAGI SE ANTRA MAJI KO NIKALNA.......,
Continue with romantic part please
Nice update
Continue soon
yes continue soon with romantic part plz.waiting be safe.
Part 10
At mid night guddan’s sleep get broke she woke up she saw aj near her she try to move akshat get up
Aj:Guddan kya hua tu teek hai
Guddan:hum teek hai jindal saab
Aj:yeh Kya Kiya Guddan tumne kuch hona this tho mera kya hothi he cup her face tears rolling from guddan’s eyes
Guddan:muje laga ap muje chod kar cahli gayi
Akshat hug her he protectively wrap her in his emabarsss
Aj:aisa din kabhi nahi augi guddan tumara jindal saab hameesha tumara saath hogi tu this janthi huna apni jindal saab ka gussa
Guddan:hm
Aj:fir aisa kyun kiya
Guddan didn’t say anything
Akshat hold her hand which have injured he
Aj:bahuth dard horahi hogina
Guddu:hm bahuth
One long tear escape from his eyes he kiss her wound
Aj:abhi bhi dard hai
Guddan:ap mere saath hai tho koyi dard hame nahi chugi
Aj hug her make her lay on bed aj try to get up Guddan hold his hand
Jindal saab muje ap chahiye meri samne
Akshat kiss her forehead tightly hold hug her th u sleep like that
Next morning Guddan woke up she saw aj aranged food for her he smiles
Guddan:good morning
Akshat:good morning
He make her get up
Guddan:hame wash room jana hai
Aj take her to wash room
Akshat put her in bathtub
Guddan:jindal saab mei kudh karugi
Aj:nahi tumari hath mei dard hogi mei karugi
She make he take bath and make her wear her dress dadi and bahu’s came to his room
They get shocked to see akshat try to make guddan comb her hair
Dadi smiles:va lalla tune tho sab seek liya
Guddu smiles akshat try to go
Guddan:mera makeup bhi Latina jindal saab Bahu’s get shock aj make her ready perfectly
Dadi:aj tho bahuth pyaari lagarahi hai meri guddu’s
Guddu smiles
Guddu:jindal saab ab ap jayiye office keliye late hogi maji muje khana dugi
Aj:par...
Dadi:tu ja lalla mei huna aj goes from there
Dadi giving food to guddan
Dadi:muje bulathi meri bachi ya apni bahuon ko bulathi madad keliye akele akele kyun sab kiya chot laga haina tume
Guddu:nahi maji vo tho jindal saab kiya na sab mei me kuch kam nahi kiya muje nahaya dressing karvaya hair bhi banaya but she stop when she understood what she tell dadi try to cover her smile
Bahu’s gets shocked aj????
Guddu:hmm dadi khana bahuth tasty hai apne banaya
Dadi:nahi tumari jindal saab. E
Guddan:dadi muje dard horahi hai mei toda sothi hu she act like sleeping dadi smiles and goes from there
At outside
Lakshmi:hu yeh mei kya suna aj or uske beech...
Saru:ab kuch nahi hosaktha Durga di jaldi hamareliye choti devar ya nanad augi...uska intzar karo
Lakshmi:hu bagwaan kaise samaj ko muh dikaugi hum
Durga:chup bait tum dono dimak math khayo
Saru:Durga di aj or Guddan ke beech physical relationship zaroor hai ab hum unhe alag Nahi Kar paugi
Durga:nahi aisa hone nahi desaktha hum kuch karna hoga
Part 11
At night aj came home he saw Guddan watching tv in hall she smiles at her he sit beside her
Guddan:jindal saab ap agaya
He happily hug aj
Dadi and bahu’s saw this bahu’s get angry dadi get happy
Aj:kaisa hu tum ab
Guddan:teek hu
Aj saw her her messed up after all she is Guddan 😉
Aj:yeh kya Hal banakar rakha hai apne apko cheeshe mei dekh
Guddan:vo mei tv dekrahi thina
Aj:tho??
Guddan:aise hi ptha nahi kaise hua
Aj smiles at her antics he make hair perfectly adjust
Guddan smiles put her head on his shoulder
Aj:kya dekrahi hu
Guddan:film
Aj:oh
Guddan:apko patha hai is movie bilcul hamari life jaisa hai
Aj:aisa kya hai
Guddan:hero ki pehle shadi hua tha uski pehli pathni margaya vo bhi apko tharah pehli pathni ko bahuth pyaar karthi hai fir vo dusari shadi ki undono ke beech pyaar hone vale thi ajanak pehle pathni agaya .......she pause.....Aj just look at her guddu tightly hug Aj
Dadi and bahu’s listening their talk
Aj:fir Kay hua movie mei
Guddu:vo apni pehle pathni ke saath chali gaya dusari pathni ko chod kar
Aj:vo use bahuth pyaar karthi hoga isliye uske saath gaya hoga
Guddu:tho kya ap bhi hame chodkar jaugi agar antra ji vapas agaya tho???????
He qustion shock everyone Aj was staring her
Aj understand her heart
Aj:Guddan marne vala kabhi vapas nahi atha vo sab sirf film mei hotha hai asal mei aisa kabhi nahi hoga
Guddan:suppose aisa hogaya tho ap hame chodugi kya??
Aj:Guddan kyun tum ithna sochthi hu kuch bhi hojaye mei tumara hath nahi chodugi
Guddan:sach
Aj:sachi
Guddan innocently ask pinky promise
Aj smiles at her pinky promise
Dadi goes from there smiling
Dadi:yeh gudiya bina pagal hai ......
Lakshmi:Durga ab kya sun na baki reh gaya antra maji we zyada Aj ise man rahi hai ab
Saru:yeh sab kya hai Durga di Aj aisa kaise badal use milkar kuch maheene hua hai saloon pehle pyaar Aj bulgaya
Durga:muje iuch samjmei nahi arahi hai Aj ise ithna importance kyun derahi hai
Lakshmi:vahitho antra maji ko bulgaya kya Aj???
Durga:patha nahi aisa bhi hosaktha hai curse vo kuch galath na kare isliye aj us de pyaar de bath kar rahi hai uski dare bath manrahi hai
Saru:muje aisa nahi lagtha
Lakshmi:muje tho lagtha hai Aj ko use pyaar hogaya
Durga:shut up aisa nahi hoga
At akshan’s room
Guddan is making a drawing
Aj:yeh kya hai
Guddu:Kuch Nahi aise hi bana rahi hai
Akshat smiles
Guddan:jindal saab mei apki god mei sar rak sakthi hu
Aj:kyun nahi
He make her lay on his lap
Aj:kya hua
Guddu:Jindal Saab ap bahuth achi hu saber achi meri kithni care karthi hu ap
Aj smiles
Guddu:Jindal Saab yeh dekiye meri drawing
Aj look at that yeh kya hai
Guddu:hum app or hamara baby
Aj look at her shockingly
Guddu:Jindal Saab hamari bhi was ek Guaita hona chahiye haina
Aj didn’t say anything she ask one more time
Aj:kyun nahi bilcul Guddan ki tharah
She smiles
Guddu:Jindal Saab par muje ap jaisa baby cahhiye
Aj :kyun??
Guddu:kyuki muje ap pasand hai
Aj smiles he make her sleep
Akshat:kya mei sahi kar rahi hu ?guddan mere saath ek jindagi chahthi hai kya mei use vo depaugi kya aisa hopayega??vo jo kushi chahthi hai kya mei use de payega..............
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