Drikshit & Dishi FF Junoon Complete FF

Posted: 4 years ago

So guys here New FF on Drikshit & Dishi.

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Edited by arisharosid20 - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

Concept:

Drikshit and Dishi has nighbours and childhood friends.

Twist is that Daksh also thier friend and neighbour.

He is crazy and sycho lover of Drishti.

He hates Rakshit like anything and wants drishti in any cost.

Posted: 4 years ago

the title itself is very beautiful n attractive.nice banner.interesting banner.I thought daksh will be after divya.bcz he was the first shikhar so that Jodi has many fans.never expected him to be crazy for drishti

Posted: 4 years ago

Looking forward to the chapters.

Posted: 4 years ago

Character Sketch:

Vidya Sharma: A working women she has two twin daughters Divya Drishti her husband died in accident she take care of her daughters.

Drishti Sharma: A daughter of Vidya and twin sister of Divya she is one minute elder of her. She is shy and very innocent in nature. She love her mother and sister so much. She is best friend of Rakshit.

Divya Sharma: A daughter of Vidya and twin sister of Drishti. She is very brave and strong in nature. She love her Di so much and best friend of Shikhar.

Chetan Shergil: A Father of Rakshit and Shikhar. He is business man. He lives in abroad.

Rakshit Shergil: son of Chetan and elder brother of Shikhar. He is very intelligent and sensible boy. He loves Drishti so much she is his best friend. He can protect her from everything.

Shikhar Shergill: Son of Chetan. Brother of Rakshit. He is very fun loving boy. He loves so much Divya is his best friend.

Daksh: He is neighbor of Drishti & Rakshit as well class mate of Drishti.

He loves Drishti so much like a mad person. He can do anything to get her.

Posted: 4 years ago

Part 1:

A small town where everyone live happily.

Divya Drishti come breakfast is ready call Vidya.

Coming mom shout the girls.

8 years of girl coming holding each other hands.

Vidya smile on them.

My good girls got ready asked Vidya.

Yes mom said both of them.

Drishti did u learn your test asked Vidya.

After breakfast.

Come girls it’s time for go to school said Vidya.

They went out where Rakshit Shikhar and Daksh waiting for them.

Vidya drop everyone in school.

Reaching in school gate.

Divya take care of your Di said Divya.

Yes mom I will said Divya.

She hold Drishti hand and all went inside school.

Divya Shikhar go to your class I will drop Drishti in her class said Rakshit.

Dishi nodded it.

Come on Rakshit me and Drishti study in same class we can go said Daksh.

He try to hold Drishti hand but Rakshit stop him.

No it’s my duty I will leave her okay said Rakshit and hold Drishti hand.

Daksh got angry and went from there.

Shall we go Drishti asked Rakshit.

Yes Rakshit lets go said Drishti happily.

Rakshit leave Drishti in her class.

Then he went for his class.

Daksh try to sit with Drishti but friend sit with her.

Divya searching for her pencil box but not finding it.

(Divya Drishti is not in same class as both section is different)

What happens Divya asked Shikhar.

I forgot my pencil box said Divya worriedly.

Don’t worry u can share my things said Shikhar.

Thank u Shikhar said Divya.

Drishti did u do your homework asked teacher.

No miss said Drishti doing her head down.

Know u will get punishment u have to do thrice understand said Teacher.

Drishti nodded yes.

In lunch time.

Drishti looking upset Rakshit come to her.

Why my cutie pie is upset asked Rakshit.

Teacher give punishment give lots of homework complain Drishti cutely.

Don’t worry I will help you said Rakshit.

Ok thank you said Drishti getting smile.

Dishi come to them.

Let’s have lunch guys said Divya.

Ok let’s go said Rakshit.

They sit in garden.

Daksh come there and sit with them.

All five having lunch.

I forgot my water bottle in class said Drishti.

U have from this said daksh forwarding his bottle.

Ok said Drishti start having it.

After school off.

Chetan Driver come to pick them.

They reach home and all went in their home.

Posted: 4 years ago

For now things are normal between the friends. Guess that will change later.

Posted: 4 years ago

intro scene was nice.rakshit seems to be protective n possessive about drishti that he didn't allow daksh to hold her hand n drop her to her classroom.shikhar helping divya by sharing his pencil box with her was sweet.rakshit is helping drishti to do her punishment work.so nice.daksh giving water to drishti was also nice 

Posted: 4 years ago

Part 2:

Dishi playing with each other.

Drishti waiting for Rakshit.

Daksh come and sit with Drishti.

Come Drishti we will play said Daksh.

No I won’t I am waiting for Rakshit said Drishti and an about to leave.

Daksh hold her hand.

Come Drishti we will play right said Daksh.

No I won’t said Drishti.

Daksh got angry and he about to hold her but she got push.

She fell down and got scratch on knee and elbow.

Drishti start crying.

Rakshit rush to her who just come out from home.

He hold her and make her sit on compound slab.

Aaa its hurting said Drishti.

Daksh come near her but Rakshit push him.

How dare u to push Drishti like this shout Rakshit.

Divya & Shikhar rush to them.

I didn’t push her it’s just by mistake said Daksh.

Whatever because of u Drishti got hurt don’t dare to come near her warn Rakshit.

Rakshit hold Drishti in arms and take her inside her home.

Vidya saw Drishti is crying on Rakshit.

What happens to Drishti asked Vidya worriedly.

Mom stupid Daksh make her fall down said Diva angrily.

Vidya bring first aid box and put medicine on her.

Stop cry Drishti see its fine said Rakshit wiping her tears.

Drishti got smile.

Vidya admire them.

In night:

Divya Drishti sleeping.

Rain start starting with storming.

Storm sound so horrible.

Drishti got up and start shouting.

Mama mama shout Drishti.

Divya to get up.

What happens Di asked Divya.

Drishti close her ears in fear.

Vidya come listening Drishti voice.

Vidya hug her and console her.

Mama mama voice said Drishti.

See Drishti beta its nothing relax said Vidya.

Drishti sleep on Vidya arms.

Vidya look at Divya.

My Divya is so strong right said Vidya.

Yes mom I am brave girl but why Di always get scared asked Divya.

Because u both are twins sister u are brave and Drishti has loving nature both complete each other she always loves u and u will always protect her said Vidya.

Yes mom I will protect Di always said divya.

ok know sleep u have to go school said Vidya.

Divya hug Drishti and start sleeping.

Vidya admire their lovely daughters.

Posted: 4 years ago

Part 3:

After some years.

Drishti and Divya become 16 years.

Shikhar as well become 16 years.

Daksh & Rakshit became 25 years old.

Rakshit drop Drishti,Divya & Shikhar to college.

Take care guys said Rakshit.

Bye Bhaiya shout Dishi.

Bye Rakshit said Drishti.

All went inside and Rakshit leave for office.

Drishi always stay with Divya.

She scared from crowd.

College off timing.

Dishi went to submit some project.

Drishti waiting for them.

Some college boys surround her.

Drishti got scared she looks here there.

So beautiful girl u are in our college no lift to us said one boy.

No girl let we get friendship said one boy forwarding his hand to hold her.

But someone stop his hand it was Divya.

Drishti hold her from behind.

Don’t u dare to touch my Di or else I will break your hand warn Divya.

Divya took Drishti hand and went from there.

Divya was hell angry they reach where Rakshit and Shikhar were waiting.

Rakshit come to pick them.

They found Divya looking angry and Drishti scared.

What happens Divya asked Shikhar.

Drishti what happens asked Rakshit.

Some college boys trying to bully di said Divya.

What how dare they said Rakshit.

I warn them said Divya.

Divi said Drishti.

Let’s go guys said Divya didn’t reply to Drishti as she angry from her.

That she always does that never fight for her.

All sit in car silently.

All know when Divya angry no one dare to say anything.

This Divya spoil my plan I will save Drishti and impress her said Daksh looking everything from distance.

They reach home.

Divya went angrily inside Shikhar went behind her.

Drishti got tears and she start sobbing.

Rakshit wipe her tears.

Don’t worry Drishti Divya will be alright said Rakshit.

I was scared Rakshit really I got scared said Drishti innocently.

Rakshit hug her sidewise.

Its ok we are here na said Rakshit.

Divya throw her bags in anger.

Divya relax said Shikhar making her calm.

Di always does that why can’t she fight why she got scared what if I didn’t reach their said Divya.

Shikhar hug her to make her calm.

U know about Drishti Di she is like this why u always get angry already she is scared said Shikhar.

I know she got scared but what if I don’t be with her what she will do said Divya.

Relax ok said Shikhar.

Rakshit bring Drishti inside.

Vidya come home.

Drishti look at her and hug her start crying.

Dishi come in hall found Drishti is crying.

What happens Drishti asked Vidya.

I will tell u mom said Divya.

She explain what all happens.

Know tell me I should get angry or not asked Divya.

Divya I understand your concern but look at Di she is scared right leave it said Vidya.

You always take Di side said Divya.

Divya it’s not right beta come and hug di said Vidya.

No I am talking for her good I can protect her till my last breath but what if we were not with her what she will do tell me said Divya.

Why u don’t be with me always asked Drishti innocently.

Divya got smile see her sister.

She hug her tight.

Sorry di said divya.

No I am sorry Divi said Drishti.

Vidya along with boys smile on them.

In night.

Divya sleeping careless on bed.

Drishti come make her lay properly and cover blanket on her.

Di call Divya in sleep.

Yes divi replied Drishti.

Di come sleep I want to hug u said Divya in sleep.

Drishti lay beside her and Divya hug her.

Vidya look them and feel happy to see their bond.



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