Asad FF ~ Untitled part 3 updated - Page 2

Hola people 

Thank you so much for your reviews , it genuinely means a lot since I'm always nervous about my writing skills but seeing even a single comment literally encourages me .

Tbh romantic is definitely like out of syllabus genre for me and in this update , I tried to keep Asya as normal and believable as possible .

Sorry for grammatical errors. 

Anshul 

Amazing, i like the last punch 😂😂

You go girl waiting for the next part ❤

Hahaha I really love this one Anshul. 

First of all how natural the characters seem and second I think you are good at writing dialogues 

Also there is Kabir  😂 

I feel a special connection with the name and you already know the reason. 

Well done on this one. Keep writing girl. You are amazing! ❤️

Nice update dear 

Asad asked about their Indore visit but zoya lied.

Asad wanted to know from her.

Their little gestures towards each other was good.

He need to confess soon

Thanks 

I loved it.. 🤣 I cn feel AsYa emotion.🙈 and I felt fissy between u n kabir😝 it vl b interesting to read abt new pair of 'KaSul'☺️

Originally posted by: Asfiakausar

Amazing, i like the last punch 😂😂

Shukriya 😊

Originally posted by: Asfiakausar

You go girl waiting for the next part ❤

Thank you so much for reading it .

Will update soon

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Hahaha I really love this one Anshul. 

First of all how natural the characters seem and second I think you are good at writing dialogues 

Also there is Kabir  😂 

I feel a special connection with the name and you already know the reason. 

Well done on this one. Keep writing girl. You are amazing! ❤️

Thank you so much. It literally means lot .

Yeah Kabir is what whose credit should be given to you. I immediately loved the name Kabir from your story. 

Originally posted by: Arpita_KaBhi

I loved it.. 🤣 I cn feel AsYa emotion.🙈 and I felt fissy between u n kabir😝 it vl b interesting to read abt new pair of 'KaSul'☺️

Thank you so much dii .

I don't think so mere sath bhi koi pair hoga 🙈