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Muskurane ki wajah tum ho...You're the reason to smile...Part 1

I would like to thank Mansi who showing me this edit due to which I got tempted to write a triangular love story of Omkara,Gauri and Bhavya.

Thanks to the unknown editor who made the edit of Kunal Shrenu Mansi which inspired me to write this story.Thanks to Ashini Patel who gave me the idea of a boy falling for a girl and ending up falling for the other girl later.

None of the edits used in this story are mine.The credit goes to the real editors.

Omkara,Gauri and Bhavya are the best friends in Techno Park.

They are a gang of craziness.

Shivay is  their good friend.

Bhavya and Gauri are roommates in the hostel.

There was a party going on.All are dressed up in 70's style according to the theme.

Om looked at Bhavya:You are looking cool Bhavya.

Bhavya:Really?

Shivay:You are looking like a 70's heroine.

Bhavya:Wow!

Shivay:Gauri...you look very pretty.

Gauri:Thank you Shivay.

The old hindi songs were played.Shivay went and danced with random girls.

Om's eyes searched for Bhavya.

Om:Where is Bhavya?I want to dance with her.

He turned around only to find Bhavya dancing with another colleague of them.

Om's face became dull.

Om:Oh no.When I am here what was the need to dance with another boy?

Gauri:Because you did'nt ask her a dance before that boy.

Om pouted:Now I have no company to dance.

Gauri:If you want I can dance with you.

Om was surprised:Really?But you don't dance usually.Right?

Gauri:Ya.But today I will dance with you.

Om:You are a cutie pie Gauri.

He pulled her cheeks.

Then he held her hand and started dancing with her.

ek mai aur ek tu, dono mile iss tarah
ek mai aur ek tu, dono mile iss tarah
aur jo tan mann me ho raha hai, woh toh hona hi tha
ek mai aur ek tu, dono mile iss tarah
ek mai aur ek tu, dono mile iss tarah
aur jo tan mann me ho raha hai, woh toh hona hi tha

yu nahi, milte hai yar yar se
de mujhe, pyar ka javab pyar se
dhadkane hui java vakt bhi hai meharba
fir ye kaisi duriya bolo bolo bolo bolo bolo bolo
ek mai aur ek tu, dono mile iss tarah
ho, ek mai aur ek tu, dono mile iss tarah
aur jo tan mann me ho raha hai, woh toh hona hi tha
ho duriya, vakt aane pe mitayenge
ek din, itna pas pas aayenge
intzar tab talak bekarar tab talak
ye hi pyar tab talak bolo bolo bolo bolo bolo bolo
ek mai aur ek tu, dono mile iss tarah
ha, ek mai aur ek tu, dono mile iss tarah

aur jo tan mann me ho raha hai, woh toh hona hi tha
dillagi ban gayi hai dil ki lagi
hye, jindagi nam hai isika jindagi

ho, khel khel mai sanam, aa gaye jahan pe ham
rok le wahi kadam bolo bolo bolo bolo bolo bolo
ek mai aur ek tu, dono mile iss tarah
ek mai aur ek tu, dono mile iss tarah
ek mai aur ek tu, dono mile iss tarah
aur jo tan mann me ho raha hai, hu hu hu hu hu hu
ye toh hona hi tha hona hi tha   ( Khel Khel Mein)

Om:You are not bad.You are cool to dance with.

Gauri smiled cheerfully.

Surprisingly Shivay-Bhavya came to them.

Shivay:Hey..let us dance together.

Om was excited:Sure.

Gauri moved away giving them way to dance.

Shivay-Om-Bhavya danced together.

Aa dekhen jara
Kismein kitna hai dam
Jamke rakhna kadam
Mere saathiya
Aa dekhen jara (paa.Ra.Pa..)
Kismein kitna hai dam (paa.Ra.Pa..)
Jamke rakhna kadam (paa.Ra.Pa..)
Mere saathiya[aa dekhen jara

Kismein kitna hai dam
Jamke rakhna kadam
Mere saathiya] (repeat once)

Aage nikal aaye hum woh
Pichhe reh gaye
Aage nikal aaye hum woh
Pichhe reh gaye aa..Aa..
Upar chale aaye hum woh
Nichhe reh gaye
Upar chale aaye hum woh
Nichhe reh gaye

Woh humse haarenge
Hum baaji maarenge
Hum unse kya hai kam
Naachenge aaise hum
Naachenge aaise hum
Naachenge woh kya (kya, kya)

Om and Shivay pulled Gauri to the stage.

Gauri too danced with them.

Aa dekhen jara
Kismein kitna hai dam
Jamke rakhna kadam
O mere saathiya
Aa dekhen jara
Kismein kitna hai dam
Jamke rakhna kadam
Mere saathiya

Hey..Hey..Chaa..Cha..Chaa..
Shala.Ri..Pa..Pa..
Shala.Ri..Pa..Shala ri..Pa..Ri..Pa..
Saare shehar mein
Hami hai humsa kaun hai
Saare shehar mein
Hami hai humsa kaun hai

(hey..Ha..Woooo….)
Dekho idhar hum yahi hai
Humsa kaun hai
Dekho idhar hum yahi hai
Humsa kaun hai
Dekhenge dekha hai
Jaadu kya aaisa hai
Yaaron se jalne ka
Kaaton pe chalne ka
Kaaton pe chalne ka
Kya hai faayda

Aa dekhen jara
Kismein kitna hai dam (paa.Ra.Pa..)
Jamke rakhna kadam (paa.Ra.Pa..)
Mere saathiya..(Rocky)

A beautiful place.Gauri was standing behind Omkara.He was painting on the canvas.

Om:Are you getting bored Gauri?

Gauri:No Om.I am enjoying the way you paint.You know that I love your paintings.

Om smiled.

Om:I need a model for my next painting.Bhavya is perfect for it.Who can be more beautiful than her?Her eyes....her wavy hair...her smile..her figure...she is so attractive.I need to ask her if she can pose for me.

Gauri:Bhavya will be perfect.You should ask her.

Om:Then the lady in my painting will also be beautiful as it will be Bhavya's painting.

Gauri:Right.

Every day Om and Gauri come there for the painting.

Om:How is this painting Gauri?You always give me honest opinion.

Gauri:It looks good.But it looks like a monkey's cage.

Om:What?

Gauri started giggling.

Om:Gauri..you mischievous girl.I will not spare you.

Om ran towards her..Gauri ran and he chased her.Finally he caught her and started tickling her.

They both were laughing.They lost balance and fell down.Gauri fell on Om's back.

They both laughed.

Omkara asked Bhavya about posing for his painting.

Bhavya:Oh Omkara..how can I pose for such a long time?I am so impatient.It's so boring.

Om became dull.

Om:Please Bhavya.I need someone beautiful and graceful like you.

After Om pleaded a lot Bhavya said:Ok.I will try.

Om became very excited:That's it.

Bhavya:But I can't promise.

Om:What?

Bhavya walked off.

Om was sitting there disappointed with Bhavya's reply.

Om:How can Bhavya say no to me?

Gauri:Om...you feel so sad when Bhavya ignores you.You love Bhavya.Right?

Om stared at Gauri:So you read my heart.Yes... I love her.But she does'nt seem to be interested in me.

Gauri:What is there to worry when Gauri Sharma is there?I will help you to win her heart.

Om:Really?

Gauri:Of course yes Om.

Gauri:Show her how talented you are by winning competitions.She will be impressed by you.

Om:Yes ...I really want to impress her.She is least interested in painting.

Gauri:You know that Bhavya is crazy about Janmashtami festival and competition.You take part in it.

Om:Oh ya...good idea Gauri.You are superb.

She smiled.

Dahl Handi celebration as a part of Janmashtami....

Om Shivay Bhavya and Gauri arrived.

Earthen pots filled with yogurt was hung above.People were climbing and breaking pots.

Om,Gauri and Bhavya were enjoying it clapping hands.

Om looked at Gauri.Gauri whispered:All the best.

Om climbed the human pyramid.

Gauri was tensed.

Gauri thought:I hope everything goes well.

Bhavya was cheering up:Come on Omkara...do it.

Finally Om succeeded in breaking the pot.

Bhavya and Gauri jumped up with joy.

Bhavya ran towards her Om and embraced him:Well done Om.You were superb.

Om looked at Gauri.She showed him thumbs up.

Gauri thought:Guess Bhavya is really impressed with Om.We are winning.

Bhavya:Om ..you were really superb.

Om smiled happily.

After the celebration Gauri took Om to a Krishna temple.

Gauri:Lord Krishna is the God of love.If you pray he will fulfill your love wish.

Both Om and Gauri prayed.

Gauri:Krishna Bhagwan...please give Om his love.

Om prayed:Please unite me with my beloved soon.

A flower fell in his hand from Krishna's idol.

Om was excited:Wow Gauri.Lord Krishna blessed me.Bhavya and I will unite.

Gauri smiled:That's lovely.

Om and Gauri were discussing about the next plan.

Gauri:Bhavya loves parties cakes and gifts.So I think you should organize a surprise birthday party for her.She will be impressed.

Om:Wow!What an idea Gauri.You are too good.

Om and Gauri started preparations for the party.

Gauri was busy with flower decorations.

Om smiled looking at her.

Gauri:Why are you looking at me like this Om?

Om held her hand:I was seeing how sweet you are.You are helping me so much.If you were not there what would have been my condition?

Gauri smiled.

Jo Naa Keh Sake Tum
Jo Naa Keh Sake Hum

Jo Naa Keh Sake Tum
Jo Naa Keh Sake Hum

Kehne lagi Dono Se Woh Khamoshiyaan
Oh Saathiya

Om arranged the party with Gauri's help.Shivay and close colleagues came for the party.

Om blindfolded Bhavya and brought there.

Bhavya:Omkara...where have you brought me?

Om unveiled her eyes.

Gauri Shivay Om and others wished her:Happy birthday Bhavya!

She was surprised.

Bhavya:What a surprise guys!

She looked at the decorations and cake.

Bhavya:Wow...so beautiful ...

Bhavya's eyes fell on the cakes.

Bhavya:My favourite cake too.

Om:All the 4 types of your favourite cakes are there.

Gauri:Everything is arranged by Om specially for you.

Bhavya was surprised.She looked at Om.

Bhavya:You are so sweet Omkara.Thank you so much.

She embraced him.Om got goosebumps in his stomach.

Gauri winked at him.He smiled.

Bhavya cut the cakes while Shivay was eyeing on the cake hungrily.

 Bhavya took the cake piece and fed herself.

Gauri extended her hand:One piece to me Bhavya.

Bhavya:Sorry guys.I don' share my favourite cakes with anyone.

Shivay:You are so self obsessed yaar.No cake for us?

Bhavya:It's my birthday.So this is my cake.Right Omkara?

Om smiled:Yes.

Shivay:But we can't spare these yummy cakes.

Gauri:Ya..mouth is watering.

Shivay and Gauri took cake pieces.

Bhavya:What are you guys doing?

 Shivay Gauri were eating the cake.

Bhavya:It's my birthday or the birthday of both of you?

Bhavya:Hungry greedy creatures!

Shivay:How dare you call us like that?

Bhavya:It was true.

They started their argument.Om-Gauri were laughing over their argument.

Om:Guys...now stop this.Don't spoil a party by fighting.

Shivay Bhavya kept silent.

Om gave a gift to Bhavya:This is a dress for you Bhavya.

Bhavya:Wow...Omkara...you are really the best.

Om smiled:Bhavya...if you like this you please wear it for the annual function in our office.

Bhavya smiled.

Om Gauri were sitting together and talking.

Gauri:Bhavya is really getting drawn towards you I think.

Om:Only if she wears that dress we can figure out whether she loves me or not.

Gauri:She will definitely wear it.

Om smiled.

Gauri:You should ask her again to pose for your painting.

Om:No Gauri.I will not ask her.I don't want to disturb her as she is really not interested.

Gauri:Then your painting...?

Om:Gauri...will you pose for my painting?

Gauri was stunned:What are you saying Om?How can I?Why me?

Om:Actually I was trying to figure out what kind of woman I want to draw.Then I realized that the woman in my mind is somewhat like you...not like Bhavya.

Gauri was stunned.

Om:So you will be the best for my painting.So will you please pose for me?

Gauri was hesitant:But...I...

Om:You have always helped me.Please help me this time also Gauri.

Gauri thought for a second and said 'yes'.

Om:Thank you so much Gauri.

He embraced her in happiness.

Unknowingly Gauri felt different and magical.

Gauri thought:Oh God...What kind of feeling is this?

Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya (x2)(DBO).

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Awesome update😳Wow Om, Gauri and Bhavya are best friends and Shivaay too is there😳So Om loves Bhavya but she is not interested, so Gauri gives him an idea to impress her in Janmastami festival😳He wins it and she is so happy that she hugs him😳Lord Krishna blessing him with flower😳Gauri will be his model😊She felt different❤️He even arranging Bhavya's surprise birthday party with Gauri's help😳Shivaay and Bhavya started arguing like kids for the cake😆He gifted her a dress and it will determine if she loves him or not..Cool pics❤️

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Fabulous update! thanks for the pm

Wow this was such a Lovely 

and Vibrant Chapter

Nice to see Shivaay, Om, Gauri, and Bhavya together. Om fell for Bhavya & tried to impress her with Gauri's help. Sad that Bhavya does not want to share her cakes with anyone. Omkara is disappointed with Bhavya. Hope he falls for Gauri.

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Muskurane ki wajah tum ho...You're the reason to smile...Part 2

Special Thanks to SandeepSandhu768 who gave me Shivay-Gauri and Om-Bhavya dance pics.

Gauri dressed up to pose for the painting.Omkara was mesmerized by her beauty.

Om thought:Oh God!Why am I getting attracted to Gauri?I never felt like towards Bhavya though she is very beautiful.

Baadlon Main Ghulnaa Jaaye
Hain Jo lamhe Thehre Thehre..

Om was keeping her hair properly.Gauri was shivering as his touches were making effects on her.

Do Dilon Main Jazb Karlein
Sare Jazbe Gehre Gehre

Om was feeling restless.

He thought:Why I am longing to caress her soft sweet face?

Kal Kya Pata Mile Naa Mile
Nazdeekiyan
Oh Saathiya

He started painting looking at her.

He thought:I don't feel like painting.Instead I feel like looking at her.I can't take my eyes off her.

Why is it like this?

Kal Kya Pata Mile Naa Mile
Nazdeekiyan
Oh Saathiya

When Om was looking at her itself Gauri was becoming weak.

Saathiya Saathiya.....

Saathiya Saathiya.....

Everyday the painting process continued and Om-Gauri's attraction for each other increased.

The last day of painting....

Om:Finally the painting is done.Look and see how it is.

Gauri smiled.

He walked towards the painting.Suddenly she slipped and bumped into Om.She held his shoulders for balance.

They shared an intense eye lock.

Hmmmm.....


Jo Naa Keh Sake Tum
Jo Naa Keh Sake Hum

She could feel his breath.Their close proximity was making her restless while Om's eyes were fixed on her.

Jo Naa Keh Sake Tum
Jo Naa Keh Sake Hum

Om called her in a husky voice:Gauri!

Jo Naa Keh Sake Tum
Jo Naa Keh Sake Hum

Gauri turned back not being able to face him.

She said in his mind:No..I can't take this anymore.I should control myself.Om loves only Bhavya.

She tried to walk away.

Om:Gauri...why are you going?You did'nt see the painting.

Gauri:I have to go Om.

Om:You see the painting and go.

To stop her from going he tried to catch her.But by mistake he caught her blouse dori and it got loosened.It was almost removed.Gauri was stunned.Suddenly she did'nt know what to do.She was upset by the fact that her back was exposed to Om.Om was also stunned to see her back being exposed before her.

She turned back to hide her exposed back from Om.She tried to tie her dori.But due to the present nervousness she was'nt able to tie it properly.Her tears rolled down her cheeks.Om felt sad for her.Om moved towards her.He started tying her dori.As his fingers touched her skin she closed her eyes.She was losing herself in his touch.Om was becoming restless while his fingers rubbed her bare skin unknowingly.

Kehne lagi Dono Se Woh Khamoshiyaan
Oh Saathiya

Kehne lagi Dono Se Woh Khamoshiyaan
Oh Saathiya.....

After tying the dori he wiped her tears.

Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya

Om:I am sorry Gauri...I did'nt mean to...by mistake I ...

Gauri:I know that Om.I trust you.

Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya 

Om was touched by her words.

They shared an emotional eye lock.

Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya Saathiya 

Om:You want to go or see the painting?

Gauri:I will see the painting.

Om smiled.

Gauri went and saw the painting.

Gauri:Beautiful.Thank you very much for portraying me so beautiful.

Om:You don't know how beautiful you are Gauri.You look more beautiful than this.You are a beautiful piece created by God.

Gauri smiled at him.

Baadlon Main Ghulnaa Jaaye
Hain Jo lamhe Thehre Thehre..

Do Dilon Main Jazb Karlein
Sare Jazbe Gehre Gehre

Suddenly Bhavya's face came into her mind and became dull.

Gauri:Ok..I need to go now.

Gauri left.

Om suddenly realized what he said.

Om:How can I just praise Gauri's beauty?I have not even admired Bhavya's beauty like this?

He remembered Gauri falling over him..their closeness and what he felt while tying her blouse dori.

What kind of feeling is this?

Kal Kya Pata Mile Naa Mile
Nazdeekiyan
Oh Saathiya

Gauri and Bhavya in their room...

Gauri:What are you wearing for tomorrow's party?

Bhavya:Let it be a surprise Gauri.

Gauri thought:I know that you will wear the dress gifted by Om.

Bhavya:What are you wearing?

Gauri:My golden gown.

Bhavya:Cool.You will be a golden doll.

Gauri smiled.

Annual party ....

Omkara,Gauri and Shivay reached.

Om's eyes were stuck on Gauri.

Om said in his mind:You look so beautiful Gauri.Why did'nt I see you properly before?

Saathiya Saathiya.....

Saathiya Saathiya.....

Gauri:You may be waiting for Bhavya.Right?She will come now.When I started from the room she was about to get ready.

Om said in his mind:How will I tell you that I am not waiting for Bhavya and just want you near me?

Saathiya Saathiya.....

Saathiya Saathiya.....(DBO)

Gauri:Don't be tensed.Bhavya will wear the dress you gifted her.

Om said in his mind:I wish Bhavya does'nt wear the dress I gifted her.I don't want Bhavya to have any kind of feelings for me.What will Gauri think about me?She helped me a lot to woo Bhavya and when Bhavya started getting impressed by me I lost interest in her.Oh God!What kind of complication is this?

Bhavya arrived.

Gauri smiled:Om..is'nt it the dress you gave her?

Om felt a prick in his heart seeing Bhavya in the dress he gave her.

Om thought:Damn!What was the need for her to wear this dress?

Gauri:See I told you that she will wear the dress you gave her.

Om gave a pale smile to her.

Bhavya came towards them.

Gauri:You took so much of time to get ready.

Bhavya:Ya...after all it's a party.Also I should look pretty in the dress which Omkara gave me with a lot of sweetness.

Bhavya:Right Omkara?

He smiled.

Bhavya looked at Om.

Bhavya:How do I look Omkara?

Om:Nice.

Bhavya smiled sweetly.

Om,Bhavya,Gauri and Shivay posed for photographs.

Seeing Om-Bhavya together Gauri's heart pricked.

Bhavya was chatting with Om continuously.

But Om's focus was on Gauri who was with Shivay.

Om thought:Why Shivay is sticking up to Gauri all the time?

Bhavya:Om...are you listening?

Om out a fake smile on his face and said:Of course yes.

Your talk is so interesting Bhavya.While listening to you I did'nt know the time has passed.

Bhavya smiled:Really?I knew it.

Om thought:I did'nt even hear what Bhavya said.God knows what she told me.

They announced:Those who are ready to take part in the spot couple dance competition please get ready.

Shivay:Wow...cool.We will participate.

Bhavya:Yes.There will be so much of fun.

Om thought:I can spend more time with Gauri by dancing with her.

Om,Bhavya,Gauri and Shivay got ready for the couple dance contest.

Om thought:I will ask Gauri to be my dance partner.

Gauri told Bhavya:Bhavya..you dance with Om.Who can be better than you as his dance partner?

Bhavya smiled:Yes sure.

Om suppressed his irritation.

Om thought:When I was planning to dance with Gauri why did she herself try to make me dance with Bhavya?Gauri ruined everything.But I can't blame her as she thinks that I love Bhavya.

Shivay went near Gauri:Gauri...can you please be my dance partner?

Gauri:Yes sure Shivay.

Om gritted his teeth in irritation.

Om thought:This Shivay is trying to get close to Gauri.

Om-Bhavya and Shivay-Gauri started dancing to music.But Om and Gauri's eyes were on each other.

Muskurane ki wajah tum ho

Gungunane ki wajah tum ho

Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye na..

O re piya re..

Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye na..

O re piya re..

O re lamhe tu kahin mat jaa

Ho sake toh umr bhar tham jaa

Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye naa..

O re piya re..

Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye naa..

O re piya re.. piyaa re..

Dhoop aaye toh, chhaanv tum laana

Khwahishon ki baarishon mein

Bheeg sang jaana (x2)

Jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na

O re piya re..

Jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na

O re piya re.. piya re..

Jo mile usme kaat lenge hum

Thodi khushiyaan thode aansu baant lenge hum

Jo mile usme kaat lenge hum

Thodi khushiyaan thode aansu baant lenge hum

Jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na

O re piya re..

Jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na

O re piya re.. piya re..

Muskurane ki wajah tum ho

Gungunane ki wajah tum ho

Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye na

O re piya re..

Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye na

O re piya re.. piya re...

Piya re

(City lights).

They announced the winner couple.Neither Shivay-Gauri nor Om-Bhavya won the trophy.

Bhavya:We danced so well Omkara.Then why did we lose it?

Om thought:Good that we did'nt win.I can't imagine Bhavya becoming my known dance partner before public.

Om was walking restlessly in his room thinking of Shivay-Gauri closeness.

Om:No,I can't let it happen.I will tell Gauri that I love her and not Bhavya.

During the lunch break...

Gauri was not found for having lunch.Shivay searched for her.Finally he found her in the corridor.

Shivay:Why are you here Gauri?Why are you not having lunch?

Gauri:I don't feel like eating anything.

Shivay:Why Gauri?Tell me what's bothering you.We are close friends.Right?You can share your problem with me.

Suddenly Gauri burst into tears and embraced Shivay.

Shivay was stunned.He caressed Gauri.

Om who followed Shivay to find Gauri was shattered to see Gauri in Shivay's arms.

Om wept:Gauri and Shivay are in love.My love story ended terribly.Why Lord Krishna?I prayed to you to give me my beloved.But you separated me from Gauri.If you did'nt want me with Gauri,why did you make me forget Bhavya and fall in love with Gauri?

brilliant update! well written! 

Beautiful Start

Gauri and OM are just a Fabulous couple 

its very interesting and enjoying to read on them 

Om drawing Gauri's pic was amazing. Sad that Gauri didn't understand that omkara loves her. Omkara helping Gauri to tie her dori was romantic. Sad that Omkara lost his attraction towards Bhavya. Sad that neither Shivaay-Gauri not rikara won the trophy. Sad that Ankara misunderstood Gauri.